ShiVi OS: Humdard - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

66

Views

11191

Users

25

Likes

142

Frequent Posters

AppleOfEye thumbnail
Group Promotion 7 Thumbnail Anniversary 6 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 3 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Gurikaur_ginni

Wow👏👏

Kitna pyare pyare scenes the❤️❤️

Padhte padhte saare scenes imagine bhi kar rahi thi mai saath saath


Totally loved it

Thank you for this amazing OS 

asfi🤗

Thank u so much meri behena🤗❤️❤️

I'm so glad ki tujhe ye itna pasand aya❤️

AppleOfEye thumbnail
Group Promotion 7 Thumbnail Anniversary 6 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 3 years ago
#12

Waiting for ur reviews guys❤️

AppleOfEye thumbnail
Group Promotion 7 Thumbnail Anniversary 6 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 3 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Foxii

Amazing Asfiya, well written :)


I liked how observant Shiva was to Raavi.

Raavis positivity once Shiva said that she is his wife.. was adorable 


Do write more :)

Thank u so much dear 🤗❤️

raindropsroses thumbnail
Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail Anniversary 3 Thumbnail Engager 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 3 years ago
#14

This is so cutee! ♥️ keep writing Asfiya!

I love Shiva and Raavi getting all comfy with each other!

Edited by raindropsroses - 3 years ago
ms.ObseSSeD thumbnail
Anniversary 11 Thumbnail Group Promotion 3 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 3 years ago
#15

Cute!! What a nice one shot. If only things had gone this way. I really enjoyed reading it and krish's line about shiva being able to read Raavi 

milkcakejamun thumbnail
Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail Anniversary 3 Thumbnail Engager 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 3 years ago
#16

Reserving post because I read this 10 minutes before class, lol, and you deserve more than, "This is ❤️"


What can I say? I loved it!


We had an "appearance" of our favorite chipkali (pretty much the mascot of our couple). Lol, Shiva would so do that in the future to mess with her. He knows her most vital weakness now! 😈


Raavi's hurt when Shiva became hurt with the hot tea was just ❤️, especially after seeing today's episode where she is laughing at his pain 😭. I can't wait to see her transition into this once she learns more about Shiva.


I also ❤️❤️❤️ how you had Raavi be completely aware during the scene where he folds the clothes and picks her up. The scene was so soft and gentle. It tugged all of my heart strings, and it was just too sad knowing Raavi doesn't know how caring her husband was, even after such a blowout occured in front of the entire family!


Even though she said "I hate you," in front of him, she knows deep inside she can NEVER hate him! --> This line was ❤️!


And omg, the fall on Shiva while he is shirtless (really, really, really want to see this on screen, but maybe I'm just being thirsty for some good ShiVi scenes)! My favorite aspect was how her mangalsutra became stuck with his pendant, really shows how much fate (and us fans) want them to be together!


The first aid scene was so cute! Maybe if Shiva gets hurt in the future, it won't be Gaumbi/Dhara doing first aid, but Raavi!


"Tu Shiva Ki Biwi Hai!" ❤️

Edited by milkcakejamun - 3 years ago
anjurana2009 thumbnail
Group Promotion 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 3 years ago
#17

Amazing, Lovely ❤️❤️

👏👏

AppleOfEye thumbnail
Group Promotion 7 Thumbnail Anniversary 6 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 3 years ago
#18

Thanks🤗❤️

AppleOfEye thumbnail
Group Promotion 7 Thumbnail Anniversary 6 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 3 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: katheriene

Beautiful os❤️

Shivi's moments were so amazing👏

Continue writing such stories

Thank u so much🤗❤️

AppleOfEye thumbnail
Group Promotion 7 Thumbnail Anniversary 6 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 3 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: EmeraldPrincess

twinnie🤗

title padhke mujhe laga tune kahi galat forum me to post nahi kar diya😆

Kya yaar🤣🤣🤣

Beautiful piece yaar, I was getting bored so thank you for this. 

Shukriya Judwa🤗

And now I got an idea too so I am to writing another one.😉

Now I'm curious to know aisa kya idea mila tujhe😉 Waiting for ur update😈

Edited by AppleOfEye - 3 years ago