Raghav pallavi SS - Just another day - part 6 page 9 - Page 7

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Such a beautiful update

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Last part


Pallavi is sleeping in her room and she heard some faint noises. She woke up and tries to look at from where that noise is coming. She saw that 2 men are in her house and they are lifting something. After she realised that it is not something but someone and she shouted at them with feared and that time lady look at her and she is trying to free herself. Due to dim light she couldn’t make out who is she and who are they but she noticed bindi and she realised she is her Sulochana Kaku.

She is scared but still screaming for help and calling her kaka and asking kidnapper to leave her kaku. When kidnapper noticed her they started to run as soon as possible and put sulochana in car. Pallavi ran behind them to stop them. She is about to call police but she notice car and she chased them by her scooty.

Kidnapper reached at their destination and tied sulu with chair and her eyes also blind folded and her mouth was shut with cloth after that they left. She is hell scared and can feel that there is no one here and she is getting more scare because neither she can see anything not she can runaway and nor she can scream for help. She is struggling to free her hand. While doing that she heard footsteps. She is getting more scared. She knows today is her last days. There is no voice and it is like whoever is here that person is deadly silent. It is like he is going to kill with slow death. Someone open her mouth.

Sulu : main nahi janti aap log kaun par please mujhe janedo. Maine kya bigada hain aapka


Voice : mera nahi lekin mere kisi khaas ka bigada hain tune


Sulu knew she heard this voice somewhere but can’t remembered because of her fear. Before she can remember who is that person open her eyes. First it was hard to see but after sometimes she can see who her kidnapper is!


It is none other than Raghav Rao


R : (with lovingly sweet smile) hi bindiwala aunty. Kaisa lag raha hain. Koi takleef to nahi hain. Yeh kya aap raat ko bhi saree pehankar sota hain woh bhi bindi ke saath


S : Ra Ra Raghav tumne mujhe kidnap kyu kiya? Maine kya bigada hain


Raghav is about to say but her heard someone voice and Yes it is none other than Saree ka dukan. When Pallavi saw car she understood it is Raghav’s car and those 2 men are Farhad & Harish. Pallavi is looking at them with angry face and they are looking at her with puppy face. Harish blamed Raghav


H : Pallavi ji yeh hamara nahi anna ka plan tha. Hum to bas unko follow kar rahe the


Now it is Raghav’s turn to look at Harish angrily. Harish looks at Farhad for help but Farhad told him it is your fault now suffer.


R : Gorrila tu aaj kal kuch jyada hi free hote ja raha hain. Ruko yeh sab niptane ke baad main dekhta hoon tujhe.


P : tum uss bichare ko kyun daat rahe ho. Yeh idea to tumhara hi hoga. Tumne kaku ko kidnap kyu kiya?


R : saree ka dukan accha hua tum aa gaya. Main abhi abhi yeh bindiwala aunty ko wohi batane janewala tha. Maine isko kidnap tumhare liye kiya hain


P : (shockingly) mere liye lekin kyu?


R : kyuki isne tumko aaj rulaya iske liye


P : nahi raghav aise nahi hain


R : dekho saree ka dukan juth nahi


S : (with fear) raghav pallavi sahi kahe rahi hain maine nahi rulaya isko. Pallavi beta isko samjao na mujhe chhodane ke liye


R : arre waah aaj bada pyar aa raha hain pallavi pe nahi to humesha bichari ko rulate rehti ho. Sorry bolo isko


S : sorry pallavi please mujhe maaf kar do main aaj ke baad tumko kabhi bhi nahi rulaugi. Saara kaam main hi karugi


P : kaku mujhe koi sorry nahi chahiye. Raghav please inko chhod do inko apni galti ka ehsaas ho gaya hain


R : main nahi jane dega. Abhi yeh sorry bol rahi hain ghar pe jakar firse apna rang dikha degi


P : nahi ragahv woh aisa nahi karegi please jane do


R : theek hain lekin ek shart par


P : shart?


R : haan shart ke tumne isko kaunse cartoon main dekha?


P : (lying) maine isko koi bhi cartoon main nahi dekha.


R : maine bola na tumko juth bolne nahi aat to koshish bhi mat karo. Jab tak tum mujhe nahi bataogi tab tak main inko nahi jane dega


Sullu is confused with their talk. What cartoon they are discussing? Here she is kidnapped and they are busy with cartoon.


S : pallavi please mujhe yaha se bachalo


Pallavi is looking at Raghav with pleading eyes she doesn’t want kaku to know that she imagined her with cartoon but Raghav is adamant and standing with his strict posture. Pallavi has no other choice but spill the beans


P : maine inko Ursula cartoon main dekha


Raghav asked farhad to search the picture in internet and show raghav.


R : arre waah saree ka dukan. Tumhara choice to bada accha hain aur ekdum perfect.


He show that pic to sullu but sullu is not getting anything. It is like some inside joke is going on with them.


P : ab main kaku ko lekar jaa sakti hoon na


Pallavi was going towards sullu to freed her hand but raghav stopped her.


R : nahi saree ka dukan mera aur ek shart hain.


P : dekho raghav abhi to maine tumhari ek shart puri ki


R : you don't have any other choice


P : theek hain bolo lekin yeh aakhri shart hain


R : to suno tum mere samne isko woh Ursula ki tarah imagine karo


P : WHAT?


R : haan tum imagine karo yeh Ursula hain aur tumhara reaction do. No arguments


Pallavi has no other choice and look at sullu who islooking like ghost her hair are messy, mascara is spread all over face due to crying, her helpless and fearful face. She was feeling guilty but still she tried to imagine her as Ursula and after that she started to laugh loudly. She is laughing laughing and laughing.


R : So it is fun right


Pallavi couldn’t stop her laugh but try to stop her laugh and nodded her head and apologised to kaku to laughing at her


Sulu can’t understand pallavi’s behaviour.


S : (begging) pallavi please mujhe yaha se le chalo


Pallavi look at begging sulu and she started to laughmore. Looking at her raghav, farhad and harish also started to laugh loudly. Sulu looking at them with fear and confuse expression and pallavi is laughing by holding her stomach. Pallavi is laughing laughing and laughing. Suddenly she woke up from her dream. Yes it was dream of her.


Pallavi is looking at her surrounding where she notice she is at her home not at raghav house. She remembered her dream and feels guilty


P : ohhh bichari kaku ki halat aur unki halat pe main has rahi thi. Lekin maza bada aa raha tha. Pallavi yeh kya ho gaya hain tujhe. Kabse dusaro pe hasna chalu kiya hain aur woh ghamndi rao kyun tumhare liye kaku ko kidnap karega. Yeh sab uss ghamandi rao ki galti hain, mujhe use dur hi rehna chahiye. Uski galat sangat ka asar ho raha hain.


She looks at her phone for time and think of the devil and devil is here. There is message from ghamandi rao


R : main kab se tumhare message ka wait kar raha hain. To batao saree ka dukan kaunsa cartoon imagine kiya?


P : maine koi cartoon imagine nahi kiya.


R : maine kitni baar bola tum jhooth nahi bol sakta


P : main juth nahi bol aur tum itni jaldi kaise jag gaye


R : jagna arre main abhi tak soya hi nahi hoon. Aur tum baat mat badlo aur batao cartoon ke bare me nahi to main abhi udhar aa jayega


P : nahi koi jarurat nahi hain aane ki. Agar tumko jan nahain to kal subah aa jana 10 baje dukan pe tab bata dugi


R : firse itna jaldi


P : agar jan na hain to aana padega


R : waise woh tumhari kaku ne jyada pareshan to nahi kiya na agar kiya hoga to bol dena uska kidnap kar ke sabak shikhayega


Pallavi is shock to reading that. It is like her dream coming true.


P : nahi aisa kuch karne ki jarurat nahi hain aur tumnejo idea diya tha woh kaam bhi aaya aur uske liye thank you. No not thank you but you amma


R : arre meri amma ke pass bahut sare funde hain to fir kabhi sunayega


P : jarur main unke aur funde sun na chahti hoon. ab jakar tum so jao aur subah 10 baje dukan pe aa jana. Saree ka idea bhi share karna hain


R : ok good night saree ka dukan


P good night ghamandi rao


So here end of another day. Start and end with each otheronly

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Posted: 4 years ago
#63


Thanks dear 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Mihika

Res...koi ni ayega...this is my jaga


Thanks mihika 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: ImHemangi

ye amma ka funda toh super hit hai hum bhi use krenge ese kbhi jarurt pdi toh🤣🤣


Thoda credit mere school teacher ko bhi jata hain ❤️

Thanks hemangi 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: GoldenHour


Beeeeeeeautiful. Just Amazing.This was such a real and cute conversation. I don’t know why but it made me emotional. Such a creative thought wirth the cartoon, when Raghav gave Pallavi this advise I actually felt like someone is going it to me. Really heartwarming ❤️❤️💔

Just keep writing



I am really glad that you love this. I will be happy if it will be helpful to you in real life ☺️

Thanks dear 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: ReemShah

Amma ka funda is really nice- imagining Pallavi as Ursula--and I can't stop laughing.

I think that this moment between Raghvi- was emotional, cute and felt so real.

It is too early to say but I'll still say it, Please update soone..waiting eagerly for next part


I am glad you love it

I thought you people will find it childish but sometimes you have to be child to understand the process 😊 I am really thankful that you people love it

Thanks dear 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: LyssaPie

Such a beautiful update


Thanks dear 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hain??? Hum iske alawa comment ni kiye kya??😔
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mihika

Hain??? Hum iske alawa comment ni kiye kya??😔


You read that's enough for me 😊

I can understand hectic life 👍🏼

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