Bariyan a ShiVi ficton [Completed]- Page 14

Yay beautiful update!! I really like how they are slowly taking steps to be a family but still manage to always fight 😆

Shiva and Kesar ki chaker 😆 But now he's the one that's jealous.

It was really funny! Thank you

This was sooo good, they are already in love but now they are realizing it , please give more jealous shiva and Raavi scene 😳, do continue soon please.

Love, Neha. ❤️

It was awesome. You penned it down amazingly. The dialogues were so organic. ❤️

It was fun reading the chapter. Shivi's evolution.... That moment was so sweet and well executed.

Each character was so authentic.

Loved it.

Do update soon. 🤗

Beautiful update👏

Shivi, Krish & Kesar part in haveli was hilarious😆

The dialogues were so apt and hilarious🤣

Loved how smoothly Shivi's relationship is changing❤️

Shivi's bike moment was beautiful

Gautam's dialogue about future khandan was hilarious😆

Shiva is jealous, let's see what Raavi will do to settle the score

Waiting for next

The entire time I was reading it, I had a huge smile playing on my lips.❤️

Lovely part 👏

I'm waiting to read the next part...

Do update soon dear.

When are you updating next?

update today plz plz

cant wait to read more

It was super duper awesome.loved it.

looks like Shivi are falling for each other 😍

Jealous Ranveer Singh 😂

please update sooon!