Raghvi FF: Hooked (Part 7/7) - Complete - Updated Pg 17 - Page 4

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Woah!! Can I say that I love this attempt at redoing the circumstances of Raghav & Pallavi's marriage❤️

Their interactions hold the same fire as the early days & I loved the Dialogues used💥

Please do continue soon 😌

Thank you so much!! I hate writing dialogue 😆 so that is so nice to hear ❤️

Originally posted by: PSharada

Wow a really good start to the story. I am intrigued and looking forward to the next part. Beautifully written and I am waiting eagerly for the next part. Please update soon.

Thank you for your kind words - I'm glad you're enjoying the story ❤️

Originally posted by: Viewpoint

Loved reading both parts!! I’m hooked!

I like the way you’ve remained so true to their nature and cleverly changed the premise of their marriage. Waiting for the next one!

Thank you, I really appreciate it - just trying to make Raghav's actions a little less heinous so my conscience is clear when they fall in loooove 😆

Originally posted by: NESRIA

Give us mor and soon plz

Thank you for writing this, because i really didnt like how they got married

Your story seems much better 👍🏼👏😉

Thank you so much! I too wish their circumstances were not so forced at least for Pallavi. Glad you're enjoying the story ❤️

Wow 🤩 interesting take on marriage ❤️

Looking forward to this

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Thank you so much! I hope the next parts meet your expectations 😳

Definitely part 2 was also so nice !

I love your writing 🤗

Update soon 😳

This is such an interesting twist. Please continue soon

Superb n awesome.

Originally posted by: Radiant_Eyes_

Wow 🤩 interesting take on marriage ❤️

Looking forward to this

Thank you very much! ❤️

Originally posted by: Avneel07

Superb n awesome.

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! 😳