RaghVi FF : Nightmare - Page 2

Originally posted by: OceanicHeart.

I got the concept of Dream within a dream.

But the theme of the OS really interests me.

Sounds something like a Stockholm syndrome. So Pallu feels she is his prisoner but still somewhere falls for him.

Only for him to end up killing her. And the guilt is so strong that he has bad nightmares.

This is the vibe that I got apart from the whole inception thing which was pretty cool.

Will add chapters. A bit here nd dere.

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

Idk how many times I read this and it's still a bit hazy inside my head.

So, They went to kolhapur.

Pallavi confessed that she loves him.

She left him or he believes that he killed her or something else happened there.

Hence the nightmares. And a dream inside another dream.

I read that it has inception concept, so here Pallavi has the talent of entering someone's dream here Raghav's. Am I right? 🤔

If I'm wrong, please make it clear for me, my anxiety is triggering here.

I would definitely but decided to add chapters. U r right to an extent.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

I would definitely but decided to add chapters. U r right to an extent.

OK! Thanks for that. I will be waiting. And please do tag me when you do.

Bohot hatke and badiyo likhtey ho👏⭐️

Round and round and round.

Looks like Raghav is in sapno ka daldal😆

Amazing👏

The combination of pain and angst with dream within a dream was described so well!!👏

Loved it!👍🏼❤️

Originally posted by: Mihika

Round and round and round.

Looks like Raghav is in sapno ka daldal😆

Amazing👏

Merry go round.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

That was the plan to blur those lines to the point of what is true nd what not. But if u read attentively... its made clear what is what.

I have tried to. But I am not reaching the right place where the knot is.

The best I can do is, have a feeling that, this line tells more than I am able to read. ‘P – Seems like something I would say. So what happened next Raghav?’

Will wait. 😊

Originally posted by: Prriyam

I have tried to. But I am not reaching the right place where the knot is.

The best I can do is, have a feeling that, this line tells more than I am able to read. ‘P – Seems like something I would say. So what happened next Raghav?’

Will wait. 😊

Will post next part by night...

Chapter 2

Girls like u shouldn’t drive on road. And never come between my work for sure. U r the one who stopped my man today right?

Ur man was following my friend. And who r u to tell me what I should or shouldn’t do. Guys like u r the reason parents feel ashamed about themselves.

Hey… u don’t talk about my family.

Why? I didn’t said anything wrong. Guys like u r shame on ur family name.

And then I burnt ur consignment that day. U were the only one stupid enough to stand up to Raghav Rao.

P – Yes. I was stu… Heyyy… u called me stupid.

R – Sorry Mrs. Rao. My bad. I should have added immensely stupid.

He chuckled.

P – U Raghav Rao… Fine I won’t talk to u now. Even if u come running behind me.

His expressions changed. Anger in eyes with a water droplet in side.

R – U always do that anyways. No matter how much I cry or beg. U never come back once u leave.

P – Get ready for the Pooja. Farhad will come any second.

R – Get lost.

P – Sure???

His eyes swelled up. The misery of his being was visible on his face.

F – Anna… Pandit Ji is calling u. R u ready?

His expression reverted to his stoic self.

R – Will be dere in 5 minutes.

P – Good Boy. Now get ready ASAP.

Raghav changed to traditional clothing and arrived downstairs. The Pooja started. Hymns were being chanted and atmosphere was to be peaceful.

P – U r looking good in traditional?

P - What?? No reply. Don’t be a spoil sport. I was just joking with u. Ok fine…. I will never stop talking you. Fine now??? U r my Ghamandi Rao. U know right?

R – I have lost u once. I m not losing u again. No way.

Cold Fire never left his eyes.

F – Anna…. Anna… Pandit Ji is saying something.

R – What???

F – He asked u to put the garland on the photo.

R – Ok…. Ya right.

He did as asked as the air was becoming difficult to breathe. The Pandit announced the completion of rituals and he stood and moved out of mansion to get the breath he desperately was craving for. He has to hold himself. Farhad followed him out.

F – Anna what happened? Y u came out suddenly?

R – Nothing. An important call to attend. U go back. I will join.

F – Its been 2 years anna. U…

R – I will join Farhad.

F – Ok anna.

And Farhad left as he knew its of no use.

P – Two years… Really that long?

R – Yes that long. Two years of nightmares Mrs. Rao.