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Hello ji, I am back with the second update...🙋🏻‍♀️

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So, Suvarna ke ek family member ki re-entry hogayi, Manda 😁

Manda Lankeshwar is Suvarna's Bhabhi (whome she calls "Anni"), her "Anna" wife. She is one of the strong and one of the main characters in our upcoming story line. Manda is a typical housewife, who is always worried for her "weird" family. Her characterisation will be more clear in upcoming story 🤗

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And now in this part, another one of the important character is going to enter 😯😲

Have a look at the next episode.....

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*****

At the night time, Sumitra was standing near the railing of the terrace, looking at the pleasant surrounding. Siya was passing by from there, towards her room when her eyes caught at Sumitra. She was about to call her choti maa when something mischievous strikes her. Siya silently moves towards Sumitra and giggles before she makes her scared.

SIYA- bhhaaawww...

Sumitra turns around immediately, looking startled while Siya started laughing at her reaction.

SUMITRA- Siya..

Sumitra calms herself down by sighing in relief and Siya continued to laugh at her.

SIYA- aap to darr gayi choti maa..

Said Siya between her laughs while Sumitra hits her shoulder playfully.

SUMITRA- aise koi achanak awaz karega, to darungi nahi.?

Questioned Sumitra nodding in disbelief. Siya stopped her laugh and playfully pulls Sumitra's cheeks.

SIYA- aaww..

She left her hold and Sumitra giggles looking at her.

SUMITRA- baccho wali harkate gayi nahi hai tumhari..

Said Sumitra nodding her head in sideways. Hearing her words, Siya immediately thinks about the "topic" she is going through nowadays. Sumitra observed her change of expressions.

SUMITRA- kya hua.?

Asked Sumitra placing her hand on Siya's left shoulder. Siya gave her a light smile and said.

SIYA- choti maa.. actually.. I wanted to tell you and maa.. about something..

Said Siya thinking about the hospital visit with Urmila, which she had not discussed with anyone other than Ram.

KRANTI- kya batana hai.?

Both the ladies turns towards the door as they heard Kranti's voice. She was about to enter the terrace when she heard Siya's last sentence. Kranti moves towards both of them and turns towards Siya.

KRANTI- what you want to tell us ?

Ask Kranti again with a light smile on her face. Siya looks at Sumitra for a moment and found her already looking at her with confused face, waiting for Siya's words. While she again turns to face Kranti.

SIYA- maa.. me.. I.. had a visit.. to the doctor.. gynaecologist..

Siya told both of them, more precisely taking the gynaec's name. Kranti and Sumitra looks a bit surprised.

KRANTI- kyu..? I mean.. sab theek hai na..? Tum.. tum theek ho na.?

Kranti started getting panicked while asking various questions to Siya. Sumitra keeps her hand on Kranti's shoulder to calm her down.

SUMITRA- relax didi.. let her complete first..

Said Sumitra looking at Siya, indicating her to complete her words what she wants to.

SIYA- maa.. choti maa... I am absolutely fine. I just had a visit.. to.. have a.. preconception counselling..

Kranti and Sumitra's eyes grew wide in a happy shock hearing Siya's words. They both looks at each other and then at Siya who was smiling at them. Kranti holds Siya from shoulders and said.

KRANTI- sach.?

Asked Kranti still trying to confirm from her while Siya nods her head in yes. Kranti's smile widened and she immediately embraced Siya in a hug, caressing her back of the head.

KRANTI- thank you Siya.. for atleast thinking about this..

Siya smile hearing her words while Kranti leaves her from her hold. Siya turns towards Sumitra who placed her hand on her right cheek.

SUMITRA- what did the doctor said.?

Asked Sumitra for which Kranti too looks at Siya in concern.

SIYA- sab theek hai choti maa.. kuch dino bad.. mujhe ek pre-screening test ke liye jana hai.. Ram is going to accompany..

Sumitra nods at her words while Kranti sighed in relief with a smile on her face. Siya turns to look at Kranti again.

SIYA- maa.. I want to thank both of you.. for understanding me and my turmoil..

Said Siya travelling her eyes between both of them while Kranti and Sumitra smile at her.

SUMITRA- it's our duty.. hai na.?

Siya blinks her eyes lightly at her words. Suddenly they heard Ram calling for Siya..

RAM- Siya...

SUMITRA- lo bolo.. inhe ek minute bhi chain nahi hai..

Commented Sumitra looking at the door while Siya giggles at her. She again heard Ram calling her.

SIYA- yaha hu Ram... Terrace..

Answered Siya in a bit loud voice and after a moment, Ram enters there.

RAM- kya baat hai.? Kis chiz ki gossips chal rahi hai.?

Asked Ram moving towards the ladies, standing beside Siya.

KRANTI- hum kyu bataye? Hamara secret hai..

Said Kranti folding her hands, and teasing Ram. He smile at her answer and then looks at Siya.

RAM- aapka phone kabse ring kar raha hai Siya.. papa ka tha..

Siya's eyes grew wide immediately as she missed Janak's call. He nods his head smiling at her reaction.

RAM- nothing important.. he is going to call you later..

Siya smile at him and nods her head. Both of them again turns to look at Kranti and Sumitra who were smiling at them.

SIYA- kya hua.?

Asked Siya to both the ladies who shook their head in "nothing".

RAM- maa.. nani kaisi hai.?

Everyone's smile suddenly disappeared as Ram asked Kranti about Mandira. She bows her head down for a moment and answered him.

KRANTI- achi hai.. I gave her all of yours wish..

Said Kranti looking at each one of them for which Ram nods his head with a smile. Kranti keeps her hand on Ram's shoulder.

KRANTI- masi ne.. tumhe thank you kaha hai Ram..

Ram looks at her in confusion and so as Sumitra and Siya.

KRANTI- tum aaj mujhe.. waha le gaye.. isliye..

Said Kranti clearing their confusion. Siya and Sumitra smile hearing her words while Ram nods his head.

KRANTI- chalo ab.. so jao tum log..

Said Kranti looking at Ram and Siya who nods their head in agreement.

RAM- good night maa.. good night choti maa..

Said Ram to both the ladies who reverts him with a smile. He looks at Siya and indicates her to leave towards their room. Kranti and Sumitra watches them going after which Sumitra turns towards Kranti.

SUMITRA- didi..

Kranti turns to look at Sumitra.

SUMITRA- masi.. sachme.. theek hai na.?

Asked Sumitra sounding little suspicious about Mandira's behaviour. Kranti smile at her and nods in agreement.

KRANTI- I know what you are thinking. Ki unhone mujhse kuch aisi waisi bat to nahi ki.. hai na.?

Sumitra didn't react anything or didn't said anything while Kranti continued.

KRANTI- don't worry.. unhone kuch nahi kaha..

Sumitra smile at her words and sighed in relief. Both the ladies stood their for sometime, having their "sisters talk"...

*****

Next day, Manda descend down the staircase, to enter the living area of their big bunglow, which is famously called as "Raghvan's Villa" in the whole city. The villa is seems to be decorated as a unique cultural and linguistic heritage, giving a typical south indian, to be more specific tamilian, essence. The entrance of the villa is flanked by terracotta pillars and an ornamental archway. At the corner of the living area near the entrance, was a huge wooden swing decorated, the floor decorated with beautifully patterned and vibrant tiles, with lots of tamilian traditional art works decorated all around the walls and the showcases. At the other corner of the huge living area, few traditional musical instruments were also placed including "harmonium", "veena" and "tabla". The main center of attraction in the whole area was at the right center, where there was a temple of Lord Kartikeya, again decorated with all the traditional art work. The huge brass "diyas" were decorated at the entrance of the temple, with the God decorated with beautiful scented flowers of "mogras" and "jasmine".

Manda moves towards the kitchen and looks at a lady working with few of the workers around her. The kitchen too seems to be a fusion of traditional and modern touch. Manda watches one of the worker, sitting on the ground, grating coconut in a plate, while the other workers near the lady helping her. The lady was busy mixing something in a huge aluminium vessel when Manda gains their attention.

MANDA- Sulochana...

The lady turns to face Manda as she heard someone taking her name. Dressed in a simple south silk saree, her dark brown open hair and a studded nose ring on her right side of the nose, Sulochana smile looking at her mother-in-law.

SULOCHANA- yes Amma.?

Manda was about to speak but stops herself looking at the workers around.

MANDA- Inke va.. (Come here..)

Manda actioned her through her hand, calling Sulochana near her. She nods at her Amma and turns to the worker standing beside her.

SULOCHANA- put the idli batter.. I'll just come..

Said Sulochana handing the spatula to the worker and started moving towards Manda.

SULOCHANA- you want something Amma.?

Asked Sulochana with a smile. Manda holds her hand and started dragging her towards a corner making Sulochana confused.

SULOCHANA- what happened.? Ellam cariyaka irukkirata, Amma? (Is everything fine, mom?)

Sulochana asked her sounding confused as they reach a corner near one of the pillar. Manda looks at their surrounding to find no one and then again faces Sulochana.

MANDA- Suvarna se baat hui thi meri..

Manda said almost in a whisper while Sulochana looks surprised hearing from her. She too motioned her eyes around them just to confirm with anyone's presence.

SULOCHANA- Atthai (father's sister) se.?

Manda nods her head in agreement.

SULOCHANA- kaisi hai wo.? And where is she.? Why she is not receiving our call.? Aapne unko bola, that Appa is very angry with her.?

Sulochana started asking her few questions for which Manda keeps her finger on her lips.

MANDA- sshh... Kisine sun liya to, it will be a problem for us...

Said Manda asking Sulochana to keep quiet while Sulochana nods her head in agreement. Manda went silent for a moment and then continued.

MANDA- Mumbai me hai wo.. she has started a job there..

Sulochana again gets shock hearing about Suvarna's new life.

SULOCHANA- but.. Atthai to Delhi me the na..? At her friend's place.? Then how come she reached Mumbai.?

Sulochana again asked her the questions which answers were not there with Manda.

MANDA- I don't know anything Sulochana.. ye ladki to meri samajh me hi nahi aati hai..

Said Manda sounding disappointed and annoyed with Suvarna's behaviour.

MANDA- pehele hi.. she has created a lot of problems for herself and for her Anna..

Sulochana kept on listening to her, not exactly understanding what to answer her.

MANDA- ab agar firse.. kuch problem hogaya. Then your Appa will not spare her this time..

Said Manda looking scared for Suvarna. Sulochana looks at her expressions which were seems to be tensed. She keeps her hand on Manda's shoulder.

SULOCHANA- relax Amma. Why are you worrying.?

Manda shook her head sideways, not understanding about the situation.

SULOCHANA- hum Appa ko pata hi nahi chalne denge, that you had a talk with Atthai..

Said Sulochana with a light smile. Manda motioned her eyes to look at Sulochana and nods her head lightly.

SULOCHANA- now don't worry about anything.. specially for Atthai.. aap to janti hai, wo kitna stubborn hai. Let her be..

Said Sulochana thinking about Suvarna and nods her head in disbelief. Manda sighed in relief all her worries and smile at Sulochana.

MANDA- don't discuss it with anyone. Me firse Suvarna se baat karke dekhungi, uske bad, let us see what to do..

Sulochana nods her head in agreement as Manda instructed her regarding Suvarna. She looks at the direction of the kitchen and asked Sulochana.

MANDA- breakfast is ready.? Your Appa must be coming downstairs..

Manda looks at the staircase and then at Sulochana again.

SULOCHANA- yes Amma.. everything is ready ..

Manda smile at her when a next thought came in her mind.

MANDA- where is Indrajeet.?

Sulochana's smile disappeared hearing Manda asking her about her husband. She bows her head down not answering her question which made Manda surprised.

MANDA- kal raat ghar par nahi aya.?

Questioned Manda getting shocked while Sulochana didn't said anything, indirectly giving her the answers of her question.

MANDA- again.?

Sulochana shook her head lightly while Manda looks frustrated.

MANDA- hey Murugan.. iss ghar ke log, aise kyu hai.?

Manda closed her eyes, praying to God about her family while Sulochana looks at her. She could easily witness the frustration on Manda's face. She tried to cheer her up.

SULOCHANA- mujhe to lagti hai, pura khandan hi pagal hai..

Said Sulochana in a joke, pressing her smile. Manda first look shock and then started laughing at her joke. Sulochana smile looking at her Amma while Manda kept on laughing at her words.

SULOCHANA- sshhh.. Amma.? Appa will scold us if he listens..

Said Sulochana trying to control Manda's laugh while she nods at her lightly.

MANDA- hmm. Seri (Ok).. chalo ab..

She actioned Sulochana to move towards the kitchen, and both the ladies continued their work...

*****

In their office cabin, Bharat, Lakshman and Shatrughan were busy with their work.

BHARAT- ye central project ka documentation work kis intern ko diya tha.?

Questioned Bharat looking at Lakshman first and then at Shatrughan.

LAKSHMAN- wohi.. wo pagal madrasan..

Answered Lakshman, having his head into his laptop. Shatrughan chuckled at his words while Bharat gave a look at him.

BHARAT- Lakshman.. don't use these words..

Bharat said in a strict voice gaining Lakshman's attention towards him.

LAKSHMAN- ek insaan ki pehchan batana konsa galat kam hai.?

Said Lakshman in an obvious tone for which Bharat nods at him in disbelief. He took the receiver of his intercom and was about to dial a number when they heard some noise from outside.

"What did you do.?... Idiot..."

Bharat and Shatrughan scrunched their eyebrows looking confused while Lakshman sighed hearing the voice.

LAKSHMAN- lo.. think of the devil, and she is here..

Said Lakshman looking at the other two, indicating them that this voice is of Suvarna. Shatrughan turns his face to look at Lakshman while Bharat got up from his chair, to have a look at the outside scenario.

The whole premises was occupied with the office staffs surrounding Suvarna who was yelling at a office peon.

SUVARNA- tumhara Appa tumko school bheja ki nahi.? Don't you have manners.? Don't you know how to walk.?

Suvarna shouted at him while the peon was looking horrified, not understanding what to do. She looks at her dress which has got coffee stain, as the peon mistakenly dropped the coffee tray near her table, and unknowingly on her.

SUVARNA- you know how expensive this dress is ? Idiot..

The peon bows his head down saying nothing. Meanwhile Bharat, Lakshman and Shatrughan came near them and looks confused at the ongoing scene.

PEON- ss..sorry.. madam.. galati se hogaya..

The peon apologize in a low voice while Suvarna nods at him in disbelief. She took the tissue paper from the drawer and started wiping her dress.

SUVARNA- make a mistake and say sorry, itna hi aati hai tum jaisa log ko, Patikkata (uneducated)..

Suvarna kept on shouting at him while one of the staff members runs towards her.

TANVI- what are you doing Suvarna.? Sab dekh rahe hai.. let it go..

Suvarna didn't bothered to hear her and kept on wiping her dress and gave an angry stare at the peon.

LAKSHMAN- mujhe lagta tha.. tumhe bas mujhse ladne ki hobby hai..

Lakshman gains everyone's attention as he moved towards Suvarna.

LAKSHMAN- but tum to sabse ladd leti ho.. great talent you have.

Said Lakshman in a sarcastic tone making Suvarna to look more annoyed. Bharat and Shatrughan stood at their position watching them, waiting for a new drama to start.

SUVARNA- it's none of your concern. It's between me and this stupid fellow..

Said Suvarna pointing towards the peon who was now standing quietly with his head facing down. Lakshman looks at him and then at Suvarna.

LAKSHMAN- ye mera office hai..and don't you forget that I'm your boss..

Suvarna gulped for his words as he tagged himself as her "boss". He took a step near to her and points his finger towards her.

LAKSHMAN- Ye to Ram bhaiya ki achayi hai ki wo tumhara talent dekhte hai, tumhari badtameezi nahi.. warna mere bas me hota to....

Lakshman stopped himself, clenching his fist tightly showing his anger while Suvarna kept on staring him, controlling her anger. Bharat and Shatrughan sighed looking at them when they heard Ram's voice.

RAM- what's going on here.?

Everyone turns to look at Ram, who was standing at a distance watching Lakshman and Suvarna. He started moving towards both of them gaining their attention.

RAM- what happened.?

Asked Ram looking at Lakshman while he didn't said anything. Suvarna watches his silence and answered herself.

SUVARNA- sir.. this idiot waiter spill the coffee over my dress.. and not only my dress, but this... This file too..

Suvarna takes the file from her table and showed it to Ram. While the peon kept on looking down, now getting double scared of the situation.

LAKSHMAN- ab tak to tumhe bas tumhare dress ki chinta thi, ab achanak file ki bhi hone lagi.?

Lakshman interrupts giving her a taunt while Suvarna gave a look at him.

RAM- Lakshman..

Ram showed his hand towards him asking him to keep quiet. He turns to face Suvarna and said.

RAM- first of all Ms Suvarna.. he is not a waiter here.. he is the one who takes our care when we all are working..

Said Ram indicating towards the peon while Suvarna gulped hearing his words.

RAM- secondly.. this is not a way to behave with anyone, specially with someone, who is elder than you..

Ram looks at the peon with a light smile while Lakshman gave an angry stare at Suvarna. She bows her head down saying nothing while Ram again looks at her. He takes a step towards her and forwards his hand near her making her confused.

RAM- tissue..

Ram asked for the tissue paper which she was holding in her hand. She placed it on his palm and Ram turns towards the peon again.

RAM- sorry Kishor bhaiya..

Ram immediately wipes the coffee fallen on the peon's arm and shirt making him to look shock.

PEON- nahi nahi sir. Aap mat kijiye..

The peon denied and takes the tissue from Ram while Suvarna looks at him getting amused. Ram gives a light pat on the peon's shoulder and turns to face Suvarna.

RAM- and the last and most important thing Ms Suvarna..

Ram continued gaining her attention towards him.

RAM- maintain the decorum of the office.. understood.?

Ram uplifts his one eyebrow asking her while Suvarna nods her head in agreement.

SUVARNA- sorry sir..

Suvarna apologize to him for which Ram gave a light smile to her. He turns to face everyone.

RAM- let's get back to the work guys.?

Everyone nods at him and immediately got back to their places while Ram turns to face his brothers.

RAM- Shatrughan.. bring Hyderabad project report to me..

SHATRUGHAN- ji bhaiya..

Shatrughan leaves from there towards his cabin while Ram looks at Bharat and Lakshman.

RAM- aur tum dono bhi.. in my cabin..

Both of them nods at him while Ram turns to leave towards his cabin. Lakshman gave a final look at Suvarna and muttered.

LAKSHMAN- pagal madrasan..

Suvarna scrunched her eyebrows as she could not hear him clearly while Lakshman leaves from there. Suvarna sighed and the thought of Ram's calm behavior came inside her mind.

SUVARNA- I must say.. he is so calm and mature..

Said Suvarna thinking about the incident happened just a minute back. She again looks at her dress and made a face looking at the coffee stain...

*****

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Sulochana Lankeshwar, Manda's only daughter-in-law, a sweet and bubbly girl. She is also a strong lady, caged between these weird people. She is the only person in Lankeshwar family, who is not afraid of Suvarna's "Anna", and always stands by her mother-in-law's side in every difficult situation. 🤗

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Bohot Suvarna ka pagalpanti hogaya na 😅😅 what to do, it's important to showcase her characterization 😁

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But now, from next episode, lots of siblings masti is coming up 🤪🥳

The track is suggested by one of our reader - "Samruddhi (Sammy)" ❤️

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So, do read the next updates...

Take care, stay safe and stay tuned ❣️

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Posted: 4 years ago

I was eagerly waiting for second update. And what did you said, you are going to write for my suggestion, matlab mera suggested song bhi ayega, omg I am so excited. Thank you thank you thank you so much my magician.

Now moving towards the update, my Sumitra is back, I really appreciate Siya and Sumitra's friendship. Siya ne Kranti aur sumitra ko sab bata diya, and what a supporting in-laws they are, omg so good. And then the introduction of Raghvan's Villa, so beautifully written with each and every specifications. You do research before writing or what? And now Sulochana ki entry, she is going to be superb I guess, funny with understanding nature. Will love to see Manda and Sulochana's bond. And "pagal madrasan" part was so funny, Lakshman bhi na. Ye Suvarna to roz naya kand karti he office me. God save these Raghuvanshis from her. Ye Suvarna to dhire dhire Ram ke taraf attract horahi he yar. Please stop her. Overall it was very intersting part. Do continue soon.

Love,

Sammy

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Posted: 4 years ago

Loved it Saumya dear

Awesome part 🤗🤗

I must say that Siya ne ye doctor ke news deke subko khush kar diya ... Kranti & Sumitra are really happy😊

I must say that Sumitra was surprised too that Mandira sudhar gayi but all for good👍

Coming to Swarna I must say it's not her mistake if she is behaving this way as her brother is one of influential personality & she hasn't learnt that in her family

Ram behavior attracted her who being at such high position is still calm composed & down to earth 😊

Manda & Sulochna were too cute they are strong pillars of Lankeshwar family 😊 if you could give pics too that would be interesting

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon☺

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Posted: 4 years ago

22nd April Episode

Ram was jealous when he saw the message on Aakashin Siya's phone, brother toh Sister ko message kar hi sakta hai😂😂


Ram and Sita's conversation was emotional ❤️....Siya finally made up her mind .. Lakshman, Bharat, Shatrughan all were worried for their Bhavi... Shruti, Manvi and Urmila were all also right she decided that Siya should not be pressurised by anyone regarding her pregnancy.

Siya asked Urmila to visit a gynaecologist☺️

Thank you for PM🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Superb update 😊

It's good that Siya shared everything with Kranti n Sumitra 😊...they both are so happy especially Kranti...

You described Raghavan's villa so amazingly 😍...u r indeed a great writer😊...

Sulochana and Manda seem strong ladies... excited to know what role they will play..

Suvarna sach mein badi badtameez hai😡... Raghuvanshi office mein pehli bar aisa drama hua...

Thankyou for double update and making time for us😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

Amazing update ❤️😊

Thank you for double update today ❤️❤️

Loved each and every bit of it.

From the starting Kranti Sumitra and Siya scene. Both mothers are so supportive and appreciative of Siya. They know their daughter very well and always wish the best for her.

Haan Ram ko Siya ke bina kaha Chen padta hai.. maa aur choti maa bhi yeh baat ache se jaante hai.

Raghavan ya Ravan ?? 🤣🤣🤣 Mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ki Siya Chennai jaane waali hai kidnap hoke. I mean lag toh waise hi raha hai. 😔😔😔 Bas saal mat laga dena 🥺🥺 bardasht nahi hoga Ram Siya ki duriyan.

Raghavan ghar mein sab ajeeb hai bhai. But okay as long as Raghuvanshi theek ho.

Aur yeh Suvarna ka kya scene hai? Is she gonna fall in love with Ram? Naak kat jaayegi uski 😂😂 Mujhe laga Jagat ke baad kuch nahi hoga. Lekin yeh toh.. 😐😐

Chalo agle update mein siblings time toh hai. Zyada nahin sochti hun dimaag phat jaayega mera 😂😂 Kal ke fun moments ka intezaar rahega ☺️❤️❤️

Take care

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Posted: 4 years ago

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Loved it Saumya dear

Awesome part 🤗🤗

I must say that Siya ne ye doctor ke news deke subko khush kar diya ... Kranti & Sumitra are really happy😊

I must say that Sumitra was surprised too that Mandira sudhar gayi but all for good👍

Coming to Swarna I must say it's not her mistake if she is behaving this way as her brother is one of influential personality & she hasn't learnt that in her family

Ram behavior attracted her who being at such high position is still calm composed & down to earth 😊

Manda & Sulochna were too cute they are strong pillars of Lankeshwar family 😊 if you could give pics too that would be interesting

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon☺

I agree with Goldie. And it will be better if you give pictures of all the characters of the story. I know it's too late to ask for the introductory pictures, but as I don't have any idea of Siya ke Ram, and there must be many members who didn't followed the show, so to just have our selves clear. Please accept this request.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Firstly thank you thank you thank you for the awesome surprise... I must say that it was fantastic.. I loved it infact totally enjoyed it....😊😊😊...

So finally Siya revealed about her planning to Kranti and Sumitra.. Really love the bond between Siya Sumitra and how Siya gets childish with Sumitra.....well seeing Kranti excitement I am sure that within few days Kranti will start thinking the names too....and till the time planning will come into action she might have prepared a separate room full of toys and games for kids😜😝😉....

Ram's question regarding Mandira showed that not only he thinks for Kranti and her happiness but also Mandira's too...

Loved the way you introduced Sulochana in the story and how well you described Lankeshwar's place .... Each and every bit of details written well... Sulochana was sooo true poora Khandan hi pagal hai..

Suvarna ko kya sateek naam diya Lakshman ne Pagal Madrasan🤣🤣🤣🤣... But socho agar Shatrughan namak masala laga karke Urmila ko ye bataye ki Lakshman Suvarna ko special naam se bulata hai to ..😝😜🤣😂..

Suvarna poori ki poori yedi to thi hi but badtameezi ki hadein paar kr deti h ye ladki .. matlab ek coffee pr itna drama vo bi dress ke liye aur Ram ko dekh kar kya sur badle h isne ... Chudail h ek number ki ye😝😝😜😜... But Ram ne kya saaf spashta shabdon m saare rules samjha diya usko ... But ye poori hileli h varna Ram ki baat ko alag way m na leti 😝😝... Usko itna samajh nhi aaya ki vo use apne kaam se kaam rkhne ko bol ke gaya naki Ram se matlab rkhne ko....

Eagerly waiting for the next part 🥺🥺🥺🥺...

Update soon dear 💖💖💖💖

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Posted: 4 years ago

Dear both the updates are awesome.... ❤️....and thank you so much for the double dhamaka....hamarae one of the readers ki dialogue....ithni kushi inthni kushi kabi nahi hui...❤️... again...I know how much it would be difficult for you to give an update every day....and above that you are giving us double update tooo... thank you dear....I don't have words to thank you... because you do many things for us....to make us happy....I love you dear.....you are literally our God's gift...our rockstar....our awesome writer..our oxygen giver...our breath and our happiness....you are our everything... 💓💓💓... again I am telling you...these are not at all mere words....but my true ...deep heart feelings...these are just the introduction to my feelings....I can't give you my full data as it is unexpressible...😢....you have become my happiness....you have become my only reason of happiness...and about the update....awwwwsssssooomeeee..... waiting for the next updates....abbb sibling fun Jo kaha hai...and and and...I too agree with golden aura and Sammy about the pics ...I will be floating in the space if I get the pics toooo..😅... surely think about it darling..... love love love love love love love you and sira.... Will be waiting for your update...Jai siya ram ♥️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Sammy04

I was eagerly waiting for second update. And what did you said, you are going to write for my suggestion, matlab mera suggested song bhi ayega, omg I am so excited. Thank you thank you thank you so much my magician.

Now moving towards the update, my Sumitra is back, I really appreciate Siya and Sumitra's friendship. Siya ne Kranti aur sumitra ko sab bata diya, and what a supporting in-laws they are, omg so good. And then the introduction of Raghvan's Villa, so beautifully written with each and every specifications. You do research before writing or what? And now Sulochana ki entry, she is going to be superb I guess, funny with understanding nature. Will love to see Manda and Sulochana's bond. And "pagal madrasan" part was so funny, Lakshman bhi na. Ye Suvarna to roz naya kand karti he office me. God save these Raghuvanshis from her. Ye Suvarna to dhire dhire Ram ke taraf attract horahi he yar. Please stop her. Overall it was very intersting part. Do continue soon.

Love,

Sammy

Thanks for calling me a magician 🤗😅 it's all of yours love, nothing more..

I do not do any great research 😅😅 but jitna zaruri hai utna I do search it before writing..

Sulochana is indeed going to be superb, just have patience for that ..

Suvarna ko hata nahi sakte, you all have to bear with her😅😅

Let's see what happens next.. stay tuned..❣️

P.S - yes, your song coming soon.. ❤️

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