Sairat Pulkit SS - Main aapka saath doongi ch 4 pg 7 - Page 7

Originally posted by: neeraja91

Nice chapter. Mast mast!

Thanks.

I was actually not happy with this chapter yaar. I don't know why. Probably too many dialogues or it looks unrealistic, something 🙈🙈

Kattttttiiiiiiiiiiiii😤tag nahi kiya,yeh kho gaya tha pata hai

Waise rehne do,I loved the twist here , kya kamaal ka situation paida kiya hai Sai ne.

Loved it. And I agree. As we had discussed that day, a person who is accustomed to speaking truth will burn around lies,and Sai taking such a huge leap in a single go is a bit khatkeela thing to me. So ,loved the deviation a d track here.

Poor Viru,but lies are like virtual reality, just satisfies the heart around a situation, but never gives true happiness, as it always keeps us unprepared for everything. Truth hurts but brings peace and preparation along with it. So,it has broken Virat here,but it will redeem him.

And Sai's statement's were spot on, she is right, every destination is always correct in its own way,even if they are vile ones like power and money,but the route you choose decides your personality here. If your daughter is your life,then isn't your would be and already wife also a daughter,a sister, a human. Beautifully written update.

Absolutely loved the chapter.

Continue soon💕

Fantastic update

Sai is such an intelligent women

She definitely knows how to play her cards

Please update soon

Originally posted by: laksh

Thanks, but I wasn't really happy with this chapter. I don't know why 🙈🙈

Just now read it. Why weren't you happy with this chapter? I liked it. Pulkit-Sai conversation was really good. Sai ne Pulkit ko sunaya - in frank but measured tone.

Originally posted by: jane_austen

Just now read it. Why weren't you happy with this chapter? I liked it. Pulkit-Sai conversation was really good. Sai ne Pulkit ko sunaya - in frank but measured tone.

I don't know, but it didn't look like Sai once it came out. With Pulkit and others it was still okay. But when it came to dialogues wrt Virat, it probably went overboard. May be I could have kept some as monologues than delivering them as dialogues.

I have another ff "mujhe aapse shaandi nahi karni hai "😂😂

Dialogues are too lengthy but many did like them 😆.

sorry sorry for the late reply mein abhi dekha yeah ss

it superb yaar i really loved it

sai neh kya plan banadiya and finally virat ki samneh omi neh galati she bola sach ,

looking forward to read more

Originally posted by: linakusharberry

sorry sorry for the late reply mein abhi dekha yeah ss

it superb yaar i really loved it

sai neh kya plan banadiya and finally virat ki samneh omi neh galati she bola sach ,

looking forward to read more

Hey, np

Thanks for reading and commenting dear ❤❤

When r u going to update the next part

Laksh?? I'm eagerly waiting 😌 😊

Plzz update 😊😊