FaRagVi OS: So A Date?? - Page 5

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this one.

The camaraderie Farhad and Raghav share is so beautiflly penned down. I could picture these two in the exact way you've described in your story. Raghav and Farhad is one bromance I adore!

Coming to the shaving part, I can almost picture the embarrassment he felt when everyone looked at him with alien eyes, especially Pallavi. I cannot picture a clean shaven Raghav and you've perfectly described the uncomfortableness of this whole situation.

The end is what had my heart - My Raghav I was all "awwwww"!!! And I can picture a blushing Raghav!

Thank you for writing this!

Originally posted by: Lisaxx

This was such an unique OS Chinmayi

I can never imagine Raghav without beard

FaRagVi...I think we got a new ship name for the trio

Pallavi being bold was amazing

the camaraderie between FaRag was written really well...I hope it is shown in show too

I just loved your OS

Thank you so much Lisa❤❤

me too--and FaRagVi was Mihika's idea

Originally posted by: Viewpoint

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this one.

The camaraderie Farhad and Raghav share is so beautiflly penned down. I could picture these two in the exact way you've described in your story. Raghav and Farhad is one bromance I adore!

Coming to the shaving part, I can almost picture the embarrassment he felt when everyone looked at him with alien eyes, especially Pallavi. I cannot picture a clean shaven Raghav and you've perfectly described the uncomfortableness of this whole situation.

The end is what had my heart - My Raghav I was all "awwwww"!!! And I can picture a blushing Raghav!

Thank you for writing this!

FaRag is a jodi which is sometimes adored more than RaghVi--and I am that someone who does that.

I tried my best especially after seeing the scene again--where he tries to cover his beard with his hands to look at himself.

and Raghav blushing--there are many instances we can count

Thank you so much Kiara❤

WOAH!

I absolutely adore the camaraderie that Farhad & Raghav share here

I could imagine Farhad actually doing those dance steps to mock his Anna.

This is so well-written explaining about Raghav's feelings which're unknown to him itself & Farhad kinda helps him realize them and how Pallavi is also hurrying to meet him.

Pallavi saying 'My Raghav' is like my dream come true🔥

Reem, a chance read this was.

And made my Saturday. I remember this scene and the dynamics then. I had thought to myself, what wouldve happened, if Pallavi didnt stop him that day. I got to read the answer now. 😀

The descriptive writing you employ is your strength; at the least in this story. It intersperses so non-intrusively to the short and crisp dialogues that you’ve chosen to use.

Things like snapping one’s finger, instead of saying so, you wrote about thumb and middle fingers snapping making a click sound etc., and that lets you live that moment. For one, I tried snapping to check if it was two fingers; involuntary actions otherwise, you see.

And I am not talking just of this moment, its the style. Hope you get the drift.

As to the story, ❤️. Though Raghav was dejected to know that he would be growing the beard back, you left him (and us) in his lala land, with that last sentence from Pallavi.

To more! 👍🏼

Marvelous OS!

adore the bond between Raghav and Farhad

of cos Farhad can dare to tease Raghav

Originally posted by: SONIA441

WOAH!

I absolutely adore the camaraderie that Farhad & Raghav share here

I could imagine Farhad actually doing those dance steps to mock his Anna.

This is so well-written explaining about Raghav's feelings which're unknown to him itself & Farhad kinda helps him realize them and how Pallavi is also hurrying to meet him.

Pallavi saying 'My Raghav' is like my dream come true🔥

FaRag's friendship is lovee❤

Farhad is a shipper who definitely pushes these two to be together

Ikr--I am glad that you are one of the rarest people who gave attention to Pallavi

Thank you so much Sonia❤

Originally posted by: ReemShah

FaRag's friendship is lovee❤

Farhad is a shipper who definitely pushes these two to be together

Ikr--I am glad that you are one of the rarest people who gave attention to Pallavi

Thank you so much Sonia❤

Thanks Reem!💕

The makers built Pallavi's character back during the past few weeks & I'm pretty happy about that.

Arre Rare toh hum hain hi

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Thanks Reem!💕

The makers built Pallavi's character back during the past few weeks & I'm pretty happy about that.

Arre Rare toh hum hain hi

I am happy about that too

😆😆

Originally posted by: Prriyam

Reem, a chance read this was.

And made my Saturday. I remember this scene and the dynamics then. I had thought to myself, what wouldve happened, if Pallavi didnt stop him that day. I got to read the answer now. 😀

The descriptive writing you employ is your strength; at the least in this story. It intersperses so non-intrusively to the short and crisp dialogues that you’ve chosen to use.

Things like snapping one’s finger, instead of saying so, you wrote about thumb and middle fingers snapping making a click sound etc., and that lets you live that moment. For one, I tried snapping to check if it was two fingers; involuntary actions otherwise, you see.

And I am not talking just of this moment, its the style. Hope you get the drift.

As to the story, ❤️. Though Raghav was dejected to know that he would be growing the beard back, you left him (and us) in his lala land, with that last sentence from Pallavi.

To more! 👍🏼

I am glad this made your Saturday

I prefer descriptive writing more--it is was forte in other words

When are we not in the lala land of RaghVi. Once we enter the forum...it is all RaghVi land only😆

Thank you so much Priyam. I am glad you liked the OS❤