TS: SHARED PAIN - Page 2

It's pure beautiful... As well as very emotional🥺meri akhomei to asho aa gayi😭😭😭

But last part is lovely, loved it ❤️

Originally posted by: TearDrop50

It's pure beautiful... As well as very emotional🥺meri akhomei to asho aa gayi😭😭😭

But last part is lovely, loved it ❤️

Awww Thaaank you, Yes I wanted it to be emotional, sorry for making you cry :(. But glaaad you liked it🤗❤️

This was so beautiful...bought tears to my eyes...the pain of Pallavi, Raghav's conflict in how to console Pallavi and bring her back to her normal self. Raghav had the last word--leaving Pallavi confused--he wanted to care for her but just couldn't show it.

I thoroughly loved reading it

Originally posted by: ReemShah

This was so beautiful...bought tears to my eyes...the pain of Pallavi, Raghav's conflict in how to console Pallavi and bring her back to her normal self. Raghav had the last word--leaving Pallavi confused--he wanted to care for her but just couldn't show it.

I thoroughly loved reading it

Thank you Reem sweetie you always have such kind words😭❤️❤️❤️. And you have summarized the essence of the story perfectly 🤗

Loved it...

Inn dono ko kabhi samajh ni ayega ki hua kya🤣

Beautiful TS👏

Amazing piece! Kudos to your spellbinding writing 👏

Hope to read more from you 👏

Have read your stories so far and love all of them 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Mihika

Loved it...

Inn dono ko kabhi samajh ni ayega ki hua kya🤣

Beautiful TS👏

Thaaank you sooo much Mihika🤗❤️

Yeh toh hai, ab inko kaun samjaye?

Originally posted by: Me000w

Amazing piece! Kudos to your spellbinding writing 👏

Hope to read more from you 👏

Thaaank you Tannu ❤️❤️ means alot. Be the way I have two other pieces on the forum, go ahead and read them if you haven’t 😆🤗

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Read it Now.

Wow!! This was AWESOME!!👏

I liked how Raghav directly went to her home, matlab Dukan bhi jaa sakta tha na, Lekin Nahi Aone Saree Ke Dukan ke Ghar pahunch gaye seedhe

Ofcourse, D-fam doesn't remember that Pallavi might be sad Today & they should be around her instead of leaving her alone.

Loved how Raghav tried to take care of her when he saw her vulnerable & alone & tried to cheer her up in his own way. The whole bit was emotional😒... You gave a background story to orphaning of Pallavi's, much needed.

The lines -

Han Bonus! Woh diwali ane wala hai na?! Stupid, ek toh favour de raha hai upar se ulte sawaal pooch rahi hai? (this girl is just impossible🤣)

Ruko mujhe tumahra favor nahi chaiye. Pata chala ke diwali peh mukhe hi roket bana ke urra do ge🤣

Ekdum purane episodes wale dialogues the yeh

And then you wrap it up with nice comical lines ki humara bhi Mood theek hojaaye😆

I am soo happy that you liked it Sonia, I only wrote this keeping your post in mind❤️. These funny lines are a must in RaghVi scenes no matter how intense they are. RR aapni lines marne se baaz thori hi aata hai😆.

Originally posted by: Me000w

Amazing piece! Kudos to your spellbinding writing 👏

Hope to read more from you 👏

Have read your stories so far and love all of them 👍🏼

Just saw your edited reply ❤️. SO happy that your read all of them ❤️ and you liked them awww ☺️.