ShAkhi FF | Deserve to be loved? | Chapter 13 - pg 44|*Updated* - Page 8

Originally posted by: swetamwari

absolutely loved it!! You are really talented..kept me engrossed throughout!!

Thank you so much! ❤

@bold- means a lot. 🤩

Originally posted by: Abhavi0821

Hey , this was so sweet !!

Please continue soon :)

Thanks a lot ❤

Originally posted by: Coffee_Chips

I enjoyed this long chapter & you should continue the same way too I suggest 😅✌🏻

I was thinking the chapter would end now, gonna end now but it didn't. Shaurya seeing Anokhi for the first time, I could imagine & it was beautifully written as well 😊 Their uncomfortability was so cute 🤣 Shaurya is so full of himself & now wonder Anokhi hesitated to talk with him

The entire flight sequence was gold. Her holding his hand for support to him handing his jacket to Anokhi 😆 This chapter was interesting & entertaining 😊

Continue when you've time.

@bold- believe me when I say, I try this a lot. 😅 I have this draft of the chapter, some scenes that I want to wrap up in the same update only. But it just stretches out contrary to the expectations and the update sometimes becomes too long or too short. 😂😂 I'm working on this though! 😅

@red- Thanks for sharing your thoughts and feedback on the scenes. To be honest, I desperately wanted shaurya's POV about Anokhi to be the star of this update and I'm glad it did.

For the flight sequence, I enjoyed writing that as well. 😂😂

Thank you for the love! ❤

Originally posted by: Bhavisweet03

It's beautiful update❤️

Here you have portrayed Aastha and Shaan's relation and even Aastha Shaurya's realtion so beautifully.

Loved the part where Aastha is consoling Anokhi when she feels sad during packing time.

Shaurya Ahir Yash's friendship also worthy to read.

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I loved ShaKhi scene in the car. The way Anokhi is praising his look but couldn't able to tell him. And meantime Shaurya also feelings that how can she doesn't even look at him and not talking a little bit. That whole scene is wholesome 😍

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Ahasan both are sitting together in flight. I can imagine how she holds his hand during take off😍😍

So finally their journey started❤️

Beautiful update. Waiting for next🤗

@bold- i love their bonding both onscreen and offscreen. Though the concept is different, i didn't want to leave this element. So, i tried including it here as well. Glad to know that you liked it.😇

@blue- Wanted shaurya to have some friends yar! Somebody should be there with whom he could share anything without any burden or fear. You will be getting Shauhir a lot in this story 😂😂

@ red- thanks for sharing your thoughts on the scenes. Shaurya had created the walls himself and now he wants her to break them, but that can't happen right? 😂..Now he has to bear the brunt of his ignorance. 😂😂

I wanted the hand holding scene for once to not be romantic. So tried something new. 😂😂

Thank you for the review!

Keep supporting. ❤

Originally posted by: 8629025122

Words are crafted very beautifully....Its a amazing word.. Hope for soonish update...

Thanks a lot. Means a lot. ❤❤

I will try updating soon. Right now, i'm focussing on my other story.

Originally posted by: Prizi

Amazing update dear

Thank you ❤

Originally posted by: anjalivaswani

nice one.. update soon

Thanks a lot ❤

Very interesting story. Looking forward to reading more of it.

Love Preet ❤

Absolutely loved it 💗

When will you post the next chapter??