OS: Shattered - Page 2

I loved it😍😍😍😍

Please do write more and if possible continue this too😋❤🤩

I really really want you to write another shot, continuing the scenario...it was so good

Heyy Priya, so happy to see you here!! 🤗

Wonderful OS 👏

Originally posted by: bones123

Thankyou everyone who has liked this story, I'm truly humbled by your reaction to it!.

Given the comments, I am thinking of writing a Raghav companion piece to Shattered. Perhaps the journey from "Raghav..." or the journey on the other end to "Raghav...".

Would that be of interest?

Oh yes! Please do. Would love to read it.

This is how Pallavi going to realize that she was being taken for granted by her so called family.

You have did a fantastic job to describe her inner turmoil. And my favorite part was that, obviously she dialing his number.

Hey Priya! Thanks for this piece. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Honestly, as much as Pallavi keeps making excuses for her family's behavior each time and forgiving them, there needs to be at least that one odd time when her hurt makes her realise how badly she's being treated by her 'family'. Making excuses and being forgiving is fine because that is a part of love, but not once feeling bad about their treatment of her is not realistic. It was good to see such a Pallavi at least in writing if not the show. Very nicely done! Will head to 'enroute' now.

Hi Priya

Fabulous OS

sad how Pallavi has treated

at least she realised that Raghav is always there for her

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

Hey Priya! Thanks for this piece. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Honestly, as much as Pallavi keeps making excuses for her family's behavior each time and forgiving them, there needs to be at least that one odd time when her hurt makes her realise how badly she's being treated by her 'family'. Making excuses and being forgiving is fine because that is a part of love, but not once feeling bad about their treatment of her is not realistic. It was good to see such a Pallavi at least in writing if not the show. Very nicely done! Will head to 'enroute' now.

Thankyou so much for reading and liking the story! I hope she does lash out and show she is human and she is hurt by their behaviour. It's not enough to just paint Sulochana as the villain...she is ....but she's open about it. Problem is with the others. The Pallavi in my story is obviously way beyond that and she's completely disillusioned, hope we see even a smidge of this in the reel story.

Hope you like Enroute as well :)

This is awesome. Please continue it. Atleast make an SS with this concept.