Bariyan a ShiVi ficton [Completed] - Page 12

Originally posted by: Riya_Mehta

Most beautiful chapter

Well, Thank you dear♥️

Originally posted by: mirai07

❤️Sweet! Amazing and Lovely!❤️

Thanks ♥️

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Cute update! Shivi are married and dhara is pregnant ❤️

Shivi's bitter nothings and krish's dialogues were hilarious 😂🤣

Loved the chapter!

Thank you so much ♥️♥️

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Originally posted by: emah04

Just read all 4 chapters together.... and I am loving it... can’t wait for more

Thanks dear♥️

Will update tonight may be

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Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Faha! This was beautiful. They're married and loved the camaraderie. Even as a reader, I am like are we sure this gadhedo and gadhedi didn't love each other. The comfort they have around each other is ❤️❤️. And their teasing remains their USP.

I loved all of it. And Rishita here seems like a sweet girl. Can't wait for the next part.

ML 🤗

Delighted that you find this beautiful

Well, I think I will let Rishita be a little bit like Suhana of SGP and more sensible 🤪

Hope you like next parrs as well

Originally posted by: howler

“tum dono phirse soch lo, Abhi bhi mauka hai. Card pe nahi chapa sakte par wedding poster pe Bhoothnath weds Chipkali likwa sakte hai, haa!!”,

@bold: I almost spit my water when I read this 🤣 and the counter Raavi gave after that 🤣 damn they both would definitely be the best "worst devar-bhabi" duo 😆

ShiVi are married and that too a happy marriage , do continue soon I'll be eagerly waiting for your next update ⭐️

Love, Neha ❤️

Thanks Neha for the lovely feedback♥️

Hope you enjoy upcoming parts

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Originally posted by: raindropsroses

mujhe toh pehle se hi pata tha tu Tik jayegi. Chipkali hai, jaha nazre dale waha chipak jaye - This line 🤣

Loved this part tooo ♥️

Thank you so much ♥️

Glad you enjoyed the line🤪

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Originally posted by: CheerlessIM

Beautiful concept yar🥰🥰🥰

Kitna accha lg rha h , in dono ki shadi aise peacefully hoti , aur dheere dheere dono ek doosre ko accept kr liya

Waiting for their love story to progress🤩

Very nice

Update soooooooòooooooooooooooon ❤

Thanks deary ♥️♥️

Hoping to update tonight

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Originally posted by: AsadZoyaILU

update today plz

Hoping to update actually 😉

Originally posted by: chavi12345

Waiting for next part. Plz plz update

Thanks

Will do soon♥️