SAMAINA FS : TANHAYEE CHAPTER 5 UPDATED ON PAGE 4

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Hello everyone...

I'm back with a Samaina FS (Five Shots)

I've tried writing an emotional story for the first time...

I hope I do justice to the story...


Do shower your love through votes & comments if you like this FS...

Ignore the mistakes...


With Lots of Love,

Daksha...❤


TANHAYEE

CHAPTER 1


NAINA


I stood in the balcony listening to the song that was playing on my Walkman,

Tanhayee...

Tanhayee...
Dil ke raaste mein...
Kaisi thokar maine khaayi...
Toote khwaab saare ek mayusi hai chhayi...
Har khushi so gayi...
Zindagi kho gayi...
Tumko jo pyaar kiya maine to sazaa maine paayi...
Tanhayee tanhayee...
Milo hai faili huvi tanhayee...
Tanhayee tanhayee...
Milo hai faili hoye tanhayee...

Loneliness... That was what I was experiencing since childhood. Even when I was surrounded by family & friends, I was alone. Being an introvert, it was really difficult for me to express myself. Whatever I used to feel, I would write down in my diary. But now, I don't feel the need to share my lonely life with anyone nor do I write. A lot of things have changed in my life since last seven years.

Yesss... Seven long years... I'm staying with Phulla bua in Mumbai now. She is the one who made me independent in every way. It's because of her that I'm self-sufficient to take my own decisions & could take a stand for myself. The innocent & naïve Naina was left behind in Ahmedabad. The feelings that I harboured once upon a time, are now buried deep inside my heart. I have made strong walls around my heart that no one could break.

Khwaab mein dekha tha ek aanchal maine apne haatho mein...
Ab toote sapno ke shishe chubte hai in aankhon mein...
Khwaab mein dekha tha ek aanchal maine apne haatho mein...
Ab toote sapno ke shishe chubte hai in aankhon mein...
Kal koyi tha yahin...
Ab koyi bhi nahin...
Ban ke naagin jaise hai saason mein lehrayi...
Tanhayee tanhayee...
Palko pe kitne aansoon hai laayi...
Tanhayee tanhayee...
Palko pe kitne aansoon hai laayi...

I closed my eyes drifting into the painful past that changed me & my life forever...


FLASHBACK (7 Years ago)


I was so happy that Chachaji had finally accepted my relationship with Sameer. I was scared when he wanted to meet us in the temple. I & Sameer had told him all about our love since the first day that we had almost crashed into each other in our school days. He had patiently heard us & then after thinking a lot, he had accepted our love. He was ready to stand with us, when the time comes. That day, I was the happiest as I saw the two most important people of my life smiling heartily. Finally, after going through so much, I saw Sameer happy that day.

When I went back with Chachaji, I had turned to look at Sameer & had winked, making him all smiles. My friends Swati, Kamya, Hema & my soul sister, Preeti, were dancing in elation with the happy news. I too was on cloud nine. I treated my Chachaji with lots of respect & love. He was a father figure to me & his acceptance of us had given me wings to take my relationship with Sameer to another level.

The next day when I had given some riddles to solve so that Sameer could find me, but his friends had found me instead & asked me to meet him outside the college. I was surprised with this but still had gone ahead to meet him. When I saw him, the first thought that crossed my mind was how could I be so much lucky to find such a great love partner for myself.

But something seemed off that day as he wasn't smiling & looked very much nervous. I asked him about it & he spoke, "Wohhh... kal jab main Chachaji se mila na toh milne ke baad toh mujhe bohot khushi hui. Lekin fir achanak se ek ajeeb si ghabrahat, ek ajeeb si bechaini honi lagi aur maine bohot baar apne aap se poocha ki iss ghabrahat aur bechaini ka reason kya hai?"

I asked him curiously, "Toh kuch jawab mila apne aap se?" He replied, "Haan... Jawaab mila toh sahi, lekin apne aap se nahi, Munna se." I was confused & asked, "Munna se?" He again replied, "Haan... Munna ko lagta hai ki hamari love story ka end fir se judaai hi hoga. Inn teen saalon mein humne jaane anjaane mein ek dusre ko bohot dukh, bohot dard diye hai. Lekin kya tumhe pataa hai ki iss dukh aur iss dard ko sabse jyada kisne jhela hai? Munna Pandit ne... Iss duniya mein agar main kisiko apna saccha dost bol sakta hun na toh wohhh Munna aur Pandit hai. Jaisi tumhari ek family hai na, sweet si, ek bohot acchi si family, waise hi Nanu bhi meri family the. Baaki toh tumhe sab pataa hi hai mere baare mein. Ek sheher se dusre sheher, ek boarding school se dusre boarding school, life mein kabhi settle hi nahi ho paaya. Aur isi wajah se kabhi koi dost nahi banaa. Fir mujhe mile Munna aur Pandit, meri jaan, mere bhai, mere sab kuch... Tumhe toh pataa hai na Naina ki jab bura waqt aata hai toh sabse pehle hamare apne hi hamara saath chodke chale jaate hai. Lekin Munna Pandit... Munna Pandit ne kabhi bhi aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya, wohh hamesha mere saath rahe, specially hamare case mein... Chahe wohh tumhare ghar ke neeche aane waali baat ho yaa fir tumhare papa se daant khali waali baat. Munna Pandit hamesha mere saath the, meri parchaayi ki tarah."

I spoke, "Main jaanti hun Sameer ki wohh dono tumhare best friends hai aur hamesha rahenge... Par inn sabka hamare rishtey se kya taalluk???" He answered straight looking into my eyes, "Taalluk hai. Bilkul taalluk hai. Naina... Munna hamare rishtey se khush nahi hai. Usko lagta hai ki agar tumne mujhe dobara chod diya toh mera kya haal hoga? Naina... Jaise tumhare liye tumhari family important hai na, ussi tarah Munna bhi mere liye important hai. And I'm sorry, main Munna ke against nahi jaa sakta. Kabhi nahi..."

I stood there like a statue on the middle of the road & he left on his bike, leaving me alone forever. I didn't go back to college that day. Instead, I went home. I needed time to think over it. When I reached home, I saw that Chachiji was cooking lunch for us. She was surprised to see me home alone, "Arey Naina... Tu itna jaldi ghar kaise aa gayi? Aur yeh Preeti kahan hai? Tu akeli hi aa gayi kya?"

With lots of efforts, I found my voice, "Wohhh... Chachiji... mujhe na bohot sardard ho raha tha. Toh main ghar aa gayi. Preeti college mein lectures attend kar rahi hai." She was worried instantly, "Bhagwaan jhooth na bulaaye... Naina... Tu aisa kar apne kamre mein jaa. Main ekdum kadak adrak wali chai banaa deti hun, usse peene se tera sar dard ekdum bhag jaayega."

I just nodded in reply & left to my room. I pretended to sleep when Chachiji came with a cup of ginger tea. "Arey. Yeh toh so gayi. Shaayad bohot hi sardard hoga. Sone deti hun. Thoda aaraam kar legi toh thik ho jaayegi.", I heard her mumbling to herself & then she left my room.

The tears that I had stopped from falling made its way finally. I wept uncontrollably clutching the pillow tightly. How could Sameer do this to me? The happiness that I felt since yesterday evaporated in thin air today. I lost all the hopes of togetherness. This is the punishment that I deserved to hurt my love, my Sameer... But do I have a right to call him mine now, when he has broken our relationship. He was never mine I suppose.

Taiji's taunts made its presence again. She was right that I was cursed & that's the reason that I never gave happiness to anyone around me. Now I understood how much I had hurt Sameer when I had broken up with him because of my cowardness. I had shattered all his dreams, broken his pure heart, broken his lovely soul. I deserved this. I would never be happy. This was all Karma that was taking its revenge for breaking my one & only love.

I kept sobbing & cursing my destiny, when suddenly the door to the room opened & Preeti walked in furiously. She locked the door & sat next to me. I saw her questioning eyes but remained quiet & didn't feel the need to tell her anything for now. I closed my eyes & Sameer's face appeared. I opened them instantly & saw Preeti glaring at me, "Naina... Tu mujhe bina bataaye ghar kyun aa gayi?"

"Wohhh mujhe thoda sardard ho raha tha toh main sidha ghar aa gayi.", I lied to her too. I couldn't tell the real reason right now. She didn't believe my words at all & continued, "Dekh Naina... Sach sach bataa kya baat hai. Yeh sardard waali kahaani mujhe mat sunaa. Mujhe pataa hai ki tere aur Jijaji ke beech fir se kuch toh hua hai. Ab jaldi se bataa kya hua hai."

I controlled myself & spoke, "Preeti... Please main abhi kuch bataana nahi chaahti. Chachaji ko aa jaane de. Main unke saamne hi sab bataa dungi. Please abhi mujhe akela chod de behen. Please..." She didn't question further & slept beside me, pulling me in her hug. I let my tears flow this time freely as I knew my personal Hanuman would always be there with me, no matter what... She wiped my tears & consoled me, "Sab thik ho jaayega Naina. Tu ro mat. Main hun na tere saath hamesha."

She kept rubbing my back continuously & I don't know when I drifted to sleep. When I got up, I saw Chachaji sitting on my bed looking at me worriedly. I tried to get up but he didn't allow me to, "Naina... Utho mat. Leti raho. Preeti ne doctor ko phone kar diya hai, abhi aate hi honge." I saw Chachiji & Preeti entering the room. Both of them sat on the either sides.

The doctor arrived in the next fifteen minutes & checked me. "Anandji... Naina ko bukhaar toh bohot hai. Viral ho gaya hai. Maine yeh davai likh di hai. Isse teen din tak dete rahiye. Beti teen chaar din mein thik ho jaayegi." The doctor turned towards me, "Aur Naina... Tumhe bhi khud ka acche se khayaal rakhna hai. Time par acche se kha lena aur davaai bhi time par le lena." He turned to Chachaji again, "Agar tabiyat aur bhi kharab ho jaaye toh mujhe phone kar dijiyega. Main aa jaunga. Thik hai. Ab chalta hun."

Chachiji fed me dinner with her own hands & Preeti gave me medicines... All the while I saw Chachaji's curious & worried glances towards me. Once Chachiji was asleep, Chachaji knocked on our door & entered. She locked the door again. He sat beside me & asked me, "Naina... Kya hua hai? Preeti bhi thik se kuch nahi bataa rahi."

Preeti instantly replied, "Papa... Jab mujhe hi khud kuch pataa nahi hai toh main aapko kya bataun. Maine bhi poocha tha par isne kahaa ki aapke saamne hi bataayegi." Both of them waited for my reply & I repeated the whole conversation that happened with Sameer today. They listened to me calmly but once I was done speaking, Preeti was furious, "Jijaji paagal ho gaye hai kya? Munna ki wajah se aisa kaise sab kuch khatam kar sakte hai? Abhi phone karke daanti hun."

She was about to turn, when I spoke, "Tu kisise kuch nahi kahegi Preeti. Na Sameer se, na Munna se. Tujhe meri kasam hai." She stopped in her tracks hearing my words. Chachaji too was stunned with this. She sat down on the bed with a thud. "Naina... Kasam waapas le. Mujhe unn logon ki akal thikaane laani hai."

"Preeti maine kahaa na ki tu kisise kuch nahi kahegi, na kuch samjhaane ki koshish karegi. Aur tujhe meri kasam hai ki tune yeh baat kisise bhi kahi toh. Yeh baat sirf hamare beech mein hi rahegi. Samjhi tu?" "Naina beta... Kyun kar rahi hai aisa? Kya karna chaahti hai tu?", finally I heard Chachaji's voice. I looked at him with misty eyes, "Kya main aapse kuch maang sakti hun aaj?", I asked him in a low voice.

He nodded & I asked with a heavy heart, "Kya aap mujhe Mumbai bhej sakte hai? Main apni padhai wahin kar lungi. Please Chachaji, kya aap mujhe yeh de sakte hai?" They were shocked to hear my request. Preeti hollered, "Tu paagal ho gayi hai Naina. Aise kaise tu yahaan se jaane ki baat kar sakti hai? Papa aap iski koi baat mat suno. Kahin nahi bhejoge aap Naina ko."

I started sobbing again & Preeti hugged me instantly, rubbing my back. She too cried with me & continued her rants, scolding me all the while for taking such a harsh decision to leave Ahmedabad. I looked at Chachaji again & spoke in a choked voice, "Please mujhe yahaan se jaana hai. Main roz Sameer ko apne saamne nahi dekh paaungi Chachaji. Usko aur khudko tootte hue nahi seh paaungi."

He stared at me for a while, "Main sochkar batata hun kal. Tum aaraam karo. Preeti apni behen ka acche se dhyaan rakhna." He retired to his room after saying those words. I didn't know what was he thinking about my decision. Would he send me to Mumbai? It was true that I won't be able to face Sameer here. It was best that I left this city. Each & every lane, every nook & corner would remind me of him.

Once the lights were off, I heard Preeti's voice, "Naina... Main jaanti hun tu soyi nahi hai. Toh ab mujhe sach sach bataa ki tere mann mein kya chal raha hai. Tu kyun jaana chahti hai yahaan se? Tu toh jijaji se kitna pyaar karti hai. Ek baar acche se samjha toh sahi unko, mujhe pataa hai ki wohhh tere manane par zaroor maan jaayenge. Naina... Tu please aise apne pyaar ko haarne mat de. Jo galti tune Arjun bhaiya ki wajah se ek baar ki hai, wohhh waapis mat dohra behen. Please ek aakhri baar Jijaji se baat kar le."

My tears hadn't stopped at all. It was time to let Preeti see my wounds. She was my soul sister & she deserves to know my feelings. I took a deep breath & started speaking, "Preeti... Main jo kar rahi hun wohi iss haalaat mein sahi hai. Main Sameer se bohot pyaar karti hun aur isiliye yeh faisla liya hai. Aur aaj jo bhi usne kahaa, wohh galat bhi toh nahi hai na. Abhi sirf Chachaji ne hi hamara rishta manzoor kiya hai, par kya aage chalkar mere papa, taiji, tauji ya Arjun bhaiya, hamare rishte ko manzoori denge, hamare pyaar ko samjhenge?"

"Nahi Preeti. Yeh toh tu bhi maanti hai na ki inme se koi hamare pyaar ko nahi samjhega. Wohhh log Agarwal aur Maheshwari waali baat par hi ade rahenge. Unke liye yeh samaaj mein unki izzat bohot pyaari hai, uss izzat ke liye shayaad mujhe Sameer ko chodne ke liye majboor bhi kar de. Tune dekha tha na ki unhone kaise bartaav kiya tha mere saath jab meri shaadi Sharad ke saath tay hui thi. Taiji ko toh main pehle se hi pasand nahi hun, aur tauji ko toh sirf apne khaandaan ki izzat pyaari hai. Rahaa sawaal Papa ka toh unhe toh meri shakal se bhi nafrat hai toh unhe koi farak bhi nahi padega. Aur Arjun bhaiya toh kabhi khud ke pyaar ke liye khade nahi ho paaye toh mera kya hi saath denge. Aur inn sab mein akele Chachaji ki baat na toh koi sunega aur naahi samjhega. Toh aaj nahi toh kal hamare pyaar ko suli par chadhna hi hai."

"Naina... Jijaji sab ko manaa lenge. Tu fikar mat kar. Bas abhi yeh jaane ki baat mat kar. Ek baar unse baat kar le shaayad sab thik ho jaaye.", she was trying to make me understand. But how could I make her understand that whatever is happening right now is good for us. I tried again, "Preeti... Abhi se agar hum door ho jaaye toh shaayad taklif kam hogi. Aage jaakar agar hamara rishta toota toh hum jee nahi paayenge. Abhi jo raha hai wohi sahi hai aur tu please Sameer ko Jijaji bulaana band kar. Hamare beech koi rishta nahi raha. Sab khatam ho gaya hai Preeti..."

"Yaar Naina... Kaise samjhau tujhe. Thik hai, tu mujhe yeh bataa ki kya tu Mumbai jaakar Jijaji ko bhool paayegi, unse pyaar karna chod degi tu?" I smiled between my sobs & spoke, "Main Sameer se marte dum tak pyaar karungi Preeti. Toh bhoolna toh bohot durr ki baat hai. Main jo kar rahi hun wohi thik hai behen. Please ab ispar koi behes mat kar mujhse. Mujhe ab kuch nahi samajhna. Preeti ab so jaa. Bohot der ho gayi hai. Aur mujhe bhi neend aa rahi hai."

She touched my forehead to check my temperature. "Bukhaar abhi bhi kam nahi hua. Tu ruk main thanda paani le aati hun. Thodi der paatiyaan rakhungi na toh shayaad bukhaar utar jaaye." She went to the kitchen & brought a bowl of cold water & a cloth. She continued keeping the cold cloth on my forehead for about half an hour. My eyes felt heavy & I don't know when I drifted to sleep.

I got up late the next day during noon time. I couldn't believe that I slept so much due to the heavy medications. Preeti hadn't gone to college that day & had stayed home to take care of me. I scolded her that she shouldn't miss college but she didn't listen & continued helping me. Swati, Kamya & Hema came home after college to meet us.

They were worried about my health & asked me to take proper rest for few more days. I didn't ask them anything about Sameer but still they kept teasing me the whole time saying that he looked upset today as I wasn't present in college. How could I tell them we have broken up forever this time & we haven't talked since yesterday? I could see Preeti struggling to keep quiet because of my promise. The girls left after an hour. And I went back to sleep.

I was waiting for Chachaji to come so I could ask him of what he thought about my decision. It was late at night when he came home. He met me for five minutes & asked me about my health but didn't say anything more. I knew he too needed time to think about my sudden decision of leaving Ahmedabad.

Three days passed by with me staying at home with Chachiji & Preeti. At least my stars were good that Taiji & Tauji had gone to Baroda to attend some relative's marriage, & Papa had gone to Rajkot to meet Arjun Bhaiya. Chachaji still hadn't come up with a solution. He kept the conversations limited with me related to my health only.

It was the fourth day, when the doorbell rang in the evening & Chachaji came home early with Phulla bua. We were surprised to see her after a long time. The last time she visited us was for Pooja didi's wedding. We welcomed her & Chachiji cooked her favourite food. Taiji & Tauji returned the same night while Papa came the next morning.

We were having lunch, when Tauji asked her if she had visited for something important or was it just a casual visit. We all were stunned with her answer, "Main toh yahaan apni pyaari si Gudiya ko lene aayi hun." I looked at Chachaji instantly & he blinked his eyes in assurance. She continued, "Wohhh kya hai na ki main ab akele rehkar thak gayi hun. Toh maine socha ki Naina ko hi apne saath rehne bulaa leti hun, isliye main usse lene aayi hun. Maine hamari kal ki flight tickets book karva li hai."

She turned to me, "Naina beta... Tujhe jo saaman zaruri lage, wohi lena. Baaki sab hum Mumbai se hi kharid lenge. Maine tumhara admission wahan ki college mein karva diya hai. Toh apni kitaabe yaad se le lena." No one could utter a word in front of her as she was the eldest amongst all. I then realized that all this was done by Chachaji. I understood that he alone couldn't have managed to convince the elders to let me go away to Mumbai.

I glanced at everyone one be one. I saw tears in Chachiji's & Preeti's eyes, the others weren't affected by this news at all. I didn't matter to them at all. After finishing the lunch, I packed my books & some clothes. Preeti & Chachiji helped me in packing. I didn't know what Chachaji must have told Phulla bua. I decided to talk to her once we reach Mumbai. Chachiji cooked my favourite dishes that night for dinner as it was my last meal with them.

We left early in the morning with Chachaji, Chachiji & Preeti. They came to drop us at airport. I cried my heart out when it was time to bid them my final goodbye. When I walked towards the plane, I turned around & took a final glance. I was bidding a final goodbye to Ahmedabad too. With tears in my eyes, with love & pain in my heart, I left towards a new life that wouldn't include the important people of my life, the most understanding & respectful Chachaji, the most loving & caring & always smiling Chachiji, my soul sister & better half Preeti & my forever love Sameer...

I would miss them a lot. I had to leave from here so that Sameer could move on in his life & would find a better life partner & love who would always be there for him & won't leave him...


FLASHBACK ENDS...


I opened my eyes & all that I saw around me seemed blurry with those misty eyes.


Kyun aisi ummeed ki maine jo aise nakaam huvi...

Door banayi thi manzil toh raste mein hi shaam huvi...

Kyun aisi ummed ki maine jo aise nakaam huvi...

Door banayi thi manzil toh raste mein hi shaam huvi...

Ab kahaan jaun main...

Kis ko samjaun main...

Kya maine chaha tha aur

Kyun kismet mein aayi...

Tanhayee... Tanhayee...

Jaise andheri ki ho gehrayee...

Dil ke raaste mein...
Kaisi thokar maine khaayi...
Toote khwaab saare ek mayusi hai chhayi...
Har khushi so gayi...
Zindagi kho gayi...
Tumko jo pyaar kiya maine to sazaa maine paayi...
Tanhayee tanhayee...
Milo hai faili huvi tanhayee...
Tanhayee tanhayee...
Milo hai faili hoye tanhayee...

Tanhayee... Tanhayee...

Tanhayee... Tanhayee...

I've stopped expecting anything from my life as expectation leads to only disappointment... When you don't get what you expected, it only gives you pain. The same pain I'm going through now. Since the first time I saw Sameer, I had fallen in love with him at first sight only. But see, where do I stand now. I'm here all alone. Even after loving each other so much, we were destined to never be together.

The day I came to Mumbai, I had decided to move on & make myself so busy in studies & work that I would never get time to remember him. But my poor heart couldn't forget him even for a second. Whenever I closed my eyes, his charming face would appear in front of me. I tried a lot but could keep his thoughts away for long.

Phulla bua was a sweetheart. She helped me to settle down quite easily. She had changed my entire wardrobe. I too for once wanted to live my life for myself & enjoy it. When I joined the new college in Mumbai, everything felt strange & I was nervous. But the moment I entered the college, all my fears flew away.

I made some friends there who helped me in finishing the course by lending me their notes. I started spending my maximum time in library as I would find my solace there. Days turned to months & then to years. I finished my college & applied for post-graduation. I wanted to be busy & what could have been a better choice than studying.

Soon I finished my studies & I joined a multinational company. I had started earning on my own. In these last seven years, I never visited Ahmedabad. Chachaji visited here with Chachiji & Preeti twice a year. Preeti too had finished her graduation & had opened a parlour with Kamya. It was her dream & I'm very much happy that she has fulfilled it & is successful.

Preeti was going to visit this week alone. She was going to open a new branch here in Mumbai & was visiting here for the meeting. They had already opened three branches in Ahmedabad with the help of Swati & Hema. I sometimes felt bad that all the four girls were still together & I missed them a lot. During these years, apart from my family, I had lost my best friends too...

But I couldn't change it, this is what I had wanted for myself. If I'm alone today, I shouldn't blame it on others. I am the reason for my own loneliness. Whenever Preeti visited, she would ask me if I wanted to know about Sameer, but I never answered & then she stopped asking too.

Sameer... What should I say? Even after these seven long years, I haven't forgotten him, How could I forget, when he resides in my heart & still rules it. He has made his permanent place there. I missed him terribly. There were days when I desperately wanted to talk to him, wanted to see him. But I resisted & controlled my stubborn heart.

Phulla Bua knew everything. Chachaji had told her the reason why I wanted to leave Ahmedabad & stay in Mumbai. I was happy that she never talked about it but always supported me, whenever I felt low. She is my strength now.

I didn't have much friends here now. But there was someone who wanted me to be his life partner, which I had rejected several times. At first, I thought that he was joking, but then one day while having dinner with me & Phulla Bua, he had asked me again which looked quite serious. That day, I realized that he was seriously interested in me. But I didn't want to hurt him or lose him as my friend, so I told him everything about my past. I never mentioned Sameer's name as I didn't think it appropraite.

He understood but still he is waiting for me. I could see it in his eyes. But what can I do, when I still love that charming face who hasn't left my heart even for a second? Phulla bua asked me to give him a chance at least as he was my good friend & also my boss. But I had already made some decisions when I had left Ahmedabad that I would never marry anyone else as my heart already belongs to someone special.

But something is bothering me from last few days as if something is going to happen again that would change my life.




How was the first chapter?


So, any guesses who is this new person in Naina's life?

Will she agree to his marriage proposal?

And what will happen when Preeti visits this time?


Next update will be on Sameer's POV.

Seven long years is not a small time, so do you think that someone has already replaced Naina's place in his life?


Do shower your precious votes & comments if you liked the update.

Ignore the mistakes.


With Lots of Love,

Daksha...❤

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Very emotional and loving story seven yrs of loneliness is very painful waiting for story to unfold and I'm eagerly waiting for sameer pov it also be very painful i thing

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Amazing starting of the story. A very long separation. Let's see how the story unfolds.

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Originally posted by: Shanayayudkbh90

Very emotional and loving story seven yrs of loneliness is very painful waiting for story to unfold and I'm eagerly waiting for sameer pov it also be very painful i thing

Thank you so much dear ❤️

Yesss 7 years is a very long time...

You're right...

The next chapter is more emotional than this...

I will update the next part on Thursday 😊👍

Keep reading ❤️

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Amazing starting of the story. A very long separation. Let's see how the story unfolds.

Thank you so much dear ❤️

Yesss... It is a very long separation...

Be ready to cry more in the next part...

Will update the next part on Thursday 😊👍

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Hello everyone...

I'm back with the next part...


TANHAYEE

CHAPTER 2


SAMEER


I would never forget the day when I pushed away Naina from my life. How could I do this to her? Chachaji had agreed to our relation just a day ago & I spoiled everything the next day. Naina was the only sunshine of my life. She was everything to me, my best friend, my love, my soulmate, my life, then how did I turn my back to her, that too just because of Munna's notions. I could have made him understand to trust Naina, but what did I do? I said the exact words that he had said to me & broken up with her. How could I do that?


FLASHBACK (7 Years Ago)

When I sat on my bike after breaking up with Naina, I saw her reflection in the rear-view mirror. She stood there like a statue. I wanted to turn & see if she was alright but my damn ego didn't allow me too... I reached college in the next ten minutes. I walked towards my best friends who were waiting for me near the bike stand. I saw their tensed faces but didn't utter a word... Without exchanging any words, we left to attend our lectures.

When we reached the corridor, Preeti came to me, "Arey Jijaji... Aap aa gaye? Par Naina kahaan hai? Aapke saath nahi aayi kya?" She peeked behind me to check if her sister was following us. But she didn't find her there & looked at me, "Kya hua hai? Aur Naina kahaan hai? Dekho Jijaji mujhe ab darr lag raha hai. Wohh aapse milne gayi thi na, fir aapke saath waapis kyun nahi aayi? Meri behen kahaan hai?", she almost shouted.

But before I could utter a word, Munna spoke, "Itni hi fikar hai toh khud jaakar dhoond le apni behen ko. Hamare bhai par kyun chilla rahi hai?" Preeti just glared at us & left the college. I was already feeling bad that I didn't check on Naina if she was coming back to college or not. I didn't say anything & attended the lectures.

There was no trace of Naina or Preeti even for the next day. I was desperate to see her & hear her voice. I didn't ask Swati or Kamya about her whereabouts. Two days had already passed & I didn't see both the sisters on the third day too. Now I was worried for my girl. What had happened that she didn't come to college. I wanted to ask but didn't have courage at all.

Did she tell her friends about our conversation & our break up? I don't think so. We were sitting in the RedRose Café, when the girls walked in without Naina & Preeti. My heart knew that something bad has happened or else Naina wouldn't have missed the college. The girls joined us & ordered for Samosas. I wanted to ask them about her but I couldn't speak.

"Kamya... Yeh Naina aur Preeti aaj bhi nahi aaye? Sab thik hai na?", I wanted to thank Pandit for being my savior by asking what I couldn't. Swati looked straight at me & said, "Naina ko do din se bohot bukhaar hai. Hum kal college ke baad gaye the unse milne. Bohot kamzor ho gayi hai Naina inn do dinon mein hi aur Preeti uska khayaal rakhne ke liye uske saath hai. Aakhir uski Jaan basti hai uski behen mein."

My heart broke hearing the whole thing. My Naina wasn't well. All this was happening because of me. I've hurt that innocent soul for no fault of hers. My eyes misted instantly & I blinked them away before anyone could see. But nothing escaped from the eyes of my best friends. They had seen them. I just got up & walked out to breathe in some fresh air.

I sat on a bench in the garden & closed my eyes. Her face instantly popped up as always. But this time it wasn't her smiling face, it was her gloomy face. This time the tears didn't wait & flowed down my cheeks. I felt my friends' presence next to me. Pandit rubbed my back, "Sameer... Tu tension mat le. Bhabhi bilkul thik ho jaayegi do din mein, fir dekh lena usse jee bharke." "Yeh kya bol raha hai Ponga. Wohhh ab koi Bhabhi nahi hai hamari. Agar tu bhool gaya hai toh main tujhe yaad dila deta hun ki hamare bhai ne usse rishta tod diya hai. Toh ab se yeh Bhabhi Bhabhi karna band kar. Samjha?"

I didn't react & left alone towards my home. It was over a week but to my dismay, there was still no trace of Naina. It was after ten days that I saw Preeti entering the college but she was alone. She passed by me but didn't look at any one of us. Swati, Kamya & Hema were already waiting for her near the entrance. I wanted to know where was my Naina but couldn't do it.

The girls entered the college & attended all the lectures. They didn't even join us in the canteen. I was waiting for them so that at least Pandit would've asked about Naina. But the girls didn't come. I was on the verge of going mad if I didn't know where was she. Preeti maintained distance between us. She never looked in our direction & never crossed our paths.

My heart knew that I had messed up big this time. Naina has definitely taken some drastic step. I hadn't seen her since last fifteen days, hadn't heard her voice. I was on the verge of a severe breakdown. I didn't know where was my Naina. I couldn't eat, couldn't sleep. I was just alive, breathing without her.

I couldn't take anymore & walked towards Preeti & the girls who were sitting in the empty classroom having their lunch. I stopped right in front of Preeti & asked, "Naina kahaan hai? Aur itne din se college kyun nahi aa rahi?" My best friends had followed me inside the classroom & stood behind me.

"Jee... Aap kaun hai? Aur main apni behen ke baare mein aapko kyun bataun? Kya lagti hai meri behen aapki?", her answer left me speechless. "Preeti tum aise kyun baat kar rahi ho mujhse? Please mujhe batao Naina thik hai na? Please Preeti... Maine usse do hafton se na dekha hai aur na uski aawaaz suni hai. Please ek baar bataa do wohh kaisi hai aur kahaan hai, main fir aage kuch nahi poochunga."

"Aur aapko lagta hai ki main bataa dungi." She got up from the bench & stood in front of me, "Aap na shukar manao ki Naina ne mujhe uski kasam de rakhhi hai warna pataa nahi main kya kar jaati. Aur rahi baat wohhh kahaan hai aur kaisi hai, usse aapko koi farak nahi padna chahiye. Jab rishta hi nahi raha toh yeh sab poochne ka koi matlab nahi hai. Aap jaiye, Sunaina ke paas kyunki aapke inn doston ke mutabik wohh aapko kabhi chod ke nahi jaayegi. Aakhir aapke status ki bhi toh hai."

She looked at my friends & smiled, "Ab toh khush ho naa. Tumhe jaise chahiye waisi Bhabhi mil jaayegi. Kyun?" I looked at the other girls & asked them, "Dekho tum logon ko pataa hai na Naina kahan hai, please mujhe bataa do." The girls didn't say anything. They just packed their stuff & left the classroom.

I sat down on the bench with a thud. Where was she? I had to know. Who would tell me? I got the answer & left the college on my bike to meet Chachaji. I went to his workplace & he wasn't surprised to see me there. He motioned me towards his cabin. He gestured me to sit & I obliged.

"Tohhh aaj yahan kaise aana hua Sameer?", he came straight to the point. "Chachaji... Main yeh jaanne aaya hun ki Naina kahaan hai?" He held my gaze for a while & asked, "Kya karoge jaankar?" I didn't know the answer myself. "Maine Naina ko do hafton se dekha nahi college mein. Pehle pataa chala ki usko bohot bukhaar tha par fir Preeti akeli hi college aane lagi. Isliye jaanna tha ki Naina thik toh hai na aur kahaan hai?"

"Tumne yeh sawaal shayad Preeti se bhi kiye honge aur jahaan tak main Preeti ko jaanta hun, usne tumhe kuch nahi bataaya. Isliye tum mere paas aaye ho, Naina ke haal chaal poochne. Kyun main sahi keh raha hun na Sameer?" I just lowered my eyes & he got his answer. He continued, "Tumhe kya lagta hai ki jab meri apni beti ne tumhe kuch nahi bataaya toh main tumhe jawaab dunga?"

He stood up from his chair & walked towards me, "Tum apna time barbaad kar rahe ho Sameer. Jis tarah tumne meri bacchi ka dil toda hai, mann toh kar raha hai ki main tumhe dhakke maar kar yahaan se nikaal dun. Par main aise nahi karunga, kyunki jaanta hun ki tum meri bacchi ki jaan ho."

I finally looked at him in his eyes & begged, "Chachaji... Please chahiye toh mujhe maar lijiye, koi bhi sazaa de dijiye, par please mujhe bataiye ki meri Naina thik hai na." Hot tears made its presence again & I didn't mind to cry in front of him. His eyes too had turned wet but he composed himself, "Naina thik hai. Sun liya. Ab tum jaa sakte ho."

I was happy to hear that she was fine but still he hadn't answered about where was she. I tried again, "Naina kahaan hai Chachaji??? Aur college kyun nahi aa rahi?" His face remained blank & he answered, "Naina ab college kabhi nahi aayegi. Aur wohh kahaan hai, iska jawaab tumhe kabhi nahi milega. Na mujhse, na kisi aur se."

My heart almost stopped hearing his answer. That only meant that she wasn't here anymore. I cried earnestly feeling that I had lost my Naina forever. He kept looking at me with tears in his eyes for some more time. "Ab kyun ro rahe ho Sameer? Tumne hi yeh rishta toda hai na? Fir ab yeh aansoon kyun? Tumhe toh khush hona chahiye ki Naina ab tumhari zindagi se hamesha ke liye chali gayi hai. Kabhi laut kar waapis nahi aayegi. Munna ne yahi kaha tha na ki usne tumhe waapis chod diya toh tumhara kya haal hoga. Dikh raha hai mujhe ki tumhara kya haal ho raha hai."

He took a deep breath, controlling his anger, "Sameer... Kya tumne ek baar bhi socha ki tumhare yeh keh dene se Naina pe kya guzregi? Nahi socha tumne, ek baar bhi tumne meri bacchi ke liye nahi socha. Bas Munna ne keh diya aur tumne maan liya ki Naina firse tumhe chodkar chali jaayegi. Bas itna hi bharosa tha apne pyaar par, apni Naina par?"

"Uss din Mandir mein toh danke ki chot pe apna pyaar kabula tha na, aur dusre din hi tumne yeh sab kiya? Ek baar bhi socha Naina pe kya bitegi? Meri bacchi waise hi itne kathin daur se ubri thi aur tumne fir se usse tod diya. Maine uska dard dekha hai, rote hue dekha apni bacchi ko, tootte hue dekha hai. Jab usne Ahmedabad chodne ki baat ki na, tab mujhe ehsaas hua ki meri beti tumse kitna pyaar karti hai. Jaante ho kya kahaa usne?"

I looked at him helplessly, "Usne kahaa ki main yahaan rehkar roz Sameer ko aur khudko tootte hue nahi seh paaungi. Meri bacchi tab bhi tumhare baare mein soch rahi thi, jab tumne tumhara yeh pyaar khatam kar diya tha. Tumhe dekhkar gussa bhi aa raha hai aur dayaa bhi. Jaanta hun ki tum bhi usse bohot pyaar karte ho. Par ab yahi tumhari kismat hai. Zindagi bhar ki sazza hi samajh lo. Kyunki Naina ab kabhi waapis nahi aayegi, wohh hamesha ke liye Ahmedabad chodkar chali gayi hai, uske parivaar ko chodkar chali gayi hai, tumhe chodkar chali gayi hai, hamesha hamesha ke liye..."

He sat down on the chair & cried his heart out. I couldn't bear his tears. What had I done to my Naina? She left the city & her family just because I told her that I couldn't continue our relationship as predicted by Munna. I didn't know what else should I say. My heart had already stopped beating. I & Chachaji continued crying until we heard a knock on the door. The peon had come to call him for a meeting & he left, glancing at me for a last time.

I don't know how I reached home. I don't know how I reached my bedroom. I clutched Naina's photo frame to my chest & sobbed. The door opened & my best friends walked in. They ran to me, the moment they saw me in a crying mess. Pandit instantly offered me a glass of water whereas Munna kept staring at me & the way I had held Naina's picture.

Pandit sat down near my legs & asked, "Tu kahaan gaya tha?" I answered him in an auto pilot mode, "Chachaji se milne." He asked again, "Kya kahaa unhone? Naina kaisi hai aur kahaan hai?" My heart churned remembering what Chachaji had said. I didn't answer & he asked again, "Sameer... Kuch toh bol. Dekh bhai mujhe na teri iss chuppi se dar lag raha hai. Bataa na. Chachaji ne kya kahaa."

Munna couldn't hold any longer & he asked, "Sameer... Kya kahaa Chachaji ne?" I looked at him & stood up. "Tum dono sunna chahte ho na ki Naina ke Chachaji ne kya kahaa. Toh suno. Unhone kahaa ki Naina thik hai." I looked at Munna, "Ek khush khabar hai tere liye bhai. Naina iss sheher ko, apne parivaar ko aur mujhe chod kar hamesha ke liye chali gayi hai, hamesha ke liye. Kabhi waapis nahi aayegi. Toh ab tujhe meri fikar karne ki zarurat nahi hai. Kyunki jab Naina hi yahaan nahi hai toh wohh kaise mera dil todegi. Tu khush hai na Munna?"

Pandit hugged me & cried, "Sameer... Tu shant ho jaa. Hum milkar Naina ko dhoond hi lenge. Rona band kar." I laughed, "Naina ko kyun dhoodna hai? Tu jaanta hai na ki wohh kitni ziddi hai, ek baar jo thaan leti hai, wohh karke hi rahegi. Aur ab iss baar usne thaan liya hai ki kabhi mere paas waapis nahi aayegi. Toh wohhh nahi aayegi Pandit, meri Naina kabhi mere paas waapis nahi aayegi..."

I fell down on my knees & sobbed... "Maine iss baar bohot badi galti kardi. Bohot badi galti. Mujhe lagaa tha ki main usse yeh kehkar thoda pareshaan karunga aur wohh mujhe aur Munna ko manaa legi. Usne mujhe apne parivaar ke liye choda tha toh laga main bhi thoda badla le lunga taaki Naina ko pataa chale ki kaisa lagta hai, jab tum apne pyaar ko apne parivaar ke liye kurbaan karte ho. Kitna hurt hota hai, yahi dikhaana chaahta tha. Par maine meri Naina ko iss stupid si harkat ke wajah se hamesha ke liye kho diya. Hamesha ke liye kho diya maine apni Naina ko. Sab meri hi galti hai."

"Usne sirf meri wajah se apne family ko chod diya, iss sheher ko chod diya. Kitni akeli pad gayi hogi meri Naina. Sab meri hi galti hai. Mujhe nahi karna chahiye tha aisa. Maine meri Naina ka dil tod diya, iss tarah toda hai ki shayad wohh kabhi jud bhi na paaye. Kaise rahegi meri jaan uske parivaar ke bina, mere bina."

"Main kaise rahunga meri jaan ke bina. Naine ne itni badi sazza de di khud ko bhi aur mujhe bhi. Mujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha. Mujhe uska dil nahi todna chahiye tha. Main kaise rahunga meri Naina ke bina. Kahaan hogi wohh. Kis haal mein hogi. Apne parvaar se durr akeli kaise rahegi wohh. Maine usse iss kadar tod diya ki usne itna bada faisla le liya. Aisa faisla jisse sabse jyada usne hi khoya hai. Mere paas toh tum dono ho, par uske paas kaun hai? Koi nahi... Meri stupidity ki wajah se usne itna bada kadam uthaaya. Main khud ko kabhi maaf nahi kar paaunga, kabhi maaf nahi kar paaunga. Yeh maine kya kar diya. Kya kar diya maine..."

I broke down totally & sobbed like a child. Pandit & Munna tried to calm me down but I pushed them away. "Akela chod do mujhe. Mujhe kisise nahi milna. Kisise baat nahi karni. Jao tum dono yahaan se. Akela chod do mujhe. Akela..." I don't what happened next as darkness clouded around me. I had fainted...

I don't know how much time I was in deep slumber. When I opened my eyes, I was in a hospital room. I saw my mother & Rohan sitting next to me. "Sameer... tu uth gaya. Rohan jaa jaldi se doctor ko bulaakar la." I saw him running out of the room to call the doctor. In the next minute, Munna & Pandit entered the room.

Rohan too got back with the doctor & the nurse. He asked the others to leave the room so he could check me up. "How are you feeling Sameer?", he asked me. I just looked blankly at him. I couldn't answer. My throat had gone dry. "Paani..." The nurse offered me a glass of water & I gulped it down in a single sip.

I looked at the doctor again, "I'm fine. Just discharge me from here. I can't stay here. I've some important work to do." He looked at me for a long moment & asked, "You know you fainted right. You are too weak to travel or do anything right now. So, I would advise you to rest for few days."

"I can't rest doctor. The work is really important. I need to go. Please let me go. I need to find someone. It's really important." He shook his head, "No... I won't discharge you at any cost. You need rest." He turned to the nurse, "Call his family." My mother, my friends & Rohan entered.

Doctor spoke directly to my mother, "Dekhiye... Aapke bete ko aaraam ki bohot zarurat hai. lagta hai bohot dinon se thik se khaaya nahi hai aur kuch jyada hi stress liya hai. Iski wajah se bohot kamzor ho gaya hai. Ab aapko hi uska acche se khayaal rakhna hai. Agar aise hi chalta raha toh Sameer ki health kaafi kharaab ho sakti hai."

My mother's eyes teared up & she agreed to the doctor, "Aap fikar mat kijiye doctor, main apne bete ka acche se khayaal rakhungi. Ummmm. Kya main Sameer ko ghar lekar jaa sakti hun." The doctor looked at me for a moment & then agreed, "Thik hai. Aap Sameer ko le jaaiye par abhi usse kahin baahar mat jaane dijiyega. Bohot kamzor hai, kahin waapis behosh na ho jaaye."

He handed over the prescription to my mother & Rohan took care of the discharge formalities. I was home by evening. My mother prepared food for us while Rohan & Mundit stayed with me. I dozed off because of the effects of the medicines. At night, my mother woke me up for dinner. She fed me dalrice with her own hands & my eyes misted automatically.

Munna, Pandit & Rohan too ate dinner sitting next to me. They continued their banters to cheer me up but my mind was full of regret for the girl whose heart was broken so brutally by me. I finished the dinner & Rohan handed me the medicines. My mother was back after finishing her chores.

Everyone was sitting around me. my mother caressed my head & asked, "Sameer...Kya main tumse kuch pooch sakti hun?" I just looked at her & blinked my eyes. She continued, "Kya hua hai beta? Mujhe batao shaayad mein kuch madad kar paaun." The control that I had kept on my tears snapped again & I cried badly hiding my face on her lap.

She kept caressing my head & let me cry. She didn't stop me at all. After few minutes, I heard her voice, "Bas karo Sameer. Kitna royega. Ab ekdum chup ho jaa aur bataa kya baat hai." I got up & sat facing her. I narrated her everything from the start, from the day I had collided with Naina in school. I didn't mention her name. Everyone heard my love story from the start till how it ended two weeks back.

My mother & Rohan didn't blink at all. They heard each & everything without disrupting me. Pandit too added some bits but even he took care of not mentioning her name. He referred Naina as Bhabhi all the time. Munna didn't say a word. He just sat there listening to us silently.

When we finished, my mother just hugged me tightly & cried her heart out. "Sorry Sameer... Jab bhi tumhe meri zarurat hoti thi, main tumhare saath nahi thi. Par aaj main promise karti hun ki ab se mein tumhari zindagi ke har mod par tumhare saath rahungi. Tumhe kabhi akela feel nahi hone dungi beta."

I wiped her tears slowly, "Mummy... Aapne itna keh diya wohi bohot hai. Par aapki family ko bhi aapki zarurat hai. Aapke pati, saas, Rohan aur Deepika ko aapki zarurat hai. Aap meri chinta mat kijiye mummy, main thik hun. Bachpan se hi akela rehna sikh gaya hun. Toh aage bhi aise hi rehne dijiye. Naa aap yahan rehne aa sakti hai aur naa main Delhi aaunga. Toh please hum durr rehkar hi paas rahenge. Aapko mere liye aapki life mein compromise karne ki zarurat nahi hai."

"Nahi beta. Tum aisa kyun soch rahe ho?", Vishakha felt bad after hearing his words. She was the main reason for his loneliness. Whenever he needed her, she was never present by his side. She had so easily forgotten all about him, when she had remarried. A mother understands the need of her children, then how did she leave him alone? She was feeling guilty now for treating her own son as a stepson.

I saw the look on my mother's face & realized that I shouldn't have said that, but wasn't that the truth of life. No one stayed with me for long. First my father died when I was three years old. After a year, my mother remarried. I was too small to understand anything at that age. But as I grew up, I realized that I wasn't welcomed in her new home.

I was sent to hostel in Nainital. I missed my parents a lot. I spent my entire childhood in that hostel until Nanu brought me to his house in Ahmedabad. After some years, he died too. Then Naina came into my life as my sunshine. But see, I've lost her now forever. Munna & Pandit were the only ones who are still there in my life as my lifelines.

"Mummy... Bohot raat ho gayi hai. Aap so jaiye. Rohan tu bhi jaa soja. Tu bhi thak gaya hoga na?" Both of them were still sitting in my room, not ready to leave me. I turned to my best friends, "Tum dono bhi ghar jao. Kal se yahin ho mere saath. Tum dono bhi aaram kar lo." Due to heavy dosage of medicines, my eyes started drooping & I drifted to sleep.

When I got up the next day, I saw my mother's husband enter the room with her. What was he doing here? He must have come to take along his wife & son. Rohan was sleeping next to me. He too woke up after hearing the door open. He asked his father, "Papa... Aap yahaan kya kar rahe hai?"

He replied looking at me, "Main apne bete se milne aaya hun." I didn't want to be a part of their family drama, so I got up to walk towards the washroom to freshen up. "Sameer... Main tumse milne aaya hun." I stopped in my tracks listening to his words. Was he referring me as his son. No, it can't be. I turned slowly towards him, "Aap mujhse milne aaye hai itni durr. Maine thik toh suna na?"

I expected him to shout at me but he didn't, instead he replied softly, "Haannn... Main tumse hi milne aaya hun." He walked to me & hugged me. I was in shock. What had happened to the angry step father? I didn't hug him back but I didn't even push him. This was new to me too.

He broke the hug & continued, "Sameer... Mujhe Vishakha ne kal hi phone karke bataa diya tha ki tumhari tabiyat thik nahi hai. Aur jo kal raat tumne apni zindagi ke baare mein bataaya, wohh bhi mujhe aaj pataa chala. Beta... Kahin na kahin, main bhi tumhara gunehgaar hun. Aaj main tumse dil se maafi maangna chahta hun. Ho sake toh mujhe maaf kar dena beta."

I was already so broken that I had no heart to hurt him back. Even though I didn't want to forgive him, but one look at my mother & Rohan made me do the unimaginable. "It's ok. Aapko maafi maangne ki zarurat nahi hai." I knew even Naina would've asked me to forgive him. So, here I was forgiving the person who was the main reason for my lonely childhood.

"Sameer... Main tumse kuch kehna chaahta hun." I just nodded my head & he continued, "Kya tum hamare saath Delhi rehne aa sakte ho? Jaanta hun wahaan meri Maa ne pehle kitna bura bartaav kiya hai tumhare saath. Par maine unhe kal hi apni behen ke paas USA rehne bhej diya hai. Toh tumhe hamare saath rehne mein koi problem nahi hoga."

Should I go with them? When my Naina has left this city, what's the use of me staying here? If I stayed here, I would miss her more. This option was the best suited for me. Rohan came forward, "Bhai... Please hamare saath chalo na. Mujhe aur Deepika ko bhi aapka saath mil jaayega. Hum bhi aapko kitna miss karte hai, pata hai aapko? Deepika toh hamesha aapko yaad karti rehti hai."

My mother finally stepped ahead & hugged me, "Jo galti humne bohot saal pehle ki thi, usse sudhaarne ka ek mauka hi de do Sameer. Main promise karti hun ki ab se main tumhe kabhi akela nahi chodungi." My heart melted hearing her voice & the craving for a family finally won.

"Main aapke saath Delhi aaunga Mummy..." She hugged me more tightly & cried heartily. I knew my life was going to change drastically after this. After two days, I left the city bidding my final goodbye to my best friends too who had cried terribly when I broke the news of leaving the city. I wanted to search for Naina but I also knew that no one would ever tell me where she was. I asked Pandit to keep a check if she ever visits her house in Ahmedabad, which I knew that would never happen.

FLASHBACK ENDS...


I was sitting in the balcony of my room in Delhi, when my phone rang. I smiled seeing the caller's name. It was my brother, Rohan. I picked up the call, "Bol Rohan. Kaisa hai?" "Bhai... Main toh thik hun. Aapko bohot miss kar raha hun. Ek saal se hum mile nahi hai. Please ek baar mujhse milne aa jaaiye na yahaan. Agar aap nahi aaye na toh main aapse kabhi baat hi nahi karunga."

"Oye... Bas kar ab teri nautanki. Pata hai bohot blackmail karna seekh gaya hai ab tu Rohan." He chuckled & asked, "Toh aap kab aa rahe hai bhai?" I smiled, "Main do din baad aa rahun Mumbai. Meri ek important meeting hai wahaan. Toh tab hi milenge. Main apni flight details tujhe message kar deta hun. Yaad se mujhe lene aa jaana Mr Rohan Somani. Agar mujhe airport par nahi dikhe na toh fir soch lena tera kya haal karunga wahaan aakar."

He laughed at the other end, "Aap bhi nautanki karna seekh hi gaye." I chuckled, "Haaan... Ab bhai behen ke sangat ka asar toh hoga hi na..." We ended the call after discussing about some issues with the recent projects in his company.

I was going to visit him finally after a year. He has been constantly nagging me from last few months to visit him & now finally I'm going to meet him. But this time, my heart is trying to tell me something more, like this trip was going to change my life again...



How was the update?

I've cried terribly while writing this update...

It's really difficult to write the emotional updates & it has been a challenge for me to write this part.


So, finally Sameer is heading to Mumbai...

Will Samaina meet???

Will their destiny again bring them together???

Preeti & Sameer are going to be in Mumbai at the same time?

What's going to happen? Any guesses???


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Ignore the mistakes.


With Lots of Love,

Daksha...❤

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Very emotional and sad update while reading i too cried a lot pls don't separate them its very emotional waiting and excited for next can't wait pls update soon

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Originally posted by: Shanayayudkbh90

Very emotional and sad update while reading i too cried a lot pls don't separate them its very emotional waiting and excited for next can't wait pls update soon

I know the update was too emotional... And I'm sorry for making u cry a lot. Samaina will meet in the upcoming updates...

I will try to post the next update soon😊👍

Thanks❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Very emotional update. Was not able to stop crying. Sameer did a mistake but he was also miserable. Why I think Rohan is naina 's boss. May be or may be not. Just assuming. But very eager to know when they will meet and what will be their reactions. Will be waiting for next update.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dharapriya

Very emotional update. Was not able to stop crying. Sameer did a mistake but he was also miserable. Why I think Rohan is naina 's boss. May be or may be not. Just assuming. But very eager to know when they will meet and what will be their reactions. Will be waiting for next update.

I know it was a vey emotional update. i too cried while writing.

Everything is cleared in the next update.

I'm posting it in a minute..👍

Keep reading... 👍❤

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