Bariyan a ShiVi ficton [Completed] - Page 9

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PART 4

The day before Haldi,

The marriage preparation of ShiVi were going on full swing. Gautam and Shiva returned early to help Dhara in last minute preparation before the functions started the next day. Krish was looking after the wedding decoration. Dhara was instructing and scolding Shiva for whatever he did or did not do again. Suddenly Dev entered supporting Raavi by shoulder who was struggling to walk. All four hurried to her.

“ yeh kya hua Dev, isse chot kaise aayi”, Dhara asked as Shiva took hold of Raavi’s hand looking her from head to toe worried. Raavi went to him and leaned into him relaxing immediately.

“Bandariya hai yeh bhabi,jaroor kahi uchal kud kar rahi thi aur lag gayi”, Shiva gently led her to the nearest sitting arrangement, the swing. Dhara kneeled to inspect her ankle, Gaumbhi and Shiva sat on her either sides,

“Main tujhe hi khush khabri dene aa rahi thi aur tu mere galti dhoond raha hai”, Raavi said narrowing her eyes at him,

“Khoosh khabri!! Itni jaldi ?abhi toh shadi bhi nahi huyi!”, Krish said earning unbelievable looks from everyone except ShiVi who exchanged a confused look. They looked at the others and understood the meaning of Krish’s exclaimation seeing them surpassing their smile, Shiva glared at him as Raavi tried not to snort,

“aee krish, tere dimag ko brake laga warna samjha”, Krish immediately moved away to bring first aid box,

“main mami ke ghar ke samne sehi jaa raha ta Bhabi, Yeh mujhe bahar dikha, muh latka ke bathi thi. Baat kya toh pata chala yeh haal hai, par inhe andar nahi jana tha pair thik karne keliye. Shiva se milna tha aur mujhe yaha le aana pada”, Dev narrated as Krish came with the first aid box. Dhara started treating her,

“Tujhe itna bhi kya jaldi thi joh tang todwa di”, Gaumbhi asked amused at her antics, Raavi winced and clutched Shiva’s hand more tightly as Dhara twisted it a bit,

“Iska best friend hai – afaat.Uske begair reh nahi paya. Iss liye usse dhoonde yaha aa gayi tu, mami ke behan ki beti”, Shiva said with a grimace as Raavi winced once more,

“ Gaumbhi, Dhara di,school se mere acceptance letter aa gaye. They want me to start from next month”, ignoring Shiva’s sarcastic comment, Raavi told them the reason of her excitement.

Apparently,Raavi wanted to pursue teaching profession as she had both interest and qualification. She had discussed about it with Shiva who agreed happily provided she was doing it for her contentment not for any other reason. She assured him that she was doing this because she loved children and enjoyed teaching. She had applied for the recently vacated post of assistant teacher in their local school. ShiVi had informed the family on her final selection day. GauRa were more than happy with her decision. However, Suman and Prafulla were reluctant at first. Suman, fearing that her soon would feel inferior to his wife regarding his education or profession. Instead she saw Shiva proud and happy about that, so she relented. Prafulla, well she couldn’t understand the need of Raavi doing a job. But Raavi somehow managed her. She too agreed seeing her dearest child all excited and gleeful. Raavi knew she was selected but was waiting for her acceptance letter. Today it had come and she became excited to share it with Shiva and family. Out of that over excitement, she had sprained her left ankle.

Hearing her announcement, Krish excitedly hugged ShiVi , Dhara caressed her face proudly ,

“ yeh toh bohat khushi ke baat hai”,

“mujhe toh pehle se hi pata tha tu Tik jayegi. Chipkali hai, jaha nazre dale waha chipak jaye”, Raavi rolled her eyes at Shiva, he and his twist of word! Gautam patted both’s cheek,

“ chal main mithai laati hu, fir tum dono jaake Maa ko bata na aur ashirvad bhi lena”, Shivi nodded at Gaumbhi.

“aur aab tu aaram kar le.Dinner ke baad Shiva tujhe ghar chod aayega”,

“ Bhabi, main kehta hu isse yaha rakh lete hai. Vaise bhi kal subah phir se yeh yaha milegi”,

“Tu na inn dono ka tang khichayi karna band kar, FILHAL ke liye”, Dev said pulling Krish’s ear,

“ kal se shadi ka function shuru hoga, phir aajaye gi woh yaha hamesha ke liye”, Dhara said as she cupped both of their face lovingly. Kissing their foreheads, she pulled them in a hug. Dev and Krish hugged Gaumbhi . The family went to do their work leaving ShiVi there alone. Raavi had her head on Shiva’s shoulder while he just leaned back closing his eyes. Her feet were propped up on a tool. They were talking and anyone who didn’t know them personally would think them two madly in love couple sitting together and whispering ‘sweet nothings’ to each other. But their family knew them well. Even though they believed them to be in love, they could tell still no ‘sweet nothings’ was happening there. Instead there must be a competition of ‘bitter nothings’ going on, who could irritate whom better. Raavi raised her head now and then, might be to make her point clear. Shiva's expression kept varying from smirk to scowl back to smirk, making their silly banter evident to the onlooker. Well, wasn’t that what made their relation most unique!!

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Mehndi night,

Raavi was sitting on the low cot decorated for her and Shiva waiting for the ceremony to begin. She was quite excited to apply mehndi and if her and Krish’s plan went well, Shiva would have mehndi on him too. She chuckled to herself then looked at Shiva irritatingly as he hovered around her looking at the entrance every now and then. She exhaled a sigh,

“kya kar raha hai tu Shiva!!”,

“yeh samajh nahi aa raha Dev aise bhoot ki tarah kya mandara raha hai waha”

“ Bhoothnath toh tu hai. Tu jaise usse ghoor raha hai na , tu mere mangetar kam usska ashiq jyada lag raha hai”, Shiva scowled at her, then continued his important work –trying to understand what Dev was doing. He had told him he was going to introduce them to someone special. Did that mean he had invited Rishita? That should be a good thing,right? He was finally bringing her. Shiva found out later that she was Janardhan Seth’s daughter. Dev fell for her that meant he saw something good in her. It shouldn’t matter their history with Seth. He still felt tensed imagining Gaumbhi’s reaction. He also felt worried about how Raavi would react? Seeing Dev with Rishita could open her old wounds. He didn’t want her to reminisce her heartbreak again. He prayed that everything may work out well. Dev went out suddenly and entered with a girl. Shiva kept his palm on Raavi’s shoulder who looked at him questioningly. She saw him staring at the entrance, so she too turned to look at Dev and saw Rishita was with him. Shiva looked at Raavi concernedly but her face had broken into a smile already. Shiva could guarantee she would have bounced over to them if he didn’t hold her elbow firmly pulling her back. Well, she didn’t look sad or hurt?! He sighed in relief.

“chod na Shiva, mujhe unse milna hai”,

“akal ki dushman, jiss over excitement ki kuwe mein tu hai na wahi pe reh, bahar mat aa. Warna hum pakde jayenge”,

“ woh kaise”,

“tu waha chalang de te huye jayegi aur bolegi Rishita kitni khushi huyi tumse milke, aur Dev nahi puchega kaise janti hai tu usse!”

“ha maine toh socha hi nahi”,

“tu soch ti hi kaha hai baas mendak ki tarah uchal kud hi aata hai”,

“ Dekh bhoothnath ,aaj meri mehndi hai issliye main tujhe ansuna karti hu. Chal main tujhe mehndi lagati hu”, Shiva narrowed his eyes at her,

“ Ayy chipkali tu chahti hai ke main tujhe mehndi lagau, jaise uss din haldi lagaya tha”, he asked with a mischief glint in his eyes,

“Mehndi laga na hai, unme nahna nahi. Koyi jarurat nahi shivaji. Rehne dijiye. Aap bhoothnath hai wahi rahiye”, she replied moving her hands away from him,

“chipkali kahi ki, kitna darpok hai”,

Their banter was interrupted by Krish who popped out of from behind them,

“tum dono phirse soch lo, Abhi bhi mauka hai. Card pe nahi chapa sakte par wedding poster pe Bhoothnath weds Chipkali likwa sakte hai, haa!!”,

“kya idea Krish, tu na ek kaam kar waha Raavi weds Bhoothnath likhwa de”, Raavi grinned at Shiva who just shook his head at the duo- worst devar-bhabi they were gonna be with this kind of ridiculous ideas!!

Dev came to them with Rishita,

“Shiva, tune bhabi ko dekha?KahI dikh nahi rahi hai woh?”,

“nahi toh, hogi aas paas......”,

“aur Gaumbhi bhi toh nazar nahi aa raha”, Dev and ShiVi immediately turned to frown at Krish who changed the topic, “arreh woh raha maa, Gaumbhi aur bhabi.Main bula lati hu yaha”,

”tujhe nahi lagta yeh kuch jyada bak raha hai aaj kal”.

As Dev introduced Rishita to the whole family,everyone found her likable. She was chirpy and friendly. Dhara and Raavi instantly mingled with her. The family was okay with this relation as long as their son was happy. She had made her paternal aunt agree for their relation by blackmailing her on her sensitive topic – election. A few words on how she was going to benefit if she formed a relation with Gautam Pandya who had a reputation in whole Somnath, her aunt agreed readily. So her father had to agree too.

“Dev ne mujhe aap sab ke baare me itna kuch bataya, mujhe na iss parivar se pyar ho gaya”, Rishita exclaimed overwhelmed with their warm welcome,

“Tum dono ko nahi lagta iss ghar ki bahuwon ko pati kam unke parivar pe jyada pyar aa raha hai”, Krish whishpered to Dev-Shiva earning a slap from Gaumbhi,

“Rishita tum na shadi mein jaroor aana”,

“aur ho sake toh apne behan,maa, pure parivar ko le aana. Hum jaldi hi tere ghar rishta leke jayenge”, Dhara added to Raavi’s statement,

“nahi bhabi. Papa promised kyahai woh aayenge aap ke ghar”,

“Saro che”.

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The Wedding Day,

Raavi looked at herself in the mirror as Anita made her ready. Since childhood, she always thought she would be adorned this way for marriage with Dev. Today, she was getting ready for Shiva who had been her sworn enemy ever since they laid their eyes on each other. Surprisingly, she didn’t feel any regret. In fact she found peace and contentment in her heart. In these two months, she had got to know him well. Shiva was a giver, she had concluded. He would readily give up his everything for his closed ones. She didn’t know if love would ever happen between them, but the unnamable bond they had, she knew both of them would cherish and nurture that. She would be happy in her life when she would have a companion like him.

Shiva flashed back to the day he promised Raavi to let her never enter Pandya Nivas in any means. Today he was performing pre wedding ritual before his bride, that very Raavi was brought. What an irony! To be honest, he had no regret for playing along with that mami ke behan ki beti in her farce. Instead he was satisfied with the fact that he was marrying someone who understood and respected every relation the way he did. She might have been brought up by mami but her insights in life and beliefs were far different. He knew he could trust his family with her and today he was doing the right thing.

Raavi was brought to the mandap by her maasi and Anita. As she stood beside Shiva, he looked at her. She offered him her most genuine smile and he for the first time didn’t scowl at her sight. As the wedding pheres proceeded on, they felt the changing relation between them. Their relation was to have a permanent name from then on - man and wife . When he tied the wedding chain around chain around her neck, both stared at it. While putting sindoor on her hair partition, Shiva searched her face for something. He himself didn’t know what he was searching. Raavi had her eyes closed. When she opened her eyes they were glistening with tears. No, they were not of sorrow and both of them knew that.

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Few days later,

Raavi ran into the store late afternoon all excited and delighted. She straight away made for Shiva who had his back to the door and jumped on his back. The other three occupants that were Gaumbhi, Dev and Kaka shook their head at her antics.

“aab kya ho gaya tujhe mami ke behan ki beti, bandariya toh tu tha hi”, Shiva asked turning to a beaming Raavi,

“oo hello mami ke behan ki betiki pati, tujhe main aisa khabar dungi na ki tu khushi ke maare apna sacha bandar roop mein aake nachne lagega”, they couldn’t help snorting at her example,Shiva narrowed his eyes,

“Raavi hume bhi bata de aisa konsa khabar layi tu”,

“Gaumbhi uske liye apko ghar jaana hoga, jaldi jaiye Dhara di intezaar kar rahe hai”, Gaumbhi looked at her confused but Raavi didn’t wait for him to ask anything more. She pushed him toward his bike rushing him out. As he was gone, she turned to find the other two brothers standing side by side looking at her raising their eyebrows. She just gave out another happy squeal,

"aab bata tu aate aate kaha kaha sir me laga ke aayi",

" kya matlab tera",

"kya hai na joh bhi dhila screw tha teri bheja mein sab gir gaya raaste mein kahi. Chal Dev hume woh screw dhoonda hoga warna yeh mujhe poora pagal kardegi",

"aur tere paas toh hai hi nahi na screw",

"hum jaiso ko screw ke jaroorat nahi. hum aise hi akkal man hai. Gadheri ",

"guys ladai bad me ha? Raavi tu bata kya news hai!", Dev said breaking them off,

“okay, news yeh hai ki, tum dono chacha banne wale ho guys aur main chachi. Congratulate me guys”, Shiva and Dev widened their eyes and glanced at each other. Did they hear what they thought Raavi said right now!!!? Their Gaumbhi and Bhabi were gonna be maa-papa!!

“Sach!!”, Dev asked again to which Raavi nodded and the two brothers embraced each other shouting happily.

“arreh main bhi hu yaha”, and it became a group hug of the three. Breaking the hug, Dev hugged their Kaka and Shiva tightened his hold around Raavi.

The trio had immediately went off to their home leaving Kaka at the store. The brothers couldn’t hold their joy and squeezed Dhara in between all three. Gaumbhi stood by his mother smiling at them and Raavi too adored them sitting beside her mother in law on the swing. They were the reason she always wanted to be apart of this family. The love and respect they shared. Dev and Shiva pulled Gaumbhi and Raavi to join their group dance-hug whatever they were doing. Suman prayed to the power above to always protect her children and keep their smile intact always.

Originally posted by: ananyakhetarpal

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It was amazing. 👏

Loved it to the core. ❤️

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I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter.....

Aahhh They are married!! I love this story so so much ❤️❤️

and Raavi and Shiva are just You are such a great writer! I really can't wait to read more about their love growing and all the happy family moments 🥳🤗

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So cute, I love the comfort they have in their relationship.

Ending was great, excited chachaas and chachii :)

Beautiful and amazing update👏

Your writing is so good, loved every moment and the dialogues👏

Shivi's relationship is beautiful, loved how their relationship evolved from the announcement of engagement to marriage❤️

Glad that their bickering didn't stop, such an unusual couple😆

Waiting to know more about their growing relationship after marriage

Beautiful update. Dhara is going to be mom. Hipe they show same in show. Loved the understanding bet shavi.

Such a sweet update!! Looking forward to the next!!

😃 this entire update brought a huge smile on my face! Oh my God. Never thought a fic could make me this happy

It's so good to see Raavi get over Dev and gently wanting to be friends with Rishita

And the way ShiVi, regardless of time and place will always have their nok-jok 😆

GauRa having a baby!!!🥳