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Story based on pakhi ki pol khol ........


(Ye os padne se pahle mein clear kr du ki mein kisi k emotions ko hurt nhi karna chahti.... Ye sirf mere kuch point of views hai. ..... Serial me pakhi ki harakatein dekh kr bs dil kiya likhne ka to ye likh diya.... Koi dil pr mat lena....) 


Sai k jane k baad virat ne pakhi ko mana kr diya uske liye night me khana lane ko. 


Sai return home and take care of virat. 


Sai or virat k beech ab sb theek ho raha hai. ab unki deal wali shadi dil wali Shadi hone lagi hai or dono ek dusre ke saath quality time spend karte hai. 


Virat pakhi se distance banane lagta hai. Or ab vo pakhi ko uske or sai k beech interfere karne se rokta hai. or sai ka saath deta hai. 


But pakhi as pakhi vo abhi v moka dhundti rahti hai sai ki insult karne ka..... 


OS start.... 


Sai return from her medical camp.


Virat notice sai is restless after return from her medical camp . Virat sai se reason puchta hai pr kuch na kuch esa ho jata hai ki sai or virat baat nhi kr pate. 


Kaku ne ghar pr next day virat k liye puja rakhi hai . 


All family members including sunny & pakhi's parents are present in living room (or their fighting room) . 


Sai puja ki preparation me busy hai. Sai khushi khushi pure dil se sare arrangements kr rahi hai. Or ashwini mohit and shivani bua ye sb dekh kr bahut khush hai. Or virat apni biwi ko niharne me busy hai... Or pakhi jealous ho rahi hai or soch rahi hai ki kya kere jisse sai ki insult ho or ghar wale sai ko sunaaye.... 


Ashwini- are wah sai tune to sari tiyaari kr li or vo v kitne badiya tarike se ki hai. Kya baat hai... 


Sai- dekhiye na ayi sb theek se to haina mein nhi chahti ki kuch v kami rah jaye. Or phir se virat sir kisi problem me phas jaye... 


Virat feel happy after listing this.


Kya baat hai bhai aaj sai bhabhi kuch jayada hi josh me kaam nhi kr rahi... Sunny teased virat... 


Ashwini- sb kuch sahi hai.... Or kyo na ho tune itni mahant se jo kiya hai. 


Pakhi- badi mami mein kal ki puja k prasaad k liye laddu bana leti hu subha bahut kaam hoga na. 


Koi jarurat nhi hai pakhi didi bs yaha ka kaam ho jaye phir mein prasaad bana lungi. Aap fikar mat kijiye... Sai interrupted. 


Pakhi ( angrily)-sai mene tumse nhi pucha.or kya ho jayega yadi me prasaad bana dungi. 


Sai- aap gussa kyo ho rahi hai mene to pahle hi kaha tha ki kal ki puja ki sari preparation mein karungi or kaku ne v permission de di thi. Ab kya aap kaku ki baat v nhi sunengi . 


Aap na rest kijiye vese v aap to roj hi kaam karti hai. Kal ki pooja ka sara kaam mein kr lungi. 


Kaku - pahli baar iss ladki ne kuch sahi kaha hai patralekha tum aaram karo.


Pakhi fumes in anger. 


Sai(caring) -virat sir aapne apni medicine li. 


Virat- sai... Vo mei... mein bho.... bhool gya sorry. 


Sai (angry cum caring)- virat sir aap v na aap esa kese Medicine lena bhool sakte hai. Pata hai na pura dose complete krna hai. Nhi to aapki recovery kese hogi. 


Virat- sai ab bhool gya to bhool gya or vese v kitni kadwi hai or tum daatn kyo rahi ho. 


Sai(fake angrily)-aap galti kare or mein gussa v na karu or dawai kadwi nhi to kya meethi hogi. Or agar aapne esi laparvahi phir se ki to sirf gussa nhi karungi aapko kadwi dawai k saath saath karele ka juice v pina padega samjhe aap. 


Virat try to say something... But pakhi interrupted


Pakhi(angrily) - sai tum ye kese baat kr rahi ho virat se. tum ese sbke sammne virat ki bezati nhi kr sakti. 


Virat(Irritatingly) - bezati... Pakhi sai ne esa kuch nahi kaha jise meri bazati ho. Tum galat samjh rahi ho(. 


Pakhi- virat tum to rahne do sai kuch v kare tumhhe kuch galat nhi lagta. Tumse to baat karni hi bekaar hai... 


(Sai interrupted) 


to mat kijiye na baat virat sir se pakhi didi Kisi ne aapko invitation nhi diya hai. Or yaha kisi or ko to nhi laga ki mein virat sir ki bezati kr rahi hu. 


Or aap na aapne ye bezati puraan band kijiye. Kabhi Apko lagta hai mein aapki bezati karti hu kabhi ghar walo ki kabhi virat sir ki. 


Pakhi-sai tum mujhe iss tarah baat nhi kr sakti. 


Or app v iss tarah ek pati patni ki baaton k beech nhi bol sakti. Samjhi aap. Sai interrupted. 


Pakhi- sai mujhe koi shok nhi hai beech mein bolne ka. Ya tum se baat karne ka 


Sai(lil high tone) - to mat kijiye na baat pakhi didi or vese v aap hi hai jo hum pati patni ki baaton k beech me aa jati hai. 


Pakhi - tum kahna kya chahti ho saaf saaf kaho. 


Sai -rahne dijiye pakhi didi agar mene aaj kuch v kaha to sach me aapki bezati ho jayegi or vo v asli wali.. 


Pakhi (now crying) - Dekh rahe ho virat tumhaari biwi kya kah rahi hai. Or sai tumhe jo v kahna hai saaf saaf kaho. 


Virat-sai jaane do hum baad me baat karenge mein nhi chahta ki koi tamasha ho. 


Sai - nhi virat sir agar iss baar jane diya to pakhi didi hamesha yuhi hamare beech bolti rahengi or baar baar hamaare beech misunderstanding hongi. 


ye galat hai or aaj ye baat pakhi didi ko samjhni hogi. Or aaj aap kuch nhi bolenge. 


Pakhi didi kitni baar ayi ne or mene aapko akele me samjhya hai ki aap ye jo hamesha virat sir or meri life me interfere krti rahti hai vo band kriye. Lekin nahi aapko to kuch Samjhne ko tiyar hi nhi hai. to phir theek hai aaj Sare ghar walo ke samne mein aapko aache se samjha rahi hu ki meri or virat sir ki life me interfere karana band kijiye. 


Kyoki aap ab kitni v kosis kr lijiye hamaare beech misunderstanding create nhi hongi. Kuch hasil nhi hoga aapko balki ek din aap apni hi nazaron me gir jayengi. 


Kaku - ye ladki kahna kya chahti hai tu. 


Sai- kaku fikr mat kijiye aaj mein saaf saaf baat krungi. Taki future me sb sahi rahe. 


To haa pakhi didi ab jo v hai uske baare me sb k samne saaf saaf baat karte hai.


Aao na mere kuch sawalo k jabaab de dijiye.


 Mera pahla sawal 


Aap hoti kon hai hum pati patni ki baaton pr apni visesh tippani dene wali. 


Pakhi- sai tum bhool rahi hi ki virat mera dost hai. 


Sai - bhool to aap rahi hai pakhi didi ki virat sir apke dost hone k saath saath apke dever v hai or aap unki vahini hai. yaad hai na aapko ki aap virat sir k bade bhai ki biwi hai. 


Pakhi (shoked and angrily) - sai mu...mujhe yaad hai 


Sai- pr aapki harakatein dekh kr to esa nhi lagta ki aapko kuch v yaad hai. Kher jane dijiye aaj k baad apko sb acche se yaad rahega. 


Pakhi didi aap jis rishte ki vajah se iss ghar me hai kam se kam uski thodi to izzat kr lijiye.... 


Aap iss ghar me samrat dada ki wife hone k nate raha rahi hai ..to kam se kam samrat dada k bare me thoda to soch kiya kijiye... 


Jitni fikr aap virat sir ki karti hai yadi uska 1% v samrat dada ki fikr ki hoti to aaj vo yaha hamaare saath hote.... Ya phir aap chahti hi nahi hai ki samrat dada iss ghar me vapas aaye... Kyonki yadi samrat dada vapas aa gye to kya aap jitni relax ho kr abhi iss ghar me rah rahi hai unke aane k baad v ese hi rah payengi... 


Pakhi ( angrily ) - sai tum hoti kon ho mere or samrat k bare me kuch v bolne wali or kisne kaha ki mujhe samrat ki koi fikr nhi hai... 


Sai- pakhi didi yadi aap mujhe sawal kr sakti hai to phir aap v jabaab dene k liye ready rahiye. 


Or sach me aapko samrat dada ki fikr hai.... Esa lagta to nhi hai.... Aap hi bataiye ki itne dino me kitni baar aapne mansi bua se baat ki... .. 


Mansi bua aap hi bataiye ki kya kabhi pakhi didi ne aapke paas beth kr baat ki . Kabhi kaha ho ki ayi aap fikr mat kijiye samrat jaldi vapas aa jayega.... 


Mansi bua- nod her head in no.... 


Sun lijiye pakhi didi.... Aapne mansi bua se aaj tk samrat dada k bare me baat nhi ki... Sayad aapko samrat dada k bare me baat karne k yaad hi nhi rahta hoga. 


Haa pr jb aap jb aapko virat sir se attention ya sympathy chahiye hoti thi tb aapki samrat dada ki yaad jati thi..... Jese aadhi raat ko hamere room me aa kr samrat dada k bare me baat karana ho ya phir vo ladakh trip pr jana..... Seriously aap sach me ladakh samrat dada k liye jana chahti thi... 


Pakhi- haa mein samrat k kaam k liye hi ladakh ja rahi thi... 


Sai - jhooth.... Agar aap samrat dada k liye ja rahi hoti to vo trip kabhi cancel nhi kari... Or aapne trip cancel kyo ki kyonki mein yani virat sir ki wife unke saath ja rahi thi.... Are iss baat se to apko koi fark hi nhi padna chahiye tha..... Pr aapko fark pada... Kyo??? 


Sai- kaku aapko kya lagta hai pakhi didi aapka ye jo itna saath deti hai or mere itne against rahti hai esa kyo hai.... 


Kaku- haa kyonki Tu parivaar k bare me nhi sochti or hamesha ladti rahti hai.... 


Sai- chaliye kaku aaj aapki ye galatfahami door ke deti hu... 


Kaku maan lijiye agar virat sir ne mujhe shadi nhi ki hoti to aap unki shadi karaati ya unhein ese hi akela (single) rahne deti


Kaku- ye kesa sawal hai kyo nhi karati virat ki shadi .mein to ek acchi sarvagun sampann maratha ladki se virat ki shadi karati. 


Sai (with a smile)- pakhi didi phir to aapko mujhe thanku bolana chahiye ki virat sir ki shadi mujhe hui... Agar virat sir ki shadi kaku ki pasand ki ladki se hoti to aapka asli chara sbke samne aa jata... 


Kaku - kya matlab hai tera... 


Sai - kaku seedha sa matlab hai agar yaha meri jagah aap ki pasand ki koi or v ladki hoti tb v pakhi didi ko itni hi prblm hoti.... Kyoki inhein mujhe problem nhi hai.... Inki problm to iss baat se hai ki mein virat sir ki biwi hu... Sach kaha na mene pakhi didi. 


Ab pakhi k chahre ka rang udh jata hai or vo thoda ghabra jati hai ki ab kahi sbko uska sach na pata chal jaye.... 


Sai- pakhi didi aap na hamesha mere aaba ki parwrish pr sawal karti rahti hai to aaj mein v ek baat kahna chahati hu... 


Sai looked pakhi parents and said sorry uncle aunty mein aapse esa kuch nhi kahna chahti thi jisse aapko bura lage ya aapka apmaan ho pr aapki beti ne mere or virat sir k beech jo misunderstanding create ki thi or abhi v vo apni harkaton se baaj nhi aa rahi hai to unhone mujhe majboor kr diya hai ki mein aaj ye baat kahu. 


Pakhi didi agar aapke ayi baba ki jagha mere aaba hote na or vo dekhte ki unki beti apni rishton ki maryaada bhool rahi hai to mujhe ek thappad lagate or mujhe sahi or galat me fark samjhate. 


Pakhi- sai tum ese mere ayi baba se baat nhi kr sakti. 


Sai- pakhi didi mene unn se pahle hi maafi maag li thi . Or ye jo v ho raha hai uske liye aap hi jimmedaar hai. Agar aapne apne rishton ki maryaada ka maan rakha hota to aaj ye nobat aati hi nhi. 


Sai - kyo pakhi didi kyo agar aap samrat dada se shadi karne k liye dil se ready thi hi nhi to haa kyo ki.. 


Or rahi baat aapke or virat sir ki... to kya sach mein aapko lagta hai aap virat sir se pyaar karti hai... 


Pakhi and virat shoked and looked each other.. And other looking them confusing.... 


Aap sb ese kyo dekh rahe hai inn dono ko .... Mein jo kah rahi hu vohi sach hai . Pakhi didi or virat sir sir dost nhi hai ye dono ek dusre se pyaar karte the... Sai said 


 Or haa pakhi didi agar aap virat sir se sach me pyar krti to jb unhone phone pr apki awaj nhi pahchni thi to aap unka no. block nhi kr deti.... Or na hi ek hafte me kisi or se shadi k liye haa kr deti... 


Are log to pyaar me puri jindgi intzaar kr lete hai or aap ne 7 dino me hi kisi or se shadi k liye haa kr di.... 


Or jo aap virat sir ko hamesha apni iss halat k liye responsible batati rahti hai... To aap khud responsible hai apni iss halat k liye or koi nhi.... 


maan lijiye virat sir aapki or samrat dada ki haldi me na mil kr seedhe apki or samrat dada ki shadi k baad milte to kya karti aap.... Phir kisko apni iss halat ka jimmedaar tahrati....To please virat sir k samne ye victim or bechaari banane ka naatak band kijiye... 


Or haa virat sir iss sb me aapki v kahi na kahi galti hai jb aapko samrat dada ki shadi se phale hi sach pata chal gya to or pahki didi ne v samrat dada se shadi karne se mana kr diya tha tb aapne kya kiya samrat dada ka dil na toot jaye isliye aap ne v pakhi didi se shadi karne se mana kr diya or vo vaad kr diya ...... Or aapke usi vaade k karan pakhi didi ne samrat dada se shadi kr li taki vo shadi k baad iss ghar me aakr aapke aas paas rah sake. 


Or pakhi didi aap apko virat sir ka vo vaada yaad hai pr ye yaad nhi hai ki virat sir ne aapse kaha tha ki vo puri jindgi aapke acche dost bankr rahenge.... 


Phir kyo baar baar aap virat sir se puchti rahti hai ki virat tumhari jindgi me meri kya jagah hai.... Are kya matlab hai ese sawal ka


Aap itna v nahi samjh payi ki jo bhai apne bhai ki khushi ke liye aapse shadi krne se mana kr sakta hai vo usi bhai ki patni ko kya jagah dega apni jindgi me..... Or kya jagah lena chahati thi aap virat sir ki jindgi me unke bhai se shadi krne k baad... Aap ye jo virat sir ko apna dost bolti rahti hai mujhe to aapki dost ki definition hi samjh nhi aati. 


Kitni baar or kitne Sare logo na aapse pucha tha ki aap iss shadi se khus to hai.... Yaad hai na aapko...


Shivani bua ne v aapse pucha tha na ki aap ye shadi apni marzi se kr rahi hai ya nhi. Tb to aapne bade jor de kr kaha tha ki haa aap ye shadi apni marzi kr rahi hai.... 


(All remember that scene..... ) 


Or shivani bua ka to chhodiye samrat dada ne khud aapse saaf saaf pucha tha ki aap iss shadi se khus hai ya nhi .... agar aap ye shadi nhi karna chahti to bol dijiye vo bahar jakar kah dengein ki unhein ladki pasand nhi hai... Tb v aapne unse kaha ki esi koi baat nhi hai.... 


Agar aap shadi ko lekr confused thi to saaf saaf samrat dada ko bol deti kyo unki life barbaad kr di.... Kyo nhi bata diya aapne unhein ki aap kisi or ko pasand karti hai or Γ pko thoda time chahiye... Are jis insaan se aap sahdi kr rahi hai use to sach bata deti.theek vese hi jese virat sir ne mujhe bata diya tha. 


Virat sir ne apne or mere rishte ki neeb sach pr rakhi thi jbki hum dono ka rista to deal wala tha.... 


Or aap ne kya kiya aap to samrat dada se apni marzi se shadi kr rahi thi to phir kyo aapne unhein andhere me rakha..... 


Yahi antar hai aap me or virat sir me. .. 


Ab sb pakhi ko sb saq ki nigahon se dekh rahe the sbki aakhon me dher Sare sawal the.... 


Pakhi ab Kuch v bolne ki halat me nhi yhi use samjh nhi aa raha ki bo ab kisse kya kahe.... 


Mera agla sawal


Aapko yaad hai ek baar aapne virat sir se pucha tha ki mujse (sai) se shadi karne unhein kya mila.... 


To aaj mein aapse puchti hu ki samrat dada ko apse shadi karke kya mila..... 


All are shoked


Pakhi(shoked) -.... No response


Sai -koi jabaab nhi haina pakhi didi.... 


Koi baat nhi mein iska jawab deti hu. 


Kuch nhi mila samrat dada ko aapse shadi krke. Infect unhein to apna ghar or gharwalo ko v chod kr jana pada.... 


Again all are hell shoked. 


Kaku- ye ladki jo kuch v samrat k saath hua usme Patrlekha ka kya kasoor hai. Samrat to apni duty pr gya tha or uha uske saath.... 


Sai - kaku seriously aapko lagta hai ki samrat such me abhi tk MIA hai... Mein samrat dada ko jayada nhi janti jitna v suna hai virat sir se or aap sb se suna hai ki samrat dada ek brave army officer hai. .... Pr aap sb to unhein bahut aache se jante hai to sochiye kya sach me esa ho sakta hai ki itne time tk samrat dada ki koi khabar tk nhi aayi..... 


(Ab sb sochte hai ki sai ne jo kaha.....) 


Baba aap na ek baar samrat dada ke senior officer mr. sood se poochiye ki samrat dada ne khud se apni chhutiyaan cancel nhi ki thi. 


(Sorry i dont remember his designation..) 


Kaku- haa haa ninaad phone kr k poocho humein v to pata chale ki ye ladki itni bakwas kyo kr rahi hai. 


Ninaad call officer sood and turn on speaker mode..


S- hello. 


N- hello me. Sood aaj mene aapse kuch important baat puchne k liye phone kiya hai. Or umeed karata hu ki tum apne dost se sach bolenge. 


S - ninaad tum esa kyo bol rahe ho. Jo v puchna hai pucho mein sach hi bolunga. 


N- kya us din samrat ka duty join karna sach me jaruri tha. 


S-..... After a pause... Nhi koi emergency nahi thi. Vo to samrat ne khud mujhe phone kiya tha ki vo duty join karna chahta hai.... Or usne hi request ki thi mein tum logo se kuch na kahu. 


(All are shoked after listening this...) 


Or ek baat samrat MIA v nahi hai. Usne army se resign kr diya hai or ab mujhe v nhi pata ki vo kaha hai.... 


Sorry ninaad pr samrat ne khud mujhe request ki thi ki mein tum ab se yahi kahu ki vo MIA hai.. Isliye mein v yhi kaha. . 


N- thanku ye ab batane k liye... Mein tumse baad me baat karta hu Bye


Call end. 


A pin drop silent for some time.... 


Sai meri wali baat to mene hi tumhin batayi thi pr samrat ne v pakhi se pucha tha ye tumhein kese pata vo to mene tumhe nhi batayi phir kisi bataya tumhein Suddenly Shivani bua asked sai. 


Sb sai ko dekhte hai pr sia kuch nhi bolti.... 


Ashwini- haa sai tumhein kisne bataye bol na.... 


Sai - vo..... vo.. 


Khud samraat ne.... Virat said with teary eyes....


Sach kah raha hu na mein sai tum mili hi na mere jeeva se bolo sai....virat sai k paas aakr puchta hai


Sai (emotionally) -haa virat sir apne medical camp me mein mili thi samrat dada se.... Or mein ye baat aapko batana v chahati thi pr....( After a pause) pr samrat dada ne mana kiya tha unke baare me aapko ya kisi or ko batane se.... 


Now all are emotional... 


Mansi bua(emotionally) - sai tu mili hai mere samrat se kesa hai vo or aaya kyu nhi.... Kya use apni ayi ki yaad nhi aati. 


Sai hold mansi bua's hand and said samrat dada theek hai mansi bua. 


Mansi bua- phir vo yaha aya kyo nhi... Bata na. Or usne ye sb kyo kiya... 


Sai- kyoki samrat dada ko lagta hai ki.... Unhone jin doo logo pr sabse jayada bharosa kiya jinse pyaar kiya unn dono ne milkar unhein dokha diya.... 


Virat looked shoked and get teary eyes he felt a sharp pain in hos heart.... 


Kaku( emotionally ) to sai- tune na mere samrat ko theek se samjh mya nhi hoga.... Or vese v vo tujhe janta hi kaha hai jo teri baat manega.... Tu mujhe bata mein samrat ko vapas le ke aaungi. Vo apni badi mami ki baat bilkul nahi talega.... Chal bata kaha hai mera samrat.... 


Sai- kaku samrat dada v jante hai ki vo aap me se kisi ki baat nhi taal sakte isliye to unhone aap sb se ye jhooth bola hai ye MIA wala natak kiya. 


Kaku- vo samjhta kya hai use yaha aana hi hoga... Akhir ghar hai ye uska.. Yaha nhi aayega to kaha jayega.... Or tune use bataya nhi ki teri or virat ki shadi ho chuki hai.... 


Sai- vo sb jante hai.... Ye v ki virat sir ki shadi ho chuki hai or ye v ki kina haalat me ye shadi hui hai.... 


Virat (with teary eyes) - pr use ye sb kese pata ... 


Sai - mujhe nhi pata virat sir pr jb mein unse mili thi to mene to unhein isliye pahchaan liya tha kyonki mein ghar me unki Photos dekhi hai.... Or harani ki baat to ye thi ki vo v mujhe jante the.... Or yahi nhi samrat dada ko sb pata hai ki unke ghar se jane k baad kya kya hua.... Or... 


Or kya sai...... Virat asked curiously


Sai- unhein ye v samjh aaya ki unke jane k baad pakhi didi ko unki koi parvaah hi nhi hai.... Isliye vo vapas nhi aana chahte iss ghar me... 


Pakhi shoked..... 


Pakhi's ayi - samrat esa kese kr sakta hai....vo hamaari pakhi ko ese kese akela chod sakta hai shadi ki hai usne pakhi se.... 


Kesi shadi... Jb aapki beti iss shadi ko manti hi nhi hai to phir jesi shadi.... Mansi said.... 


All are looked shoked mansi bua because she has some begs.... 


Kaku - mansi tum kaha ja rahi ho.... Tum .... 


Mansi said in between mein kahhi nhi jaa rahi hu vahini...... 


Kaku- phir ye bag kiske hai. ... 


Mansi- ye bag Patrlekha k hai... Mein tumhe iss ghar se jane ko to nhi ko to nhi kah sakti kyoki iss ghar pr mera koi haq nhi hai pr ab tum mere samrat k kamre me nhi rah sakti.... Uss kamre me rahne ka koi haq nhi hai tumhe ...... 


Pakhi's ayi- ye aap kesi baatein kr rahi hai pakhi samrat ki patni hai... 


Mansi bua - kesi patni ... Sirf mangalsutra pahnne se ya sindoor lagane se patni nhi ban jati....uss rishte ko dil se nibhana padta hai pr Aapki beti ko to mere bete ki koi parvaah hi nhi hai. .... 


Suddenly sai k phone pr samrat ka phone aata hai.... 


Virat shoked and said emotionally sai samrat ka phone hai baat karo usse.... 


Sai - virat sir samrat dada me kaha tha ki mein unse tb baat karu jb aas paas koi na ho... 


Mansi bua - sai tum samrat se baat karo na mujhe ek baar apne bete ki awaz sunnu hai or haa use mat batana ki hum sb yaha hai.... 


Sai -theek hai pr aap sb please dhyaan rakhiye ki samraat dada ko ye pata na chale ki aap sb yaha hai varna vo mujse v baat krna band kr denge... 


Sai attend call on speaker mode.... 


Samrat-hello sai kisi ho tum.... 


Sai- mein theek hu dada aap kese hai. 


Samrat- mein v accha hu sai.... Mene socha ek baar baat kr lu tumse yah se jane se pahle... 


Sai - aap kaha jaa rahe hai dada or aapne mujhe Pahle kyo nhi bataya aap ase nhi jaa sakte.... 


Samrat- sai agar tumhe pahle bata deta to tum mujhe yaha se jaane nhi deti... Or mein v tumhein mana nhi kr pata... 


Sai- kaha jaa rahe hai aap. 


Samrat- nhi janta mein ki kaha ja raha hu pr.... jaha v jaunga uha pahuch kr tumhein jarur inform karunga. 


Pata hai sai tum bahut special ho or dil ki bahut saaf or acchi ho tabhi to itne kam time me v me ek ristha sa ban gya hai tumse.... OOrek important baat batani hai tumhe.... Mene apni life me aaenge badne ka fesla kiya hai or isliye.... Mene divorce papers bheje hai.... Kuch dino me pakhi ko vo divorce papers mil jayenge.... 


(All are shoked specially pakhi) 


Mein pakhi ke saath ase rishte me nhi rah sakta jaha vo move on krne k liye ready hi na ho... Sabka past hota hai.... Pr vo jb kisi naye rishte me judte hai to apne past ko bhoolne ki kosis karte hai .... Pr itne mahino me mujhe ek baar v nahi laga ki pakhi apne past ko bhool kr move on karana chahti hai....agar ek pal k liye v laga hota ki pakhi dil se hamaari shadi ko ek moka dena chahti hai to mein usi pal uske paas apne ghar vapas aa jata..... Pr esa kuch nhi hua isliye divorce papers vej raha hu use iss naam k rishte se aajad karne ke liye... 


Or haa ab tk to tumne sbko mere bare me bata diya hoga.... Isliye ja raha hu yaha se.... 


Abhi mein kisi se milne ke liye ready nhi hu.... Kaash kr k virat se.... Uss pr khud se jyada bharosa karta tha mein pr usne mere bharosa tod diya.... Or ab uss pr phir se yakeen krne k liye mujhe time chahiye bs apna uhi time le raha hu..... Pr tum fikr mat karna mein tumhare contact me rahunga.... Aakhir choti behen jo mana hai tumhein....apna or baki sate ghar walo ka dhyaan rakhna..... ayi se or baki sb se kahna ki unka samrat ghar vapas jarur aayega.... 


Bye.... Call ended.. 


Ashwini - dekha Patrlekha isliye mein hamesha tumhein samjhati thi ki dusron ka rishta todne ki jagah apna rishta sambhalo nhi to bahut Pachtaogi.... Or ab dekho kya hua tum sai ko virat se door karne me or sai ko iss ghar se nikalne me lagi rahi or aaj tumhe khud ye ghar chod kr jana pad raha hai aaj tumhara or samrat ka ristho toot gya..... 


Na tumhe samrat mila or nahi virat ki jindgi bhar kivdosti 


Or kya laga tha tumhe agr sai iss ghar se chali jayegi to virat tumhein apne kareeb ane deta.... Are jo jagha sai ki virat ki life me hai vo tum to kya koi or v nhi le sakta.... 


Pakhi has no expression on her face..... Blank face.... 

The end.. 

Ye happy ending hai ya nhi ye aap sb decide kijiye.... 

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Posted: 2 years ago

My Sammy is back. πŸ˜­ Bye bye Didi, aap jaayenge toh Sammy aayega.  

This confrontation was so good. I wish something like this really happens. 

Veeru is so hurt but achcha hua. Now he will understand how he wronged him. πŸ˜‘

Nice OS. πŸ‘πŸΌ

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: MuguetDScorpion

My Sammy is back. πŸ˜­ Bye bye Didi, aap jaayenge toh Sammy aayega.  

This confrontation was so good. I wish something like this really happens. 

Veeru is so hurt but achcha hua. Now he will understand how he wronged him. πŸ˜‘

Nice OS. πŸ‘πŸΌ

Thanks for liking itπŸ™‚

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Posted: 2 years ago

Great πŸ‘ mind-blowing πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΌ

Finally sabko sach ka pata chal gaya😊

Aur samrat ka bhi pata chala 

It's good that samrat decides to move on in his life... he really deserves a better girl ..

Kash show mein bhi aisa ho saktaπŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜”


Bdw yahan bhi blank face hai didi ka πŸ€¦β€β™€οΈπŸ€¦β€β™€οΈπŸ€¦β€β™€οΈ

Thank you so much dear ☺☺☺



Please plz plz write 2nd part 

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Posted: 2 years ago

Loved it. I wish this happens in the show and she goes off.

Much needed confrontation.

Thank you

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Posted: 2 years ago

Loved it...... Mazza aayega Yaar.....


That thick skinned no self respect female might still not see beyond her obsession for bezzati on the show....


Atleast we got some respite in your story....


Do write more ....


Happy writing!!!!

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Posted: 2 years ago

Superb superb.....no words to express....

You have really fulfilled ghum fandom wishes by writing this OS...

Confrontation was too good..... Sai finally showed pakhi her place and gave reality check to all chavan's.......

In the end, aayi's dialogues are power packed.....

Loved Sai and samrat's bonding..... Sai is choti behen of both Samrat and mohit....they both love her a lot...... ❀

Keep writing such wonderful stories....

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Posted: 2 years ago

Wowww this one is so goodπŸ‘

The confrontation is just superb here.

The brother sister bond between Sai and Samrat is beautiful.

Sai rocked as always.

Beautifully written love it❀

 

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Posted: 2 years ago

Superb πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘

This confrontation is much needed in the show so that everyone can know who is right and who is wrong 

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Posted: 2 years ago

This is happest ending ever.... Kya dhoya that sai ne.... Wah... Bechara samrat , I hope vo teek ho