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Hey guys so this is a request regarding Navratri episode. I will change few things as usual.


Riddhima was feeling a myriad of emotions, scared and irritated were at top, ever since he came back from the business trip Vansh has been acting just like he did initially, she was getting irritated at his yoyoing emotions.


One minute he is loving the next he is mysterious, he was helping her wear the red glass bangles and Dadi was talking about how it is the color of one's suhaag,

V- Laal rang kisi aur cheez ka bhi hota hain Riddhima. Dhoke ka. He deliberately broke few of the bangles.

C- Lo ho apshagun.

V- I will help you clean this wound.

R- (glares)- No need if i want to be with you, i have to learn to live with feeling hurt as wellšŸ˜’šŸ˜’


Vansh glared at her and left the pooja, Riddhima was looking for her phone, when Anupriya came behind her and taunted her,

A- Ab kiske raaz dhund rahi ho?

R- Mummy ji, aaj mere mood bahut karab hain so please, i don't want to fight with you.

R- And for your kind information i was looking for my phone. It is you who should be careful, kahi kissi aur se aapke raaz Vansh ko na pata chal jaye.

A- Riddhima, mere raaz ko kiske saath share karna hain and kab share hain that is my choice. And dont act like you don't have any secrets of your own.


Anupriya left, and Riddhima was feeling scared and confused, does she know about her and Kabir or was she just looking for a reaction. Later Vansh had called everyone in the pooja room he wanted to talk about something. Everyone was scared that didn't know what secret will come out now.

V- Someone from this family has betrayed us. Someone close to me.

D- Vansh, no one in this family will hurt you.

V- No Dadi, someone has i have cared, respected them but still they hurt me.

A- Then there is only one person who had done that, Riddhima.

Riddhima internally rolled her eyes, again she started with her drama,

V-No, it was you Mom. You betrayed me.

A- What? (Thinks)- did he came to know about my and Kabir's relationship.

V- Yes, it was you who burned my mother's portrait and blamed Riddhima.

A-( thinks)- oh, he is talking about that, i guess i have to act more.

A- Yes, i did that and i am sorry for that, but i wanted to tell but there was one person who stopped me again and again. It was Riddhima.


Vansh looked at Riddhima in shock, and Anupriya continued her drama, she went to closer to Mata Rani's murti and said,

A- Today, i will speak only the truth. I will get a chance to explain myself right?

V- Yes, you will get a chance.

A- The truth is before, marriage i had a son, but he was kidnapped and the ransom amount was so huge, i couldn't pay it. I lost my son forever.

But your father knew this when he married me, and from that on i loved all of you equally, especially you Vansh. I see my son in you.

But Riddhima came to know about this and she has been blackmailing me ever since.

R- No...

V- SHUT UP YOU, how dare you blackmail my mother.

R- Really Vansh, tumhe saach mein lagta hain ki i would do this cheap harkat. Oh sorry i forgot, iss ghar mein koi bhi kaand hota hain toh Riddhima is always the culprit.

Yes, i hid the truth ki Mummy ji tumhari mom ki portrait burn ki thi. But tell me truthfully Vansh tum mere believe karte i had blamed her.

R- Tab bhi sab mujhe hi blame karte ki i am telling lies. Aur Mummy ji, agar mujhe saach mein aapke beta ke baare mein pata hota na, toh i would have helped you to find him. Kyunki aap yeh bhul rahi hain ki mein ek orphan hun maa baap ki importance mujhse jayada aur koi nahi jaanta.

A- Riddhima tum sirf baate ghume rahi ho. But i did a mistake so i will punish myself.


Anupriya tried to hurt herself and Vansh got hurt trying to save her, he forgave her and everyone went back to their room,

A- Tch tch Riddhima you thought ki you can easily break the trust between us. Kal ki aayi hui ladki meri kuch nahi bigaad sakti hain.

A- If you continued on this war path, soon you will be thrown out of the house.


Riddhima went back to her room, she brought juice for Vansh,

V- Leave me alone.

R- Vansh.. he stood up and was going to leave when she stopped him. Let me bandage your wound.

V- You always hurt me Riddhima, you can bandage my wounds, but what about my paining heart.

R- Aapne hi Aapne ko zakham dete hain, i can feel your pain too. Now, Sit please.


While she was bandaging him, Vansh was looking at her not able to understand what was going on in her mind.

V- Family shouldn't hurt each other.

R- I know that Vansh.

V- Do you trust me Riddhima?

R-...

V- Tumhari chuppi ne sab jawab de diye. You don't trust me, that's why you keep trying to find out about Ragini.

R- Do you trust me?

V- Yes, i do.

R- No Vansh, you don't nahi tum mujhe Sejal ka naam le daarte nahi. Nahi toh haar baar tum mere secrets jaane ki koshish nahi karte.

V- Riddhima marriage is not just this mangalsutra and some sindoor, it is about trust, communication. I know you have so many secrets, you hesitate to tell me things.Once you start trusting me only then our relationship can move forward.

R- Alright then, i am ready to trust you. If you tell me Ragini's truth. No games just plain simple truth.

V- Why are you so obsessed with her?

R- What would you done Vansh, if you knew that i had someone special too before marriage. Can you promise me that from now on you will fully trust me.?

Can you promise me you won't play games with and try to know my secrets. ? What if someone else gives you proof that i am betraying you will still trust me.?


Both looked at each other knowing that they still don't trust each other fully, Riddhima knew Vansh will try to find out the truth and Vansh knows Riddhima wont let go of Ragini's matter so easily.


Vansh left the room and Riddhima silently cried, cursing her fate for the day she met Kabir and said okay to spy on Vansh, she knows that when the truth will come out everything will be destroyed.


Ps- I didn't like how in the show Vansh is always shouting and screaming at Riddhima. Matlab kuch bhi ho scream, hurt only Riddhima. Anyway hope you guys like this.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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This was superb amazing....

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Nice

Can u continue this like when they knew each other secrets.

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Amazing šŸ˜

I always wanted something different instead of ridhima pleasing vansh even after all the shouting And pushingšŸ¤”

Glad you wrote something on this will you pls continue it

Take care

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This was amazing dear!!

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Originally posted by: Sindhuja99

Nice

Can u continue this like when they knew each other secrets.

What exactly you wanna see?

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Originally posted by: Payalshoni

Amazing šŸ˜

I always wanted something different instead of ridhima pleasing vansh even after all the shouting And pushingšŸ¤”

Glad you wrote something on this will you pls continue it

Take care

What exactly you wanna see?

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😃

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Originally posted by: raveena0605

What exactly you wanna see?

Ridhima trying to tell truth but not getting chance and vansh being secretive and expressing anger and then ridhima getting trapped in raisinghanias conspiracy where vansh saves her and finally learns all truth about her and his family šŸ˜›

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Originally posted by: Payalshoni

Ridhima trying to tell truth but not getting chance and vansh being secretive and expressing anger and then ridhima getting trapped in raisinghanias conspiracy where vansh saves her and finally learns all truth about her and his family šŸ˜›

Hmm lets see i will try.

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