RaghVi OS : Long Time No See! - Page 2

Amazing reading. U write so well.

Woah! Look who do we have back with a FABULOUS OS yet again. I was hoping that I'll get to read something by you this weekend . 3 years! The vagabond roamed without my Pallavi for 3 fu*king years.

Anyways, good for me cos I got to read this piece then. I take it that Raghav's look here is taken from his Insta posts where he actually looks like the 26-yr guy that he is 😎 .

I loved the confrontation on Pallavi's end so much. I adore this Pallavi that you have built. How she kinda chides him that she's disappointed with his means now 😆 . Ofcourse love how you mentioned Farhad searching for his Anna as well ❤️

Thought of anything on my previous idea yet 😊 ?

Originally posted by: Vibrant_Ana

WOW!!! You use such variety of adjectives in your story👍🏼

This was totally a different read, unabashed ( if that is a correct word to describe)!!!!!

Thoroughly enjoyed...

Thank you Ana...

You won’t believe me but I just googled what adjectives actually mean🤣 I mean of course we have read about them in school but I forgot... Grammar sucks but I’ve always loved writing section even in exams...

Originally posted by: K_keechu

I suggest that, everyone should read it's first part and third part before and after reading this story. If not third but definitely read the first one. (Please put this disclaimer😉😆)

I was not sure if I will be happy after reading this when you said that it's the continuation of 'adieu my love' which is my favorite one shot of Raghvi, because I thought you are going to give them a happy ending. 😛

You know why the first part is my favorite, because of the agust it had, because it had caused me difficulty to breath and I enjoy the kind where I get emotionally drained. So I was pleasantly surprised you continued that.

After reading I'm like, please write the next part. 😆I want to read a continuation to this too, and don't tell me that you have already written the twins one. I want to read the family reunion with a bit of romance. 😳 Yeah! Sometimes I'm a sucker for fluffy stuff as well.

This was again brilliant Vihu and you know my day starting with this.

Thank you! 🤗

Hey Keechu... You are such a joy confetti...🥳

I’ll put the disclaimer... 👍🏼

You surely know how to make a gurl feel appreciated for her work... ☺️

Angst is my favourite element of a story... And am so glad to find an accomplice🤗

It’s always a pleasure writing for lovely people like you... I’m sure I’ll come around with another one... haven’t thought about the continuation yet..😆

Originally posted by: christobelle

Wow!! That was a nice continuation.

I could feel the love and the inherent happiness of their reunion!!

Finally twins and what kind of twins we know that already 😉

Thank you dear...🤗

You’re one of my favourite writers here... And yet I don’t know your name

Please let me know...

Originally posted by: Inese_20

Oh yes we have read about Ian and Ryan! Good to know about the backstory 😉❤️

Well that’s not fair... I was waiting for you to review the mature part of this story( it wasn’t much... but I wrote it the first time and wasn’t quite confident about it) as your way of writing mature content is the best I’ve read so far... subtle yet toe curling ☺️

Please let me know how can I improve... I’m waiting for genuine criticism from you..

I read this and realised I had a lot to catch up regarding your writing 😆

Loved reading this piece, even though the back story eluded me. I wondered why Raghav was living separately from Pallavi for over three years and they had a sort of open marriage? The opening scene reminded me of Thor in End Game and the drunk mess he became in his depression. Could totally visualise it!

Pallavi is so brazen here 🤣 Just walking in and demanding that she wants a baby from her absentee husband and sticking to her guns even after his snarky remarks. This was hilarious. Found myself rooting for her 👏

And the hot stuff where he places Pallavi’s hand over himself. Oh my my. Aag laga di tumne 🔥 That was super sexy! I could picture him trying to resist but unable to bear the sight of his wife’s hot little body

Perfect Sunday read ❤️

Originally posted by: hapc

Ohh, I liked this. I love the role reversal of sorts and the fact that this also tied up with the twin trouble story. Do write more. I always look forward to your stories.

Thank you so much dear... It lifts my spirits to know that in a sea of wonderful stories here... my os managed to stick in your mind... I myself sometimes forget who wrote what...😆

Originally posted by: __VIHU

Thank you dear...🤗

You’re one of my favourite writers here... And yet I don’t know your name

Please let me know...

I m vimala!!

Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

That was hot and since i read it in a cold morning, i suddenly feel hot all thanks yo this hot os!!!

Loved it😍❤

Keep writing ❤

Thank you love ❤️... 🤗