Originally posted by: Khyati55
Hey, first of all Thank you thank you so much for taking your precious time to write this amazing piece of work for us out of your fully packed hectic schedule... You know what your story is actually energy booster for your readers... Entertaining and motivating at a same time... Whenever I feel gloomy or off I just look upto your story again and again ☺️☺️☺️... So thank you so much for all your hard work and pain....
Now coming to the story...
You never fails to amaze me.. the way you write a fictional story yet so real that never ever it felt like.. okay this is too much types... I can easily connect everything with reality..
Starting from the hustle bustle of the party preperation where everyone are assigned their respective work, house full of chitter chatter, everyone busy in their work running from one place to other, seniors checking the work assigned to junior, calling out eachother, teasing and leg pulling of youngest, youngest one complaining about the loads of work given to him, everything is just what happens in reality, ... It's so good actually feel like we are present there in reality...
The line where Lakshman as well as his brothers assured their wives that they are there for them .. that particular dialogue was what actually a wife needs in difficult problematic time, no doubt that she can handle and tackle with every situation single handed but to know that someone that too someone so dear is there for you , to hold you , help you and stand by you, is all what one need... Though the girls are guilty of hiding something from their elder mother like sister but the concern behind it is what shows the true love of sisters.. Siya unknowingly though but speaking such sentences which will be needed in future to support them, actually it's not Siya but the subconscious mind and her sixth sense that is speaking certain things on her own...
That interaction between Suvarna Siya in the office where Siya as a friend and out of humanity was trying to make Suvarna show the reality and make her understand the true meaning of love was like talking in the air because the words said by Siya can change the heart of heartless person too but how can I forget that she is actually neither human,nor animal because even animal are far better than her ... And her thoughts... I just wanna go and give a tight slap on her face for her sick mind....
Actually Siya is the only wife in the world who is hell bent in convincing her own husband that some other girl loves him and actually reasoning him why she will not fall in love with him.. like seriously is she for real... Yaar how can someone be so good, though I know that Ram had never made her insecure even for a single second nor she had even a slightest doubt on him but thoda sa thoda sa to jealous hona banta h na boss... Siya come on now when you had actually guessed about Suvarna's attraction towards Ram you should start behaving as Mrs Siya Ram Raghuvanshi with her showing her the reality instead of taking it lightly...
I am eagerly waiting for the next part....
Update soon....
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