Raghvi OS: Repentance. - Page 2

Originally posted by: Amnnaa

I know our Pallu looks so young and beautiful. I added 'auntyji' for a dramatic effect. Because there are some irritating girls who love to mock girls wearing decent dress. I meant it in that way.

I am sorry if I offended you.

I know what you meant, that is why I suggested changing "auntyji" to "behenji" 😆 Her looks would be mocked while also sounding relatable to her age 😛

Please don't say sorry dear, I was just sharing a little opinion 😳 And do keep writing, I hope I didn't discourage you in any way! ❤️

Originally posted by: Shri_12

Some people call women clearly younger than them Aunty . When I was 15-16, an adult called me aunty. Tum batao isse bura aur kya ho sakta Hai?

Awww behna 🤗😆

When I was in school, everyone kept asking me which year of college I was in 🤪 When I got to college, people kept asking me which class I was in Some people just have no sense 😆

Sweet and beautiful

Loved it👏

This was wonderful, awesome👍

Awesome OS!! It is wonderful for a first attempt 👍🏼

Chipku Ladki ko sabak sikhaaya, bada mazaa aaya

Keep writing!! 👏

Originally posted by: Blessed_Soul

This is lovely!

Nice ending ❤️

Thank you so much 😊

Originally posted by: Bee222

I know what you meant, that is why I suggested changing "auntyji" to "behenji" 😆 Her looks would be mocked while also sounding relatable to her age 😛

Please don't say sorry dear, I was just sharing a little opinion 😳 And do keep writing, I hope I didn't discourage you in any way! ❤️

I am happy that you shared your opinion. I changed it 😊. Btw thanks for the suggestion.

I added that in a mockery tone itself to imply how much insolent those girls were.

Originally posted by: Bee222

Awww behna 🤗😆

When I was in school, everyone kept asking me which year of college I was in 🤪 When I got to college, people kept asking me which class I was in Some people just have no sense 😆

I am facing the same issue now. I am just fed up of correcting all these people. 😵

Originally posted by: Me000w

Awesome OS!! It is wonderful for a first attempt 👍🏼

Chipku Ladki ko sabak sikhaaya, bada mazaa aaya

Keep writing!! 👏

Thank you for your encouraging words ❤️. After seeing all your wonderful response, I will surely continue writing 😊.

Aww...this is so precious--Raghav taking stand for Pallavi and claiming her as his wife--and this is a beautiful use of the precap you have done

definitely looking forward towards more writings from you