Ek Duje Ke Vaaste 2| CC #33|The Adventures of NOG - Page 7

Originally posted by: MusicOfTheHeart

https://youtu.be/thVAFjU_JTY

Mein sirf duration dekhke hi dar gaya🤣

Plan cancel.... mereko suna hi nahi yeh gaana🤣

Originally posted by: MusicOfTheHeart

Badi Behen ko vul jaogi to mein bhi🤣

*choti

Babu behena badi hai😆

We had a bit of stone rain today jiss bajese we had no current and I thought of going through my school photos(bad idea) ended up writing something... thought of sharing it!

This one's for you Razia because you said last time you wanted to see my writings, Ik I said they were personal so is this one but today I thought what's the harm in sharing? It's not like we all are going to meet for sure and even if we meet I don't think we will discuss some sh*tty poem I wrote at the age of 17 so here you go! I didn't type this one on IF though(laptop mein battery nahi thi) had to pen it down...

Also the last words of last 3 lines are a bit messed so typing them down here-

I now know that you're a drug and no panacea

I'll never know if you remember me without a reminder

And the words you type are actually sweet or pretending to be kinder!

I'll delete it by tomorrow because I don't want it to stay here, open to strangers...

Also I know majority of this poem is less of a poem and more of a memoir but that's what I wanted to pen down... you all won't get the full part of course but I am here to describe situations, incidents so feel free to ask...

Do give your reviews on this one!

P.S- I want your review on the poem not my handwriting🤣 never thought I'll share it or would've written in normal script instead of cursive... also I am damn lazy to type it down

P.P.S- If you're unable to read a part do tell... I won't mind typing down a portion😃

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Ed, shee ran home had me ROFL🤣

Originally posted by: Brute

We had a bit of stone rain today jiss bajese we had no current and I thought of going through my school photos(bad idea) ended up writing something... thought of sharing it!

This one's for you Razia because you said last time you wanted to see my writings, Ik I said they were personal so is this one but today I thought what's the harm in sharing? It's not like we all are going to meet for sure and even if we meet I don't think we will discuss some sh*tty poem I wrote at the age of 17 so here you go! I didn't type this one on IF though(laptop mein battery nahi thi) had to pen it down...

Also the last words of last 3 lines are a bit messed so typing them down here-

I now know that you're a drug and no panacea

I'll never know if you remember me without a reminder

And the words you type are actually sweet or pretending to be kinder!

I'll delete it by tomorrow because I don't want it to stay here, open to strangers...

Also I know majority of this poem is less of a poem and more of a memoir but that's what I wanted to pen down... you all won't get the full part of course but I am here to describe situations, incidents so feel free to ask...

Do give your reviews on this one!

P.S- I want your review on the poem not my handwriting🤣 never thought I'll share it or would've written in normal script instead of cursive... also I am damn lazy to type it down

P.P.S- If you're unable to read a part do tell... I won't mind typing down a portion😃

I loved it Lavy!❤️ I think I might know where it's stemming from (especially from the line in the 2nd last para) but like always, you've managed to capture the emotions of hurt, longing and yet wanting to remember – so well!

Like they say you can never forget the ones you love/once loved. They creep through; within your words, thoughts, mannerisms, reflections. And it's beautiful. To save a part of someone different from oneself. The part that can never be reopened but can be cherished👍🏼 The part that once made you a happy soul now made you a better one.

Painfully beautiful! If you don't mind, can I save this to my gallery?😳

And I have to say –not that they weren't always brilliant but your writings are getting more and more deeper with age! Itni kam umar mein yeh case toh can only imagine how roof-crashing they're gonna be in a few years!

Keep writing please👏

P.S Handwriting bhi achhi lagi ho toh?😉 😃

Originally posted by: Brute

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Kya edit kiya Babu?😆

Bhulna ki jagah bhunna likha tha galti se🤣

Originally posted by: Brute

Ye khalnayak batman kyun bana hai?🤣🤣

Yes kya pata!🤣

Don't know if it was intentional of them to make him look like Zorro/Batman ya phir the art direction team were SS ke relatives😆 Haven't watched the film either aur ab ichha bhi nahi🤣

Originally posted by: Brute

Originally posted by: Vageeshwarics

Lavy, it took me a while to find out who Brute is😆

Vageeshwari!!!!🤗 How have you been!?

Lavy is getting too comfy with the new name these days😆

Originally posted by: MusicOfTheHeart

Badi Behen ko vul jaogi to mein bhi🤣

Choti behen hai but you aren't incorrect. Hukum badi behen ki tarah hi karti hai😆

Not that I mind it either🤣 She's more mature than me😆