Wordless love...a 3 shot saga

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wordless love


She descended down the stairs slowly holding the rallying. She was too nervous and anxious that her feets were not falling at the right place.


He sat on the sofa opposite to her father. Moninder had been talking about some burning issue. Maan could only remember that. What was being discussed ? he was clueless. The buzzing restless had pulled his mind off the topic. Now he just nodded whatever Moninder said. Moninder every words fell on a deaf ears.


Maan looked up. Their eyes collided. She was nervous he could read . He was nervous she knew.


Then a smile curved his lips. Why is he smiling? Am I not looking good? Maan eyed her suit. She was Dressed in the baby pink suit. He looked down at his shirt. Baby pink. Somehow most of the time they happen to colour coordinate coincidentally. But the shade she donned looks innocent, accentuating her innocence more and, complementing her skin , baby soft skin.


She shook her unbelievingly and finally set the foot on the floor. She realised she managed without staggering and her heart was calm too regaining it's normal pace.


She blinked nervously, her eyes moving restlessly. While she rolled her silver laced chiffon dupatta on her index finger.


He raised his eyebrows asking the reason for her nervousness.


She did not reply, instead averted her gaze and paced to and fro after sometime she looked at him. Her brows dipped a bit as her small nose scrunched and eyes uncertain. She shook her head and next moment she raced towards the stairs ready to hide herself in the confines of her room.


He held her wrist. Halting her movement. Shook his head, then his eyelids slowly half closed and opened in assurance. Assuring her. He is with her. Her Maan.


Her lips curved in a faltering nervous smile. She looked up once at her babaji and then settled her hand in his proffered waiting hands.


Moninder looked at their retreating figure. He had excused himself on the pretext of an errand as Geet had arrived. Providing them the privacy.


He smiled through tears too overwhelmed to hold them back. This is the Man he desired for his daughter. In Fact every father would have desired the man like Maan but to him. Before Maan , finding a suitable partner for his beloved daughter seemed like a far fetched dream.


His gifted daughter had been a genius in every means but a deaf and mute. Moninder wiped the tears spilling from his eyes. Despite all the wealth, name and fame, his hold on society. He dreaded Geet future. Though she is fully capable. Would his family accept his deaf and mute girl for their more then perfect boy.


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Posted: 4 years ago
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congrats for new story

interesting

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Posted: 4 years ago
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hi, how are you?

Congrats on the 3 Shot


Part 1

incredible update... awesomely written

can understand Mohinder's concern

so Geet is deaf and mute

adored the interaction between Maan and Geet

seems like Maan is aware that she is deaf and mute?

will his family accept Geet?

Edited by khwaishfan - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hey..

Great start...


So Geet is deaf and mute..

Interesting to see how their wordless love comes into shape!


So Maan understood Geet well.

And Geet's father found Maan to be perfect for his daughter!


The raising of eyebrows by both signified the purity and sanctity of Maaneet's relationship!


Will Maan's family accept Geet?

Same question which you put up at last..

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Congratulations on your 3 Shot


Title makes me Curious


A Fabulous Start


Geet deaf and mute , its rather sad when one has all the money

yet it cannot buy or repair any born defects

however I'm impressed that Maan has fallen for Geet

even knowing about her

but yes Mohinder's concern is valid will Maan's family accept Geet

and I suppose Maan will have to learn her sign language to communicate with her


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: taahir004

Congratulations on your 3 Shot


Title makes me Curious


A Fabulous Start


Geet deaf and mute , its rather sad when one has all the money

yet it cannot buy or repair any born defects

however I'm impressed that Maan has fallen for Geet

even knowing about her

but yes Mohinder's concern is valid will Maan's family accept Geet

and I suppose Maan will have to learn her sign language to communicate with her


thanks tahir🤗 Thanks for commenting and keeping the forum active
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Congratulations on new story

Nice start

Even though Geet is deaf and mute Maan have fallen for her

Mohinder is happy for his daughter but at same worried about Maan's rectum.

Waiting for the next part update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Please update soon!


Waiting eagerly!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: mishtypie

Congratulations on new story

Nice start

Even though Geet is deaf and mute Maan have fallen for her

Mohinder is happy for his daughter but at same worried about Maan's rectum.

Waiting for the next part update soon

lol🤣What ur autocorrect did to maan's reaction

Mishtypie thanks dear🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: waterlotus.19

Please update soon!


Waiting eagerly!

hey neeraja!

I Had been a gloomy soul entire day...two days ago I read an awesome four shot ages of love...its after affects is still there and whenever I think gf is going to close I think my mood became more gloomy...but

I will try to update ASAP

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