SS-Saving the marraige Part 3 on Page 6

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I normally like the chaos in the serial but since we are getting the signs of suicide track I am writing to keep my peace.

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Sai had shifted to hostel after Devi tai's wedding.She didnt even want to see Virat's face.On the other hand Virat was eager to see his wife.He wanted to apologize to her.He wanted to bring his wife back.He wanted to wok to save his marriage which he had put in jeopardy by asking Sai to leave.He had called her multiple times but she didnt even receive once.Ashwini had asked him to keep calm and listen to her with patience.But he knew till she doesnt take out her anger on him she will not listen to him.


Virat called Sai once he had reached her hostel.


Virat-Sai please ek baar bahar aa jao.Mujhe tumse baat karni hai.


Sai-Maine aapse kya kaha hai Virat sir.Mujhe aapki shakal bhi nai dekhni hai...


Virat-Jab taak tum bahar nai aaogi mai yuhi bahar khada rahogi Sai.


Sai-Jo karna hai kijiye (Sai disconnects the call)


In the afternoon Aniket who was passing by the ground saw Virat standing outside that too in heavy downpour.He rushed to Sai's hostel room.He needed to inform her about this.


Aniket (knocking on Sai's door continuously)-Sai !! darwaza khol yaar jaldi kar...


Sai-Kya huva itni kya urgency aa gayi..


Aniket-Sai tere husband bahar khade hai Sai...


Sai-Toh mai kya karu Aniket.Ye unki zidd hai...


Aniket-Sai its raining heavily.Agar hypothermia ya kuch ho gaya na toh problem hogi.Jaldi jaa.Jhagda baad me kar lena.


Sai rushed outside with the umbrella.She was so angry with him now.What was this stubbornness he had to talk to her.He wanted to stand outside,he threw her out in middle of the night but she was rushing outside to meet him.Sai saw him standing outside.Unbelievable Sai thought.


Sai (putting her umbrella on her and Virat)-Ye kya pagalpan hai Virat sir.Aapko kitna fever chad sakta hai aapko aandaza hai !!


Virat-Maine tumse kaha tha na tumse mile bagar mai nai jaoga yaha se.


Sai (closing her eyes in anger)-Fine !! Chalo aap pehle car mei bathye..


Sai didnt understand as to what was running in Virat's mind.He has never done anything like that.He was driving her mad.Something was wrong with him Sai thought.Little did she know that it love.Virat had fallen in love with Sai and wanted to confess on holi but fate again.....Virat looked at Sai sitting besides him.He got mad not because she got Devi tai married but he got angry because by this move he thought that she didnt even trust him enough to tell him anything about this.


Virat brought the care at screeching halt.They both thought it was better to talk in the car because it was raining too much outside.


Sai-Bataye aapko kya baat karni hai ?


Virat-Tum meri baat aabhi toh samjho gi nai.Toh ek kaam karo aapna saara gussa nikalo mujhpar.Jab saara gussa nikaljai phir hum baat karge.


Sawal mai hi poochta hu ? Tumhe mujh par bharosa nai hai Sai.Tum mujhe baatati toh mai....


Sai (not letting him complete)-Nai hai mujhe aap par bharosa.Aur aapko bhi mujhpar bharosa nai hai....So please ye jatane ki koshish mat kijeye ki bharosa sirf mujhe nai hai aap par.


Virat-Sai aisi....


Sai (not letting him complete)-Aapko mujhse zyada Pakhi par bharosa hai.Aur aaj aap aaye bhi isiliye hai itne dino se call bhi isiliye kar rahe hai kyuki aap ko college se sab pata chal gaya hai....


Aapko pata hai aapki "friend" ne woh jhoota letter likha tha...


Virat-Pata hai mujhe...Tumhe aisa kyu lagta hai ki mujhe Pakhi pe zyada bharosa hai...


Sai in Silence


Virat-Sai please kuch toh bolo...Meri taraf dekho...


Sai (trying to open the car door)-Mai wapas college ja rahi hu.


Virat (locks all the doors)-Aaj toh tum us door se tabhi nikalogi jab tum sab batogi mujhe.Jab tum aapna sara gussa aur takleefe mujhe batogi..


Sai-Aap kyu itni mehant kar rahe ye sab solve karne ki.Ye shaadi waise bhi 5 saal baad bhi khatam toh hone hi wali thi.Maine aapko aapni zimmedari se free kiya tha.Ye shaadi ek deal wali shaadi hai.


Virat-Tumhe mai iska jawab dooga Sai par baad mai.


Sai-Mai aapar bharosa nai karti Virat sir.Ap ki wajah se mai is sab me phasi hu.Aapne Pakhi se pyaar kiya hai par unka gussa aur saari unnecessary cheeze mai bardast kar rahi hu.


Kyu diya aapne Aaba ko promise.Mai apna dhyan rakh sakti thi.Aapne mujhe is sab mei....Aap ko blind spot hai Pakhi ke liye.Woh hi saahi hoti hai chahe meri jagah Aayi bhi kyu na ho.Hum sab galat. Aur sirf woh sahi.


Aur aap mujhe kehte hai ki mai bahut gussa karti hu.Aapne aapne gusse aur ego ko dekha hai kabhi...Aur hamesha milti aapko mai hi hu.Chahe woh Pulkit sir ke waha jaane ki baat ho ya Devi Tai ki baat...You know what aapke liye na Pakhi hi sahi hai..Woh hi aapke type ki hai.Jo aapki har baat mane aur sune..


Virat was listening intently to Sai.His heart broke.She didnt even trust him and she thought Pakhi was perfect for him.She thought he was egoistic....What mess had he created.His mother was right that day he had done something which normally his father would do.He never wanted to be like his father.


Sai(opening the door)-Aap ko jo bulna tha woh mai bol chuki hu.Aab mai wapas ja rahi hu.


Virat-Ye shaadi aab mere liye deal ki nai rahi.I love you Sai.Bahut pyaar karta hu mai tumse.


Eevn after hearing his confession Sai walked out of the car.Virat too walked after the car to go after her.He was not going to give up on her or this marriage.


Virat (calling her out)-Meri baat sunne ke baad bhi tum ja rahi ho.Itna darti huo aapni feelings.


Sai-Aapne sunna nai maine kya kaha.I dont trust you.


Virat-Ek mauka tak nai dooge.Tumhara dil tumhe pukar raha hai Sai,Sunne ke takat hai tumme use.

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Pre-cap


Virat-Please chalo mere saath wapas ghar.


Sai-Mai uss ghar mai kadam bhi nai rakugi.


Virat-Maine kab kaha ki ghar ka matlab CN hai..




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Posted: 4 years ago
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Great start... will be interesting to see what Virat will do to convince her


Looking forward to the next part

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Intresting start....

Waiting to read further..

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This was really good! Very nicely written. Love this scene in the middle of a downpour in the car. Cant wait to read more.

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Wow!! Loved this❤️

Really liked the angst❤️

Update soon

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this was soooooooooooo goood....loooking forward to the next update 👏😊

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Tooo good dear.. Love it ❤️

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Ooh !! Very interesting 🥰🥰

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Lovely starts

Hope Sai will go back with Virat

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Virat rushed out of the car after Sai.It was still raining but Virat was not ready to give up.Giving up would mean losing Sai and he would never give up.Sai on the other hand was just running away from her feelings because of her husband's ex girlfriend.Pakhi would anyhow develop some rift between them and Sai didnt want her heart broken.Her heart was only thing that belonged to her.Virat finally caught her arm and pulled her towards him.


Virat (holding her close)-Kyu itna pareshan kar rahi ho Sai ? Kyu mujh se door bhaag rahi ho ?Kyu apni feelings se door bhaag rahi ho ? Tumhara dil tumhe pukar raha hai ,Tumme itni himmat hai ki use sun sako.....


Sai-Please chodiye mujhe Virat sir..I have to go back to college.


Virat (reassuring her)-Itna bhi bharosa nai mujhpar ki mai tumhara dil kabhi nai toduga.


Sai (stunned)-Huh what ?


Virat-Tumhari shakal padhna mujhe bhi aata ha Sai.Sai please ek mauka de do mujhe.Kahi beth ke baat kare please....


Sai-Theek hai..


Virat and Sai had made way to a tea shop.Virat took one look at Sai's face and he knew the reason she had been running away was Patralekha.He cursed the moment he had met that woman.But right now he had to save his marriage.Patralekha's solution was already in his mind.


Virat-Sai please ghar chalo...


Sai-Mai us ghar mai wapas nai aaogi.


Virat (smiling)-Maine kab kaha ki us ghar matlab Chavhan Niwas hai...


Sai (getting irritated)-Aap phir se jalebi ke tarah baat ghuma rahe hai..


Virat-Maine ghar chod diya hai...!! Mai police headquarters mai shift ho gaya hu pichle 2 weeks se..


Sai-Mujhe mazak bilkul pasand nai hai...


Virat-Par maine toh nai kaha ki mai mazak kar raha hu.Chaho toh aai se pooch lo...


Before Sai could say anything Aniket and her friend Samaira called.Aniket inquired if she was all right.Virat looked pissed at the call.This Khet always interfered.Sai saw that Virat was getting irritated with Aniket.She didnt knew the reason before hand but now she knew.He was jealous that of Aniket !! Sai chuckled in mind.


Sai-Itna irritate hone ki zaroorat nai hai...Aniket ne hi bataya tha mujhe ki aap bahar khade hai..


Virat-Maine bataya tha tumhe phone pe.


Sai (justifying herself)-Par mujhe thodina pata tha ki aapsach mai aise khade rahege woh bhi itni baarish mei.


Virat(walking towards the car)-So I have to be thankful to that Khet that you are outside,to talk to me.......??


Sai (angrily)-Aniket !! (deliberately)-Apko problem kya hai usse.Dost hai mera.


Virat (fumbling)-Woh.....Woh...Mujhe bas woh pasand nai hai thats it....


Sai-Aapke opinions mere friends ke mamlo mai lagu nai hote.Apko pasand nai aapki problem hai...


Sai decided to walk to the college.She didnt want any more arguments for today.Virat protested but it was of no use.Once Sai reached college she decided to really talk to aai.She needed to know as to what had happened once she left.Why did Virat leave the house ?


Ashwini was ecstatic to receive the call from Sai.But she knew why she would have called so Ashwini went outside to talk to her.Sai was beyond happy to hear her voice..


Ashwini (getting emotional)-Aa gayi tujhe aapni aai ke yaad !!


Sai-Aai aapko toh mai roz yaad karti hu.Bhulne ki toh baat hi nai hai.


Ashwini-Virat aaya tha...


Sai-Aapko pata hai toh bataye na aai.Kya huva hai ghar pe ?Virat sir ne ghar kyu choda ?


Ashwini-Tere jaane ke baad use pata chala ki ye sab Omi,Ninad ,Vahini aur Patralekha ne kiya tha.Bahut gussa ho gaya.Aur Patralekha aur uske rishte ke baare mai sab kuch bata diya Vahini aur Ninad ko.Par usne ghar par rehne se mana kar diya..Shakal bhi nai dekhna chahta unmaise kisi ki.


Tu aabhi bhi us par gussa hai.?


Sai-Kuch samajh nai aa raha hai aai kya karu.....Dil aur dimaag ke beech mai race lagi hai.


Ashwini (smiling)-Beta jahaa baat dil ki ho na waha dil ki hi sunte hai.Agar dimaag dalne gai na beech mei toh galat faisla aata hai.


Sai (realizing what Ashwini said)-Aapko pata hai ki Virat sir...


Ashwini-Tum dono ke baare mai sab jaanti hu.Tu jab pehli baar is ghar mai aai thi na tab bhi mujhe pata chal gaya tha ki tumhare alava koi nai bana hai uske liye.


Sai knew Ashwini was right.But she was reluctant to let her heart go heavy over her mind.She was very practical person.While she had emotions she mostly thought from her brain.And the time her brain was shut off the biggest thing that happened in her life was Virat sir....


Sai slept thinking about everything.She woke up early morning and got ready for her classes.While she had definitely figured out that she was in love Virat sir but she was unable to go further than that.She slept with a book on her chest...These feelings were such a hard work Sai thought.Taking decisions from mind didnt involve emotions...After being done with her classes and her studies she decided to take a walk outside.It was getting something else for her today....All that ran in her mind was "was she ready to forgive Virat"?

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Pre-cap...


Virat-Abhi bhi gussa ho mujhse Devi tai wali baat ko lekar...??


Sai-Bhuli hu maaf nai kiya hai..


Virat-Sorry Sai.Please mujhe maaf kardo...Tum jo bologi woh mai karooga..


Sai-Devi Tai aur Pulkit sir se maafi maagi ??


Virat-Jaane ki himaat nai ho rahi hai...

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