Misunderstandings: A DevShita FF (Chapter 2: Pg 2) - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Interesting update 😊

A very different take on Dev and Rishita

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hey :)

Nice Story, how can Dev be so dumb?!

Glad that the rest of the Pandyas stood in support of Rishita.


6 years leap... thats alot... curious to know what has changed

Continue soon

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Chapter 2 Six years have passed since Dev and Rishita have separated a lot had changed during these 6 years. Shiva and Raavi had accepted each other as husband and wife and have had a child 4 years ago named Vivaan and Gautam Dhara had also had a small boy of five years named Gaurav. Wondering about Dev and Rishita well Dev was guilty of sending Rishita away from him after he learned that misunderstandings were created by Janardhan and Rishita she had a child named Devshita the symbol of Dev and Rishita's love. Well, the next day after Rishita left Dev forever and Dhara came home she told Dev that Rishita was talking about going to the gynac as she felt symptoms of pregnancy and she did not want to inform him because she was not sure and wanted to surprise him. In all these years Dev thought if really Rishita's assumptions would be true then he would have become a father the joy of thinking himself being a father was speechless but at the same time, he wondered how would have Rishita survived alone. Dev found his solace in Shiva's and Gautam's children. To distract himself from thinking about Rishita he worked like a robot in the store and now the store had turned into a supermarket. Let's see how the day goes in Pandya Niwas. Raavi-Vivaan main last time keh rhi hun doodh pee lo warna main bade papa see shikayat karungi tumhari. Shiva- Ae mami ki behen ki beti kyun mere bete ko pareshaan kar rhi hai tu haan usse doodh peena hoga toh pee lega. Raavi- Dekh Shiva main last time keh rhi hun bacchon ke saamne mujhe yeh mat bulaya kar. Shiva- Kya na bulaya karun hmm? Raavi- Wahi jo tu abhi keh rha tha. Shiva- Kya keh rha that bta na? Saying this he started coming closer to Raavi. Vivaan- Aree mummy papa aaplog kahin bhi shuru ho jaate ho bacchon ke saamne koi romance karta hai kya? Raavi- Vivaan yeh sab tumhe kisne sikhaya? Vivaan- Krish chachu ne. Saying this he left quickly left. Shiva- Yeh Krish ka baccha toh. Raavi- Accha Shiva yeh sab chodh tune Dev ko dekha hai kya subah see dikh hi nh rha hai. Gaurav- Dev chachu toh subah uthte hi store chale gye they Raavi chachi. 6 saal beet gye lekin Dev nhi badla aaj bhi bina khaye piye subah jaldi chala jaata hai mera dev aur raat ko der se aata hai taaki usse kisi se baat naa karne pade, Dhara came forward saying this. Raavi- Haan dhara di aap sahi keh rhi ho jab see Rishita is ghar see gyi hai mano Dev ke andar se kisi ne uski aatma hi cheen li hai. Gautam- Uska aisa haal toh tab bhi nhi hua tha jab usse Raavi se jabardasti shaadi karni padh rhi thi. Dhara- Tab baat alag this Gaumbi uss waqt who dono sirf girlfriend boyfriend they lekin uske baad uski shaadi ho gyi this aur sabse zyaada guilt is cheez ka hai ki agar Rishita sach mein pregnant hogi toh toh uska bhi aaj ek chhotasa baccha hoga. Shiva- Sahi keh rhi ho aap Dhara bhabhi socho na kitna maza aayega agar Dev ki beti hui hogi toh. Dhara- Haan Shiva sach keh rha hai tu. Main toh bass Somnath ji se yeh prarthna karungi ki Rishita wapas aa jaay. 6 saal se yeh hi prarthna kar rhe ho aap Dhara bhabhi lekin aaj tak woh nhi aayi toh ab kya aayegi? Everyone turned back to see from where this voice was coming and saw Dev standing at the entrance. Dhara- Dev tu kab aaya? Dev- Tabhi aaya tha bhabhi jab aaplog Rishita ki baat kar rhe they. Raavi- Dev tum aa gye ho toh breakfast kar lo aa jao. Dev- Nhi Raavi mujhe bhook nhi hai aur waise bhi Vivaan aur Gaurav ko school chodne jaana hai main chalta hun. Gautam- Kab tu khud ko takleef deta rhega Dev. Dev- Tab tak Gaumbi jab tak mujhe nhi pta chal jaayega ki Rishita kaisi hai. Shiva- Dev tu ummed mat haar dekhna Rishita ek din zaroor aayegi. Dev- Ussi umeed mein toh aaj tak jeeta aaya hun Shiva main. Saying this Dev left. Shiva- Bhabhi waqt kitna ajeeb hota hai na ek woh waqt tha jab main nhi chahta ki woh Rishita iss ghar mein na aaye aur ek yeh waqt hai jab main chahta hun ki woh aa jaye aur mere bhai ki zindagi khushiyon se bhar jaay. Raavi- Haan Shiva uss din shaadi ke mandap mein jab Dev aur Rishita phere le rhe they tab mann kar rha tha ki kaise waqt ruk jaaye lekin aaj chahti hun ki Rishita waapas aa jaye aur Dev 6 saal pehle wala Dev bann jaaye. Gautam- Sahi keh rhe ho tum dono dekho jiss din see Rishita gyi hai uss din see Dev jaise sirf Rishita ke waapas aane ki chhah mein jee rha hai. Dhara- Haan Gaumbi tum sahi keh rhe ho kehte hain na ki insaan ko jeeni wajah chahiye hoti hai uss din Rishita toh chali gyi aur Dev ki jeene ki wajah khatam ho gyi lekin dusre din se shaayad Rishita ka intezaar hi uski jeene ki wajah bann gyi. Shiva- Dhara bhabhi aapko kyalagta hai Rishita kaisi hogi? Dhara- Pta nhi Shiva bechari Rishita kaisi hogi. Gautam- Yahan se jaane ke baad toh usne Janardhan seth se bhi koi contact nhi rakha. Shiva- Jaisi bhi ho khush ho. Raavi- Kaise khush reh sakti hai Shiva woh Dev ke bina tu hi soch jiss din woh jaa rhi thi aisa lag rha tha jaise ki is ghar see ek-ek kadam bahar rakhte hue who bikhar rhi thi. Shiva- Raavi dekh na waqt kitni ajeeb cheez hai jab hamari shaadi hui thi tab usse yahan rehne se problem thi yeh ghar usse chhota lagta tha woh yahan se kahin dur jaana chahti thi lekin jab woh ghar chhodh ke jaa rhi thi toh tut gyi thi bechari. Dhara- Maine kaha tha waqt sab theek kar dega aur usne toh kar bhidiya tha Rishita dil ki buri nhi thi usse kabhi apno ka pyaar nhi mila tha lekin jab mila woh usse apnane lagi thi. Raavi- Dhara di aapko kya lagta hai Rishita waapas aayegi? Dhara- Pta nhi Raavi lekin itna zaroor keh sakti hun ki yeh Dev aur Rishita ke pyaar ki pariksha hai. Shiva- Matlab? Gautam- Matlab yeh Shiva ki agar sach mein Dev Rishita se aaj bhi utna hi pyaar karta hai toh woh zaroor aayegi. Shiva- Aap sahi keh rhe ho Gaumbi chalo store chalte hain. Saying this both left for the store. Scene changes to a house where a woman is running around the house to make her daughter eat food. Woman- Dishitata ruk jao na baby mumma thak gyi hai. Dishita- Mumma no main tab tak nhi khaungi jab tak aap mujhe papa ke baare mein nhi btauge. Yes, the woman was Rishita and the girl is Dishita Dev and Rishita's daughter. Hearing that her daughter wants to know about her father tears come to her eyes. Rishita- Accha toh Dishita ko khana nhi khana hai koi baat main soch rhi thi ki aaj Dishita ko ice cream khilane lekar jaaungi aur phir kal humein Somnath bhi toh jaana hai na. Dishita- Somnath kyun? Rishita- Woh mujhe wahan kuch kaam hai toh aapko bhi chalna padega na mere saath aur phir aapka new school mein bhi toh admission karana padega na. Dishita- New school matlab new friends. Rishita- Yes baby chalo jaldi se khalo phir humein shaam ko ice cream khane bhi jaanahai na. Saying this she made her eat her food and then the next day she made her ready and they left Somnath. Somnath the place where everything was snatched from her love, her family. After leaving Pandya Niwas Rishita had given up the will to live but when she got to know she is pregnant the child gave a hope to live her life once. The hope that someday Rishita their unborn child and Dev would be leaving together as a normal happy family. After leaving Pandya Niwas she booked an overnight flight to Udaipur and started working to manage her expenses initially but she learned to do so. Today she was going to Somnath again and today she wished that she and Dev should never meet again as it would be difficult for her to control her feelings for and she might end up forgiving him. On the other hand, Dev dropped Gaurav and Vivaan school and went back home. Dhara- Kya hua Dev aaj itni aa gya tu theek hai na. Dev- Haan Dhara bhabhi bass aisa lag rha tha ki kuchh alag hone wala hai aaj. Dhara- Main samjhi nhi Dev tu kya kehna chahta hai? Dev- Chodona Dhara bhabhi aapko pta hai jab bhi main Vivaan aur Gaurav ko dekta hun toh lagta hai ki agar uss time Rishita assumption sach hui hogi toh main bhi papa bann gya honga hai na. Dhara- Haan Dev woh toh hai. Dev- Lekin bhabhi main kabhi accha papa nhi ban paaunga? Dhara- Kyun Dev? Dev- Kyunki bhabhi dekho jo insaan apni hi biwi par bharosa nhi kar paaya tha jisne us par affair jaisa ghatiya ilzaam laga diya woh kabhi accha papa kaise baan paayega. Dhara- Dev uss waqt haalat galat they tu nashe mein tha aur Rishita ke papa ne tujhe manipulate kara tha . Dev- Lekin mujhe toh Rishita par bharosa karna chahiye tha. Dhara- Haan Dev woh toh hai lekin agar Rishita uss waqt tujhe sab bta diya hota toh tujhe misunderstanding nhi hoti naa. Shiva- Raavi Dhara bhabhi hum sab aa gye. They turned and saw Shiva, Gautam, Gaurav, and Vivaan standing at the door. Dhara- Accha hua tum log bhi aa gye chalo aa jao aur lunch kar lo waise Krish kahan hai? Aapne mera naam liya aur main aa gya Dhara bhabhi. Dhara- Aree wah Krish aa jaa. Krish- Waise Vivaan Gaurav tum dono itne khush kyun ho aaj? Gautam- Woh kya hai naa chachu aaj ek nayi ladki aayi hai hamari class mein toh isiliye. Krish- Ohh kya naam hai uska? Vivaan- Dishita. Hearing the name Dishita everyone went silent they remembered that when Rishita insisted on Dev for a honeymoon Krish and everyone teases her and told them that if Dev and Rishita would ever have a daughter they would name her Dishita. When asked why he said it is the couple name for them Dev+Rishita=Dishita. Raavi- Accha Vivaan yeh toh btao woh kaisi hai I mean uska behavior kaisa hai? Vivaan- Woh bohut shaant hai bilkul Dev chachu ke jaise lein padhayi mein utni hi tez hai aur hain woh kisi ke saath galat hota nhi dekh sakti. Aaj ek ladka puri class ko pareshaan kar rha tha toh usne ma'am se shikayat kar di thi. After this everyone ate their lunch and went for their respective work except Shiva, Raavi, Gautam, and Dhara. Gautam- Dhara tu bhi wahi soch rhi hai jo main soch rha hun? Dhara- Haan Gaumbi jaisa bacchon ne btaya uss hisaab se lag rha tha ki ek baar ke liye aisa laga jaisa woh chhota Dev yaad aa gya ho. Raavi- Wahi Dev jo Shiva ko daant ta tha mujhe pareshaan karne par. Shiva- Wahi Dev jo hamesha shaant rehta tha. Raavi- Aur jaisa Vivaan ne btaya uss bacchi mein mujhe Rishita ki jhalak bhi dikhi jo jaise man ki hoti thi waisa bolti thi. Dhara- Pta nhi kya ho rha hai yahan par. Aisa lag rha hai main paagal ho jaungi. Everyone was in confusion. After a few days, Dev went to pick up the children from the school and saw Dishita standing he went to her. Dev- Hello kya naam hai aapka? Dishita- Mera naam Dishita hai. Dev- Aap yahan kyun khade ho? Dishita- Woh meri mummy office gyi thi and aane mein late ho gya hai unhe. Vivaan- Dev chachu yeh wahi ladki hai jiske baare mein maine aapko btaya tha. Kya hum pls le chalein isse ghar. Dev- Pehle mujhe iski mummy se permission lene padegi na. Gautam- Theek hai Dishita ek kaam karo tum apni mummy ka number btao Dev chachu tumhe call laga kar denge aur tum unse puchh lena. They did as discussed and called Rishita. Rishita allowed so that Dishita would have more friends and start opening up to people and she didn't ask the address as she thought she would ask when she will come to take Dishita back. Dev unknowingly started bonding with Dishita as soon he met her. Gautam- Mumma hum aa gye dekho humare saath kaun aaya hai. Dhara- Kya hua Gaurav aur yeh kaun hai? Gaurav- Yeh Dishita hai iski mummy ko aaj late hoga isiliye yeh hamare saath aa gyi. Dhara- Koi baat nhi tum log Dishita ko lekar room min jao main kuchh khane ke liye lati hun. Dhara- Dev yeh kaun ladki hai? Dev- Pta nhi Dhara bhabhi bechari apni mummy ka wait kar rhi thi aur yeh dono bandar zidd karne lage toh main apne saath le aaya. Kitni irresponsible ma hai koi apne bachhe ko akela kaise chhodh sakta hai. Raavi- Dev tum toh aise keh rhe ho jaise woh tumhari beti hai. Dev- Pta nhi Raavi lekin haan main zaroor chahunga ki meri bhi aisi hi beti ho. Saying this he smiled. Dishita soon started bonding with everyone in the house Dev took care of her as if she ishis own daughter Raavi and Dhara pampered her. Soon Shiva and Gautam came home and they too started liking her. Seeing so much affection Dishita's eyes welled up. Gaurav- Kya hua Dishita tum ro kyun rhi ho? Dishita- Woh actually main kabhi itne saare logon ke beech rahi nhi ho kisi ne mujhe itna pamper nhi kiya hai toh main aaj bohut khush hun. Dhara- Kyun aapki family mein kaun-kaun hai? Dishita- Meri family mein sirf main aur meri mumma. Dev- Aur aapke papa? Dishita- Mymma ne kabhi btaya nhi papa ke baare mein jab bhi puchhti hun toh topic change kar deti hai. Pta hai maine ek list bhi banayi hai jismein maine woh saari chizein likhi hai jo main chahti hun mere papa mere liye karein. Raavi- Aapki mumma ko uss list ke baare mein pta hai? Dishita- Nhi maine mumma ko jaan buchkar nhi dikhayi. Shiva- Kyun? Dishita- Kyunki jab bhi main papa ke baare mein puchhti hun woh topic change kar deti hai lekin baad mein khub roti hain. Dev- Aapko kisne btaya? Dishita- Kisi ne btaya nhi mujhe pta hai. Everyone was upset hearing Dishita's story whereas Dev felt a fit of unknown anger towards Dishita's parents firstly was angry at her mother for keeping her away from her father, and for her father because he didn't bother to look towards his wife and daughter. Here Rishita was free from her work and when she asked the school authorities who took Dishita to their home the name she heard shook the earth beneath her feet. ''Dev Pandya". ------------------------------------------------------------------- Finally posted the second chapter pls read it and comment. Thanks a lot Riddhi
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Interesting update😊

Loved Shivi, Gaura and devshita 's kids name😊

The family dynamics of Pandya house is same but Dev and Rishita are changed

The kids have become friends

Dishita is at Pandya house, let's see how Devshita will meet

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting update😊

Loved Shivi, Gaura and devshita 's kids name😊

The family dynamics of Pandya house is same but Dev and Rishita are changed

The kids have become friends

Dishita is at Pandya house, let's see how Devshita will meet

What do u mean by they have changed do u mean it in positive or negative
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Posted: 4 years ago
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nice chapter! all the couples have kids now and krish is funny as usual

both dev and rishita are not happy.. and now their daughter is back to Pandya house

great progress so far!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Nice Chapter, feel sorry for Dev and Rishita

Their baby didn’t get the love of both of them..

Hopefully that will change

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Nice update!!

I really like the background you're putting to each character, it gives them more of a real feel to them. The way they all care about Dev is sweet and I'm enjoying the kiddies becoming all friends .

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