ShiVi OS: Hasi Ban Gaye - Page 4

Originally posted by: hedwig_potter

Its awesome!!😍😍

I totally loved it❤️❤️

thank you! ❤️

Originally posted by: katheriene

Beautiful os👏

Shiva promised to bring Raavi's smile❤️

Loved Shivi's past moment

thank you! ❤️

Originally posted by: .Rangeeli.

How sweet was this! I loved reading this so much. Thank you for writing this! <3

thank you! i'm glad you liked it ❤️

Originally posted by: Foxii

You guys are so creative :)

I liked Shivas thoughts - Raavi indeed has lost her trueself because of Dev.

She would have to control her laughter which really is wrong

Glad he knew that its not love what Raavi has been feeling for Dev

Hasi ban gaye - Apt Title♥️♥️

thank you so much! ❤️

Originally posted by: Hanyshah

Oh my heart 🥺♥️

I loved this ! I loved how you split it into both their perspectives. How Raavi is slowly realising that she never felt this way before, not even with Dev ! And she is slowly coming to see different sides of her husband. That he's HOT too is just a bonus.

And Shiva ! Haaye mein marjavaa 🥺

A rough and tough exterior with a gooey warm inside. Him seeing his wife as a woman for the first time got him mesmerised ! Boy was ready to lose control 😂

But he knew, before anything can begin between them, he needs to get Raavi back to her bubbly self first ! He made a vow and that was just the sweetest ! If this is what he does for someone he declared to hate, then imagine how far he is willing to go when he falls in love ♥️😍♥️

Oh and I forgot ! That comparison though ! How Raavi knew that with Shiva she never has a filter and how Shiva observed that Raavi has to change to be with Dev ! It shows that Raavi has always meant to be with Shiva and not Dev, as she is comfortable in her own skin with him ♥️♥️

Great job ! It was such a treat to read this ♥️♥️

thank you so much!

i loved your detailed comment ❤️

Originally posted by: DesiiiiGirllll

So sweet this is!

Shiva bring back Raavi’s smile 🥺

thank you! ❤️

Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel

This OS was so beautiful❤️

I would like to read ahead of this. How will he bring her happiness

If possible continue.

And the flashback was so nice. Yes Raavi always collide into Shiva. Always.

Let's see when will they understand this that what they had between them was more intense and passionate rather than what she felt for Dev

thank you so much! ❤️

i don't really have any ideas yet on how to continue this 😆

Originally posted by: Raingoddess

Loved it!! ❤️ You know how much I love ShiVi stories that go into the past!! But hands down my favorite line is:

“Tere jaise maun vrat nahi rakh sakte bhai hum” 🤣

Keep writing more 🤍

Thank you!

I added that line on an impulse after seeing Dev insisting on maintaining a steadfast silence, come what may 🤢😆

Originally posted by: mpks1

Beautifully written! I am amazed at the creativity of the writers like you in this forum. Glad we got to see the continuation of Shiva’s laughter scene and what happens after. Keep writing.

Thank you so much! ❤️

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

Aaliya...I hope I got your name right

This is such a beautiful update....I loved the transition between Shiva and Raavi...the memories each one of them imagined

Loved the update....do write more❤️

Thank you Priya! Yup, that's my name