Mere bachpan ke har hisse mein

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is beautiful Maahi! Shiva Raavi ka bachpan ❤️

I loved the last two lines!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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So beautifully penned!!! ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This was beautiful Mahi!❤️

I remembered this song- Mere kismat ke har ek panne mei 😆

Anyways, Loved the poem🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is beautiful and poignant Mahi ..I love it❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is soo beautiful 💓

Kaise likh dete ho itna accha?? Yeh to shivi ke liye Bana hai.😍😍

Ki Teri har khusi Mai Maine

Apne gham ko dubaya hai

Aur tere gham ne tujhe jab aan ghera

Meri khusiyan bhi Maine tere naam likhwaya hai

These lines👏👏👏👏

It reminded me of their marriage 😍




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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is BEAUTIFUL ❤️❤️ You keep taking it up a noch with every new poem and fiction ❤️

Loved this sooo much! Different differnt scenes of theirs was running in my head as I read each and every line

You the best Maaaahi 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Mahi ....this was soooo beautiful❤️❤️

Shivi and their childhood. You have expressed it so beautifully

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Omg omg omg....so beautiful ❤️❤️❤️

Loved it so much 🥰🥰🥰

My fav lines 😍😍😍.....amazing ❤️😘😘

Jab se tera naam juda hai mujhse,

Main tere hisse aur tu mere hisse aati hai 😍😍

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Posted: 4 years ago
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O mahi this is so beautiful❤

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