FF: PALLAVI by Jalebi Jane SEE NOTE PAGE 117 - Page 45

How do I get notifications for new updates 🤔..

I missed so many updates...

I might start to like sulo aunty... she seems fun and a cupid in disguise. Wonder why isn't pallavi upset with aayi for keeping her in dark?

Originally posted by: hararnav

How do I get notifications for new updates 🤔..

I missed so many updates...

I might start to like sulo aunty... she seems fun and a cupid in disguise. Wonder why isn't pallavi upset with aayi for keeping her in dark?

Sister---I don't get a chance to send PMs via IF because frankly it takes a long time. IF limits 20 friends per message.

But I usually email those whose email I have because it's quicker. Do I have yours? If not, PM me and I'll sort it out.

PS Episode 22+23 will perhaps help to elucidate why Pallavi is not upset with Aayi.

Originally posted by: nautankitadka

I love love love how they are interacting like normal people do, not passing judgements and trying to help the other out in this scenario. But will he now make the connection between Mandar, her and the ring? Or was it just a plot device for them to meet for a few times and get intrigued with each other? Will Sulu make a mess and drag RaghVi as having an affair or something for leverage? Will Kirti smell mischief and investigate how Pallavi is able to offer her more money than established before since she mentioned they are in a loss? So many questions, thank you for such thought provoking updates, Sister.

Pleased you are enjoying the tale, Sister. Thank you for your comments.

I agree---I like it when characters interact like normal people. Sometimes in order to create dramatic conflict one cannot allow the characters to reveal everything at once--but small misunderstandings of facts in my view need to be cleared up.

The instructor at a romance writing workshop I attended a few years ago said something that I've never forgotten: "Never build your entire story on something that can be cleared up if the hero and heroine only sat down over a cup of coffee to discuss." I took that advice quite literally in Episode 20+21.

Originally posted by: LyssaPie

I read the last 2 updates together, what a treat!

loved how she guessed that he’s the brother and the negotiation was beautiful

Sulochana probably thought she damaged whatever was going on by mentioning that Pallavai is a widow but I feel like unknowingly she helped them both.

I'm pleased you enjoyed them, Sister.

You are right---poor Sulochana hoped to hurt but helped to heal. She would absolutely hate that she was a power for good. hehe

Originally posted by: Hannaan

Well written.. every day i take a look at the forum for your updates.. it make my days even the smallest update.

Really enjoy reading

Oh nice! My days are nicer for writing and sharing -PALLAVI-.

Originally posted by: Mihika

Maya dear. Yet again I am late in commenting. But you know what I was totally engrossed in the story. Loved every bit of it. Sulochana did something good though her intensions were evil.

Beautiful update👏

Thank you, Sister. That Sulochana---I love writing her scenes. She is someone I could write a whole story about. There's a Jane Austen novel titled -Lady Susan-. About a wicked widow with a meek teenage daughter. She has several interesting lovers, and in the end she ends up marrying the wealthy man who was pursuing her daughter. Don't you think this sounds like something Lady Sulochana would accomplish? hehe

Originally posted by: ReemShah

I love the way you have shown Pallavi as confident person yet a very kind one. and you didn't leave her Baji Rao tagline here.

Pallavi here is smart and more practical than the show. and the direction the ff is going to- from the diamond ring and now to this new business venture or more like deal.

All this seems more logical and reasonable.

Waiting for Saturday to come-so you can update

Thank you, Sister, for your comment. I really like what you say about Pallavi being both confident and kind.

Originally posted by: virmantaarey

Your every update leaves me speechless and wanting for more ... just like the story khushi you have outdone yourself...

The outcome of this conversation between Raghav and Pallu is amazing ...

I love the business aspect between them ... I wish they did this in the show !!!

Keep up the amazing work, you rock ❤❤❤

Thank you, Sister. I love that you've followed my work since KHUSHI. And that you are enjoying Pallavi too. And since you are familiar with my work, you know I love a hero and heroine who are involved in business together. Either as allies or as rivals.

Thank you for your comment.

Originally posted by: JalebiJane

EPISODE 22

*PRECAP*

Farhad entered Raghav’s office. The room was in darkness. He flicked on the lights—

Raghav was seated at the desk!

“Annah!” Mouthing a startled oath, he asked, “Why are you sitting in the dark?”

Raghav replied, “It wasn’t dark when I sat down.”

Farhad approached to hand him a large ornate envelope. “I came to drop this on your desk. It came by courier this afternoon. It’s from Mrs Raje's personal secretary.”

“It's an invitation to her birthday party—” and without allowing Farhad to express surprise, he asked, “Farhad, you are a keen student of history—tell me about Baji Rao.”

Farhad turned crinkled eyes to the ceiling as if recollecting a long-forgotten school lecture. “Eighteenth century. Maratha. Peshwa. Diplomat. Warrior. Never lost a battle. Two lovers. Why are you interested in Baji Rao?”

Raghav turned to the window, and looking over the twinkling lights of the city below, he spoke, his voice low, “I’m afraid I might end up being Baji Rao's second lover.”

The last two updates are wonderful I love this pallavi. She is smart and knows what she can achieve and is not willing to bend.

Omg the precap. It seems MR. Rao is smitten on a certain Baji Rao fan let see how this panes out

Awesome updates and precap

Hi.. Sorry i was busy for past frw days and caught up last 3 chapters just now.. so much has happened..

But the biggest thing for me is that i cud see the real Pallavi now. The smart and determined girl who had to take a back seat after her marriage.. can’t wait to see how the teaching and learning is gonna go

Cant help but wonder wat kaku is gonna tell home n how she’s gonna manage that..