Bariyan a ShiVi ficton [Completed] - Page 29

update today plz i have been waiting for ur update for a long time now plz update today

Originally posted by: AsadZoyaILU

update today plz i have been waiting for ur update for a long time now plz update today

I feel applauded that you are waiting for the story. I have finished only 40% now.

Will post it tomorrow morning or next day.

Keep loving

Thank you❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Romance_addict

Eagerly waiting for your next update ❤️❤️

Its a very beautiful story.Want to know how Shiva and Raavi's relationship will progress further.

Thank you so much dear 🤗

Will update soooon

Glad that you are interested♥️♥️♥️

Mujhe bhii abhi nhi wait karahi haai !

I can’t tell you how many times I’ve repeated reading this story from the beginning because I love how you portray every character. How Shiva and Raavi are slowly changing and adjusting to each other while still staying true to themselves. How from a samjhauta marriage, it gradually and organically and naturally proceeded into a love marriage between them.

Just promise me this won’t be left hanging without an end 😭😭😭

Originally posted by: Hanyshah

Mujhe bhii abhi nhi wait karahi haai !

I can’t tell you how many times I’ve repeated reading this story from the beginning because I love how you portray every character. How Shiva and Raavi are slowly changing and adjusting to each other while still staying true to themselves. How from a samjhauta marriage, it gradually and organically and naturally proceeded into a love marriage between them.

Just promise me this won’t be left hanging without an end 😭😭😭

Its makes us so happy when stories connects with you all♥️♥️

Personally, its my favourite as well so I don't want to leave it hanging. When started I myself didn’t know I would write it this far. May be there will be 2 or 3 more parts to it.

Thank you so much for loving it. 🤗

Will update sooon 😉

Love

Originally posted by: Fah_huq

Its makes us so happy when stories connects with you all♥️♥️

Personally, its my favourite as well so I don't want to leave it hanging. When started I myself didn’t know I would write it this far. May be there will be 2 or 3 more parts to it.

Thank you so much for loving it. 🤗

Will update sooon 😉

Love

Love love !! So good to hear that ! But also so sad that it’s ending ! If it was up to me I want to read moreeeee and not stop 😂😂😂

I echo Hany's sentiments and actions.

Faha, please ekdum phast phast update Karo na! ❤️ I look forward to it.

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

I echo Hany's sentiments and actions.

Faha, please ekdum phast phast update Karo na! ❤️ I look forward to it.

Will try re, tomorrow or next day.🤗

Just pray for my professors to not give assignments phaast phaast 🤪

Hellooo peeps!!

I know I am tooo late. Sorry for that. Was caught up with studies. Hopefully I will be able to update the next parts soon. Now enjoy this part and pls leave your feedbacks.

PS adding the Bariyan video link here for whoever is interested. My story title was inspired from this song. Also I felt the lyrics go with our ShiVi.

Happy reading

https://youtu.be/9pIP8fWEUzo

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PART 10

Re baandhe..
Haan mohe baandhe wo
Nainon ki dor se
Hai yeh pyaar kaisa
Iska raaz hai kya bol de
Keh bhi de......

Raavi hugged Shiva from behind resting her head on his back as she inhaled his mixed scent of oil and masala. She closed her eyes feeling solace. Feeling home. Shiva put his hand on top of hers leaning on her. Entwining their fingers, he brought her to the front. She opened her eyes to gaze into his. His eyes had a depth of their own where she could easily lose herself. They started to sway with the music slowly not breaking their eye lock. Raavi couldn’t take her eyes off of Shiva as he twirled her around. Then.....Snap...

Kabhi sakoon
kabhi laage bala hai
Kabhi dua
kabhi laage halaa hai
Nainon se yeh
Kya ho chalaa hai

“Akal ki dhakkan. Tu ladki nahi musibaton ka pitara hai Pitara. Dhyan kaha hai tera. Kya kar rahi thi tu aab? Khana pakane ayi thi ya khudki hath sekne?”, Raavi looked at Shiva in annoyance as he broke her dream.This Shiva would forever be villain of her story. Even when he was given the lead role he chose negative lead. Gadhera!!!

Shiva took hold of her palm and she looked at him questioningly,

“chal teri madat kardete hai hath sekne mein”,

He looked ready to pull her finger between the gap of stove surface and vessel. Raavi widened her eyes at his action and quickly pulled her hand out of his grasp. What an idiot of a husband she had gotten! Here she was day dreaming about him and had almost burned her hands. He should be inspecting her fingers for any injury, worrying over her but he!!! Always after her to trouble her. She scowled at her ever unromantic husband. She was falsely trying to be Meenamma to his Rahul.

“Pagal hai kya tu? Dekh na tu Gopal hai na main Madhab, nahi yaha Golmaal ke shoot chal raha hai. Yeh khicatani ke zaroorat nahi hai”,

“waise tu aisa kya soch rahi thi joh tujhe aaju baaju ka pata hi nahi raha”, Shiva grinned seeing her scowl. He didn’t know why but he loved her scowl a bit more. He took hold of her hand again and checked her palms closely if she had managed to gain injury prior to his arrival, “kahi mere bare mein toh nahi soch rahi thi!”,

Raavi didn’t bother to reply him. She kept looking at him with admiration now. How cute a man could be! Even though he mocked her seconds ago, he was now busy checking whether she was okay. Ruff or tough, he was a sweetheart and she could only gaze at him. He might be a bhoothnath, but he was her bhoothnath and she felt lucky to have him as her eternity. Shiva looked up at her lack of respond and found her lost in him. Again. He smirked at her dreamy eyes return look. His wife of almost one year was an airhead with 10%, okay 10.001% maturity and 89.999% dust. She was definitely day dreaming something stupid like always and that was visible in her stupid smile.

“Matlab main sahi hu?”, he asked breaking her trance again. She was confused – what was he asking? Bhoothnath was asking, then definitely the answer would be no. She hardly agreed with him on anything.

“nahi”, his winning smirk made her frown and she hastily replied, “haa”, but his smug look didn’t go away. Raavi let out a frustrated sigh,

“Tu kya mujhe tang karne ke liye paida huya hai”,

“Ayy mamikebehankibeti! Mera ticket na tere pehle fixed huya tha. Tu toh janam se pehle se hi mere piche para huya hai. Main duniya mein aaya tujhse raha nahi gaya aur tu bhi bhaag bhaag ke chali aayi”, Raavi switched off the stove making faces at his weird logic,

“Tu apna bakwas kahani banate jaa. Main chali taiyar hone. Phir hume nikal na bhi hai”, Shiva smiled looking at her retreating figure. His girl was mad. He had witnessed her being crazy and a blabbermouth while growing up. But last one year, he witnessed her mature and sensible sides too. That made him wonder sometime. How could such a mature person reside in such an airhead. Then again her childlessness mixed with sensibility made him fall for her everyday a bit more. Her this nature was solace to his heart.

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Shiva came into the hall with their bags to see his family members hugging his wife emotionally!! Raavi's paternak uncle who was unable to attend their wedding, had come for a short vacation from Canada last week and invited them to visit her paternal home in Rajkot. They were to leave for there that day with Prafulla and Jagat. So, here his family were bidding them farewell as if they were leaving for forever. Idiots!! How could they always be on HSSH mode!! He thought at least Rishita would be sensible like him. But he misunderstood. She was actually the Principal of the drama school his family attended. So he went to the most sensible person in the room, his niece Siddhi. She giggled as he blew on her stomach tickling her.

“Ayy bas karo sab aab. Yeh dono ek adh hafte mein wapas aa jayenge. Hamesha ke liye nahi jaa rahe hai joh tum log ganga jamuna bahane pe tuli huyi ho”, Shiva chuckled hearing his mother admonish them. Well, she was the only other person who found all this over dramatic apart from him.

“par aapna Shiva toh pehli baar sasural jaa rahe hai. Bidayi toh banta hai”,

“toh phir hume Shiva ko gale lagake rona chaiye tha na. Raavi ko nahi. Pehle baatana tha na Krish faltu mein time waste ho gaya”, Raavi gave mock offended look jearing Rishita. Shiva widened his eyes at his approaching sister in law and swiftly pulled Raavi between them. Still those two pulled him in a hug with crushing Raavi between them and shed fake tears.

“Tum dono apna amar prem ka over dose dena band karo aur inn dono ko maa ka ashirwad lene do. Phir inhe nikalna bhi hai. Der ho jayegi”,

ShiVi moved to take Suman's blessing who kissed their foreheads and hugged them.

Kaisi yeh peer jo raatein jaage
Raatein hain jaage aur
Taaron ko chhaanate re

Raavi glared at her husband for the umpteenth time in an hour. They had reached some 2-3 hours ago and was welcomed grandly. Then her maasi dragged her away leaving Shiva with her cousins. Now he was sitting amidst all her girl cousins and they were going gaga over him. She could see some even attempting to flirt.Shiva being Shiva smiled at them politely and was just listening to their chatterings. She didn’t like her husband getting all this attention and huffed in annoyance. It was his fault only. Who asked him to clean up so good and dress like some model out of a fancy magazine? He wore a royal blue shirt folding the sleeves half way with black jeans looking absolutely dapper. No one would be able to take their eyes off of him. She herself was swooning over him hours ago. Actually Dhara di was to blame.She must have suggested all these wardrobe updates. They came here and he gained fan club in seconds with girls checking him out left right centre. Didn’t these girls know he was their jiju and one shouldn’t ogle their jiju. And that idiot, he hardly talked to girls before. Forget talking, he never acknowledged any female if they were not customers.But here he was smiling and replying all these moony eyed teenagers. Raavi felt her nose flare up and was almost sure of smoke coming out of her ears. She was pissed with her husband and his fan girls in mere hours. She took a glass of lassi from the serving table and went to them.

“Oye gadheriyon side de mujhe, aise kya sab ghed ke baithe he. Bhashan chal raha hai kya?”, Raavi sat beside Shiva and handed him the lassi glass glaring at the girls,

“aab jiju itna handsome aur charming hai toh hum kya hi kar sakte hai di”, Raavi looked at her 18 year old cousin, Mimi with distaste and disbelief – distaste for calling her bhoothnath handsome and disbelief for finding him charming. She looked up and down at Shiva who tried not to laugh at Raavi's expression and took a sip from his lassi.

“Kaha milega aisa ek hot pati”, Shiva choked and Raavi widened her eyes. She twisted the speaker, 9 year old Titli’s ear,

“Teri muh se abhi bhi dudh ke batbu aati hai aur tu aisa hot pati dhund raha hai. Bada ho ja pehle”, all girls giggled together, “aur tum sab sharam karo kuch. Jiju hai tum logo ki. Aise flirt nahi kar sakte saare”,

“Jiju hai isliye flirt kar rahi hu, warna aab tak pata leta”, Raavi glared at her closest cousin, Asha who was giving her a teasing look. She was close to her age and knew about all the Pandyas. She had always teased her about Shiva but Raavi kept denying only to end up getting married to him. Now Asha had gotten the life time golden ticket of teasing her with his name.

“didi aapne kaha ‘flirt nahi kar sakte saare'. Saare nahi toh hum ek doh karle. Flirt? ”,

“Tum log abhi bhi nahi gaye. Bhago yaha se”, Raavi almost chased them away and they left laughing at her. Shiva was highly amused.

“aur th kirane ka dukan, mere saath dhang se baath karne me saalon laag jaate hai tujhe. Par yaha khi khi kar raha hai yeh titliyon ke saath”, then she looked him up and down disapprovingly, “aur yeh itna saajh dhaj ke yaha aane ko kisne kaha. Di ke khene pe bhi ek simple kurta nahi pehen ta tha. Par aaj yaha Mr handsome banke baithe hai”, Shiva forwarded his lassi glass to her and waited for her to take a sip. Patting her head to cool down, he spoke up,

“saaliyan hai mera sab. Mera biwi ki behan. Impression jamani hogi na”,

“Saaliyon se kaisa impression? ”,

“tujhe toh khush honi chaiye kaise tere gharwale tere pati ke tarif kar rahe hai”,

“Nahi chaiye tarif. Mera wala gunda hi thik hai. Meri tarif hi kafi hai usske liye”

“Oye meri wali chudail. Chudailyon ko bhi jalan hoti hai nahi pata tha mujhe”,

“kya matlab”,

“matlab tu jealous hai”,

“haa hu toh?”, She replied without missing a bit. Shiva was surprised with her easy acceptance. Normally she denied such proclamation but it looked like his chipkali was on a different roll today.

“tujhe toh pyar ho gaya hai pagli”, Raavi paused to take in his teasing smile that lit up his entire face. His smiles had become her weaknesses. She whispered ,

“ha”, Shiva couldn’t help grinning widely at her simple reply.

“magar kisi aur se”,he joked encircling his hands around her. They kept looking at each other with an unwavering look as if challenging the other to utter the next word. Raavi spoke up. A determined look in her eyes.

Palkonki dibiyon mein rehte
Khwaab hain udne ko kehte
Haathon se chhoota
Chhoota chala hai jiya

“ha. Sahi bola tune. Kisi aur se hi huya. Mujhe laga tha mujhe mere pati se pyaar hoga kisi din. Woh pati joh Maa ke Shiva hai, apne parivar ke liye kuch bhi kar sakte hai yaha tak ki mamikebehankibeti ko bhi jhel sakta hai. Jiske liye usske parivar ke barkar kuch nahi hai”, Raavi paused to pull him a bit more closer by his forearm without breaking their eye lock, “Par mujhe Shiva Pandya se pyar ho gaya. Woh Shiva se jisne mujhe mere liye apnaya. Mujhe, uske mamikinehankebeti ko sirf Raavi ke roop janna sikh liya aur usske aapno mein jaga dhi. Joh mere saath mere bure waqt par khara raha. Na Dhara di ke kehne par, na Gaumbi ke nahi Maa ke. Sirf mere liye. Jiss ne nafrat ko haata kar bas mere khayal rakha. Tab toh main usska biwi bhi nahi bana tha. Phir bhi mere haath thami rahe. Joh mere har woh ek unkahee baat samajh jata hai. Joh kitna bhi irritating lage mere har baat sunta hai. Ha sunne ke bad kya reply aata hai woh alag hai. Par joh mere har ek kahi ko ehmyat deta hai, mujhe ehmiyat deta hai, jisske liye main important hu. Mujhe uss Shiva Pandya se pyar ho gaya hai. Woh bhi beinteha”,

Shiva was speechless by her confession. He knew she was developing feelings for him and she had said it many times. But never in his dreams he expected such a confession from her. He himself never thought of wording out his love. Again this was his Raavi. His Raavi who was unpredictable. And he loved her for her spontaneous nature. Seeing Shiva lost, Raavi squeezed his arm.

“Aur kitna ghoore ga? Itna lamba chouda confession di hai maine. Tere bare mein kitne acche acche baate boli. Tujhe kuch nahi bolna?”,

“kya bolna”,

“tu nahi bolega tu mujhse kitnaaaaa pyar karta hai”, Shiva stared at her, her eyes were twinkling with mischief and innocence. He brought his mouth to her ears,

“Tu janti hai. Main baaton mein nahi karke dikhane mein viswas rakta hu. Kamre mein chal dikhate hai tujhe”,Raavi slightly shivered as Shiva traced her ears with his lips while whispering those words. She blushed and tilted her head to look at him,

“par kamra toh nahi milne wala tum dono ko”, and their moment broke just like that. Groaning Shiva rested his head on her shoulder. Raavi tried not to laugh and turned to the intruder –Sanskar, her maasi's one and only son, “nahi matlab maine suna hai jab bhi aise get together hota hai yaha ladkon sab bahar aangan mein sote hai aur ladkiyan andar, yaha”,

“ekbaat bata tujhe uss mami ne bheja nah hume disturb karne? Ayy chipkali aapni masi ko na yeh Bacchan wali har kate chodne ko bol. Warna main gabbar banke usska hath chin lunga. Lage haath Kangan bhi mil jayega”, Raavi rolled her eyes. Her maasi had truly been trying to keep them separate since they started for here together. She tried to sit between them in the car which didn’t happen. Instead Shiva made her sit on the passenger sit. Then she continued sticking with Raavi wherever she went and dragging her to meet people. As if she had not been living with this Bhoothnath for almost one year now and her keeping them away from each other was going to do any magic.

“tu maa ko kitna acche se janta hai, Shiva. Kabhi kabhi lagta hai tu maai se hi jayada obsessed hai”,

“tujhko bhi lagta hai na! ”, Shiva looked at the brother sister duo with boredom before smirking at Sanskar,

“Tu bata, tera chakkar chal raha hai na kisike saath yaha? Dekha maine tujhe kisiko ghoorte huye”,

“meeeeraa? Chaaakkkar? Kya Shiva main toh tere bhakt hu. Tere jaise bramhachari banna hai mujhe”,

“oye tera guru shadi shuda hai aur usske biwi tere samne baithe hai”,

“haa par....”

“Sanskar tumhe kaki ne inn dono ko bulane ke liye bheja aur tum gappe mar ne baith gaye”, all argument ceased as Sanskar stilled looking with dazed eyes at the new comer, Riddhima. She was Raavi’s distant cousin from paternal side. Shiva rolled his eyes at his wife’s sudden interested look on their interaction, “aap dono chaliye kaku bula rahe hai”, Riddhima left saying that but Sanskar kept looking at her retreating figure. Shiva smacked his head bringing him back to the earth,

“Gadhere tu yaha nain matakka karne aaya hai? Mami ko batane ka maja hi kuch aur hoga”,

“Kya Shiva khud love marriage karke mere prem kahani ka villain kyun banna chahta hai ”,

“rehne de Sanskar. Yeh Shiva hai, khud ka love story ka villain. Isse main nipat lungi. Tu aapna chalata jaa. Aur koyi madat lage to batana mujhe”,

“mujhe pata tha. Tu best hai, Raavi. Pata nahi tujhe iss gabbar singh se kaise pyar ho gaya”, Raavi made a sad face while Shiva glared the duo, “aab chal isse pehle ki maa khud yaha aa jaye”.

Udne lagi hain khamoshi se
Khamoshi se
Baaton ki parchiyaan..

Shiva looked at the man in front of him intently. He had met him before. When he was barely 6 years olds. That memory was still vivid in his mind. Antor Lakhani, Raavi's only blood relative. He had come to visit Raavi before leaving for Canada. He wanted to take her with him which landed him in an argument with Prafulla. Prafulla did love her sister a lot and refused to part with Raavi. She wanted her in front of her eyes 24/7. Darshan had went to their house that day with Shiva to discuss something with Jagat. They had witnessed all those arguments between Prafulla and Antor first hand. He himself disliked the man at that moment for trying to take Raavi away. For there wasn’t any animosity between them then. But he watched how the man teared up and almost begged for her but Prafulla didn’t budge, instead she said some harsh words. When he hugged her before leaving she had very innocently asked when her Achu would meet her again and why was he crying? Hearing Achu the name she loving called him instead of Chachu, he had teared up more and left without a reply to her. Shiva had run behind him till the car. He remembered clearly how he looked then. He could not decipher that look back than but now he could. It was the look ofdefeat and pain.

But right now the same man was sporting some else look altogether. Antor Lakhani sat in front of Shiva looking at him with scrutinising gaze. As if he was a talentshow judge and Shiva was some overrated contestant. Shiva felt uncomfortable at his constant stare and Raavi was frowning. What was her uncle up to now? He had started asking abrupt questions to Shiva. Raavi couldn’t help rolling her eyes. Her aunt, Shailja shook her head from beside her.

“Education”,

“college tak”,

“kamate kitne ho”

“Woh dukan mein sab ka combined hai. Waha se jab jitna zaroorat pade hum le lete hai”,

“Do you drink?”

“nahi”,

“cigarette”,

“nahi”,

“any bad habit”, Shiva didn’t reply. Instead he looked at Raavi thinking whether her and her uncle's definition was same ,

“matlab hai”,

“nahte nahi hai hafto bhar”, Sanskar chipped in as no one was answering earning glare from Raavi,

“Achu, aap pehle bolte main isska biodata banake le aata aap ke liye. Yeh KBC nahi khelne padte tab”,

“bacchi sahi keh rahi hai, raat ho gayi. Yeh sawal jab kal karna”,

“kya kal karna? Main questions toh puche hi nahi”, Shiva sighed knowing Raavi's questions would be like her, “arreh isse khana bana na aata hai ya nahi, kapre dhona aata hai ya nahi, bartan saaf karna aata hai ya nahi.....”,

“tum dono phir se naam se hi kiyun shuru nahi karte!!” Shailja snapped giving an exasperated look, “Nam kiya hai, kaha rehte hai, ghar mein kaun kaun hai. Tum dono ka kuch nahi ho sakta. Filhal ke liye sab ko aaram karne do. Yeh log bhi journey karke aaye hai. They need rest”,

“Thik hai. Chal Shiva, tu mere saath soyega. Raavi beta tujhe bhi aapne chachi aur Jhanvi se kitne baatein karni hogi nah? Tu unke saath so ja aaj”, as Shiva followed her uncle out, ShiVi kept looking at each other having a conversation of their own.

Hone lage aadhe aadhe
Aankhon se hi kai waadein
Saansein jalayein
Ishq ki sardiyaan..

The night was peaceful with wind blowing gently and a half moon playing hide and seek behind the clouds. Shiva and Raavi were sitting beside on the steps of a ghat behind the ancestral home. They sat there wrapped in each other's arm enjoying their silence. It was strange that one year ago in another ghat, they were two lonely soul giving company to each other. That night their heart was full of sorrow and unsurity. They had shared their griefs then. But tonight they sat with hearts full of happiness, solace and anticipation where they were sure of a future full of love and togetherness. The peaceful ambience was broken with ringing of Raavi's phone that was in Shiva's pocket. He took it out to find Krish calling and shook his head at his suddenly enthusiastic wife. She was all drowsy and tired moments ago. Now she was bouncing beside him urging him to receive the call. Shiva did as told to see various eager looking eyes staring back at them. Raavi excitedly greeted them snatching the phone from Shiva. He happily wrapped his hands around her and rested his chin on her shoulder looking on,

“Bhabhiiiiii, main aapko kitna miss kiya main bata nahi sakta. Aap ki yaad main khana bhi hajam nahi ho raha”,

“jhuta, abhi tune 4 parathe akela khaya yeh kehke Shiva aur Raavi ka bhi tujhe dein”,

“maine kaha hajam nahi huya, Rishita Bhabi. Khaya nahi jaa raha yeh toh nahi kaha na”

“Gadhere!!!”,Gaumbi hit Krish lightly and took the phone, “Waha sab kaise hai Shiva? Tum logo ko koyi takleef toh nahi huya jaate waqt”,

“yaha sab badiya hai Gaumbi. Aap fikar mat karo”,

“kaise fikar na kare tujhe pehli baar sasural bheja hai”,

“Raavi Shiva tum dono bahar ho kya?”,

“ha Bhabi, hum ghat pe hai”,

“oye hoye, yeh raatein yeh mausam naadinka kinara yeh chanchal hawaaa”, Krish started singing in his most besura tone much to everyone's chagrin,

“Abb ewoh gareebon ka Sanam Puri, aapna yeh khagra jaise gala bandh hi rakh”,

“”par tum dono kya sach mein chori chupe ghat pe milne aayi ho? How romantic!!”

“haha jarur Bhabi ka hi idea ho ga”,

“bilkul sahi bola tune. Warna iss bhoothnath ke andar romantic ke R tak nahi hai. Pata hai yeh kitna bechain ho raha tha mujhse mil ne par darr raha tha Achu se. Darpok Pandya”,

“Ayyee mamikebehankibeti main kisi se nahi darta samijhi. Woh...woh unhe pata chale ga toh bura lage ga isliye na keh raha tha”, Raavi fanned herself with her hands as if not interested while the Pandyas on the other side glared Krish for orienting a new fight.

“chal Shiva tum log aaram karo. Iss gadha ko main sulane le jata hu. Aajkal jyada hi romantic gaana suj raha hai isse”, Gaumbi patted Krish's cheek with an extra sweet smile who immediately ran away shouting ‘Good night' to ShiVi. They cut the call and ShiVi looked at each other,

“aab tujhe sona nahi hai kya”,

“yaha baith the hai na Shiva. Accha lag raha hai”,

“par hum safar karke aaye hai. Rest bhi chaiye na?”,

“arey ha. Tujhe toh subah jaldi uthna hoga. Achu ne tere test lene ka jo than liya hai”,

“Subah jaldi matlab”,

“Matlab Achu roj 5 baje uth jate hai. Phir yaha jogging karte hai. Rules ke pakke hai woh. Aur aab toh tu damad hai, tera test hoga. Dekh kahi 4 baje na utha de tujhe! Phir unke saath thande thande pani se nahna...”,

“yeh tere Achu ka samaj nahi aata mujhe. Agar main unka test fail kardi toh”,

“unka test woh jaane.”,shrugging Raavi snuggled into his embrace, “ Par tu mera Chattan Pandya hai. Main janti hu tu saab paas karega”, Shiva placed a soft kiss at the top of her head then closed his eyes enjoying the night.

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Raavi looked up at the door as someone entered only to see some worker entering. She sighed. It was near evening still there was no sign of her husband. He had left early morning with her uncle. Before leaving he came to tell her and left his phone with her too on Achu's instruction. They were yet to return. She wondered what what her Achu was making him do? Someone snapped their fingers making Raavi come out of her thoughts. She saw her cousins - Sanskar, Jhanvi, Titli, Imon and Asha sitting in front of her with teasing looks. She raised her eyebrow in annoyance.

“Lagta hai Di ka thought interrupt karna unhe pasand nahi aya”,

“kaise ayegi? Jiju ke bare me joh soch rahi thi”,

“Raavi tu soch na band kar. Main tere liye taja khabar laya hu. Aaj tere pati parmeshwar ke saath kiya kiya huya”, that had Raavi interested and she urged her to continue making others giggle. But she didn’t care. She listened intently as Sanskar and Titli described a event from afternoon that had reached their ears. Apparently Antor had taken Shiva with him to their field where some harvesting was going on. There some conflict had risen and Shiva had solved it in just like that impressing everyone present there. They praised him and his dealing ability. Raavi frowned hearing all this. This was so typical. Hero helps to solve some khandani deal, Sasurji gets impressed then khushi khushi give their girl! Che! He was her Chattan Pandya. This dealings and all were play to him. Her Achu had let her down today. He should have given Shiva some creative tests na. Raavi decided she would give some good ideas to her Achu. Something that would annoy her Bhoothnath.

Bariya O Bariyan

Mujhe saata na Bariyan.......

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PS.. Guys you can suggest what ideas should Raavi give to her uncle. I will try to fit them in.

Ahhh finally the confession happened!!!!

I got so excited when I saw you updated a new part 😆

What is this Maami's problem? Why is she being a kebab mein haddi for ShiVi?

But LOVED Raavi's confession and Shiva's reply to that ❤️

The beautiful scene at the ghat and the way that parallels that first time they were sitting together was so poignant!

Please please update next parts soon!!

P.S. Can't wait to see what creative tests Raavi comes up with for her Chattan Pandya 🤣