ShiVi OS Series: Reimagining Them [Part3Page24 06/08/2021] - Page 12

Originally posted by: CarpediemRose

Mrs. Dhillon wow this OS was so fun to read.

U know what if romance gradually starts kick starting in rather a frequent and deep form between Shiva and Raavi, it would absolutely look like this only❤️❤️❤️
I loved the way, Shiva knew in and out about her, her timely details, that point is top notch.
Ur OS, cracked me upto really, my God! Anita di and her seizure, 😂😂😂😂

This OS is amazingly string together sweetie, it is hilarious, romantic and too cute.
I am waiting for the rest of them.
update soon.
Much love

Jen

I tend to write the fast paced versions of love stories so I'm glad this one was different than the usual 😆

thank you so much jaan 🤗

your comments and support mean a lot 😳

“Main…woh…kya…chup kar gadheri” Shiva was entranced by her 8-year-old impression of sexiness. Her eyes were fluttering at the speed of his mother’s chappal flying but he wanted her to keep going.

OMG, I nearly choked on this line 🤣🤣🤣 I re-read this 3 times, and I still can't stop laughing. I'm trying to imagine an eight year old "seductive" Raavi and an eight year old "whipped" Shiva.

I can't wait to see what's next!

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun

“Main…woh…kya…chup kar gadheri” Shiva was entranced by her 8-year-old impression of sexiness. Her eyes were fluttering at the speed of his mother’s chappal flying but he wanted her to keep going.

OMG, I nearly choked on this line 🤣🤣🤣 I re-read this 3 times, and I still can't stop laughing. I'm trying to imagine an eight year old "seductive" Raavi and an eight year old "whipped" Shiva.

I can't wait to see what's next!

it might be a bit unrealistic for an 8 year old but aaj kal ke bache are truly very fast 😆

next toh ab mujhe bhi sochna padega

Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.

Author's Note:

Continue with a kid scene or jump to the mirchi scene?

Also many of you mentioned that you haven't watch the kid scenes - I highly encourage you to at least watch Shiva and Raavi's interactions because they were so cute

raindropsroses has made a lovely index with the exact times and episodes of their scenes, here's the link: [LINK]

Do let me know your thoughts as I love it when you all interact and share your opinions 😳

Loved little Shiva and Raavi.❤️

He's desperate for her attention. 😆

I've watched that "gola" scene in the show. This OS is much much better.. The part were he tells the minor details about her and then being embarrassed was so adorable.

I would love to read some more childhood OSs and then you can proceed further. 😆

I would join zoom and turn my camera off and sleep next to my laptop on the bed 🤣

I am 21!

US you?

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Ditto Yar, I don't think I have attended an online class to the end ever 🤣..

I am from India, ...

Have you ever visited India??

Beautiful reimagination.. Loved it... Please write a rewrite of matka scene when they were grown up

Haha cute update👏

He always remembers everything about her😳

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

Loved little Shiva and Raavi.❤️

He's desperate for her attention. 😆

I've watched that "gola" scene in the show. This OS is much much better.. The part were he tells the minor details about her and then being embarrassed was so adorable.

I would love to read some more childhood OSs and then you can proceed further. 😆

thank you so much jaan 🤗

will write something up soon 😳

he won't ever admit it but he notices every single detail 😆

multiple times!

in fact I was going to go this summer but covid situation :(

most of my family lives in India 😆