Raghvi OS : The twist of the law. - Page 3

This was so emotional. Beautifully written. I love how in role Raghav is, he gave Pallavi the choice and freedom to decide. Although, he has strong feelings for her, he is willing to sacrifice so she does not suffer any consequences, should she be called a bigamist.

Pallavi waited a month... both must have suffered for so long. Please do continue, would be great to see how they reunite (if they reunite).

Enjoyable read, thank you ❤️

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

I completely agree 🐝 but I never said that there wasn't any emotional intimacy between them.

Thank you 🐝.

No, in fact you made it clear that there was emotional intimacy between them 😆 That's why I used the word "standing".. bcz even if they're close, they don't know exactly where they stand 😆 And I'd rather they figure that out before making any such move. Once they get that clarity, uske baad they can do whatever they want ☺️ Hum to baithe hi hai dekhne ke liye 🤪🤣

Originally posted by: Radiant_Eyes_

Farhad shayari ke baad FF bhi likhta hai 😆

Good you wrote this in English and not Hindi warna tumhare Anna sirf bhool bhool read karte 🤪

Haan I am giving my devar private tuitions about law these days 😎

Reddy 🤣🤣

This is ironic bcz 🗝️ is the one who fumbles with her hindi 🤣

Loved Pallavi here--she did what she wanted not what others expected of her--I hope if such point ever arises in the show--she should do the same

and this was written so beautifully and loved how you included law and Raghav's feelings....that he was in love with Pallavi Sawant as an individual neither his wife nor Mandaar's supposed widow

Loved it...dedo dedo talaak karwa do ....Madaar is a blunder...usko zyada time aur space ni denge humlog 😆

That's amazing start!!👏🏻👏🏻

Originally posted by: Ruhi.007

I like the selfish Raghav here. It is how I would expect his mind to work. He can be all the goody goody husband and woo his wife when they have their entire life ahead of them. But when he has just few hours, well the physical intimacy would only make their emotional bond stronger.

This is exactly why I drifted the story to that way. He knew he was going to loose her in a few hours so he just wanted to have a special memory. He was jealous.

Thank you.

Originally posted by: Inese_20

Wow. I am so overwhelmed 🥺 such powerful writing! Intense.

On a lighter note- Raghav basically put himself out there, everything he had to offer and then let her free to choose. Obviously she couldn’t say no to that 😆

Count me in the minority now, who low key wants this to happen 👏 I mean I would love it either way! Some stories are perfect in their own flawed manner. All what matters is love!

Thank you Inese. 🤗

Yes, he became her husband in all the ways he could fulfilling her all expectations and then let her go.

I have been wanting this to happen since long.

Originally posted by: OceanicHeart.

Wow this was such a beautiful OS ! ❤️

Amazing ! 😳

Loved it 🤗

Thank you. 🤗

You are Tanya, right?

Originally posted by: Radiant_Eyes_

Wow 🤩

This is amazing

This is how it should be if RR got less hours with Pallavi as her husband

This is such an intriguing and powerful fanfic

Because RR is totally in his element here

Pallavi decides to divorce Mandaar after a month ? 😲

A month 😲 wow

Continue with this with possible 😳

I don’t think Pallavi will go back to RR quickly after divorcing Mandaar, rather I don’t want her to 😆

Makers should show something of Pallavi sawant before making her Mrs Rao again

I want them to date 😆

Thank you Sakshi 🤗

If this happens in the show, I would like to see Raghav helping her with divorce but at the end, she shouldn't go with him immediately like you said.

A month is less or more? 😕 Why shocking reaction?

Will think about continuing.