FF: PALLAVI by Jalebi Jane SEE NOTE PAGE 117 - Page 55

I am quite behind in the episodes but yours is one of the most well written fictions on MHRW ❤️ And your sheer consistency is so praiseworthy 👏 But you gotta tell me - how do you write with this speed? It takes me ages to be satisfied with what I have written.

Also, I am curious about you as a writer. Are you planning to take this up professionally? You would do amazing in this field 😊

Clearly Raghav n Vivek have a pretty good friend. Coz though Vivek is there for work, Raghav was indulging him with the story telling and replying to his redundant query..

I loved Raghav blunt honesty in wat he wud have done with his new bride ( probably cos he was imagining that bride to be Pallavi) But wat i liked most was his reaction that Mandhar last her untouched.. I’m sure there were a lot of laddoos bursting in his head..

Pallavi being their savior by donating her rare blood.. I’m enjoying it.. can hardly wait to read more

Originally posted by: mayabhi

Clearly Raghav n Vivek have a pretty good friend. Coz though Vivek is there for work, Raghav was indulging him with the story telling and replying to his redundant query..

I loved Raghav blunt honesty in wat he wud have done with his new bride ( probably cos he was imagining that bride to be Pallavi) But wat i liked most was his reaction that Mandhar last her untouched.. I’m sure there were a lot of laddoos bursting in his head..

Pallavi being their savior by donating her rare blood.. I’m enjoying it.. can hardly wait to read more

I agree, Sister---he asked Pallavi how long she had been a widow---he should have asked her how long they had been married.

I was re-reading some episodes last night, and had this crazy notion that after Raghav and Pallavi declare their love, she might ask him---as girls do!---"when did you fall in love with me?"---I think he might say, "when you told me you poisoned your husband." hehe

Originally posted by: JalebiJane

I agree, Sister---he asked Pallavi how long she had been a widow---he should have asked her how long they had been married.

I was re-reading some episodes last night, and had this crazy notion that after Raghav and Pallavi declare their love, she might ask him---as girls do!---"when did you fall in love with me?"---I think he might say, "when you told me you poisoned your husband." hehe

That wud b cute 🥰

I really loved that reply btw..

quick wit is an admirable quality I believe

P.s - sorry for all the typos.. was typing in a hurry.

Originally posted by: gurl-enchanted

I am quite behind in the episodes but yours is one of the most well written fictions on MHRW ❤️ And your sheer consistency is so praiseworthy 👏 But you gotta tell me - how do you write with this speed? It takes me ages to be satisfied with what I have written.

Also, I am curious about you as a writer. Are you planning to take this up professionally? You would do amazing in this field 😊

Thank you, Sister, for your generous words.

This past month I've had more time for writing so I've been prolific---but most days I only have time for approx 1000 words. My only goal every day is to keep moving the story forward.

Being satisfied with your own writing is important. But if it begins to interfere with your output then maybe re-adjust your standards a bit.

Originally posted by: ReemShah

No..no..no why did you leave it there😭

That was dramatic ik but i wanted it to continue so badly. I really liked the new character--the detective aka Vivek--

It will be priceless to when Raghav come to know the truth..and i really liked the bond between Vivek and Raghav.

Also Pallavi is going to donate blood anonymously would be the next question?

Waiting for next update

Thank you, Sister. Yes, Vivek is a funny character. I have the habit of making the detectives in my tales oddballs. But they are effective and bring results so my hero/heroine tolerates them.

Originally posted by: BlueJayFire

Love your narration and the extra sweet touch of places in hyderabad..makes it so cool to relate..

Thank you, Sister. Are you familiar with Hyderabad?

Originally posted by: virmantaarey

Aaaaa Raghav finding out the truth about Mandar will be an interesting turn.

This time around I hope Raghav will know Pallavi gave the blood unlike in the show!

It's okay even if the chapter is short as long as you give your daily dose of story, I'll be glad 🤣

Also hope you had a great break, take care ❤️

SPOILER ALERT: Raghav will most def know who saved Amma's life.

hehe

Originally posted by: NESRIA

🥳congtras on the new prof pic

I loved shy pallu ☺️

Cant wait to the hospital drama 😆

Thank you, Sister.

It's the logo from my website and I thought I'd use it here :-)

This was amazing chapter. Loved it