Mere Brother Ki Dulhan a Shivi FS Part 4 (Complated) on pg 11❤️ - Page 3

while leaving he turns: Aye Chipkali yaad rakhna aaj se mein tumari chipkala hun, aur yeh chipkala apni chipkali se intezaar karega...

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Originally posted by: ananya269

while leaving he turns: Aye Chipkali yaad rakhna aaj se mein tumari chipkala hun, aur yeh chipkala apni chipkali se intezaar karega...

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pre-planned shiva maharaj ki jay.....

raavi cutie m sad that u had to go thru this but take your time

shiva's love and passion ka jawab nahi

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

pre-planned shiva maharaj ki jay.....

raavi cutie m sad that u had to go thru this but take your time

shiva's love and passion ka jawab nahi

Stay tuned to know Raavi's jawab for Shiva's love 😳

Originally posted by: Malika1993.06

Stay tuned to know Raavi's jawab for Shiva's love 😳

u bet i am.....

i have read all the written material on dem i guess.......but everyone is writing OS.......kuch zyada likho na pls........

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

u bet i am.....

i have read all the written material on dem i guess.......but everyone is writing OS.......kuch zyada likho na pls........

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Originally posted by: Malika1993.06

Ok done😳

🤗 thanks dear.........i appreciate

Hii friends I'm back with new part of my story... 😳

This will be maybe TS, FS, or FF I'm not sure it depends on my imagination... 🤪

Hope you all will like it 😛

Thank you so much guys for inspiring me to continue this story... actually I was thinking to post it tomorrow but I can't hold myself and posting it now...

So... here we go...

Mere Brother Ki Dulhan Part 2

GauRa Room

Dhara is sitting in the corner of the bed with Gombhi and sobbing keeping her head on Gombhi's shoulder

Dhara: I'm a bad Bhabimaa Gombhi, meine aaj do zindagi barbaad kar di, Do nafrat karne walo ko shaadi ki kedh mein baand kar rakhi hai...lekin mei kya kar thi?... When I saw her trying to end her life, only one thought come in to my mind and that is marriage...(looks up at Gombhi)

But now mujhe lagne laga hai ki maine Shiva aur Raavi ke sath nainsaafi ki hai...

Gombhi wipes her tears and nods in a no...

Gombhi: No Dhara, don't say like that, tune jo sahi laga tu wohi kiya hai and about two enemies which you are talking about (smiles lightly)I think they are not enemies actually, mujhe lagta hai woh dono ek dusre ke liye bane hai, exactly like we are made for each other, bas inn logo ko realize karne mein bohot time lagega trust me, akhiir kehte hai na "Jodiya upar se ban kar aati hai" kya bata Raavi aur Shiva ki Jodi bhi upar wala ne pehle se hi bana diya hai aur is liye yeh sab ho raha hai, dekh na ek din Shiva aur Raavi ek sath aa ke tujhe thank you bolega, ki tumne inn dono ki shaadi karayi....

Dhara gets relived by his words and smiles hugging him...

Dhara: Kaash eisa hota toh mujhse khush koi nahi hoti in whole Somnath...

Gombhi: Don't worry bohot jald eisa hi hoga, aur yeh Gombhi ka vaada hai, mujhe puri vishwas hai inn dono mein... And don't take a lot of tension aur chalo so jate hai kaafi raat ho chuki hai, Maa bhi keh rahi thi ki kal Rishita aur Raavi ki first raasoi ka rasam hogi...

Dhara's eyes gets wide by sudden realization and panicking...

Dhara: Oh my got Gombhi! How could I forget about it, kal toh Rishita and Raavi ki firs raasoi hai aur maa ne toh teen bhar reminded me and I still forgot about it... Oh got what to do now?

Gombhi (smiles watching her panicked face): Arey shant ho ja meri maa, sab ho jaye ga aur main hoon naa, hum ek sath mil kar sambhal lenge... Chalo abh so jaate hai...

on which Dhara nods in response and they go to sleep...

On the other hand...

Shiva is standing at the terrace and staring at the moon with wide smile...

Shiva: Mission Completed! Thank you God mere sath dene ke liye aur Raavi ko humesha meri bana ne ke liye...

While Suman wents out of the room to have some fresh air and sees Shiva already standing there...

Suman: Shiva meri bachhe, tum yaha kya kar raha hai?

On which Shiva gets startled and turns to see Suman standing near him...

Shiva: Maa... you here?... at this time?

Suman: Ha main, yaha nahi aa sakti kya? I come here to have some fresh air as I was getting bored in the room...

Shiva smiles at his mother's antics...

Shiva: Nahi maa eisa baat nahi hai, mei bas eise hi aap ki tarah... before completing his sentence...

Suman: Haan, haan sab pata hai mujhe tum yaha kya kar raha hai, aur kya soch raha hai...

Tum mujhse kuch nahi chupa sakta, bata mujhe kya hua hai?

Shiva: No, maa woh mein bas...

Suman: Achha thik hai... pehle tum mere ek sawaal ka jawab de... Kya tum iss shaadi ko maan se swikar kar paogi? Woh ladki...Raavi se kabhi pyaar kar paogi? Us bechari ko toh Dev ke vaajase kya kya sehne ko mila...

Shiva interrupts: Maa ek baat bolu aap se? ek secret share karni hai aap se...

Suman: Woh kya secret baat hai? Bata mujhe

Shiva bends down on his knees befor Suman: Maa... I LOVE RAAVI! I love her so much (smiling)

Suman gets happy and cups his face with both hands...

Suman: Kya?...Kya tum sach mein apni maami ki behen ki beti se pyaar karta hai?

(while Shiva nods smiling)

Shiva: Haan maa I love my MamiKiBehenkiBeti! woh bhi bachpan se...

Suman: Meri bachhe, Finally my Shiva found his Gauri.... Now I can sleep peacefully... Aur Raavi?... Woh toh teri Bhai se pyaar karr thi thi naa? Tujhe dukh nahi hogi iss baat pe?... Aur agar us ne tumhe kabhi pyaar nahi kar paya, toh kya karoge? Mein tumhe hurt nahi dekhna chahta....

Shiva takes her hands in to his and kisses...

Shiva: Meri pyaari maa, I love you... Don't worry about it, woh pyaar karegi mujhe Maa, zaroor karegi aur yeh Shiva ka vaada hai aap se... aur ek aur secret batao aap ko?

Suman: Aur kitne secrets hai tere paas? jo kisi ko nahi pata?

Shiva: Bas ek aur hai... woh yehi ki...

With this Shiva narrates his plan while Suman listens everything with shocked expression.... After sometime...

Suman hitting his cheeks playfully: Badmash kahi ka! Tumne yeh sab kya, aur kisi ko kuch nahi pata chala?... maanna padega tumari pyaar ko beta...Raavi toh khush naseeb hai jo tum jaisa loving husband mila, nahi ki woh meri dusra bachha Dev jisne Raavi jaisi phul aur innocent ladki ki dil dukhaya...Mere ek bete ne uski dil todi... aur dusri bete ne uski dil ko phir se jodh ne ki faisla liya... I'm so proud of you my bachha... I'm sure ek din Raavi bhi tujhe uthna hi pyaar karegi, jitna tu usse karta hai... Bhagwan tum dono ki jodi ko hamesha ke liye banaye rakhe...

Shiva happily: Maa you are the best! (kisses her cheeks)... But maa please kisi ko kuch nahi bata na...

Suman laughs: Haan haan nahi bataun gi...Abh se main bhi tumari plan ka hissa hoon aur I will help you with this...

Shiva: Okey maa Done!...

Suman: Chalo Shiva chalte hai so ne, tum mujhe meri kamre tak leke jaa, mujhe neend aa rahi hai... Aur I want to give my Bahu a gift... as shagun...

Shiva: Haan maa chaliye...

They went to Suman's room where she gave him red color saare as a gift...

Sumaan: Take this saari Shiva and give it to my bahu as a gift...

Shiva: Maa yeh saari tho?...

Suman: Haan haan Shiva... yeh wohi saari hai jo mujhe teri papa ne diye the as a gift for our marriage... Aur abh mein isse Raavi ko dena chaahti hoon... aur keh de na ki woh kal rasoi rasam mein yeh saari pehen le... thik hai beta...

Shiva: Lekin maa, aap keise... yeh saari...

Suman: I know yeh mere liye bohot khaas saari hai, Aur tum bhi toh mere liye khaas hai naa like Dev Krish and Ghombhi aur mujhe yeh saari ko Raavi ko gift karna chahti hoon so take this without arguing nahi toh mei tujhse naraz ho jaun gi aur kabhi baat nahi karun gi... aur waise bhi yeh color Raavi pe bohot achha lagegi... Jao naa, nahi toh mei tera saare plan ke baare mein sab ko bata dungi...

Shiva: Thik hai maa...

With that Shiva leaves to his room kissing mother's hands, and thanks her once again....

Shiva comes to his room and saw Raavi sleeping in sitting position leaning to the cupboard holding her dresses... Slowly, he wents near her and bends down on his knees and looks at her sleeping figure... He gently cups her face with one hand and kisses her forehead....right after that Shiva lifts her up and places her on bed carefully, without disturbing her sleep... he sits there for a while admiring her wife's beautiful face... for him Raavi looked so beautiful, with sindoor and mangalsutra which marked her as his for seven birth... But her face looked pale with traces of tears in her cheeks which clearly pointed that she cried so much...

Shiva in low voice: Raavi, I promise aaj ke baat tumari aakhon mei sirf khushi ke aasun hogi, I will heal your wounds with so much love... Tere dil mein apni jagah bana ke rahun gi... Aur yeh, Shiva ka vaada hai chipkali (smiles)...

With this he get up and turns to leave, but stops on his track as Raavi held his hand...

Raavi: Maat jao please...

Shiva sits back on bed...

Raavi: Why Shiva?... Why do you love me this much?... aur pehle kyu nahi bataya?....

Shiva: Arey keise bata sakta, tu toh bachpan se hi Dev ki deewani jo thi(smiles with tears)

aur yeh jaan ke bhi tum kya karti? Mere liye Dev se pyaar karna chhor de thi?

Raavi felt guilty about it and tears roll down from her eyes realizing how much she hurted Shiva without even realizing...

Raavi(sobbing): Sorry Shiva... I'm really sorry... meine tumari dil dukhaya... aur dekho naa Bhagwan ne mujhe kaise saaza de rahi hai...

Shiva gets angry by Raavi's words and with sudden force pulled her toward himself and holding her head with both sides makes her look straight into his eyes... while Raavi gets shocked by sudden act of Shiva and looks at him widening her eyes...

Shiva: Chup!... bhilkul chup Raavi! Tujhe kya, mein baghwan ki saaza lagta hoon? What are you talking about, you stupid girl?... Dekh... mere aakho mein dekh... kya dekha hi de tha hai?...

Raavi: Mein... Sorry mera woh matlab nahi tha...

Shiva eyes softened by Raavi's words and cups her face lovingly...

Shiva: Raavi aur kitni baar sorry bole gi chipkali? It's okay, in fact I should be sorry...but kabhi yeh nahi kehna ki, Bhagwan ne tujhe saaza de raha hai nahi tho ek thappad laga ne mei dher nahi lagega mujhe (pats her cheeks playfully smiling widely)

Raavi wipes her tears and laughs lightly by his cute antics... Raavi never imagined that Shiva can be this much soft and caring toward her... She always had seen him mean, rude to her but the Shiva who is sitting in front of her is totally different and she somewhat feels happy that there someone who loved her unconditionally...

Shiva gets happy watching Raavi laughing...

Shiva: Yeh hui naa baat Raavi... tum na eise hi haste rehna, tumhe bohot suit karta hai... aur mujhe meri purani wali Shipkali hi chahiye aur woh bhi har rooz...

on which Raavi nods...

Shiva suddenly realized something: Arey Raavi! main tho bhul gayi, kal tho tumari aur us Aamir ki beti ki raasoi rasam hai naa? So, maa ne tumhare liye saari bejha hai... ek minute...

With this Shiva went near cupboard to take saari from where he left... while Raavi gets up from the bed and looks at him confused... but her confusion turns into small smile as he come near her with beautiful red color saari...

Shiva: Raavi, yeh saari tumare liye hai, maa ke taraf se ek chota sa shagun gift(smiles widely) Aur Maa ne kaha ki tum kal isse pehen kar raasoi mei aa , maa ko achha lage ga aur mujhe bhi... Aur pata hai yeh saari maa ko papa ne di hai for their marriage... bohot khaas hai unn ke liye...

Raavi(happily): Yeh tho bohot sundaar hai Shiva, Thank you! mujhe iss saari ko pehne ke liye layaak samjne ke liye, I will keep this with me as an ashirwaad(tears roll down from her eyes)... Har ladhki ke liye maa ka aashirwad bohot zaroori hoti hai naa thank you!

With this she hugs shiva with happy tears, on which Shiva gets shocked by unexpected hug from Raavi, but after hugs her back...

Shiva: Achha, achha Shipkali, tum naa yeh thank you mujhe nahi, kal maa ko bol de naa ok?...

While Raavi simply nods breaking the hug..

Shiva: Aur haan Raavi mujhe tum se bohot zaroori baat batana hai?

Raavi looks at Shiva confused and nervous as she saw Shiva nearing toward her with mischievous smile... Raavi's breath get stuck in her throat as Shiva come dangerously close to her and whispers in her ears in husky voice...

Shiva: Aye Chipkali... Mujhe lagta hai... mujhe lagta hai ki hum dono...

While Raavi is shivering by his husky voice and she closed her eyes shut, as his hot breath trickling her ears making her weak on her knees...

Raavi lost: Hum dono... k.. kya?...

While Shiva enjoying, watching his unexpected effect on her and smirks...and feels happy at the same time, as he saw a new ray of hope, that she can move on with him wiping Dev's name from her heart and mind for forever and ever...

Shiva: Hum dono... Hum dono ko... MUJHE LAGTA HAI HUM DONO KO SO JANA CHAHIYE KYU KI KAL TO TUME SUBAAH JALDI UTNA HAI... AUR TIME KO TOH DEKHO, SUBAAH HONE MEI DO GANTE BAKI HAI... YAAR CHIPKALI, MUJHE BOHOT NEEND AAVRAHI HAI... CHAL NAA SO JATE HAI!

with this Shiva throws himself on the bed smirking while Raavi gets startled by the speed of his words and looks on being stunned....

Raavi angrily : Tum!... Chhorungi nahi tume Shiva!...

Shiva starts laughing hard as Raavi began to beat him with pillows and they starts fighting... after some time Shiva and Raavi falls on bed being tired...

Shiva: Achha sorry sorry... chalo bas karte hai yeh pillow fight...

Raavi: Har maan gayi naa?

Shiva nods smiling: Haan meri maa...

Raavi proudly: Good boy...

Shiva gets up and went to cupboard while Raavi looks up confused but soon she understands as she saw Shiva taking out blanket with pillow and placed them on sofa...

Shiva: Raavi tum naa bed pe so jao aur mei sofe pe adjust kar lungi thike?

Raavi just nods smiling and they fall asleep wishing good night to each other....

Next morning...

Shiva wakes up by loud voice looks around wiping his eyes and sees Raavi coming out from washroom with open hair, looking absolutely stunning in red saari and most importantly, with mangalsutra and the sindoor of his name on her forehead which marked her as his...

Raavi comes in front of him and waived her hand to bringing him back from his la la land...

Shiva: Uth gayi Shiva?... Chalo fatafat tayaar ho jaa tume toh Store nahi jana? Dhara di bhi wait kar hai hogi... mein jaa rahi hoon kitchen mei... aaj mein sab ke liye halwa bana ne wali hoon(she says exitedly)...

Shiva: Haan, haan jaa na mein 2 minute mei aati hoon...

Raavi: Haan thike...

In Kitchen...

Dhara is preparing all needed stuffs for first raasoi... at that time Raavi inters...

Raavi: Dhara Di...

Dhara looks up to find Raavi standing at the door looking beautiful... then her eyes fall on saari which Raavi is wearing and smiles...

Raavi come near Dhara and greets her... while Dhara cups her face....

Dhara: Raavi tum thik hai na?... woh mein (getting teary-eyed)...I'm sorry Raavi maine tumare sath bohot galat kiya hai... please mujhe maaf kar do... Dekho Raavi I know...

Before completing her sentences Raavi stops her nodding her head as no...

Raavi: Dhara Di kuch kehne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai... jo hua, so hua... abh kuch bhi nahi badal sakte hai.... aap ne woh kiya jo aapko sahi laaga aur I want to thank you for that, Dev se shaadi kar ke meine 3 zindagi barbaad hote hue nahi jee sakti thi... Khushi nahi milne wala tha mujhe Dev se shaadi kar ke... Akhir uski zindagi mein aur dil mein bhi mere liye koi jagah nahi tha... I can't able to live with a person who love someone else...(tears rolling down from her eyes)...

Raavi immediately wiped her tears and hugs Dhara while Dhara pats her back consoling her...

Raavi: Abh mein Shiva ki biwi hoon aur Pandya Parivaar ki bahu meri wish tho puri ho gayi hai na... so don't worry di sab thik ho jayega... Akhir kehte hein na humare sath jo bhi hota hai, woh achha ke liye hota hai...shayad meri kismat mein Shiva ki naam pehle se hi likhi hui thi...

Dhara: Sahi keh rahi hai.... Raavi... kya tum is shaadi ko ek mauka de sakti hai... Shiva itna bhi buri nahi hai... please give a chance to your marriage and try to move on... Mujhe poora barosa hai tum dono mein....I know he is rude to you sometimes ... but believe me he doesn't hate you... Aur agar woh tumhe hurt karne ki koshish bhi ki na mein uski kaan kheech kar tumse maafi manwaoun gi...

Raavi smiles a little by Dhara's serious look and words...

Raavi: Arey nahi Dhara Di... woh kya hai naa actually Shiva toh mujh...

Before completing her sentences Shiva and Suman inters followed by Krish and Krish saw Raavi with wide eyes...

Krish: Arey waah Raavi bhabhi, Aap tho bohot pyaari lag rahi, aur yeh Saari toh Papa ne Maa ko gift ki thi... hei na maa

Krish turns to Suman...

Suman: Haan Beta yeh wohi saari hai and I gifted it to Raavi... meri Shiva ki Gauri mei bohot sundar lagega, bhilkul rani ki tarah...

On which Raavi smiles happily and coming near Suman She takes her blessings...

Raavi: Thank you so much Maa (hugs Suman happily)...

while Shiva Dhara and Krish looks at them admiringly...

Suman: Khush raho meri bachhi... bohot sundar lag rahi ho...

At that time Dev and Rishita too joins them...

DevTa: Good morning everyone...

Rishita looks at Raavi and rolls her eyes while Dev smiles sadly bends down feeling guilty...

Rishita: Raavi yeh kiya old fashion ka Saari pehni hai... weise bhi kiya farak partha hai...

Everyone looks at her annoyed...

Suman (angrily): Aye ladhki kya subah subah apni zehrili zuban kol ke humari achhi khaasi mood ko kharab kar raha hai? Aajao tum dono apne kam mein dhiyan do aur kuch meeta banao... aaj tho pehli raasoi rasam hai naa... chalo chalo shuru ho jao 30 minutes time hai tum dono ke paas agar wakt par apne nashta leke nahi aaya na nashta ki jagah daande kaane ko milega...

Rishita and Raavi looks on terrified and immediately began to prepare breakfast for everyone...

After some time They come to the dining table with Khajar ka Halwa and sandwiches...

at that time Gombhi too reaches there and settled near Dhara...

Gombhi: Sorry sorry sorry mein thoda late ho gaya... nashte mei kya hai aaj?

Dhara: Raavi ne tumari favorite halwa banaya hai aur Rishita ne sandwiches...

Gombhi: Ohh wow sunne mein bohot achha lagta hai, aur khane mein keisa hoga...

Krish: Hainaa bhai smell bhi bohot mazedar hai... kyu Shiva(teasingly)

on which Shiva gives him dead glares...

Ghombh: Tum kyu krish ko eise looks de raha hai... sahi toh keh raha hai...

Raavi serves Halwa first and receive praisings from everyone... while Gombhi looks at Shiva...

Gombhi: Shiva abh bata keisa laga Raavi ka halwa?

Shiva: Bhilkul iski tarah...

Dhara teasingly: Iski tarah matlab? sweet hai na Raavi, halwa jaise?

Krish too joins: Bolo bolo bhai... aap hi ki toh biwi hai, isse kyu sharmana?

Shiva: Sweet tho hai...

Everyone smiles at them: Haaawww how sweet...

Shiva: But not as much as Chipkali...

says Shiva in low tone and winks at Raavi unnoticed by everyone... while Raavi widened her eyes and looks around to confirm that no one listed...

Second was Rishita's sandwiches...

Everyone was impressed by Rishita's effort and priced her sandwiches too and gave them money as a gift...

After finishing their breakfast Gombhi went to the Store with Dev while Rishita and Raavi gets ready for next rasam with the help of Dhara and next Rasam is "Paagh Phera"

where new brides visits their maayka with their husbands after what husbands suppose to left their wives for one day...

As Rishita's parents are not accepting Dev and Rishita's marriage Dhara and Gombhi decided to send her with Raavi with hope that they will become a good friends.... at first Rishita dined to go with Raavi but by the help of Suman she agreed...

Shiva get disappointed by the fact that He couldn't see Raavi for the whole day... but he was left with no other option as per his plan he should act as if he doesn't care about Raavi...

Shiva wents to his room and roaming there are here being restless...

Shiva: Abh yeh konsa rasam hai bhai, jo apni biwi ko ek din ke liye tumse judha kar rakha jayega... aur inn sab mein se annoying baat yahi ki jab you wife is MamiKiBehenkiBeti!

"Mujhe shaaq tha aur abh confirm ho gaya hai!" Shiva gets started by the voice and turns back to see who is this and gets shocked...

Shiva in himself: Oh teri!....

That's all for now dears... see you soon with next part...picture abhi baaki hai mere dost!!! 😉

Beautiful update ❤♥💜💖

Cont soon

Suman ko secret ptaa h , aur ab kis ne sun liya .

Aww Suman gifted her saree 😍😍

Shivi moments were lovely 😍

Love the update! So happy to see Raavi being so positive ❤️