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Posted: 4 years ago

Gown with thigh high slits 😆 or maybe he just ripped it 🤣This thread is making me say things I never say 🤣

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

I'm still confused about how he settled himself between her legs, she was wearing a gown. 🤪🤪☺️🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Inese_20

Hiii sweetheart! I just read your Drabble and what a beautiful perspective you have given the story! ❤️ It couldn’t have been better than this. I can fathom that’s how exactly Pallavi would feel someday! Absolutely stunning piece of writing 👏

I hope the complexity of what Pallavi would feel is explored well. She’s attracted to Raghav (I mean she’s a hot blooded woman and Raghav Rao is passion incarnate) but love is way more than just lust and I wanna see the whole works.

Thank you ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: _Blessy_

Oh Lord, please let the earth open up and swallow me Raghav thought looking at his wife in desperation.


Oh Bhai! You are Raghav Rao, Sita nahi...apne thought pe break lagao😆


“Ra….(hick) ghav….you(hick) did not do (hick) anything wrong. I wanted to (hick) kiss you too”Pallavi managed between sobs.


Naughty girl☺️ ❤️ ki baat jubaan pe aa he gai


“I did not get any time post marriage with Mandaar but I really liked him and wanted a life with him.


Aab ye Mandaar kahan se prakat hogaya scene hai😡


I know this is senseless but it feels like I am cheating on him. Then I thought I am cheating on you for thinking that way and then you asked how you can make up and then I felt horrible for hurting you.”


Pallavi you are absolutely right you are senseless😡 Now I am feeling horrible


Raghav barely masked a chortle. Part of him wanted to strangle a dead man for ruining theirmoment part of him felt sorry for Pallavi.


We are in same boat Raghav want to strangle that dead man. Romantic maahol ko ruin kardiya😔 sara maza kirkira hogya😡


“I know I am dumb” Pallavi mumbled.


Thank you for accepting you are dumb👍🏼


Pallavi gave a wobbly smile.


Whatever! Kiss bigad diya aab wobbly smile ka main kya karun😭


“I cannot begin to fathom what you felt when you lost Mandaar. Without even processing thatgrief you went to war with life for his family.


Ohfo! Firse grave main pada hua insaan ko yaad kiya jaraha hai


Raghav pulled her closer and placed his forehead on hers.


😳


“I love you as a whole Pallavi and nothing you feel is an inconvenience for me”


Nice! Now firse kiss karo na😳

I love the running commentary 😁

Dead man needs to be exhumed for a while for those big big feelings to come out. I assure you he will be put safely back in his grave🤣

Thank you ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Mihika

I don't know why your name is not popping up in my tag bar....but you have written so beautifully


@umlbrahim

Thank you❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Can I suggest a title? Am I allowed?

Final: Pyar ki yeh raat hai, ab naa jaa!

Drabble 8: I don't know if any title was suggested by I think of "Ruke Ruke Se Kadam" as an apt title.


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Posted: 4 years ago


😭 i really wanted to partake but my work schedule was really tough this week. 😒 sorrry all!! In gonna try to read through the drabbles this weekend!! 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Viewpoint

Can I suggest a title? Am I allowed?

Final: Pyar ki yeh raat hai, ab naa jaa!

Drabble 8: I don't know if any title was suggested by I think of "Ruke Ruke Se Kadam" as an apt title.


All are allowed dear. Please go through the awards section of first page. (I have cleared the confusion there.)

I will add your suggestion to hall of fame soon. And please tag me too when you suggest name so that I can add them to the list.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Inese_20


Hello Divya ❤️ If you want to write the next one you need to go and reserve the post before someone else does😆 people here are so fast!🥳


I won’t be able to do it today :(


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Posted: 4 years ago

Completed my part again

Plz next writer can go and continue

Will be waiting!!


Plz do the necessary

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: christobelle

Completed my part again

Plz next writer can go and continue

Will be waiting!!


Plz do the necessary

Hayee Vimala, such a sweet turn you did. ❤️

Since the day I heard about her dream of having a home on the mountains I wanted Raghav to do this in the show but you fulfilled that here, thank you.

All of you gets ready for the special date.

Who is going to give us the date?

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