This is not Love- MG || Thread II (*Epilogue* Page 137) - Page 40

Posted: 2 years ago

Hi nilanajana

First of all sorry...I have been reading ur ff for month now and I haven't commented.  .    ..

But there's a say better late then never....so here I am...

You knows what u have an unique style of writing which I haven't came across any other writers....use of fabulous hindi words from aam bolchal ki bhasha make it even more crunchier and your character are ekdam bindas type....love them to the core

I read ur blind love....that was too an awesome piece with over possessive mother and docile daughter...so good


And this one I am out of word now..helpless 


Keep writing 

Love 

Posted: 2 years ago

Hey Nilanjana!


When should we expect the next update...

Waht happens ahead?

Posted: 2 years ago

hI 


Thank you so much for sending PM's 

I'll return by Mid June 

will read and comment on all updates 

sorry for the inconvience 

Posted: 2 years ago

Hi Nilanjana......

update when you can... thanks 

Posted: 2 years ago

Note: Very sorry for not updating so long, was swamped with work and I am also re-decorating my house so was super busy with that. Thanks a lot for your patience. Love you so much



Part 80

 

G-All my life ...I looked up to Dr xyz as my idol...he turned out like this

 

She is sobbing again

 

He is caressing her hair, holding her firmly yet gently

 

M- Do you want me to do anything about it?

 

Geet could suddenly envision a holster being unbuckled andg un slowly getting drawn

 

She lifts her head off his chest to look at him

 

G-What will you do?

 

He looks down at her

 

M-I will just make sure that the deserving person gets the position

 

Geet is thinking

 

Mann toh kar raha hai haan bol de...shakal dekhne layak hogi uss budhdhe doctor aur uske chamche ki

 

G- No

 

M-No?

 

G- I wanted to work with my idol, but he isn’t my idola nymore. Getting the position now won’t make me happy

 

Maan nods

 

M-True

 

M-Will having (her fav flavor) ice cream from (her fav place) make you feel better now?

 

Her eyes lighten up

 

She nods

 

M-Come on. Let’s dress up, we will go

 

+++++++++

 

Maan ki mom was thinking ki they are doing the devil's tango

 

She calls to interrupt thinking ki ye chalu ladki ka plan hai pregnant hoke, mere bete se paise lene ka

 

Maan aur Geet dono walk kar rahe the ice cream khaate huye

 

Tab Maan ka phone rings

 

M- Yeah mom

 

Mom- Did you have a meeting with the xyz group, I heard they want a merger with us

 

M-I did. but they just want a partnership, not a merger

 

Mom- Oh what kind of partnership?

 

M-blah blah blah

 

Mom-Can you send me the documentations?

 

M-Yeah, I will send them first thing in the morning

 

Maan ko lag raha hai Mom achanak aaj ye sab kyun puch rahi hai, she was never interested in his business

 

Geet apne mann mein ice cream khaate huye saath saath chalrahi thi while Maan is on the call with Mom

 

M-You want it now-- Geet! Wait the lights are green. Don’t cross now!

 

Mom is annoyed, ki ye abhi bhi uss ladki ke saath ghum raha hai....it’s good they are outside but abhi bhi uske saath

 

Gaadi ke neeche hi aajaati chudail. road cross karne kabhi sense nahi! gawaar!

 

Mom thinks

 

Mom-Beta it’s so late! Why are you outside?  You will hamper your health. Geet is a doctor,she should know this more than anyone. How is she letting you exert yourself and not have a proper sleep?

 

M-Yeah mom, we are going home only. You should sleep too. It’s late

 

Mom-Ask Geet to go safely. it’s late

 

M-Don’t worry mom. she is staying with me. I will not let her travel so late

 

Mom ab phir apne hi jaal mein phass gayi

 

++++++++

 

Maan Geet come back to Maan’s place

 

Dono sone ke liye taiyari kar rahe the

 

Geet was applying her skin care jo aaj kal Maan keg har pehi rehta hai

 

Maan was on his laptop doing work

 

G-Oyi!

 

She nudges him

 

M-Hmm

 

He grumbles without glancing at her

 

G- Thanks

 

He frowns and looks at her

 

M-kis liye?

 

G- Sab kuch ke liye

 

She replies with a blushy smile

 

He nods going back to his work as he knows if he will grillmore Geet aur awkward ho jayegi coz ye uski maximum girliness & sweetness hai

 

G- Suno naa

 

M- Sunn raha hoon

 

G- Meri hostel wali friends hai naa…wo keh rahi thi ki …it’s a better idea ki main move in ho jaayun…travel bachega and waise bhi yahan se convenient hai…

 

M- Sahi keh rahi thi. I agree with them

 

He says looking directly at her

 

Her pupils dilate

 

G- Do you?

Posted: 2 years ago

Nice part dear

Loved it 

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon😊

Posted: 2 years ago

Superb update!!

Thanks for the pm. 

I think Maan's mom is interfering and thinking alot more than needed.

Please do continue whenever time permits. 

Edited by Monikarani - 2 years ago
Posted: 2 years ago

 Maan is happy with geet but his mom interfering in his personal issues

Posted: 2 years ago

Part 80 

Yeah geet is moving in !!! ðŸ¥³

Glad that maan knows how to cheer up his gal ðŸ˜ƒ

He doesn’t need a gun , ice-cream will do . 

His mom will not stop meddling 

But glad her plan backfired 

Thanks for the update di ðŸ¤—

Posted: 2 years ago

So finally maan gets his way of geet staying with him but without opening his mouth nice

mom getting upset about geet but she should learn to stop interfering. She should be happy her son is happy 




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