FF: PALLAVI by Jalebi Jane SEE NOTE PAGE 117 - Page 81

Originally posted by: Mysterie_girl

Don't let gorilla die...please please (puppy eyes)

“We call him Gorilla. He won’t die.”

Episode 40

Gorilla is one of my fav characters apart from Nik 💕

Hope he is fine ..I am.sure his Anna will make sure he is saved

So gorilla will make a place in his vanhi heart 💖☺️

Stay safe ❤️

Awesome update.

I can see them emotionally connecting. I hold gorilla survive.

Originally posted by: JalebiJane

Thank you for your kind comment, Sister. When my country's first lockdown [March 2020], I resolved to read more---and what have I done? Sign up for hotstar!! Yikes!

Your comment has inspired me to recommit to that resolution. So thank you!!

You are welcome! Have you followed up the resolution?

We too went into first lockdown in March 2020 and my plan was to continue with my fitness workouts. First lockdown I did but after that not at all lol. Instead I got into watching Hindi movies and a few serials, which I rarely watched before. The latter is what brought me to this forum and now reading your work!!

I refused to sign up to Hotstar or Netflix though purely because I knew I’d be totally glued to the screen!

Anyway, I just caught up on chapters 31- 40. Loved all of them! I really like how Pallavi’s character is taking shape. Eagerly waiting for Mumbai but what are you doing with my Gorilla😥. Is he still Gorilla though, few TV episodes ago RR refered to him as Elephant😂

Originally posted by: JalebiJane

“We call him Gorilla. He won’t die.”

Fir thik hai...I am happy happy 😆

Originally posted by: PinkOrchid

You are welcome! Have you followed up the resolution?

We too went into first lockdown in March 2020 and my plan was to continue with my fitness workouts. First lockdown I did but after that not at all lol. Instead I got into watching Hindi movies and a few serials, which I rarely watched before. The latter is what brought me to this forum and now reading your work!!

I refused to sign up to Hotstar or Netflix though purely because I knew I’d be totally glued to the screen!

Anyway, I just caught up on chapters 31- 40. Loved all of them! I really like how Pallavi’s character is taking shape. Eagerly waiting for Mumbai but what are you doing with my Gorilla😥. Is he still Gorilla though, few TV episodes ago RR refered to him as Elephant😂

I totally agree. Streaming services are too addictive. I've started to read before bed. Currently reading short stories. James Joyce's -Dubliners-. I begin spring/summer semester at Uni at the end of May so that will help me quit the screen cold-turkey---also why I need to complete PALLAVI before then.
Now---if I could only get on the treadmill more often! sigh

Originally posted by: PinkOrchid

Eagerly waiting for Mumbai but what are you doing with my Gorilla😥. Is he still Gorilla though, few TV episodes ago RR refered to him as Elephant😂

To me he will always be 'My Gorilla' :-)

That's what I thought!!😎

We won't be getting Mumbai scenes so soon & Mandar also paying for his deeds so early on. No but it's 40 chapters already but Damn! It doesn't feel like it 👏

Wow, the way you described the whole intro scene of Raghav & his Men together, it felt like we're sitting in a very tensed situation where a proper plan is being constructed which it was👏 .

We get a Hospital Scene☺️ .

I see that you have Changed the About part of Pallavi now. So did it come with the way the story's flowing now or was it always the intention??

Waiting for Epi-41 now cos well just can't wait

Beautiful chapters 36-40.u r an amazing writer.

Originally posted by: SONIA441

That's what I thought!!😎

We won't be getting Mumbai scenes so soon & Mandar also paying for his deeds so early on. No but it's 40 chapters already but Damn! It doesn't feel like it 👏

Wow, the way you described the whole intro scene of Raghav & his Men together, it felt like we're sitting in a very tensed situation where a proper plan is being constructed which it was👏 .

We get a Hospital Scene☺️ .

I see that you have Changed the About part of Pallavi now. So did it come with the way the story's flowing now or was it always the intention??

Waiting for Epi-41 now cos well just can't wait

Thank you for our comment, Sister.

Yes, I wanted a proper war-room scene---so the later raid seems credible. I also like my heroes to display their power.

The ABOUT PALLAVI description was recently changed. I reached out to subscribers for input because I wasn't pleased with my original description. This one about the unlikely union of a widow and gangster feels better. For now--- :-)