OS: Shaurya's New Beginnings - Page 3

Wonderful...evil tej & devi got what they deserved...imagine destroying people's lives out of greed but pretending to be mahaan... enjoyed your story💖🌹

Woohoo totally loved it. N how u narrated the whole plot is amazing. Can there be more parts to it ?

Originally posted by: wamavasant

This was an amazing os

Loved it

My favorite line was kanyadaan kar k apni kanya wapas le jaa rhi hu 👏

Amazing dialogues

Loved it

Do write more

I'm glad you liked the dialogue, I found it relevant.

Thanks a ton.

I just hope I do write more ...

I've become quite lazy ..

But I surely will try..

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

Aazeen I am so glad to see you back here behena.. 🤗❤️

Missed reading your work ❤️

Will be back after reading 🤗

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

Whoo hooo.🥳. now thats what I call a perfect comeback...👍🏼👏

Loved it ❤️

I hope you will be more active here...😁🤗🤗

I'm glad you loved it...

Will try being more active here...

Otherwise WhatsApp zindabad...🤪

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

ohh madam u dont need handful of kids to b busy ..only one can b handful at times n then there is husband also who can b ur biggest baby 🤣

Originally posted by: kiranpri

Definitely a credible reason for BM and. BP to ensure they have control of the property.

And the fact that Gayatri should be given some importance in the story. I would have liked the secret of BM forcing Shaan to divorce Astha so Gaytri and Kanchan could stay in SH be also revealed.

Yes, Gayatri should also be given her due importance...

I'm so sorry that we couldn't reveal that thing about the blackmail for divorce in this os.

Thanks for commenting. Means a lot...🤗

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

wow so loved it

so everything is about property

uff poor shaurya had to suffer so much

I'm glad you liked it...

Really Shaurya had too much to suffer because of other's greed.

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Haaye meri behna... I had no idea that you are here too, I have been following this show for a while now... Would had so much fun had I known... Anyway thanks for coming to read this work...🤗🤗🤗

Yeah behena 🤗

I am active here not the whole day like I used the. But yeah for few moments a day . 😆
No issues dear its always better late than never .. Join us interacting on CC , EDT or any of the MF threads ❤️🤗

When I saw your UN n story I was so excited to read it. So aana hi tha ❤️

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Thanks so much di...

I'm glad you loved it...

Will try being more active here...

Otherwise WhatsApp zindabad...🤪

Yeah try to be active. WhatsApp toh humesha se hai. 😆