Hi nilanajana
First of all sorry...I have been reading ur ff for month now and I haven't commented. . ..
But there's a say better late then never....so here I am...
You knows what u have an unique style of writing which I haven't came across any other writers....use of fabulous hindi words from aam bolchal ki bhasha make it even more crunchier and your character are ekdam bindas type....love them to the core
I read ur blind love....that was too an awesome piece with over possessive mother and docile daughter...so good
And this one I am out of word now..helpless
Keep writing
Love
Hey Nilanjana!
When should we expect the next update...
Waht happens ahead?
hI
Thank you so much for sending PM's
I'll return by Mid June
will read and comment on all updates
sorry for the inconvience
Note: Very sorry for not updating so long, was swamped with work and I am also re-decorating my house so was super busy with that. Thanks a lot for your patience. Love you so much
Part 80
G-All my life ...I looked up to Dr xyz as my idol...he turned out like this
She is sobbing again
He is caressing her hair, holding her firmly yet gently
M- Do you want me to do anything about it?
Geet could suddenly envision a holster being unbuckled andg un slowly getting drawn
She lifts her head off his chest to look at him
G-What will you do?
He looks down at her
M-I will just make sure that the deserving person gets the position
Geet is thinking
Mann toh kar raha hai haan bol de...shakal dekhne layak hogi uss budhdhe doctor aur uske chamche ki
G- No
M-No?
G- I wanted to work with my idol, but he isn’t my idola nymore. Getting the position now won’t make me happy
Maan nods
M-True
M-Will having (her fav flavor) ice cream from (her fav place) make you feel better now?
Her eyes lighten up
She nods
M-Come on. Let’s dress up, we will go
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Maan ki mom was thinking ki they are doing the devil's tango
She calls to interrupt thinking ki ye chalu ladki ka plan hai pregnant hoke, mere bete se paise lene ka
Maan aur Geet dono walk kar rahe the ice cream khaate huye
Tab Maan ka phone rings
M- Yeah mom
Mom- Did you have a meeting with the xyz group, I heard they want a merger with us
M-I did. but they just want a partnership, not a merger
Mom- Oh what kind of partnership?
M-blah blah blah
Mom-Can you send me the documentations?
M-Yeah, I will send them first thing in the morning
Maan ko lag raha hai Mom achanak aaj ye sab kyun puch rahi hai, she was never interested in his business
Geet apne mann mein ice cream khaate huye saath saath chalrahi thi while Maan is on the call with Mom
M-You want it now-- Geet! Wait the lights are green. Don’t cross now!
Mom is annoyed, ki ye abhi bhi uss ladki ke saath ghum raha hai....it’s good they are outside but abhi bhi uske saath
Gaadi ke neeche hi aajaati chudail. road cross karne kabhi sense nahi! gawaar!
Mom thinks
Mom-Beta it’s so late! Why are you outside? You will hamper your health. Geet is a doctor,she should know this more than anyone. How is she letting you exert yourself and not have a proper sleep?
M-Yeah mom, we are going home only. You should sleep too. It’s late
Mom-Ask Geet to go safely. it’s late
M-Don’t worry mom. she is staying with me. I will not let her travel so late
Mom ab phir apne hi jaal mein phass gayi
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Maan Geet come back to Maan’s place
Dono sone ke liye taiyari kar rahe the
Geet was applying her skin care jo aaj kal Maan keg har pehi rehta hai
Maan was on his laptop doing work
G-Oyi!
She nudges him
M-Hmm
He grumbles without glancing at her
G- Thanks
He frowns and looks at her
M-kis liye?
G- Sab kuch ke liye
She replies with a blushy smile
He nods going back to his work as he knows if he will grillmore Geet aur awkward ho jayegi coz ye uski maximum girliness & sweetness hai
G- Suno naa
M- Sunn raha hoon
G- Meri hostel wali friends hai naa…wo keh rahi thi ki …it’s a better idea ki main move in ho jaayun…travel bachega and waise bhi yahan se convenient hai…
M- Sahi keh rahi thi. I agree with them
He says looking directly at her
Her pupils dilate
G- Do you?
Nice part dear
Loved it
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon😊
Part 80
Yeah geet is moving in !!! 🥳
Glad that maan knows how to cheer up his gal 😃
He doesn’t need a gun , ice-cream will do .
His mom will not stop meddling
But glad her plan backfired
Thanks for the update di 🤗
So finally maan gets his way of geet staying with him but without opening his mouth nice
mom getting upset about geet but she should learn to stop interfering. She should be happy her son is happy