FF: PALLAVI by Jalebi Jane SEE NOTE PAGE 117 - Page 64

I just replied to chap28 and then i find chap 29.. Thank you so much 🤗

So Pallavi has an admirer.. but from the looks of Ashaji..no proposal is gonna come from them..

Btw, i wonder if Kirti is wondering why pallavi had saved Raghavs number?

Originally posted by: mayabhi

‘Free to be mine’

Sigh...If only Pallavi had heard that..

wen one thinks it’s all ended or wud end soon.. the other realizes it just the beginning.

Why does Pallavi say it can never be with Raghav? Is it coz of wat Baba n Aayi wud think?

I love how strong Raghavs feelings are.. and with that last line Farhad wud have realized it too.

I cant help but wonder y he stopped the kiss soo suddenly.. with pallavi wondering the same, i thought an explanation wud be shown

Yes, Sister. The interrupted kiss has an explanation but it will be revealed at a time when it has the most dramatic impact.

Okay!! So fangirl moment - I cannot stress how much I anticipate all your updates. Your words have a way of turning my imagination wild!! I so wish you wrote for ITV. It would take the industry by storm and finally bring forth content everyone wants to watch!! It’s a long comment so sorry about that!!

Honestly when I saw your first post I was skeptical. I like my comfort zones and the way you captured me with arnav and Khushi, pari and Aman, yash and anjali, miss boondi, and of course Saleem. I couldn’t imagine you surpassing that. But I should have had faith in your and your words. They have captured me again. Years later with a another couple which I did not expect.

The amount of times I have gone on your website to read and reread the two stories. Anxiously wishing that you would return with any small amount of writing. I have messaged your site anxiously asking about any chance of return. any chance to read the other stories that you had begin to write. I am so glad you are back. All I can say is thank you!! I eagerly await you next updates.

❤️Mira

In awe of the mischievous author who works so hard and gives us an episode everyday. Thank you.

The characters may be stubborn or hard headed but they know what they want and are honest enough to admit it to themselves. That's the reason why I stopped watching the show. Your AU is so much fun!

"Free to be mine." Is going to be my favorite line.... For now.

Episodes 26-29

A fleeting kiss 😎 .

One mere kiss on the lips was enough to tell Pallavi that she wants to live a life with a partner . It was Enough for Raghav to decide after years of not giving his heart to someone cos of his mother that he wanted her with absolute certainty . These lines -

“Free? For?”

“Free to be mine.”

They took my heart ❤️ ...

Ohh! If this isn't one of best tales I have read. I can unabashedly say I would also like to be a part of this kind of kiss which can elicit such feelings☺️ and gives such enlightenments😆 .

So the story is moving fast now with Kirti & Amma moving in Falaknuma.

Farhad'll try his best to get the matters clear from Vivek soon for his Anna. Also, I just realized Raghav kind of confessed infront of Farhad how important she is now. That just makes for one of the best FaRag moments for me now🤗. There're bound to be interactions of many with many now. If Kirti keeps visiting the shop or asks Pallavi to visit her at home, Amma'll also meet her. And we have Rakesh now, please tell me Raghav might visit her shop or see them together & in his polite way remove him from his way 🤣 .

My crazy mind's running rife with the recent chapters now 😳 .

🙌 🙌

I read both of the updates together

Ready to be mine -wow!!

Loved reading his pov about how he felt and why he took those actions. This is going to be beautiful

Ahh Rakesh is interested for sure.... let’s see what happen at the shop, what if Rao turned up there after he find out from his men that a man is at the shop probably flirting with Pallavi

Just fished reading the new chapter I love it. Looking forward to the next update.

I liked reading the Chandni written by you, i hope you will finish that story sometime in future I liked to see how the story ended though.

I am happy to read your current story, I will read Palavi till the end.

Arrey raghav , move fast.... there's one kerchief already to reserve his seat..

First move by rakesh(kiss doesn't count raghav sir:-)).

I want Pallavi to enjoy the attention she gets from perspective males...she deserves it after living life of a widow unnecessarily for so long...

wow pallavi ready to get married and raghav will know soon uff the drama will start then

Ohmydz I came across this story last night and finished it by now.

Absolutely loving it and eager to read how RaghVi happen..❤️