Shivi FF: DeewaniBhabhi ke nuskhe Epilogue, Pg. 127 (finished) - Page 26

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

but den 😲 nooooooooooo ewwwwwwwwww........he is writing stuff and raavi is getting inspired and she is discussing everything with him???????


This is scary though.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.

after a lot of thinking

I have reached the conclusion

it is raavi

she suffers from split personality disorder which is why she is not aware it is herself writing

her subconscious thoughts come out as deewanibhabhi 🤣


Not lying, but when I was wondering who the DeewaniBhabhi personality seems to fit the most, the answer was Raavi herself🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya269


Of course yaar. Sabka naam toh le liya gaya hai. Toh unhi mein se hai 🤣



Sochke main jisko has leta hoon.

Ho sochke main jis ko has leta hoon.

Itefaaq tha, ek mazaak tha..

Kaisa dhoondoon uska naam.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites


Sochke main jisko has leta hoon.

Ho sochke main jis ko has leta hoon.

Itefaaq tha, ek mazaak tha..

Kaisa dhoondoon uska naam.


Ruk. Main thodi der mein ek aur update deti hu. Phir wapas guessing game khelna 😂


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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya269


Ruk. Main thodi der mein ek aur update deti hu. Phir wapas guessing game khelna 😂


Is it an open challenge? 🤣



🤗


I'm going to bookmark this thread.

Edited by MeeraWrites - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya269


It’s okay 🤣

What’s a CC?


Chat club😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Dear Somnath ki Sabse Beautiful Ladki,


Dreams reveal the innermost desires of your heart. If you are attracted to dream Shiva, then there’s a very good chance you’re attracted to the real Shiva too. My suggestion is, spend some time with him. Not as your childhood villain, but maybe as a friend. See if this attraction leads to something. As for the dreams, just enjoy them ;)


Love,

DeewaniBhabhi


Raavi closed her mail and went to DeewaniBhabhi’s blog. She had posted a new article on “How to Seduce Him With Your Eyes.” Raavi quickly finished the whole article, and decided to keep it in mind. Who knows when she would need it?


Suddenly she heard a voice behind her. Anita had woken up and was staring at the page on her laptop. Raavi shut it quickly, but Anita had already seen it.

“Tu yeh DeewaniBhabhi ke site par kya kar rahi thi?” Anita asked.


“Blog padh rahi thi.” Raavi said.

“Dekh, yeh site tere liye thik nahi hai. Yeh baro ke liye hai.” Anita said.


“Pata hai par main bhi adult hu Anita di. Aur aap kuch mat kaho. Aapki wajah se hi mujhe DeewaniBhabhi ka pata chala hai. Maine aapki browser history check ki thi.”


Anita gasped loudly. She had seen her entire browser history? Why did Raavi not understand the meaning of privacy? Raavi realised that she unknowingly spill her beans. It wasn’t her fault. Raavi would always clear her browsing data after using her laptop but Anita never did it. So she just peeked a little bit.

“Raavi tu-“


“Sorry sorry. Phir kabhi nahi dekhungi. Par aap nahi hote toh mujhe DeewaniBhabhi ka pata kaise chalta? Anita di, DeewaniBhabhi ne meri life badal di. Sachhi mein.”


“Kaise?” Anita asked suspiciously.


“Woh aapko main abhi nahi bata sakti. Mujhe waise bhi Shiva se milne jana hai.”


***


Raavi reached Pandya store in the afternoon when she knew Shiva would be there. She had taken extra care in dressing up. DeewaniBhabhi in one of her articles had suggested one should look good, but shouldn’t put themselves out too much by wearing anything too revealing. So, Raavi had worn a simple black kurti because black was his favourite.

He was in the shop alone which was a good thing. She needed not to fight with him today. Shiva noticed Raavi and rolled his eyes. This maami ki behen ki beti had come again to annoy him.


“Tu phir aa gayi!” Shiva didn’t even make it a question. Her comings and goings were absolutely normal for him now.

“Haa!” Raavi smiled.


“Kya chahiye?” Shiva asked.

“Kuch nahi. Aaj main customer banke nahi aayi hu. Main yaha teri help karne aayi hu. Kaka bimaar hai isliye tujhe zyaada kaam karna par raha hai. Toh main aa gayi.”


Raavi crossed over to the other side and Shiva looked at her in surprise. She saw that he was arranging all the items so she started helping him. Shiva decided not to say anything. She would leave when she got tired.

Raavi arranged everything beautifully! Shiva helped her too. Then she helped him calculate the total stock and make a note of everything that was missing. They worked very efficiently when they weren’t fighting. Raavi just realised this. Shiva and Raavi took turns in dealing with customers.


However, it was becoming too coworker. Raavi needed to test her attraction. By the time she had realised that, it was time for the store to close. Shiva was surprised she had stuck around for such a long time. Even he didn’t notice how much time had passed.

Raavi suddenly screamed and Shiva ran to her. She had gotten up on a chair and was screaming loudly.


“Ae gadheri, kya hua?” Shiva asked.

“Shiva... Shiva chuha.”


Shiva laughed. “Chipkali toh chuhe se bhi darr lagta hai?”


“Shiva chuha hata. Please.” She started shouting continuously and Shiva didn’t know what to do. She kept jumping up and down on the chair and Shiva was sure she would fall down soon. He held her by her hips and picked her up.

Raavi stopped shouting. She suddenly forgot all about the rat and was completely focused on Shiva’s eyes. They were so intense, and he was so strong. He picked her up without breaking a sweat.


Shiva locked the back room and put down Raavi so she wouldn’t be scared of the rat anymore. Raavi was in a completely different mood. She wanted to get close to him, so when he tried to finally arrange everything so he could leave, Raavi hugged him. She buried her face into his neck and held his back tightly. It wasn’t an innocent hug at all.

Shiva was still for a minute, but then even he put his arms around her and held her tightly. Raavi felt cozy and safe in his arms. She broke the hug and looked deeply into his eyes. They stared at each other for some time. Raavi wanted him to do something, anything. Shiva tucked her hair behind her ear and Raavi knew she was attracted to him. She felt herself shiver at his touch.

Shiva suddenly moved away realising what he was doing. “Chuhiya kab se chuhe se itna darne lagi?”


“Sab teri tarah Chattan Pandya nahi hote.”


“Achha chal ghar chorr deta hu. Raat ho gayi hai.”


Shiva dropped Raavi home and Raavi rushed to her room. She looked at the mirror. Her cheeks were blushing read. She kept her hand over her chest and she could feel her heart beating loudly. She was attracted to her bhootnath. Immediately reaching for her laptop, Raavi started typing up a mail for DeewaniBhabhi.

Dear DeewaniBhabhi,


I am attracted to the villain of my story. Can you believe it? I wouldn’t have believed it even if God had come himself and told me this. It is only you I trust so much. I’m still shivering from his touch. My heart is pounding so loudly.


I spent the whole day with him without fighting. Not only did we make an amazing team, he also saved me from a rat. He picked me up and I got so flushed because I couldn’t stop thinking about how he touched me. Why am I getting so conscious with his touch? Then I hugged him. I’ve never hugged anyone like that. It was so intimate! All I could think about was how much I loved being in his arms. I’ve never felt this way before, never with Dev DeewaniBhabhi, you really are the best.


But one problem still remains. He’s my number one dushman. Even if we have amazing chemistry, I don’t see how things can work out between us. What do I do?


Love,

Somnath ki Sabse Beautiful Ladki.

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Posted: 4 years ago

res

Aye behen, kya speed hai teri!😆🤣


Mereko index de iska!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: bhavna101

res

Aye behen, kya speed hai teri!😆🤣


Mereko index de iska!


Ruk upload karti hu. Dhoondna parega 🤣


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Posted: 4 years ago

reswa


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kya hai yaar 😭

everyone keeps taking my number one spot 😭

I am so glad raavi is beginning to test out the attraction

the hug was beautifully described and im glad he hugged her back

can't wait to see what else raavi does on deewanibhabhi's suggestions 😆

deewanibhabhi pls kuch tharki likh do raavi ko 🤣

Edited by SlytherInMe. - 4 years ago

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