FF: PALLAVI by Jalebi Jane SEE NOTE PAGE 117 - Page 84

Originally posted by: libran90

JJ, what did you mean by Baba's revenge?? What revenge could he possibly take from Pallavi? What does he have to offer except his house and his god forsaken shop?

Mea culpa. I got ahead of myself. Please ignore that.

Originally posted by: Kavita99

Revenge 🤔which episode u r tlking about?

Subscriber email. Read that, hence asked.

Originally posted by: Kavita99

Revenge 🤔which episode u r tlking about?

It was a mistake on my part. Don't worry about it---I've made the adjustment.

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Epi-41

Could you please share how you have the skill of making my heart pound in the last few chapters & making it go all dhak-dhak in the Next One 🤪.

The way Raghav cared about Pallavi in a public place without thinking of anyone else present around, his only concern was she was hurt.

Baba made an entry & so did Nikhil. I had totally forgotten about the D-Fam cos of the blissful world you created for our RaghVi in the last few chapters

Ofcourse, Baba is as dumb as a... well, I don't find any object currently dumber than him. Shouting infront of a whole hospital as if it's his Deshmukh Villa where he brandishes orders like a King. I hope that day isn't far where Raghav actually calls him Sanki Rambo in your FF as well🤣. I liked how both Pallavi & Raghav basically put Baba in his place by not allowing him to intervene in their conversation; like he didn't exist in their sphere. Only the two of them did . And and, I also like how you addressed that without Gorilla, Raghav wouldn't have found Pallavi

Would love to see Junior College Nikhil also have a short conversation with Pallavi regarding Raghav. I would love to see his brotherly concern but him be happy if she is.

Our Gorilla is safe! Phew .... Waiting for the next Update jaldi jaldi...till then I'll go & read Episodes 36-41 again for they were my favourites.

Thank you for your comment. Yes, I was glad to have the opportunity to include that bit---that Gorilla essentially was responsible for bringing Raghav and Undisguised-Pallavi together. They'll have to name one of their children Gorilla in honour of him ;-)

Nikhil and Pallavi will probably have a scene together---but it will be towards the end.

I love what you say about Raghav's confidence in front of Baba. This relates to the reason I made him in his mid-thirties. A younger man probably would not be able to carry that off. It was important to me that someone points out to Baba that Pallavi should make her own decisions. It's also important to me that Raghav is not correct in his language and conduct. Though I no longer watch MHRW, one of the reasons I was attracted to the tv-Raghav was that he is a good man without being caught up in mannered behaviour.

Originally posted by: JalebiJane

Mea culpa. I got ahead of myself. Please ignore that.

Noted JJ.😊

Originally posted by: JalebiJane

Thank you for your comment. Yes, I was glad to have the opportunity to include that bit---that Gorilla essentially was responsible for bringing Raghav and Undisguised-Pallavi together. They'll have to name one of their children Gorilla in honour of him ;-)

Nikhil and Pallavi will probably have a scene together---but it will be towards the end.

I love what you say about Raghav's confidence in front of Baba. This relates to the reason I made him in his mid-thirties. A younger man probably would not be able to carry that off. It was important to me that someone points out to Baba that Pallavi should make her own decisions. It's also important to me that Raghav is not correct in his language and conduct. Though I no longer watch MHRW, one of the reasons I was attracted to the tv-Raghav was that he is a good man without being caught up in mannered behaviour.

Raghav's Amma, our dear Jaya Rao might certainly have a heart-attack if one of her grandchildren are named 'Gorilla'😆 . I totally understood when you had initially stated that Raghav would be in his mid-thirties. The confidence that he'll have is the backbone of his character & a younger one wouldn't have achieved so much as a Don so soon. Rest assured, even if I might not type it in, I notice all the small nuances & certain parallels that you have in your FF from the series🙈. I'm too involved in details of anything that I read, also the reason why I love your writing ♥️ . This is the kind of Raghav that even I had hoped the character would remain as, cos it was depicted this way in the starting episodes.

One more thing that I wanted to say was, as such, there's a 11 year gap between Pallavi & Raghav. Though right now in their care for each other, it doesn't matter, I would love to see how you look into that aspect of them as a couple too cos I find your writings quite close to reality. But that's something to be addressed quite later in the FF, not now.

Episode 41 42 and 43

Thank God my gorilla is safe ...will he be paired with Krishna or something ???

I like the confidence he showed in front of Baba

..he did not feel uncomfortable at all

Glad that the Mandhar stuff came out

What aaai said was great but can she really so in practise ?

Baba in the beginning gave excuses for him and only when mandhar opinion on him and Nik opinion on this dad came out I guess Baba felt guilty

I hope pallu does not accept this deal ..this will not even be 50 percent of her inheritance plus how will they old people survive . It is best that she goes with what was decided along with RR and take it from the person who wronged her ..all of it and if possible interest too

Wow u made my Sunday

Love and hugs

Stay safe

I have a doubt, how can baba sell the shop when he is clearly not its owner?? Can someone please explain it.