Ishra SS : Itna Main Chaahu Tujhe (part 12 on pg 33 on 10/10/2021) - Page 21

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Posted: 3 years ago

Thank you very much for the lovely response.


Part-7


Everyone was waiting for him in the hall. The moment he reached to clear their doubts, he received a tight slap from Mr Iyer.

Mr Iyer – Aaj tak Ishu ki life ke kisi bhi decision mein humse mistake nhi hui lekin is bar ho gayi. Humhe to laga tha ki humne apni beti ke liye sabse acha ladka choose kia hai par nhi..hum galat the. Kyu kar rhe ho aisa Ishu ke sath? Usne hamesha tumhara favour kia, mistake tum karte aur explanation vo deti. Kyu? Aaj tak samajh nhi aaya. She said ki usse hi koi galti hui hai par uska appa hone ke nate vishwas hai mujhe, vo kisi ko hurt nhi kar sakti aur agar koi mistake ho bhi jaaye to maafi maangna aur us mistake ko thik karna use bhot acche se aata hai. Aur is bar to tumne limit cross kar di. Meri beti ne itne dino se kuch nhi khaya aur tum… agar usse kuch bhi hua na main tumhe chodunga nhi..

Mrs Bhalla – Arey aap mere bete par aise chilla kaise sakte hai? Aapki beti ko agar aise drame karne ka shok hai to usme mere bete ka kya dosh..

R – Maa, please aap kuch mat kaho..

Mrs Bhalla – Arey aise kaise na kahu. Kuch bhi ho usme bas mere bete ko dosh de dete hai..

Dadaji (angrily) – Toshi bahu. Tumhare bete ko dosh de rhe hai kyonki uska dosh hai. Aur sirf uska nhi, sabse bada dosh to hamara hai jo humne socha ki hamara pota smart, obedient aur responsible hai aur Ishita ki responsibility isse di. Aaj ek bar phir hamara sir sharm se jhuk gaya. Maaf karna Vishwa hamari…

Mr Iyer – Please maafi maang kar aap humhe sharminda mat kijiye. Agar aapki galti hai to hum bhi galat hai ki humne apni beti ka rishta bina soche samjhe kar dia, vo bhi tab jab inhe thik se rishto ka matlab bhi nhi pta tha….

Mrs Iyer (to Raman) – Mujhe nhi pta ki kyu Ishita tumhe bar bar mauka de rhi hai par tumhe yeh bta du ki agar is bar tumne uska vishvas toda to hum uski ek nhi sunenge. Apni beti ko ek pal bhi yaha nhi rehne dungi.

Raman promised everyone that he will take care of Ishita and won’t disappoint anyone. Mr and Mrs Iyer left from there angrily while dadiji scold Mrs bhalla for taking raman’s side when it was his fault. Mrs Bhalla got annoyed.

Raman’s grandparents in their room were discussing over Ishra.

Dadaji – Itna sab hone ke bad bhi aap Ishita ki  bat maan kar Raman ko ek aur mauka dena chahti hai.

Dadiji – Janti hu ki Raman ka vyahvar thik nhi rha hai, is bar to sari had hi par kar di hai. Ishita ne sirf uske liye vrat rakha aur usne…. Uski vajah se ishita itne din bhookhi pyasi rhi aur chup chap sab kam karti rhi. Tabhi main sochu ki vo itni kamzor kyu lag rhi hai kuch dino se aur hamesha hospital mein rehti thi taki humhe kuch pta na chale. Lekin agar Ishita ne us par vishvas bnaye rakha hai to…

Dadaji – to kya humhe haq hai ki hum uski zindagi se khilwad kare? Teen saal se sirf Ishita puttar ke khatir hi hum chup hai.

Dadiji – To kuch din aur intezar karte hai.. aur is bar to khud Raman ne bhi promise kia hai. Raman hamara pota hai, apne diye huye sanskaro par itna bharosa to hum kar hi sakte hai..

Dadaji – Thik hai. Lekin yeh last chance hai. Is bar agar uski vajah se Ishita ko koi takleef hui to main khud is rishte ko khatm kr dunga aur Raman ko main khud saja dunga, vo bhi aisi jo kisi ne nhi sochi hogi.

Other side, Mrs Bhalla was angry as her in-laws shouted at her in front of Iyers.

Mrs Bhalla -  Ishita ishita ishita.. jab dekho bas us ladki ki side lete rehte hai. Ma aur Bauji ko to pta nhi kya ho gaya hai, hamesha bas mere puttar ki hi galtiya nikalte rehte hai, us ladki ki kabhi koi galti kyu nhi nazar aati kisi ko. Arey koi puchta to sahi ki mere puttar ne kyu kia, koi karan hoga jarur lekin nhi us ladki ke sare drame sahi aur mera puttar galat. Aur vo VIshwanathan Iyer.. uski itni himmat ki mere saamne mere puttar ko thappad mara. kuch jyada hi par nikal aaye hai unke. Aur Raman, usse kya ho gaya hai, aise shanti se sabki bate sun rha tha, aur khud promise bhi kar dia ki vo ishita ka pura khyal rakhega. Kahi vo sab kuch bhul kar… nhi nhi. aise kaise. Ek to usne sab kuch jante huye bhi us ladki se shadi karli aur aaj… nhi Raman us ladki ko itni jaldi maaf nhi kar sakta. Isse pehle ki vo apni baaton mein mere puttar ko behlaye mujhe hi kuch karna hoga.

She decided to trouble Ishita more and that to be at the back of other family members.

At Iyer Mansion, Mihika asked about Ishita to her parents who were sad and disturbed. Mrs Iyer told her everything happened making her shocked and surprised. Her parents bad mouthed Raman for his disgraceful acts while she thought,

M (thinking) - Nhi Amma Appa, Raman jiju aise nhi hai. He is a very nice person and I know aap log bhi isse agree karte hai but jabse unki aur Akka ki shadi hui hai tabse vo aisi strange behave karte hai ki aap log forcefullly unke liye aisa hi sochte ho. Aur main janti hu, maine dekha hai khud ki vo Akka se kitna pyar karte hai. Vo to Akka ke liye kuch bhi kar sakte hai, khud ki jaan bhi de sakte hai to vo akka ki jaan ke dushman kaise ho sakte hai. But I can’t understand why he is behaving like this with Akka. Mujhe Akka se bat karni hi padegi, I know ki unhone pehle mna kia tha involve hone ke liye but this is height now. I can’t see both of them like this.

She assured her parents and went to call Ishita. SHe called her and Raman picked her call.

R - Hello, Mihika.

M - Hello jiju. how are you?

R - I’m good but I’m sure you must have called to know about your Akka not me. She is in the washroom, just coming.. You must be worried for her..

M - No jiju. Because I know ki Akka ke pas world’s best husband hai, mere Raman jiju, who will take care of her. Aapke hote huye mujhe unki koi tension nhi hoti.

R (getting sad) - How can you believe me this much? I always hurt her, takleef ke siva aur kuch nhi dia usse….

M - No jiju, you are wrong. Jab se shadi hui hai tab se aapne unhe takleef dena start kia hai.. but before that, Aapne bhot kuch dia hai, bhot si achi yaadein, ek bhot acha aur sacha friend who used to take care of her, protect her from every odds.. aur aaj bhi karte ho. I don’t know why you are trying to change yourself.. Kyu bure banne ki koshish kar rhe hai..

She said, making him silent. His eyes were getting filled when Ishita came out of the washroom and asked who called her.

R (hiding his tears) - Mihika, tumhari akka aa gayi. Tum dono bat karo, main abhi aata hu.

He left the room giving mobile phone to her.

I - Hello, Mihku.

M - hi Akka, Kaise feel kar rhe ho ab?

I - Better. 

M - Hmmm, mere jiju se itni seva karwa rhe ho to better to feel karna hi hai.

I - Jiju ki chamchi. Vaise ha, he is taking care of me like.. 

M - like your old friend sued to.. Right Akka?

I - Hmmm. Good to see him like this. By the way, Tum kya bat kar rhi thi unse? Kuch galat to nhi kaha na?

M - Ohho Akka, main jiju ko janti bhi hu aur samajhti bhi hu. maine aisa kuch nhi kaha.

I - Nhi, Actually vo kuch alag hi lag rhe the to…

Mihika told her about their conversation.

I - Isliye shayad vo bad feel kar rhe honge, guilty feel kar rhe honge.

M - Akka, both of you know each other very well, understand what the other must be feeling for what. Then why these differences, why this so-called hatred? I can’t see both of you like this. Please Akka sort it out na.

I - Miku, tujhe kya lagta hai, man khush hu aise. nhi, hum dono hi khush nhi hai. but.. Okay, purani baatein chod. The thing is ki Raman agreed to listen to me, to discuss it with me but not now. He said that he also wanted it. But he needs time. He is behaving like a friend like earlier.

M - Akka, time?? aur kitna time?

I - I don’t know. He said that he doesn't want to remember all that now, he is trying to believe me. You know what he can feel that I can’t do anything wrong and maybe he is having some misunderstanding about me but something is stopping him. I think he has a fear if his misunderstandings would be proved right…. He said that we will talk after this campaign and his project but I’m not sure..

M - Akka, I think you should find it out on your own. I mean you don’t know Jiju kab bat karne ke liye ready ho aur tab tak agar kuch aur misunderstanding ya kuch hua to.. situation worse na ho jaaye.

I - But how Mihika? You know we had already tried to figure it out but no use.

M - Akka, aap har maan rhe ho?

I - Nhi mihika, but kuch samajh nhi aata, koi lead hi nhi milta, to kaise aage badhenge. But I think you are right, ek bar phir se, starting se karna hoga sab kuch.

M - Yes Akka. To kal mile?

I - Okay.


Here I'm ending this part. Hope you will like it..

Precap - Ishra spending some good time.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Awesome update di

How can mrs bhalla be that one sided🤦🏻‍♀️🤦🏻‍♀️

I agree she’s his mother but Ishita’s pain cannot be ignored ☹️☹️

Lets see how ishita will find out about Ramans misunderstandings 

Eagerly waiting for the next update 

Ty 4 d pm too di

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Posted: 3 years ago

Super awesome update 

Continue soon 

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Thanks for the pm 









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Posted: 3 years ago

Just read all 7 parts... wow! Very interesting story.. Mrs Bhalla is evil? 🧐what happened that was so wrong?! Ishita definitely needs to start digging from the beginning again! 

Can’t wait for the next part!! 

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Posted: 3 years ago

A very interesting update please update next part soon to know what happened between them that they behave like that 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Superb update

Raman came out of ward he got slapped by mr.iyer he said how can be do this with his daughter when she always supported him toshiji got angry but ramans grandparents supported iyers and asked forgiveness mrs.iyer said this is last chance if he will hurt ishita again they will take her back raman promised to make everything fine ramans grandparents talk was nice toshiji was angry at iyers she decided to trouble Ishita behind everyone's back mihika asked her parents what happened they told her everything she was confused she trust raman she knows their is some misunderstanding she called ishita raman picked their talk was nice ishita and mihika talk was nice now they will try to know the whole matter waiting

Pls update soon

Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 3 years ago

Fabulous update 

Please update soon its a request 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 7 


Misunderstandings and Trust 


Hope soon everything is cleared and both Ishita 

and Raman can talk truthfully to each other without any fear 

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Posted: 2 years ago

Thank you very much for the response.

And so sorry for being so late to update.


Part-8

Ishita and Mihika were talking on call when Raman came with a glass of juice. Ishita made a face and cut the call.

I - Raman no..

R - Koi na nukur nhi sunne wala main. Jaldi se finish kardo.

I - Ek shart par, share karna padega aapko.

R - Ek glass juice mein kya share karna aur main kyu, tumhe iski jyada jarurat hai.

I - aapko bhi hai. Kab se meri vajah se pareshan ho..

R - Agar isse pareshan hona kehte hai to main daily aise hi rehna chahunga. Okay now stop talking and have it.

I - I told you na. you have to share it..

He agreed and both finished it together.

R - Now you rest. I have some work.

I - You also take rest..

R - No, office se suddenly aana pada to..It’s important. I have to do it now.

I (getting up from bed) - Okay.

R - Okay bol kar kaha ja rhi ho?

I - Couch par...

R - I told you to rest.. pareshan hone ko nhi kaha.

I - What?

R - Ha, couch par rest karne jaogi to ultimately pareshan hi hogi na. I know you are not comfortable there..

I (smiling) - You know that..

Raman looked at her who was looking at him with a sweet smile. He looked away and said,

R - Ha I know.. You rest here only.

He said and settled on the study table with the laptop and files, to avoid the situation while Ishita smiled and lied down on the bed. Soon she slept while Raman got busy with his work.

At night, Raman discussed some work with siblings and his father, then came to his room only to see Ishita sitting on the bed, sad and irritated. She was trying to read a book but couldn’t and kept it aside, then she picked her mobile phone but then put it back. He got surprised and asked, entering the room.

R - What happened?

He asked, keeping his laptop and files on the table but didn’t get any answer. He sat in front of her and asked again.

I - Aapko kya? Aap apna kam kijiye..

R (smiled) - Acha ab koi office work nhi.. ab bolo, kya hua? Tum soyi kyu nhi abhi tak?

I - So hi to rhi thi.. I've been resting from a long time, kabhi aap aa jate ho kabhi Simmi to kabhi dadi aur mujhe bed se uthne bhi nhi dia. Ab mujhe neend nhi aa rhi. Late ho gaya hai to kisi se bat bhi nhi kar sakti, book padhne ka bhi man nhi kar rha to kya karu..

R - Hmm. Yeh to hai problem, aur uska solution bhi hai mere pas..

I - kya?

R - Hmm, what about watching a movie?

I - I checked it. Koi achi movie nhi hai TV par.

R - No problem. We have other options. We will see a film online, that to be of your choice.

I - Ha that's a nice idea.

Raman sat beside her, taking his laptop and both started watching a South Indian movie as per her choice. Both enjoyed it. Raman slept in the middle of the movie. Ishita kept the laptop aside and made him sleep comfortably. She smiled seeing him and was happy that finally he was coming back to himself. She picked up the laptop and her mobile and was getting up from the bed but her mobile phone fell on the bed, breaking his sleep. He woke up and saw her with half opened eyes.

I - Sorry.

R - So jao, it's very late.

I - Ha bas sone hi ja rhi hu.

R - Ja rhi hu.. kaha?

I - Vo..

R (sleepy) - Bola tha na maine.. tum bed par so jana..

I - Ha lekin...

R - Kya? Oh.. Thik hai main vha so jata hu..

He was getting up but Ishita stopped him as he was very tired and sleepy. She kept the laptop on the table and went back to the bed.

R - Ab ho gaya ho to so jao.

Saying so, he slept while Ishita laid on the bed. She saw him, sleeping peacefully and smiled, then slept. In the morning, Ishita woke up with her mobile alarm. She put it off then turned to the other side, her eyes met his sleeping figure. She was looking at his face with a sweet smile. She put her fingers in his messed hairs to set it. Her act broke his sleep and he opened his eyes a little bit, she withdrew her hand.

I (scared of his reaction) - Vo main… main to bas…

R - Good morning. How are you feeling now?

I (relaxed) - Very good morning. Main bilkul thik hu ab.

R (sitting) - Hmm. Good. But that doesn't mean that you will go to hospital. Today, you will rest.

I - But there is no need for…

R - And I had already informed this in the hospital.

I - What? Raman.. 

R - I told you na..main kuch nhi sunne wala. I'm going for the morning walk. If you want you can join me.

I (making a face) - Aap hi jao.

R (smiling) - As your wish.

After some time, Raman was going for the walk when he saw her ready in a track suit.

R - I think tum nhi aane wali thi..

I - Ab hospital to jana nhi hai..to I have time..to socha aapko join karlu.

R - Nice thought. Let's go.

After about 40 min, both returned back, talking and smiling. His grandparents and Toshiji noticed them. His grandparents were happy seeing the change in their relationship while Toshiji was angry. Seeing dadiji and Toshiji preparing for puja, Ishita said,

I - Sorry dadiji sorry mummiji. Main walk par chali gayi.. mujhe yad hi nhi rha.. main abhi jldi se taiyar hokar aati hu..

Dadiji - Koi nhi puttar. Tujhe rest ki jarurat hai. Aur vaise bhi, pura din to mujhe koi kam nhi karne dete, kam se kam yeh to karne do.. tu ja aaram se taiyar ho, yeh sab hum kar lenge.

Toshiji (thinking) - Ha ha..yeh to maharani hai na yaha ki, kuch kam karne ki jarurat nhi. Raman ko bhi pta nhi kya ho gaya hai, kal se bas is ladki ke aage peeche ghoom rha hai.

Ishra went to their room to get ready for the day. Today Raman was on time for everything & behaving nicely, making everyone happy. Raman informed everyone that Ishita won't go to hospital and will take rest. Before going to office, he gave a list of instructions to Ishita as well as servants so that she would take adequate rest and have food on time.

Only Toshiji and Ishita were left in the Bhalla mansion along with a few servants. Toshiji took the opportunity and sent the servants to the market to buy a few things while other servants were busy with other work. Ishita was arranging her room when she heard Toshiji shouting on the servants. She went out and asked the matter.

T - Tu kya karegi jankar. Tujhe to rest karne ka order mila hai. Tu ja, main dekh lungi.

I - Mummiji aap aise kyu keh rhi hai. Main thik hu, bataiye na kya hua?

Toshiji told her that her friends decided suddenly to go to an orphanage, taking food for the children. Only one servant was available and they had less time. Ishita assured her that she would prepare the food.

At lunch time, Raman was about to have his lunch when he thought to check on Ishita. He called her but she couldn't pick his calls as her mobile phone was on silent mode and she was very busy. He got worried and called Toshiji but she didn't answer it intentionally. He thought to go and check himself and would come back before lunch time was over.

Raman directly went to his room but didn't find her. He didn't see anyone in the hall. He heard some noise from the kitchen, so he went there only to see Ishita cooking food for so many people. She was sweating and doing it. Raman looked at her angrily. The servant noticed him and signalled Ishita. She turned and got scared of his reaction.

I (smiling) - Raman, aap kab aaye?

R (coming inside) - Have you lost it? What are you doing and why?

I - Relax. Shout kyu kar rhe ho. Khana hi to bna rhi h…

R - Not a word. I told you to rest. Aise rest karte hai? Jab attention nhi deta tha to tumhe problem thi ab de rha hu to tum sunti nhi meri..

I (taking him aside) - Raman, listen to me once. First of all, main thik hu ab. Aur… (She told him everything) I thought ki main agar mummiji ke liye kuch karungi to shayad unki narazgi thodi kam ho jaye.

R (thinking) - Unki narazgi aise kam nhi hogi Ishita.

R - Main mna nhi karunga..karo lekin abhi nhi when you need rest.

I - Raman please na..aur vaise bhi sab kuch almost ho gaya hai. Bas thoda sa..

R - Thik hai tumhe yeh thik lagta hai to karo..

I (smiled) - Thank you so much Raman. Vaise aap kyu aaye the?

R - Na tum call attend kar rhi thi aur na Ma to socha lunchtime mein free hu to check kar lu ek bar.

I - Aapne lunch kia?

R - Tum jao jldi se finish karlo kam.

Ishita went to the kitchen but was surprised to see Raman wearing an apron and joined her.

R - Kya aise kya dekh rhi ho? Tum vo karo jo tumhe thik lage aur main vo karunga jo mujhe thik lagega. Now I will assist you. So abhi without any arguments, let's finish it quickly.

They got busy cooking together. Toshiji came to check on Ishita thinking she must be distressed but found her happily cooking with Raman.  She got angry.

T (coming inside) - Raman puttar, tu kab aaya? Aur yeh sab kya kar rha hai?

R - Bas thodi der pehle hi aaya ma. Ishita ki help kar rha hu.

T - Hmm, good Good. Tu office ka kam chod kar yeh sab…

R (interrupting) - Arey ma..main to bhul hi gaya mujhe aapse kuch important bat karni thi. Aao na.. 

He took her to her room and said,

R - Ma, main ache se janta hu aapko. Aapne yeh sab Ishita ko pareshan karne ke liye kia na.

T - Raman, yeh tu kya keh rha hai?

R - Jo sach hai. main janta hu ki aapko Ishita pasand nhi aur is napasand ka karan bhi janta hu lekin meri aapse request hai ki yeh mere aur Ishita ka personal matter hai aur main nhi chahta ki aap isme involve ho. Aap please aisa kuch mat kijiye jisse ishita ko koi dikkat…

He was saying but stopped seeing his mother’s reaction.

T - Mujhe kyu lag rha hai ki tu vo sab bhul gaya hai aur Ishita ko maaf kar dia hai..

R - Aisa nhi hai ma. Bhula nhi hu aur na hi abhi ishita ko maaf kia hai but…. main aapko abhi aise nhi samjha sakta. Mujhe thoda time do. Main sab clear kar dunga. Tab tak please aisa kuch mat kijiye.

Toshiji agreed and Raman left.

T - Clear kar dega? Nhi puttar, kuch clear nhi hoga. Main aisa kabhi nhi hone dungi.

Ishra completed cooking together then sat to have lunch together. Toshiji left to meet her friends. Raman had just started lunch when he received a call from his father for a meeting. He realised that he was late for a meeting and immediately left without having food. Ishita felt bad..


Here I'm ending this part. Hope its quite long & you will like it.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Good to see you back after a long time .

Nice update 

Will be waiting for further updates