The storm: An OS - Page 2

It was fab!! The way she got out with self respect here was commendable!!

Loved it, totally ❤😍

Keep writing ❤😋

This was an amazing piece!! 👏👏👏

It conveys how Pallavi may have stayed silent so far because of her love for the D-fam, but that does not mean they should take her for granted! 😭

It perfectly shows how she is now tired of being in the cage of expectations in the daughter-but-not-really role and now is ready to stand up for herself 👍🏼

Well written! Truly wish they would have picked this up and made it come true onscreen, because this is the Pallavi all of us wished to see ❤️

Bee 🤗

It was so good. You have done justice to Pallavi but we won't be getting this from her anytime soon or may be never. She is a bit more forgiving when it comes to her family.

I want to read the confrontation scene of Raghavi after this. Please write and if you do, please even for a second I want to see Raghav's resolve breaking. Thank you. 😳

Originally posted by: GoldenHour

Hey, very very well written. The portrayal of emotions is just fab ❤️(this wasn‘t crappy at all). Really liked Pallavis „ rant“, for once she opens her mouth, which was due for a loong time. I have actually written a SS on a part of this topic( which IF is not letting me post :/ ) and my exact words were also „ ab main na Pallavi Sawant ho na hi Pallavi Deshmukh“, so I completely agree to what you‘ve written so beautifully.

Thank you so much ❤️

I got so irritated with Baba, I had to give it back to him somehow 🤔 That's how this OS came about.

What's your SS called? I'm curious to read it!

Originally posted by: rinku95

Superb

I hope she does this in show

One day, hopefully! 🤞🏼

Originally posted by: lifesucks28

Damn good ❣️ this is the way she should react. Hopefully Writers will not turn her completely into a typical abla nari.

And damn she should give hell to even Raghav. 😈

Thank you! She is definitely gonna make Raghav's life a living hell, just wait for them to get married 😆

Her abla naari form has always been for the Deshmukhs, not Raghav. Once she starts living with him and using her sherni form more often, maybe she'll learn to discard her abla naari form 👍🏼

Originally posted by: inlieu

I love it, too bad we didn't see her do this today but hopefully one day when he comes groveling she will give him a piece of her mind.

That's what I'm hoping for! One day, she'll give it back to them. One day 😈

Ugh, I can't wait for her to get stronger already

Originally posted by: ashsamik

Please continue.....I would really like to read more on this....👍🏼

It was really nice...👏

Make her go to Raghav's house and live there...

As a punishment for him for what he did....and let her leave that saree shop and get her own job somewhere...it would be really nice...❤️🙂

I'm so glad you loved it so much 🤗 But this was meant to be only an OS 😅 Maybe I'll write a future scene on them, but this one ends here for now 😊

Originally posted by: Bee222

I'm so glad you loved it so much 🤗 But this was meant to be only an OS 😅 Maybe I'll write a future scene on them, but this one ends here for now 😊

That's no problem.... write a new one with something on it then...🤗will keep giving ideas...😆

Originally posted by: Bee222

Thank you so much ❤️

I got so irritated with Baba, I had to give it back to him somehow 🤔 That's how this OS came about.

What's your SS called? I'm curious to read it!

Yes that sanki uncle really deserves it. Akkal peh parda dala hua hai uske 😆, the most stupid character currently for me.

As I said I am not able to post it unfortunately. (Spam content Message from IF) 😵