Hold On [FaRag Friendship OS] - Page 3

Originally posted by: I-Got-You

Lovely ❤️

Thank you for reading and commenting 💫

How did I miss this tag

OS on Farag 🥳

Aaj khush toh bohot hogi tum Ani 😎

Raghav’s Pain and his past

I always wondered if they’ll show more of it in show

Especially with Pallavi and Farhad

You described it so beautifully Tannu ❤️

The angst is heartbreakingly beautiful here

Farad is such a good friend

Farag friendship is ❤️

There is so much to explore about this bond

Thanks for tag And writing this

Cya ❤️

Bye 🏃‍♀️

Signing off

Radiant 🦋

This was really beautiful

I loved how u showed Farag bond❤️

Their friendship is so pure...

Keep writing

Originally posted by: princy48

True ...!! Farhad knows him better ...isliye he had the guts to say it on his face ki aap bure ho and raghav is ok with it ..their bond is stronger in the past ..than it is shown now ..i feel. The trauma...u carried the guilt ..the oppression of it over anything for him..very well..it was so good ...main abhi yeh likhte hue bhi cn read those lyns in mind .....thanku for writing this 🤗

They are indeed brothers more than friends or boss-employee. He understands RR's motivations and reasons deeply. Have never felt otherwise, and glad I could convey it in my humble piece 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Blessed_Soul

This was really beautiful

I loved how u showed Farag bond❤️

Their friendship is so pure...

Keep writing

Thank you for reading and commenting 💫

They indeed have a unique and beautiful bond ❤️

Hi Tannu,

So, I finally read it, and what a pleasant surprise..!!

Actually, I wonder what would or could have happened more / further.. 😃

Highlighting below 1-2 lines I really liked. have deleted the rest to not quote long long texts.

I didnt understand that word in blue, so Google taught me this means boy in Telegu.. good.. learning something again.. thank you.

I could picture the pain Raghav was in, cutting through his heart and soul like the sharpest knife in the universe.

and then... the entry of Farhad.. I like they call each other by name.. it also gives more scope if you would like to take things further 😉 If this is not your thing, there is a fandom for it who would madly enjoy this.

The Farhad in your story takes charge, initiative, and knows what his Raghav needs. It is him who keeps pulling him out, the minute he sinks into the darkness again and again. Farhad is that required beam of light.They feel safe and so comfortable with each other.. although both guys are still young in your story, I have the adult versions in mind, from the show.. for me it is so great to see a less obedient Farhad. perhaps there is a better word to describe it, but I cant think of that right now.

Young vulnerable lonely and most of all guilt-ridden Raghav being devastated enough to hurt himself is something that I can picture...

Originally posted by: Me000w

His family was dead. All in one moment. Nana and Tammudu meeting God. Riding the highways in heaven. Teaching little ghost kids music. Scoring dates with angels. Amma and Keerti. The shame and disgust in those eyes when Amma looked at his face. The rage when Amma asked him to leave. The fear in Keerti's eyes when she lost her father and brothers all in one day. The question on her face on what crime her Anna had committed that was so large that their entire world was torn down in one day.

A lost soul with nothing to believe in. A guy walking around with a hole in him, not knowing how he felt about anything anymore. His closest friends had never seen it, but those pricks had.

I never saw that, abbayi. I mean if you would've just told me, I could've done something about it.

He fell forward onto Farhad's lap, sobbing hysterically. Farhad's hands started running through his hair. Just like Amma did anytime Raghav was upset or mad or something like that, and that just made it hurt more. Everything hurt.

"Raghav..." Farhad kept stroking his hair and Raghav couldn't even bother to tell him to stop. It felt too damn good.

"Raghav..." Farhad sighed, those damn fingers of his still stroking.

"Stop it." Farhad pulled him up, rocking him in his arms, and then gently took out the shards from his foot, bandaging it with his handkerchief and the pieces of the curtain he could get his hands on. "They wouldn't want you doing this to yourself. They would not want you to kill yourself."

"They’re gone. They can't tell me what to do anymore." Raghav burrowed further into the embrace, maybe it was the booze talking but Farhad felt warm and good and he never wanted him to let go. He could count all the people who cared for him right now on one hand and Farhad was the most important finger. "I'm sorry. I'm sorry, Nana and Tammudu, you loved me and I never told you what you meant to me and I got you killed. I'm sorry. It's my fault, I'm sorry, I'm sorry..." He repeated this over and over again, like a mantra.

"Let's get you to my home."

He fell asleep on the lower bunk, with Farhad on the upper bunk, keeping an eye out for him. He didn't have a nightmare that night.

Originally posted by: RishuDarling

Hi Tannu,

So, I finally read it, and what a pleasant surprise..!!

Actually, I wonder what would or could have happened more / further.. 😃

Highlighting below 1-2 lines I really liked. have deleted the rest to not quote long long texts.

I didnt understand that word in blue, so Google taught me this means boy in Telegu.. good.. learning something again.. thank you.

I could picture the pain Raghav was in, cutting through his heart and soul like the sharpest knife in the universe.

and then... the entry of Farhad.. I like they call each other by name.. it also gives more scope if you would like to take things further 😉 If this is not your thing, there is a fandom for it who would madly enjoy this.

The Farhad in your story takes charge, initiative, and knows what his Raghav needs. It is him who keeps pulling him out, the minute he sinks into the darkness again and again. Farhad is that required beam of light.They feel safe and so comfortable with each other.. although both guys are still young in your story, I have the adult versions in mind, from the show.. for me it is so great to see a less obedient Farhad. perhaps there is a better word to describe it, but I cant think of that right now.

Young vulnerable lonely and most of all guilt-ridden Raghav being devastated enough to hurt himself is something that I can picture...

I so knew it! You all also feel the same after reading those parts❤️❤️ my boys if only koi iss angle ko explore karta😭😆

Originally posted by: SRKian

I so knew it! You all also feel the same after reading those parts❤️❤️ my boys if only koi iss angle ko explore karta😭😆

Yes.. It can be explored.. I think especially on forum, we all keep it nice and censored.. I understand it too.. And especially in such a splash slash story, which is perhaps out of the ordinary..

But... I encourage it! Let's be daredevils and ship outside the box..

Originally posted by: RishuDarling

Hi Tannu,

So, I finally read it, and what a pleasant surprise..!!

Actually, I wonder what would or could have happened more / further.. 😃

Highlighting below 1-2 lines I really liked. have deleted the rest to not quote long long texts.

I didnt understand that word in blue, so Google taught me this means boy in Telegu.. good.. learning something again.. thank you.

I could picture the pain Raghav was in, cutting through his heart and soul like the sharpest knife in the universe. and then... the entry of Farhad.. I like they call each other by name.. it also gives more scope if you would like to take things further 😉 If this is not your thing, there is a fandom for it who would madly enjoy this.

The Farhad in your story takes charge, initiative, and knows what his Raghav needs. It is him who keeps pulling him out, the minute he sinks into the darkness again and again. Farhad is that required beam of light.They feel safe and so comfortable with each other.. although both guys are still young in your story, I have the adult versions in mind, from the show.. for me it is so great to see a less obedient Farhad. perhaps there is a better word to describe it, but I cant think of that right now.

Young vulnerable lonely and most of all guilt-ridden Raghav being devastated enough to hurt himself is something that I can picture...

Thank you for reading and commenting 💫

I love love love how you gave me such a detailed feedback 🤗

I am so touched, thank youuuu 🥺

Originally posted by: RishuDarling

Yes.. It can be explored.. I think especially on forum, we all keep it nice and censored.. I understand it too.. And especially in such a splash slash story, which is perhaps out of the ordinary.. But... I encourage it! Let's be daredevils and ship outside the box..

Why dont you guys take a stab at it? Your feedback does make it seem like you are a phenomenal writer yourself. Encourage you to write their story with your own twist 👍🏼