Originally posted by: sairat07Wow!!
So finally ye log shift ho raha hai ya nai???!😊
Wonderful update... Continue soon💜
Happy writing!!!❣️
No sorry they will not leave but things will approve.Thanx
Originally posted by: sairat07Wow!!
So finally ye log shift ho raha hai ya nai???!😊
Wonderful update... Continue soon💜
Happy writing!!!❣️
No sorry they will not leave but things will approve.Thanx
Originally posted by: MSgayatriLovely!!!!
Finally vahini pe chillaya...... I am out of words.... Itni Khushi ho gayi hai 😂😂😂
Ninad badal Raha hai.., but I wonder Baki Sab pe bhi koi asar Hoga ya Nahi....
Continue soon!!!
Happy writing!!!!
Yes Finally.Hope he shouts on show too.
Originally posted by: KrishnaravaliWriter ji aap ne tho mooh pe shakkar dal diya virat se pattar didi ko vahini bulwakar loved it. vaise bhi serial me tho nahi bularaha hai IF me hi sahi khusiya manayange . thank u. waiting for next one
Yes why not the fictions we write.
Originally posted by: Nja91Loved seeing Virat's anger. Finally truth has triumphed. Virat will be hurt but he will be fine in due time due to Sai's support....look forward to reading! Thanks for this update👍😊
Hurt was the main reason Sai didnt tell him the truth.But yes he will be fine.
Originally posted by: Tasu06Amazing😍
Thanks to Devi tai Virat ko sach pata chal gaya👏
Veeru ne kya khub sunaya Pakhi didi ko maza aa gaya🤣🤣
Finally Ninad baba sudhar rahe hai bete ki feelings ko ab samaj rahe hai.
Sairat kitne cute hai aur bhi pyar aata hai inpe
Beautifully written love it❤
I plan to redeem Ninad.There is not Bhavani much in this SS.I dont like to write loud dialogues.
Originally posted by: fatssrilankaWow! Great. Loved the way Virat screamed at Patralekha and called her Vahini and even shouted at Kaku and pointed out that since she knew about it then both Ninad and Omkar too might be knowing everything.
Ninad has started to change for the better. Hope he stops listening to Kaku.
He will stop listening to Bhavani and Virat will stop listening to all of them....
Virat was standing in the balcony thinking about what his family did.He was a emotional man.For him family was everything.Thats why he had given up Pakhi.But in this instance it was good that he gave up Pakhi.Sai tip toed across the balcony and he had no idea .He was lost in his thoughts.Sai knew this would happen and hence she kept quite.
Sai-Isiliye nahi bataya tha maine aapko.....
Virat-Huhh.Tum kab aai ?
Sai-Jab aap bahut jyada gehri soch mei the.Aap ne pocha tha mujhe Virat sir ke maine aapko kyu nai bataya.Sirf Isiliye....
Virat (sitting next to her)-TUmhe farak nai pada ye sab sun kar pehli baar ?
Sai (chuckling)-I am not really feelings person.Maine aaj tak sab kuch toh aaba ko bhi nai bataya tha.
Virat-What abt aai ?
Sai-Aai ki baat hi aur hai.Woh aap nai samjhege...
Virat (surprised)-Kyu nai ?
Sai-Kyuki aapki aai hai.Meri nai hai isiliye.Woh takleef aap kabhi nai samjhege.
Virat- Mohit,aai,Devi Tai,Shivani bua. Mai kaha aata hu yaha pe ?
You said you are not a feelings person.What abt your feelings for me ?
Sai (standing up)-Mujhe is baare mei koi baat nai karni hai....
Virat (holding her hand)-Betho yaha par.Kabhi na kabhi toh ye baat karni padege na tumhe.Always toh nai keh sakti mujhe koi baat nai karni hai.
Sai- Compulsory hai to talk ?
Virat-Consider it compulsory for you.Kyuki mei toh baat karneko tyaar hu.
Jis din se tum wapas aai ho us din se meh keh raha hu.Mai tumse bahut pyaar karta hu and I want a new start.No marriage with Deal.
Aur tumse mujhse door bhag rahi ho aur aapni feelings se bhi.....
Sai (explaining)- I dont like to catch feelings......
Virat (smiling)-You dont catch feelings.You fall in love.
You have never thought about it ??
Sai-Nope never.I was very focused. And i dont like distractions.
Virat (smiling)-So you do admit that i am a distraction ?
Sai-Nope never.....(and Sai went to the bedroom before Virat could ask anymore questions)
Virat-Tum mere sawalo se kab tak bhagoogi ?
The next morning Virat woke up and panicked on not finding Sai next to him.He was just going down to talk to aai when he saw Sai come out with wet hair.She was looking somewhat in difficult position.He knew she would never ask for help.She was somewhat very stubborn....
Virat-Sai help chahiye ?
Sai (turning over)-Mujhe aai ki help chaiye.Please aai koi bulaye.I need help with the zip of the dress.I cant reach it.Haath mei chot ki vazah se
Virat-Aai nai hoge ghar pe.Unhone kaha tha tumhe.I will help you.
Sai-Call anybody else...
Virat-Bharosa nai hai mujhe pe ?
Sai-Ye bharose ki baat hi nai hai.
Virat-Tumhara koi dupatta do.
Sai-Huhh
Virat-Dupatta do Sai..
Sai passed her dupatta to Virat who tied it on his eyes.Sai held his hand and brought him near her.Sai knew she was in love with him but she didnt understand what was stopping her...
Virat-Turn around
Virat slowly shut her zip and tied her dori.For Sai it was torture and Virat knew it.She had held her breath from the minute he tied the dori.She knew what was going in her heart hurt but she was afraid to get hurt again.
Sai-Dont move Virat sir. Mai dupatta nikal dete hu.
Sai removed the dupatta and Virat could feel her gaze near him.He loved her with all his heart.He knew she was afraid.Sai turned to keep the duppatta on the chair but turned too fast but luckily Virat caught her on right time.
Sai-Virat Sir chodiye mujhe.
Virat-Nai chodne vala
Sai-Please !!
Virat-Sorry Sai aaj nai (holding her more tightly) .
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Pre-cap-----Ninad-Sai ki tabyet kaise hai ?
Virat-Its none of your business....
Ninad-Virat !!. Woh bahu hai meri...Pooch toh sakta hu na...
Virat-Seriously !! Aab tak toh woh sirf meri biwi thi......Aapki bahu kab ban gayi...
Yay!!!!!
Sai and virat spoke but did not...
She understands him but wants lil distance as well!!!
And ninad is gonna change.....
Continue soon!!!
Happy writing!!!
finally ninad has changed gud to see
Aww...poor Sai is so scared to admit her feelings.
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