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Posted: 4 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

u cant blame that on writing then... its what u think...

Exactly, I'm not blaming the writing which is why I added "I felt". It was clearly what I felt.


I think it was because, R went back to how he used to be, erasing P completely from his life, and he used to be alone and longing. And here P, she also forgot about R, like he never entered her life and with Mandar, her happiness returned. So that's why I felt that P was painted bad here.

Edited by LoveHopeMagic - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

I was laughing whole time...this is the most fun i had while writing... no use of brain. no proof read... was a fun experience.

And that small romantic bit of P and M; I completely lost it.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

Exactly, I'm not blaming the writing which is why I added "I felt". It was clearly what I felt.


I think it was because, R went back to how he used to be, erasing P completely from his life, and he used to be alone and longing. And here P, she also forgot about R, like he never entered her life and with Mandar, her happiness returned. So that's why I felt that P was painted bad here.

Is this wrong or because u like R's character?

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Posted: 4 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

And that small romantic bit of P and M; I completely lost it.

To be honest that ws added jst for 'closure' guys... I ws fully on sarcastic roller coaster.. This is still muted. What I thought would hv dropped u to the floor laughing but didnt wanted to waste my time.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#55

Peace and bestestestest friend... wt r ur opinions on the masterpiece?

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Posted: 4 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Peace and bestestestest friend... wt r ur opinions on the masterpiece?

You still remember me. I am overwhelmed 😆.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Is this wrong or because u like R's character?


Definitely not. If Mandaar is who she wants then she can go with him. There is nothing wrong in that. And forgetting about Raghav, in real I think it's not possible.

I obviously like R's character. But I didn't think that as a fan of him but as a person.

Here it was clear, Pallavi made the choice because she was the one who had choices, and she choosing Mandar would have hurted Raghav. I hope you got my point.

Edited by LoveHopeMagic - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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I was just confused reading this. Only When I reread it and saw Reem's comment I understood what you were trying to imply.

This one was so refreshing to read without any drama or complications. I didn't know Lateuser can write simple stuff. I am utterly shocked.

Due to some unknown reasons I loved this. Pallavi and Raghav happy in their separate lives. It was so nice to see a happy and free Pallavi away from Raghav.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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At first I was confused and hence the res lol😆


Woah! This seems like their story in an alternate dimension😲


An amazing take on what would have happened if destiny didn't intervene and if they didn't develop feelings for each other after getting married. Pallavi chose living with Mandar and her family and I guess Raghav must have been hurt at some time. Both of them seem content and happy with their lives without each other's presence.😭

I am still coming in terms with Pallavi and Mandar's romance...The hesitation of Pallavi while saying 'I love you' to Mandar can't be ignored though...


Now I understand why this is a MHRW drabble - because there is no RaghVi!


And yes, I forgot - do tag me on every work of yours.😊

Edited by Trista101 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amnnaa

You still remember me. I am overwhelmed 😆.

I guess u mistook me with someother amnesia guy.... not that one here...

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