Fictional Paradise CC #21 (IO) - Page 15

Originally posted by: Shivi72

Yeah sure ...even others too can suggest

Let cut darsh's skin and add chili powder when his pain reduce another cut and add salt...

Originally posted by: Andetheres

Please don’t kill him ..

he should survive to die everyday ...

he should feel useless and beg for his freedom to die .....

roli should chop his limbs off ... I know this is cruel but he deserves it .. And aanya should Cut off his genitals too ..

Then ... will think and say

Yes he should ask freedom to die... How he made roli and aanya...

Originally posted by: Andetheres

I kinda thought that when sid revealed the truth to shree !!
thank you for not making sid fall in our eyes ...

but for the permanent guilt ( for sure this will strike in my mind whenever I re-read ur story ) in which I am feeling because of bashing sid for the momentary sin which we thought sid did ...

As later everyone would have expected a happy ending but I can't justify that if I hadn't stopped Sid and all your thoughts were coinciding with mine so I felt happy seeing you all giving the reaction what I expected

Originally posted by: Andetheres

Already I love him from this update more and more !!

Chlo happy that your level bar of hatred got broken

Originally posted by: Andetheres

I am sorry .. I was so dumb enough to not think about it .. as before also he had neglected her wounds and fear

It's ok... now leave it truth is revealed naa..

Well writing her jumping part I first thought not to focus on her injuries as you all might ask that why did I specifically mentioned about black color suit ... but later thought ok let's give otherwise late it'll for me only to connect all the points ... infact in this chapter it literally made me mad I keep reading previous chapters just to make sure that I didn't missed any point and finally I didn't 🥳

Originally posted by: Andetheres

Please don’t kill him ..

he should survive to die everyday ...

he should feel useless and beg for his freedom to die .....

roli should chop his limbs off ... I know this is cruel but he deserves it .. And aanya should Cut off his genitals too ..

Then ... will think and say

Won't kill him soon until he begs in his every breath

Originally posted by: Soujanya_ROSID

Let cut darsh's skin and add chili powder when his pain reduce another cut and add salt...

I'll keep up all your suggestions in notes so that can include later 😉

Originally posted by: Soujanya_ROSID

Yes he should ask freedom to die... How he made roli and aanya...

Yeah but unfortunately he won't get any freedom 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Shivi72

It's ok... now leave it truth is revealed naa..

Well writing her jumping part I first thought not to focus on her injuries as you all might ask that why did I specifically mentioned about black color suit ... but later thought ok let's give otherwise late it'll for me only to connect all the points ... infact in this chapter it literally made me mad I keep reading previous chapters just to make sure that I didn't missed any point and finally I didn't 🥳

Hats off your work... 👏👏👏👏

Originally posted by: Shivi72

I'll keep up all your suggestions in notes so that can include later 😉

Yeah note it.... When any suggestions come to mind will tell you....