Raghavi OS: BADLA YA BADLAV (Completed)

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Hello guyz finally I'm here with my complete OS.Basically I'm very emotional person and I love intense stories...while writing literally i had tears in my eyes..ok let's start to read....

Badla ya Badlav


Raghav operation theatre ke bahar kada tha.Bahut tensed tha..tabhi doctor bahar aaye..Raghav quickly doctor ke pass gaya...

Raghav:"Doctor boliye na meri wife kaisi hai?"

Doctor was silent.Raghav again asked with frustration.

Raghav:"Aap kyun chup hai ? Kuch tho boliye doctor?"

Doctor ne slowly Raghav ke kandhe par haath rakha aur bola,

Doctor:" I'm very sorry Mr.Raghav...we tried our level best but we couldn't save your wife...she is no more.."

Raghav shocked .He couldn't hear anything else...eaisa laga ki uski zindagi tham gayi..He ran to the OT and he saw his wife slept there lifeless...nurse covered white cloth to her body ...her dead body...Raghav got a shock of his life...He screamed.

Raghav:"Nahin....saree ka dukhan...tum muje chodke eaise ja nahin saktha...abhi muje tumse maafi maangna baaki hai...tum eaisa kaisa kar saktha hai...nna..hi.."His eyes filled with tears.

Raghav opened his eyes with a jerk.He saw around .It was dark everywhere. He was sitting in his car.He saw a nightmare.yes ..what he saw just now is a worst nightmare aur zindagi mein wo kabhi nahin chahega ki wo sach ho..wo bahut pareshaan tha..He is thinking about the incidents happened in his life.

FLASHBACK

(Everything happend in RaghVi s life same like in serial till pregnancy track but here abortion nahi huva) Pregnancy report mila aur sulochana ne hungama machaya .Pallavi ka character pe sawal utaya .aayi aur nikhil ko chodke sab ne pallavi par shak kiya aur ussi time pe keerthi ka photo kaand bhi huva.Sulochana ke plan ke mutabik RR ne Pallavi ko iska zimmedaar samaj liya.Jab tak Pallavi apne parivaar se pregnancy ilzam ko clear karthi tabhi Raghav ne aakar shocking bomb phod diya aur ehlaan kiya ki "mera aur Pallavi ka affair hai aur Pallavi mera bachche ka maa ban ne wala hai".Raghav ne tho revange le liya lekin Pallavi tho itni shock thi ki kuch keh nahi payi..Baba ne baizzat kar ke gar se nikal diya.Aayi aur nikhil ne rokhne ki koshish ki lekin kuch kar nahin paaye.idhar Amma ko bhi kabhar mil gayi aur wo apne bete ke iss kartuth se bahut dukhi hogayi .Pallavi ko apne ghar mein leke aayi.Pallavi ki halat bahut buri thi.wo mentaly toot gayi thi.apne bete ki galthi sudharne aur Pallavi ke bhalayi ke liye bahut soch samaj kar Amma ne ek faisla liya. Raghav aur Pallavi ki shaadi karane ka..Raghav ne tho pehle saaf inkaar kiya lekin jab Amma ne ye kaha ki agar Raghav Pallavi se shaadi karega tho wo aur keerthi dono Raghav ke ghar uske saath rehne aa jayenge.Amma aur keerthi ke liye Raghav ne Pallavi se shaadi karne ko haa kar diya. Lekin surprisingly Pallavi ne kuch nahin kaha.Mana bhi nahin kiya. RaghVi ki shaadi ho gayi. Amma aur keerthi Raghav ke ghar shift bhi ho gaye..Raghav bahut Kush tha.Amma ne abhi tak puri taraha Raghav ko maaf nahin kiya tha lekin thoda baat kar rahi thi.Raghav ne tho Pallavi ko torture karne ka soch liya tha. Kyunki keerthi ke photos kaand ke saat saat usse ye bhi gussa tha ki ussne shaadi ke liye mana nahin kiya aur wo sach mein pregnent hai aur kisi aur ke bachche ko apne sar baand rahi hai.Isiliye wo usse sabak sikhana chahtha tha. Lekin Amma ke saamne kuch nahin kar payega.Amma aur keerthi tho Pallavi ko palkon mein bitake rakhthe the...aur wo maa ban ne wali hai tho aur bhi extra care karte the.aur tho aur Farhad ,harish ,reddy aur ghar ke sab staff Pallavi ko bahut maanthe the.Sab ke munh mein pallavi jaap sun ke Raghav aur bhi irritate ho gaya.lekin achanak Amma aur keerthi ko emergency apne rishtedaar ke yahan jaana pada tho Raghav ko sunehra mauka mila pallavi ko torture karne ka.Deshmukh parivaar ne tho Pallavi se naatha thod diya tha.Farhad tho Raghav ko samjha samjha kar tak chuka tha kyunki Anna tho sun ne se rahe.Raghav ne har din Pallavi ko torture kiya mentally aur physically..Wo bilkul akeli thi aur chup chaap sehthi thi.Shuru shuru Raghav ko Pallavi ko torture kar ke mazaa aa raha tha lekin Pallavi ka reaction dekh ke kuch ajeeb mehsoos huva..Pehliwali Pallavi hothi tho sherni ki taraha ulta jawab dethi lekin ye Pallavi tho har torture ko chup chap sehthi rahi ..eaise yi ek mahina nikal gaya.Pallavi din ba din ghum sum hothi gayi .. kamzor bhi ho gayi thi..kabhi kabhi ultiyan ho rahi thi aur do chaar baar faint bhi ho gayi ..Raghav ko thodi chinta hogayi thi lekin keerthi ka kaand yaad aagaya tho phir se revange mode on hogaya...Raghav ne socha pregnancy ke wajah se hoga aur ignore kiya.Pallavi akeli doctor ke pass jathi thi.Raghav ne bhi dhyan nahin diya.Lekin Farahad ne tho Harish ko bola tha ki Bhabhi ka dhyan rako..Waise yi kal jab Raghav kaam mein busy tha tho usse Farhad ka call aaya aur urgently usse milne ko kaha.Jab Raghav Farhad ko mila tho Farhad ne jo sabhut dhikhaye wo dekh kar Raghav ke tho hosh udd gaye...Anjali ke kaand se lekar keerthi ka kaand tak sab ke sab kaand ki poori research thi wo bhi sabuth ke saath...Haa...Anna chaahe jo kuch bhi kahe lekin Farhad ko pata tha ki Pallavi bekasur hai.Isiliye usne Harish ke saath milkar sab ka investigation kiya tha secretly bina Anna ko bataye..Aur saare sabuth ek yi baat prove kar rahe the ki Pallavi bekasur hai...Raghav was beyond shock and guilt ridden..Wo isliye guilt feel kar raha tha ki bina soche bina samjhe usne ek masoom ladki ki zindagi barbaad ki hai..usse itna torture kiya jab uski koi galthi nahin thi. Raghav ko apne aap par gussa aa raha tha."ye Kya kar diya Raghav tune?eaisa kaise kar saktha hai tu?." Usne Farhad ko bola,"Farhad ...jo koi bhi iss sab mein shamil hai unn sab ko unki kiye ki kadi si kadi sazaa milne chahiye...Lekin usse pehle meine jo galthi kiya uski barpayi karna hai mere ko..saree ka Dukhaan ko milna hai muje..maafi maangna hai usse"he said in guilty voice..Tabhi Farhad ko Harish ka call ata hai..

Farhad: "Kya?? Bhabhi ko Kya huva..teek hai...hum abhi aate hai.."watching worried Farhad Raghav also got worried..

Raghav:"Farhad...kk...Kya huva Pallavi ko wo teek tho hai na?"

Farhad:"Anna ...Bhabhi phir se behosh ho gayi hai..Harish ne doctor ko bulaya hai ghar pe.hume jaldi jaana padega Anna.."

Raghav ye sunkar bahut pareshan hogaya.

Raghav:"Kya..?jaldi chalo Farhad...jald se jald ghar pahunchna hai..Pallavi ke pass.."Raghav prayed to God that Saree ka dukhan ko kuch ho na jaye...

Eventhough every misunderstandings regarding Pallavi got cleared still one question remained in his mind ... Is pallavi really pregnant?If yes then who is the real father of the baby ? Why she still stayed quiet regarding this matter?..

Raghav and Farhad reached home as soon as possible..by the time they reach home doctor finished his checkup ...RR ran to Pallavi' s room ..He was tensed...He met doctor outside the room.

Raghav:"Doctor...Pallavi kaisa hai?Kya huva usko ?bachcha tho teek hai na?"he asked worriedly.

Doctor gave a confused look to him.

Doctor: "Bachcha ...?"

Now Raghav's turn to confuse.

Raghav:"Haa doctor bachcha...Pallavi pregnant hai na.."

Doctor:"Mr.Raghav aapko koi galathfehmi huyi hogi...your wife is not pregnent "

Raghav aur Farhad got shocked hearing that.

Farhad:"But doctor she is not well from many days..fainted many time.."

Doctor:"Yes she is not well...some serious problem..why Mr.Raghav aapke biwi ne aapko bataaya nahin..maine tho bola tha usse ki apni family ko ye baat jaldh se jaldh batane ko."

Doctor ki baat sunkar pata nahin kyun Raghav ko darr lagne laga.

Raghav:" serious problem..?Kya huva doctor pallavi ko..?"

He is so worried.

Doctor: "apne aapko sambhaliye Mr.Raghav.. Be brave.."

Raghav:" Boliye doctor mera biwi ko Kya huva...?"

Doctor:"Mr.Raghav aapki wife ko Brain tumour hai...Wo kuch mahino ki mehmaan hai..."

Raghav couldn't register anything.Wo itna hil gaya tha ki...

Raghav: "No ...no....no..eaisa nahin ho sakta...Doctor kuch tho ilaaj hoga na..."Wo chillatha raha ...

Farhad was also shocked by this news..

Doctor:"Haa..operation kar sakthe hai lekin bachne ki chances 50-50 hai"

Raghav:"Plz doctor eaisa math kahiye... kisi bhi specialist kobulana wo bulayiye..kitna bhi karcha ho jaye...Plz mera biwi ko bachao..."

He was literally begging In front of the doctor.

Farhad try to console him.

Doctor:"MR.Raghav guarantee tho nahin dunga mein lekin try karenge...let's hope for the best.."

Raghav:"Doctor Kya mein usse dekh sakta hun?"

Doctor:"No....medicine diya hai ..1-2 gante mein hosh aajayega..abhi disturb math karo...kal hospital aao..baaki ke procedure discuss karenge."

Farhad: "Teek hai ..Thank u doctor..aayiye mein aapko chod deta hun.."

Raghav glance at Pallavi 's pale face.He couldn't control his tears..He went out and sat in his car..He was so scared and he got that nightmare.

FLASHBACK ENDS

He came out of the car and lost in pallavi's thoughts Farhad came and try to console him.Raghav couldn't control anymore.He broke down and sat on the ground..

Raghav:"Ye Kya ho raha hai Farhad ?aur kyun?kyun uss masoom sa ladki ko eaisi sazaa mil raha hai..Har baar har baar bina kuch galthi ke usi ko kyun sazaa mil raha hai..Pehle jis Deshmukh parivaar ko usne apne dilo jaan se pyaar kiya unn logo ne apne swarth ke liye usse isthemal kiya...phir maine apne andhe ghamand ke liye uski zindagi tabha kardi...aur ab uski saansein bhi cheen raha hai bhagwaan..kyun Farhad...kyun..?Galthi tho maine ki hai na? Phir sazaa usko kyun...?Nahin Farhad mein kuch nahin hone dunga apna saree ka Dukhaan ko..."

Tears were flowing in Raghavs eyes..Farhad also crying..He can't see his Anna and Bhabhi in pain..He hugged Raghav and consoled him.

Then Harish came there.

Harish:"Anna bhabhi ko hosh aagaya.."

Raghav felt releived ..

Harish:"Anna aap tension math lo ..Bhabhi jaldi teek ho jayegi..hum sab unhe kuch hone nahin denge...hamesha wo hume aapke keher se bachathi hai ..aur ab hamari baari bhabhi ko bachane ka.."

Hearing Harish's innocent words Raghav smiled and gave a hug to him and ran towards his room to see his saree ka Dukhaan.

When he reached the room Pallavi was sitting on the bed.Looking dull and tired.Raghav hesitated to face her.He is ashamed of all his wrong deeds towards her..Pallavi saw him standing there silently.

Pallavi:"kambhe ki taraha kyun kade ho?"

Raghav was silent .She knew he want to say something.

Pallavi:"Kya huva ?chup kyun ho?kuch kehna hai?"

Raghav kneel down near her and joined his hand and said sorry.

Raghav:"Muje maaf karna saree ka Dukhaan..mere se bahut bada gunah ho gaya hai..maine tuje galat samajha...Tera zindagi barbaad ki ..tuje itna torture kiya...plz muje maaf karna ..I'm sorry.."

Pallavi was in tears and silent.

Raghav continued.

Raghav: "Mein bahut sharminda hun..kabhi kabhi lagta tha ki tum eaisa nahin kar sakta lekin phir bhi main badle ki aag mein itna andha hogaya ki Tera zindagi narak banaya..Muje koi bhi sazaa do manzur hai.."He was crying.Pallavi hold his hand and said,

Pallavi: "Raghav bas...pahle uto aur yahan baito.."

She made him sit beside him.

Pallavi: "Bas Raghav ...ab inn baathon ka koi matlab nahin hai..Bas kuch din aur..."she paused.

Raghav looked at her with teary eyes.

Raghav:"Nahin...eaisa math kaho Pallavi..Tumne ye sab pehle kyun nahin bataya mere ko ya tere family ko..?kyun chupaya sabse?kyun nahin bataya ki tum pregnent nahin ho?kyun mujh se shaadi ki jabki tum jantha tha ki ye shaadi tumhare liye ek sazaa hai?kyun nahin bataya ki tumhe brain tumour hai?kyun sab kuch akela chup chap sehthi rahi..?kyun Pallavi kyun..?" He need answers for each and every questions. Pallavi took a deep breath and looked at Raghav.

Pallavi:"Raghav ...haa sach hai ki tumne jo bhi mere saath kiya wo teek nahin kiya.Jab se hum dono mile hai koi na koi misunderstandings hoti rahi hai.kabhi maine tumhe galat samajha aur kabhi tumne muje. Lekin jab bhi tum muje challenge karthe the na tab mere hausla badta tha kuch bada karne ka..aage badne ka.Lekin jab muje pata chala ki muje brain tumour hai aur mein kuch dino ki mehman hun tab eaisa laga ki sab katam hogaya.muje ye chintha thi ki mere jaane ke baad mere ayi baba nikhil sab log kaise face karenge..aur ek baat.. pregnant mein nahin balki amrutha thi.Lekin manasi ki shaadi na rukhe isiliye maine chup chaap wo ilzaam apne sar le liya.."she paused.Raghav looking at her shockingly.

Raghav :"Lekin saree ka dukhan tune mere se shaadi ke liye mana kyun nahin kiya?"

Pallavi: "jab tumne mere ghar mein aakar mere gharwalon se kaha ki humara affair hai tab mein toot gayi thi Raghav.Kuch kehne ki situation mein nahin thi.aur tumhare Amma ne hum dono ka shaadi karne ka decision liya tab meine tumhare Amma ko sach batana chahthi thi..Haa tumne jo mere saath kiya na usse mein tumse gussa zaroor thi lekin mein itni bhi kudhgarz nahi hun ki ek bete ko apne maa ke saat rehne ka mauka gawane dhu..Haa..Muje pata chala ki agar hamari shaadi ho jaaye tho Amma aur keerthi tumhare saat rehne aayenge..Tho maine socha ki waise bhi 2mahine ki baat hai uske baad ye sab katam hojayega. Usse pehle tumhari aur Amma ke beech ke gile shikwe mitakar phir mein sach batadungi...aur tab tak meri family bhi mujh se nafrat karne lagegi tho unhe mere jaane ke baad jyada dukh nahin hoga"

Raghav just stared at Pallavi whom he hated so much but now she is the one who made his life back on track.Made his family complete..

Raghav called her softly.

Raghav:"Pallavi..."

Pallavi smiled at him.

Pallavi:"Guilty feel hone ki koi zaroorat nahi..galthi tho hum dono ne ki hai..tumne tumhare family ke liye...aur maine apni family ke liye...aur ab tumhe kush hone ka time hai Raghav Rao...Tumhari family tumhare saath hai ...aur tumhe kush hone ka aur ek wajah bhi hai...Tum Muje Hydrabaad se bahar bhejna chahtha tha na...?lo tumhari ichcha puri ho rahi hai...Mein Hydrabaad se yi nahin itna dhoor ja rahi hun hamesha ke liye ki kabhi wapas na aa sakoon ..."

Raghav couldn't hear more..He just closed her mouth with his finger.

Raghav:"chup ...saree ka Dukhaan...chup..ab ek aur shabdh aur nahin.."

Both were emotional..Raghav couldn't hold more .He just pulled her and took her in his embrace..

Raghav:"Saree ka dukhan...tere ko kuch nahin hoga..Mein tuje kuch nahin hone dega...tumne teek kaha ab meri family mere saat hai lekin mera Happy family tumhare bina adhoora hai...Pyaar ka tho pata nahin lekin aaj jab tum mujse dhoor jaane ka kayal aaya na tab muje ehsaas hogaya ki tumhare bina meine adhura hai...meri family adhura hai ...ye ghar adhura hai...Haa ..ye saree ka Dukhaan ke bina Raghav Rao adhura hai..aaj tak ye Raghav Rao Pallavi se ladta aaya na lekin ab ye Raghav Rao Pallavi ke liye ladega..Pallavi ke zindagi ke liye ladega..tuje kuch nahin hone dega...ye Raghav Rao ka waada hai tere se saree ka Dukhaan...Arthamainda?"said firmly.Both had tears in their eyes ..He gently kissed her forehead and then hugged her tightly.Pallavi also hugged him back tightly with a new ray of hope..Jis Pallavi se Badla lene chala tha Raghav Rao usi Pallavi ne uski zindagi Badal di..

THE END.


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vinlora thumbnail
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hi guyz ,Here is complete story.

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This was wonderful. Awesome

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Oh this is sooo emotional. I love how you portrayed Pallavi's core essence., uske saath koi chahe kitna bhi bura kar le, when she has the opportunity she will help to make someone's life betterā¤ļø. Since you have left an open-end I will just imagine in my head that Pallavi survived and they lived happily ever after with a lot of nook jhok.

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Oh Lora....this is so sad yet so emotional😭

Iska part 2 ayega kya??? Do na please.😃


Amazing write up dearšŸ‘

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Originally posted by: GoldenHour

Oh this is sooo emotional. I love how you portrayed Pallavi's core essence., uske saath koi chahe kitna bhi bura kar le, when she has the opportunity she will help to make someone's life betterā¤ļø. Since you have left an open-end I will just imagine in my head that Pallavi survived and they lived happily ever after with a lot of nook jhok.

Yes..I hate tragic endings so it has to be happily ever after..Thanks for reading dearā¤ļø

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kash mai tumko dikha pati how much i cried .. bs that ā€˜s it from my end

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Originally posted by: Mihika

Oh Lora....this is so sad yet so emotional😭

Iska part 2 ayega kya??? Do na please.😃


Amazing write up dearšŸ‘

Thank u Mikuuu.šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜ 2nd part ka tho abhi tak kuch socha nahin ...let's see...koi aur continue kar sakta hai tho achcha hai...šŸ˜

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Originally posted by: ImHemangi

kash mai tumko dikha pati how much i cried .. bs that ā€˜s it from my end

Thank u dear...šŸ˜maine tumko rulaya matlab my story is good then...šŸ˜†

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Mujhe nahi lagta ki I have cried that much kabhi bhi when i read a story. Mere tears ruk hi nahi rahe hain.

The story, itna emotional- how perfectly tumne Raghav ka redemption dikhaya hai...and thank god Pallavi dying was just a dream.

It was really nice ki you had included Pallavi's main value- voh dusron ki khushi ke liye khud ki khushi aur izzat ki bali chadha sakti hai..

Unka emotional moment in the end-😭

I think there was not a single part jo heart touching nahi tha

Please write a second part too

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