RaghVi FF : Nightmare Thread 2 - Page 97

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

I will read. u hv to write fast.

Originally posted by: Amnnaa

If Ved wait for her food, he will die of hunger before his sentence end. She haven't yet delivered the Pizza you offered us.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

I can't right if I don't feel motivated... Today's epilogue goes to prriyam. I read her post about how i maintained my schedule and that was straight written in an hour and a half with just one proof reading. First for me. Its never less then 10-12.

When I am here don't worry about motivation. I have abundant of motivation stocked with me to distribute to people in need.

Originally posted by: Trista101

Speak of the pizza and here I come!!🏃‍♀️

Pizza is love. Pizza is life. Pizza is my everything

Originally posted by: Amnnaa

When I am here don't worry about motivation. I have abundant of motivation stocked with me to distribute to people in need.

Some for trista plz... so she can start.

Originally posted by: Amnnaa

Pizza is love. Pizza is life. Pizza is my everything

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Some for trista plz... so she can start.

Originally posted by: Trista101

Yeah, I actually need some motivation..😅

PM me for free motivation 🤣

You started off the chapter with the same lines which Pallavi thought before she woke up 2 years ago. and also drew few parallels between Pallavi and Sarika's scenes.

"He embraced her in his arms and two arms held him back"--this line is a proper closure for RaghVi--as Raghav's hug was received back.

The repetition of few arcs in the chapter and few dejavu moments were lovely touch to this whole FF.

"My eyes can do the mistake but my beats will always know you. Because you live in them. You are them Mrs. Pallavi Raghav Rao." My soul..My beat...Fire and Ice and suddenly everything from last few chapters makes a proper sense now. Raghav is finally guilt free---he has not failed Pallavi afterall.

The way you have you always weave your words makes our brain run for miles and keep us hooked to the chapter--and there is no denial in that I have got my own many personal favorite lines in this FF.

Word vomit is a nature of Pallavi which is shown in the show and you kept it intact in epilogue too.

I was preparing myself for a not so happy ending--so the epilogue definitely came out as a surprise and the fact that the whole epilogue was straight forward without any twisting of words and it cleared all the questions that ever aroused in our minds---indeed a beautiful conclusion.

The epilogue itself was a wholesome chapter which had its own impact and loved how you left the ending open ended.

I am definitely looking forward to read more from you.

Originally posted by: ReemShah

You started off the chapter with the same lines which Pallavi thought before she woke up 2 years ago. and also drew few parallels between Pallavi and Sarika's scenes.

"He embraced her in his arms and two arms held him back"--this line is a proper closure for RaghVi--as Raghav's hug was received back.

The repetition of few arcs in the chapter and few dejavu moments were lovely touch to this whole FF.

"My eyes can do the mistake but my beats will always know you. Because you live in them. You are them Mrs. Pallavi Raghav Rao." My soul..My beat...Fire and Ice and suddenly everything from last few chapters makes a proper sense now. Raghav is finally guilt free---he has not failed Pallavi afterall.

The way you have you always weave your words makes our brain run for miles and keep us hooked to the chapter--and there is no denial in that I have got my own many personal favorite lines in this FF.

Word vomit is a nature of Pallavi which is shown in the show and you kept it intact in epilogue too.

I was preparing myself for a not so happy ending--so the epilogue definitely came out as a surprise and the fact that the whole epilogue was straight forward without any twisting of words and it cleared all the questions that ever aroused in our minds---indeed a beautiful conclusion.

The epilogue itself was a wholesome chapter which had its own impact and loved how you left the ending open ended.

I am definitely looking forward to read more from you.

Repetition and dejavu came up actually good. I m thinking to start a quotes book of shorts. I know my image is bad regarding happy endings, but if dere was one story which deserved it... this ought to be that one. So I was fine with it. Yes wanted to keep it plain and straightforward.

Thnx. sure.