Very well written and intriguing 👏😲
Toxic opens with more that 100 cr Day 1 domestic nett, 55 cr Hindi!!!
Yeh Fitoor Tera episode discussion thread # 1
Toxic headed to emerge a DISASTER
Nepal Flash Flood Disaster: Hundreds feared dead
Do you think King shud be postponed?
Very well written and intriguing 👏😲
Wow a really good start to the story. I am intrigued and looking forward to the next part. Beautifully written and I am waiting eagerly for the next part. Please update soon.
Loved reading both parts!! I’m hooked!
I like the way you’ve remained so true to their nature and cleverly changed the premise of their marriage. Waiting for the next one!
Give us mor and soon plz
Thank you for writing this, because i really didnt like how they got married
Your story seems much better 👍🏼👏😉
Loved it
Poor Pallavi got thrown out
Well written and interesting 👏
Wow!! This is so good! Loved your take on the whole marriage fiasco. Eagerly waiting for the next update.
This looks amazing. Please do continue
I am really glad to see that you have maintained the core essence of the show and it's plot and revolved the story around it. The fact that the marriage is something they are doing for themselves and not for the sake of their families is good take on the show.
I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter. Update soon👍🏼
Thank you!! I am glad you think so, I am really enjoying the show but try not to think about that fiasco as you aptly named it 😊
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