Shivi SS: Standing by each other Part 6 on Pg 24 20.07.2021(Completed) - Page 5

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Hi guys🤗.

Finally I am back with the second update. It’s been so long since I updated the first one, I am really sorry for being so late😔.

And also I wrote the first scene way back so it is not copied from the show, it’s mere coincidence.

Here also I will give a chhotu Recap in case you forgot the storyline.

Recap: Raavi took all the blame on herself, shocking everyone but Shiva the most. Suman punished her to live alone for 7 days, Shiva confessed that he too was with her so both bear the punishment. Raavi cooks food for them where Shiva helps her.

Ab aage bane rahie. Happy reading guys😂

Part 2

As promised Shiva sat there with Raavi till the end and helped with small small things.

Once done Raavi asked 'yahi khayega ya room mein khana hai?'

Shiva was feeling damn hungry 'bahut bhuk lagi hai andar jane tak ka wait nahi hoga mujhse. Yahi kha lete hai'

Raavi smiled seeing this impatient Shiva, for a change he was behaving normal with her. She put food for him on the plate and handed him.

Till the time Raavi completed one chapati Shiva ate 3 and said 'kitni dheere khana khati hai tu chipkali'

Raavi pouted and replied 'main toh dheere hi khati hu'

There was now only one chapati left and Raavi observed that he was still hungry.

Shiva saw only one chapati and didn't say anything as he knew this one was for Raavi; she ate only one. He was about to get up when Raavi said 'Shiva last chapati khatam kar na'

Shiva spoke 'bakwas mat kar. Mujhe pata hai teri hai tune ek hi khayi hai. Khale chup chaap'

Raavi knew there was no point lying to him 'please kha le Shiva. Meri galti hai mujhe nahi pata tha ki teri diet kitni hai maine jaan bujh ke nahi kia. Sorry. Please khale yeh roti'

Shiva knew that his appetite was good and only Dhara bhabhi knew how much he ate so he didn't feel bad. He took the chapati and divided it into two parts.

'Le. Ek Teri ek meri. Itna sorry bolne ki zarurat nahi hai. Janta hu ki tu nahi janti thi, or ab yeh adhi roti kha. Main nahi chahta log bole ki biwi ke hisse ka khana bhi Shiva kha leta hai' Shiva jokes. He sat finishing the last bites.

Raavi felt so good when he addressed her as Biwi, this was the first time he did so. She also liked how he didn't get angry and understood her.

Shiva was done with food, he was about to leave but turned and said '5'

Raavi looked at him and smiled, he didn't say the full sentence but she knew what he meant.

***

For the last half an hour Raavi was struggling with fixing the saree, firstly it was compulsory for her to wear a saree and then she couldn't take help from anyone. How is she supposed to tie this and fix it properly?

Shiva entered inside without knocking and saw her struggling with the dori of the blouse ‘Ho gayi ready?’ he turned his face as soon as he saw her exposed back.

Raavi was startled. She didn’t know what to do, everything was going wrong.

‘Tujhe kitni baar kaha hai change karte waqt band kar darwaza.’ Shiva scolded her. While she just huffed in annoyance and sat on the bed with thud all tired.

Hearing her voice he turned to see a dejected wife of his who was on the verge of crying.

‘Ab kya hua?’ Shiva asked as now her front was facing him.

‘Dekh na Shiva na yeh dori bandh rahi hai or na hi yeh saree set ho rahi hai. Kya hoga ab?’ She complained like a kid.

Shiva smiled seeing her ‘Ruk kisi ko bulata hu, Rishita ya bhabhi ko.’ He was about to go when she stopped him.

‘Oh Samjhdar Pandya. Agar itni si baat hoti toh main na bula leti? Bhul gaya maa ne punishment di hai hume.’ Raavi spoke still head hung down. Tears now started flowing down.

Shiva didn’t like her like this so did the first thing came to his mind, he wiped her tears and held her chin forcing her to look upwards ‘Yeh rona band kar pehle toh. Roti hui bilkul achi nahi lagti tu.’

Raavi was shocked to hear that which made him conscious of his act so he withdrew his hand and covered himself for blurting the truth ‘Mera matlab hai ki phir makeup kharab hoga or tu chudail lagegi. Mujhe toh darati hi hai sabko daraegi phir.’ Raavi’s mouth formed an ‘O’

‘Bakwas mat kar Shiva. Kya kare? Ek kaam karte hai tu sabko bolde ki Raavi bimar hai nahi aa sakti.’ Raavi spoke the first thing that came to her mind.

For some reason Shiva didn’t like the idea of going to that Puja alone because he knew that this Puja was to be performed in pairs. ‘Aisa hai Bakwas mat kar.’

‘Acha toh tu bata kya kare?’ Raavi asked, mocking him.

Shiva replied hesitantly ‘Tujhe thik lage toh main help karu?’ Raavi looked at him surprised. ‘Galat mat samjhio mujhe, main bas help karne ke liye puch raha hu.’ Shiva was way more nervous then he looked.

Raavi sensed that nervousness, she didn’t say anything and just turned showing her milky back to him, she shifted her hair on one shoulder giving more access to her back.

Shiva gulped the lump formed in his throat seeing her back, this girl was igniting some unknown feelings in him. He took the ends of Doris and crossed it, his hand touching her back. His eyes closed on its accord, he could feel her goosebumps on the skin which were begging to be kissed. But he controlled his desires.

As soon as his hands touched her skin, shivers ran down her spine. She has never been touched by a man before like this, especially her man. What? When did he become her man?

The thought only adorned her face with a blush.

‘Ho gaya.’ Shiva announced.

Raavi exhaled the breath she didn’t know she held all this while. ‘Chale ab?’ She heard him and before she could tell him the other problem they heard ‘Shiva aja. Late ho rahe hai’ Dev called them and also simultaneously came towards their room.

Shiva unlatched the door and was about to open the door when Raavi called him urgently ‘Shivaaa’

‘Kya hai?’ he turned rudely and his eyes widened when he saw her saree scattered on the floor.

He straight away closed the door and latched it again, he heard the knock on the door but ignoring the knock came towards her.

‘Shiva band kyu kia darvaza? Bahar aa na late ho raha hai.’ Dev spoke clueless of everything.

‘Yeh kya ho gaya?’ Shiva asked, panicking.

‘Vohi toh keh rahi thi ki dusri problem yahi thi, yeh fix nahi hui.’ raavi replied.

Both were so comfortable with each other that none of them noticed that her front area was exposed. She stood there like that only making no effort to pick the saree while Shiva finally noticed her and saw how her cleavage was also visible now. He bent down and picked up the saree and wrapped it around her covering her.

‘Thoda toh pehen saree ko, aise hi khadi ho gayi.’ Shiva said, avoiding her gaze. That’s the time when Raavi realized that how she was standing she blushed hearing him, she held the pallu on her shoulder to avoid it falling. ‘Shiva tu ja. Or bol de tabiyat kharab hai.’ Raavi said.

Shiva was adamanent ‘Main kahi nahi ja raha, kaise rukegi is haveli mein akeli?’

Raavi replied ‘Ruk jaungi mein. Is embarrassment se toh bachungi, tu hai toh thik hai kisi or ke aage aise yeh gir gayi toh?’ She blurted in one go.

Shiva was surprised, what did she mean by ‘tu hai toh thik hai’. Was she okay with all of this happening in front of him? He spoke being protective. ‘Kisi or ke aage main aisa kuch hone bhi nahi dunga.’

Raavi felt so warm hearing the care, protective nature for him 'Par ab kya kare?’

‘Youtube khol vaha dekhte hai. Baki thodi toh tujhe bhi aati hai.’ Shiva suggested

‘Shiva kaha reh gaya?’

They heard Dev. Shiva shouted back ‘10 min mein aa rahe hai bas’

Finally Shiva watched the video and with help of Raavi and the video he successfully made the pleats of the saree and without thinking tucked the pleats with his hands. He felt an electrifying current when his hand touched her abdomen, he felt her taking a sharp breath and her hand clutched on his shoulder.

He looked at her to find her eyes closed and chest heaving up and down due to the touch and such close proximity. ‘Sorry maine dhyan nahi dia.’

***

Shiva was helping her wear the saree, finally when he was done with the pleats he took it and tucked inside the petticoat which caused his hand to touch her abdomen. She felt shivers run down her spine and automatically her hands clutched his shoulders and eyelids dropped, not able to handle such proximity.

She was brought to her senses when she heard him apologize. She felt disappointed when he withdrew his hand and said sorry. She just nodded in acknowledgement but deep down she too didn’t know why she was disappointed.

Shiva noticed her expressions and he found disappointment in her eyes, firstly he didn’t know these emotions he was feeling and on top of that he could feel he was not the only one affected.

‘Safety pin laga de. Pleats par.’ Raavi spoke, ordering him and he, like a good husband obliged and sat on his knees. He opened the pin and was struggling with it when it pierced his skin a bit, he winced in pain.

Raavi without thinking for a second took his finger and put it in her mouth to stop the bleeding, but the moment she did that she felt butterflies dancing in her stomach. On her accord she rolled her tongue on his finger almost sucking it.

Shiva felt her warm mouth on his finger, he felt her tongue roll around his finger, his eyes closed on the pleasure he was getting.

He forcefully had to remind himself that that was not sexual. Rather it was an act of soothing his pain, he pulled his finger out and spoke ‘Thik hai ab.’

‘Dhyan se kar Shiva, ruk mein lagati hu safety pin’ Raavi tried to take it from him but he denied. ‘Main kar raha hu tu sidhi khadi rahi.’ this time obliged.

After getting done with the pleats Raavi set the Saree on her shoulder and guided him to secure it with a safety pin. Shiva obliged and did it pretty fast to avoid any such encounter again.

‘Ab thik hai? Or kahi se toh nahi gir sakti na yeh?’ Shiva asked a bit possessive which made Raavi chuckle and she pulled his cheeks ‘Kitna cute lag raha hai aisi batein karta hua. Nahi giregi kahi se ab.’

Shiva was shocked but more than that he smirked on the word ‘cute’. ‘Cute lag raha hu main tujhe?’

Raavi was flabbergasted and she fumbled ‘Vo.. vo.. Chal jaldi wait kar rahe hai sab’ and she rushed out of the room leaving a smiling Shiva.

***

Dev and Rishita were sitting in the living area waiting for Shivi, they finally saw both of them coming.

‘Raavi itna time kaha se lag gaya? Pata hai kab se wait kar rahe hai’ Rishita said.

Raavi was about to tell the reason ‘Vo na..’ ‘Mera kurta iron karna tha tabhi.’ Shiva interrupted her. He didn’t want them to know the actual reason because of many reasons. Raavi gave him a questioned look.

‘Tum bhi kapde iron karte ho?’ Rishita mocked. Shiva shrugged it while Dev didn’t like it so he tried to stop her but all in vain.

‘Kyu tum nahi karti? Ya tumhara Dev nahi karta?’ Raavi snapped at her, making Shiva shocked and happy. He doesn't care what people have to say to him or about his appearance but Raavi taking a stand for him gave him a different kind of contentment.

‘Oh please ha. Hume or Shiva ko compare toh mat hi karo.’ Rishita too replied.

‘Sahi keh rahi ho tum. (Shiva looked at her with disappointment) Shiva ka or tum logo ka comparison nahi hai koi’

‘Tumhara matlab kya hai?’ Rishita asked.

‘Mera matlab tumhari samajh se bahar hai vaise hi jaise Shiva bhi tumhari samajh se bahar hai toh please apne yeh comments kisi or pe pass karo’ Raavi replied anger was visible in her eyes which gave Shiva happiness. He spoke politely holding her hand ‘Chal Raavi late ho rahe hai.’

‘Ha Rishita please bas karo, or chalo.’ Dev spoke moving ahead leaving a fuming Rishita.

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So, how was it guys?

I hope you guys liked it.

Will meet you soon till then take care guys.

Loved it.The way their relation is progressing n the was they are getting possessive of eachother, standing for each other was written so beautifully.

Lovely update

Shivi progression was good