Raghvi drabble series - Drabble 2 added in pg 4 😍 - Page 3

Created

Last reply

Replies

83

Views

14.5k

Users

22

Likes

183

Frequent Posters

LoveHopeMagic thumbnail
Book Talk Reading Challenge - Pride Prose Thumbnail Book Talk Reading Challenge Award - Star Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 4 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Bee222

This was so good Keechu 🤗 I feel bad for him but I loved it ❤️❤️

Write more, jaldi !! 😛

Bee 🤗

Thank you. I'm so glad you liked it.

Will write one tomorrow!

LoveHopeMagic thumbnail
Book Talk Reading Challenge - Pride Prose Thumbnail Book Talk Reading Challenge Award - Star Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 4 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: nautankitadka

I feel empathy, but somewhere I guess he needs time to come in terms with what is going on and apologise and take his sazaa. Wonderful OS, you have beautifully conveyed his emotions. Loved it!! 🥺👍🏼

Tannu 🤗

Yep, he needs to see things through others eyes and he will. 😉

Thank you and sorry for breaking your heart 😒

LoveHopeMagic thumbnail
Book Talk Reading Challenge - Pride Prose Thumbnail Book Talk Reading Challenge Award - Star Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 4 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

The angst Raghav's situation evokes is heartbreaking. I've always felt a soft corner for him due to his past but then what he did to Pallavi also breaks my heart. You've captured his pain beautifully!


I'm glad that you liked it.

Even I feel soft corner for him hence the drabble but he shouldn't let his past define his future.

Thank you! 😳

Edited by LoveHopeMagic - 4 years ago
LoveHopeMagic thumbnail
Book Talk Reading Challenge - Pride Prose Thumbnail Book Talk Reading Challenge Award - Star Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 4 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Vibrant_Ana

oh how bad I feel for RR... very touching drabble...

I too feel bad for him. But him getting back for what he did is inevitable. Thanks! smiley9

Edited by LoveHopeMagic - 4 years ago
LoveHopeMagic thumbnail
Book Talk Reading Challenge - Pride Prose Thumbnail Book Talk Reading Challenge Award - Star Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 4 years ago
#25

This is not the continuation of the last one but something that can happen in that story!

An another sad one, but better than the last one. Next one, will be a happy one. 😳

Thanks!


Drabble two - Choice


Raghav had relinquished his husband's role to be the friend she needed when he saw solace in her eyes last night in the presence of another man.

His steps became heavier as her room neared. Never in a million times he thought that the day he would gather the courage to go and knock on that door would be for letting her go.

"Pallavi," The name he never used to call her felt strange on his tongue not because he hated it but he felt a sense of belonging when he used Saree ka dukan, his Saree ka dukan.

The movements inside the room halted and he straightened his posture with a cold and hard look on his face.

"Open the door. "

If only he had been this courageous in the past months then they would have made an improvement in their marriage but he was a coward to accept and apologize.

Pallavi stood before him mirroring his facial expressions. They seldom saw each other and even if they appeared in front of the other by chance, they vanished into thin air as if they were supernatural creatures.

"What do you want?"

"Can I come inside?"

A few months back the room was one of the guest rooms but after Pallavi moved in, she had changed it to her home. Her room had more homely feelings than his entire mansion ever could have.

Raghav scaned the room in astonishment, the light blue and white color tone had given a freshness to it.

Eventually his eyes fell on a photo frame on the table, Pallavi in her red saree with amma and Keerthi and behind it another one with her old family may be the only family, deshmukhs.

Despite the circumstances they got married and all the drama that followed Raghav had never been that enraptured by her before the first day of their married life. Red had always been a favorite colour of his and she looked gorgeous in his colour.

His eyes surveyed the room abstractedly looking for something, one more photo frame but found nothing.

Pallavi cleared her throat, "Why are you here, Raghav?"

He gulped down his disappointment bringing the indifference to his eyes. "Choose one," He replied taking the frame of deshmukhs and keeping it before the one which had his amma and Keerthi.

"What do you mean?" She asked suddenly breathless clearly understanding his intentions behind the frame exchange he did.

"It's either me or him, so choose."

"Raghav,"

He didn't know if he liked the way his body reacted to her voice, or to his name from her mouth. The shock that went down his spine excited and aggravated him at the same time.

"What do you mean?" She probbed.

However without a reply he walked out, more to escape him from making an idiot out of himself.

Pallavi was stunned.

When the shock of what happened wore out she took the frame he replaced with her old family one to turn it over and see the photo of Mr and Mrs Raghav Rao.


...


Second part. - Raghvi OS : Chosen

Thank you for reading. I hope you liked it. 🤗

Keechu.

Edited by LoveHopeMagic - 4 years ago
LoveHopeMagic thumbnail
Book Talk Reading Challenge - Pride Prose Thumbnail Book Talk Reading Challenge Award - Star Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 4 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: princy48

😭Emotional kardiya ...i dont want to see him lyk this ..evn for a second 😭...but he is gonna come under the wrath soon ...lovely drabble dear ...🤗..thanku for this ❤️

Awe! Sorry! 🤗

Yes, even I don't want to see him like this but its inevitable.

I'm glad you liked it Princy, thanks for reading! 🤗

Bee222 thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

Bee 🤗

Thank you. I'm so glad you liked it.

Will write one tomorrow!

🤗

Yay! Even I'm thinking to post something tomorrow 😆

Btw name kyun change kar diya? 😒 It'll be difficult to remember this UN and tag you 😒

Edited by Bee222 - 4 years ago
LoveHopeMagic thumbnail
Book Talk Reading Challenge - Pride Prose Thumbnail Book Talk Reading Challenge Award - Star Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 4 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: SRKian

Keechu🤗❤️ I'm finally done with uni works for the day and came straight here to read it.😳 It was fab ❤️ I'm all prepared to read more emotional ones from you 😎

Ani🤗

Thank you so much yaar.

And be prepared for tomorrow! A new one is on the way 😳

LoveHopeMagic thumbnail
Book Talk Reading Challenge - Pride Prose Thumbnail Book Talk Reading Challenge Award - Star Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 4 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Bee222

🤗

Yay! Even I'm thinking to post something tomorrow 😆

Btw name kyun change kar diya? 😒 It'll be difficult to remember this UN and tag you 😒


Awe! Sowwie 🤗

I've been planning to do it once the one year period end, and it ended today, so I changed it... 😆 Who doesn't like a change?

You should remember me! And tag me. 😡Can't you make an effort and do it for me? 😳

xerxes12 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 4 years ago
#30

His only dream truncated to smaller one , to have dinner with his family for once..

This line❤️❤️...I could feel the pain😭

You have written it so well👏.

Not every wish which comes true, assures happiness..

This is soo good

Keep it up👏

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".