Ye kya tuta😜🤣 Shivi funny story

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Raavi was humming a melody while taking out her shopping bags from the almirah as today that stupid bhootnath will be late from shop so she has time for doing a mini fashion show of her own just the way she used to do before marriage. Today Dhara di gave her some money in the afternoon and also she is saving the extra share shiva gives her every month for her expenses,so she really had a gala time shopping today.

As Tomorrow she is going to her college for the annual fashion show cum beauty contest as guest because she was the college queen last year so they called the previous ones to crown the new queen.So she wanted to maintain her reputation and look absolute best tomorrow. Taking out all the bags from cubboard she spread them on the bed to choose her outfit. While choosing She decided to go for a dress as she was the beauty queen so the dress would make her look like one

But her Little old black dress seemed a bit too fitted on her body and enhanced her curves perfectly and she felt the family won't approve of this (aur wo bhootnath to volcano ki tarah phootega mujhpe if she went out in this)

Then she picked another pretty suit which looked really garelu to her so she rejected that then she went for another dress and found the long gown type pink dress which she absolutely adored and tried it on it looked apt but a bit dull for the show like this Raavi kept on trying clothes and didn't realised kab 1 ghant nikal gaya.Finally getting tired she called her Anita di for some idea who told her that she gave her a saree for some reception few days back which she still didn't wear as she was getting really late so didn't get time to change into that. Realizing this Raavi decided to wear that saree only which will make her look classy and hot ek sath.

She searched for the saree and threw the remaining clothes out of the wardrobe before she found the saree in the bottom shelf she immediately opened it and also found a sexy blouse along with it and thanked Anita in her mind.Raaci was wearing her old nightie bottoms and top so instead of draping it fully she started draped the saree above her shorts but not getting the correct look she changed into the blouse as well for trial when suddenly the light went out dipping the room in darkness.

She cursed the ill timing and went towards the door to call someone out but as she opened the latch she realised her condition and immediately backed away but stumbled on her half tucked saree somehow balancing herself she thought candles jalni padegi uss bhootnath ne rakhi thi yahin kahin;kahan rakhi thi so she searched around and found the pack of fragrance candles only not having another option she lit them all around the room and went to change as now without the lights she can't select something to wear for the show, she had just undrapped her saree completely when the door opened and shiva walked inside the room.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Index

Part 1-above

Part 2-page 2

Part 3-page 2

Edited by frnd_ship - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Not sure how photo is attached but the story is super interesting!!!

Waiting for more ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Nice start lol will Shiva misunderstand the situation that she set that up the scene for some ShiVi moments? Please update the next part soon.


I only know how to attach photo with links. You click on the picture icon and then where IF llURL pops up, you replace it with the url of the picture you want.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Cute Start, Raavi having her Fashion show and Shiva walks in ... She is wearing a saree and there are candles in the room☺️


Hope they have some romance😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: frnd_ship

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Rough draft h agar kuch gadbad sadbad lage bta dena baad main bhul jati isliye abhi likh diya😬😬

Koi btao mujhe photo kaise attach karu samajh ni aaya mujhko

If you are trying to post the image directly from google then right click on the said image, click "Copy image address". Click the picture icon and paste the copied URL in the said section. Hit enter and wait for the picture to get uploaded so that it can be previewed. Once loaded hit the post reply button.

If not from google, upload your image here (I prefer this). Once uploaded successfully, scroll down to get the hotlinks for forum. From there copy the URL starting from https://...

Repeat the process as above

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is amazing....❤️

So, the stage is set. 😆


Waiting to read the next part.

Update soon.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I thought shiva was in room and she fell on him

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Awwwwwsome part💯💯💯💯💯💯💯


Cont soon 🤗


Eager to know ,what will happen next 😜😜😜

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As Shiva stepped in the room the light came bathing the room in its glow completely. On seeing someone enter Raavi looked totally flabbergasted and tried to cover herself up as now due to proper lighting that someone can see her like this only to realize its shiva who is carrying basket completely covering his face he turned to place the basket on the bed when suddenly Raavi shouted - "Shiva ruk Jaa mudna mat"

Shiva wo was already irritated due to hunger and then these baskets are not letting him see clearly

Spoke -Ae chipkali ye kya drama h main kyun nhi mudu main toh ghumunga saying so shiva spinned placing the basket on bed with a bit force loosing the ties on them & scanned the room for the chipkali wo seemed nowhere and looked confused thinking Awaaz toh aayi thi.

"Ae chipkali apne rishtedaro k sath diwar pe toh nahi chipak k beth gayi kahan se bol rahi h"

Raavi who has ducked under the bed seeing shiva turning screamed- "Ae bandar tujhe mana kiya tha na paltne se Phir Kyun palta"

Ae gadhedi jada bol mat aur kahan chupi bethi h ye bta and while looking for Raavi his eyes landed on the mess on bed and around the room

And he continued aur ye kya kapdo ka bazaar lagaya hua h sara din bs yahi kiya kya aaja

PHER Kehte h Hume shopping krni h itne kapde toh main saal bhar na kharidu jitne tune ek din main le liye

Seeing him accussing her like these Raavi felt her anger coming and shouted ooo bhootnath Saare kharide nhi h kuch Massi k ghar se pehle wale layi thi aur jo yahan pehenti hu sab h itni bhi kharcheeli nhi hu main bada aaya business man kanjoos kahin ka

Hearing the word kanjoos shiva felt like hitting something here he gives more than half share of money to her from his share and she is still calling him kanjoos.

So in a warning tone and to bring her out from hiding place shiva said agar tu abhi aake ye sab nahi sameta na toh

Toh kya Raavi asked equally appalled by his dhamki

Toh main ye Saare uthake bhar phenk dunga

As he picked up the clothes he felt something touching on his legs and before he knew he fell flat on bed with Raavi jumping over him holding his collar and shook him mere kapdo ko kuch kiya na toh mujhse bura koi nhi hoga shiva looked shocked seeing her attire and shook her off him and stood up immediately taking her clothes from bed and stuffing them inside the cupboard as being this close to her is making him feel weird things,due to the sudden push Raavi went and collided with the baskets causing the flowers inside them to fall everywhere around the bed and on the floor seeing the mess she made Ae gadhedi ye kya kiya pta bhi h kitna time laga tha inhe Lane main sab bekar krdiya he started picking up the petals from floor when Raavi sat up and looked at him saying jitni pyaar se inn pattiyon ko samet raha kabhi mujhse bhi aise Baat karliya kar.

Main nhi lagta chipkaliyon k muh

Muh lagane ko nhi bola tameej se Baat karne ko kaha h shiva looked taken by the double meaning in her tone but avoided and continued his seeing him not responding Raavi deliberately loosened the basket throwing its contents all around the room seeing this shiva went crazy like a bull and stood up Saying Ruk tujhe toh main abhi btaya hu and jumped on the bed to catch her but Raavi slipped from his hold & shiva started chasing

Her making a complete mess of the room when Raavi again climbed the bed and teased shiva who suddenly become conscious of her clothing and said Raavi tu change krke as tb tak main ye clean krta hu making her aware too who started avoiding him and while geeting down tumbled on the basket and shiva seeing her fall tried to save her only to be pulled by her on the bed and due to the sudden weight the bed being old teak wood gave away causing a loud noise. Krish who was just going to his shouted out loud "Ye Kya TUTa"

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